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laxmipriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

hey thats nice update...plzz update soon:)

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Neha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Hey ...

Nice update ...

Waiting to read more ...

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Mahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

woww superb Manali👏 the first chapter got me suspicious n then in the second whoa whoa whoa.. i loved it completely.. you have portrayed Shaurya's emotions quite well and the way he is bonded to his father is adorable.. do continue soon dear 🤗 and thanks for the pm 😳

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Mahima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

This son is Rathore's... Wow

Nice work yaar

Update soon

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Part 3

Arjun & Rathod comes out of d room. Rathod ask Shaurya to seat on d chair, bt Shurya dn't listen. He ask directly , " Aap kahi mujhe vapis chod ke chale gaye to." Rathod look @ him dn't know why, bt feel sry for Shurya , his heart ans him , i'm nt gng to anywhere , i cn't live u. I dn't know why bt i felt connected to u beta. " bt his officer's mind tld him , just shut up , u dn't knw who is he , u dn't knw abt him , hw cn u promise him like tht. Rathod juist ruffles Shurya's hair & tell him . "Im nt gng anywhere , ths is my ofc , & i hva to wrk here. So , u seat here , if u need anything just call me." & left frm thr without waitng for Shurya's approval. Rathod nw standing in front of large window in his ofc & look @ people on d street. Rathod closes his eyes & suddenely he heard her melidious smile , twinkling sound of her anklets. Rathod open his eyes , his lips parts & ' Saloni ' . Here a girl who is in her mid-30 walks hurridly frm d streets , searching somthing , suddenely she feels tht he called her , she turn around & felt cool breeze comes to her face , she felt like she smells his fregnace , she closes her eyes immeadatly tears coming down frm her big , black , kohl eyes. She open her eyes wit much difficulty & wpis her tears . She look here & there , end of d road bt found no signs of him. " Aaj 6 saal ho gaye , par pta nahi kyu ki mai tumhara intjaar kar rahi hue , pta nahi kyu ki mai tumhara intjaar kar rahi hue , pta nahi kyu aaj bhi tumse utna hi pyar karti hue . She cn't take it anymore , she run like madly towards her home. She open d door come inside &b closed d door. She standing back to d door , her back touching tht wooden door. fresh tears comes down on her cheeks, she let out scream frm her mouth & sowly collasped on d floor . She held her knees & started crying mre loudly. " Bas vahi tha mere paas , jo tumhara tha , tumhara apna , aur aaj dekho maine use bhi kho diya. " & sratring crying again. Here Rathod felt his heart is heavy , his hand goes to his purse , he open his purse & look @ d one snap. " Kaha ho tum , kaha kaha nahi dhunda maine tumhe , kaha chali gayi ho tum? ab vapis bhi aa jaao. mai vada karta hue Saloni , mai kabhi kabhi bhi tumse zhagda nahi karunga. " & kiss tht girls snap.

Sry for d late update guys And Short one too. Actually tod is my DAD's bdy. i"ll try to update @ night.

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Shru

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Awesome awesome... Shauraya is sooo cute...😳

Omg he's Rathore's kid... how sweet... update soon loved it...

yaar bahot na-insaafi hai ye manu.. it was a short update😛 chalo aaj maaf karti hu coz its your dad's bday...

Wish him hppy bday hpe you spend great time with him and make it memorable..😃😳 have fun dear!!!

Thanks for the Pm!!

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elle..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Yupppie...u updated...so saloni is d gall..
Intressstinng
Updatte soon

My best wishes to uncle on his birthday :):)

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Sreeparna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

lovely..cont soon n thanks for pm

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salta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

nice update...loved it to the core...just too good...and best wishes for ur dad's b'day...

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836559

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

👏 gr8 work di!!!! i just loved it!!! i am liking shaurya a lot! and poor saloni😭

plzz update the next part soon!

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