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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -sree13-


thanks di..I am waiting eagerly 😊
cant help saying di but your dp is supercool 👍🏼

Thx dear..
Glad u like it.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 8
Arjun want reach @ Shurya's hm as soon as possible. Bt thinking of his nephew he drive carefully. Riya also happy , tht finally she sees Saloni , She heard lot abt her frm Arjun. She only knows tht Saloni married somone bt dn't knw his name. Whn she knoe Saloni married to Rathod , she litteraly have a big heart attack. She knows Saloni's importance in Arjun's life. Arjun & Riya toghter for 6 months now , bt thy dn't make any announcement yet.
Here suddenely Shurya mumred in his sleep , " Ma plz ye sum kal slove karte hai na , mai bre ho gaya, plz mumma" Rathod look @ Shaurya &patted his back slowly , Shaurya again drifted to sleep. Arjun look Shuarya through d mirror & remebered Saloni , Its her habit , She talk in sleep , somtimes she yelled on someone in sleep. Arjun smiles .
Here Rathod get tense whn he remebered thr fight , Actually Arjun against thr marraiage , it was Roshni his would be wife , realize Arjun abt love, She also manofying him for d sake of Saloni who madly love wit Rathod. Finally Arjun give green singnal to thr marraige. Bt Rathod's parents does nt agreed for ths marraige , bcoz thy already fix his marriage wit his frnd Sheetal. Saloni felt bad , she cn't eat for three days. Intht time Rathod tries his every theory to prove tht Saloni is elijeble girl for thr bahu. Bt thy dn't agree wit him , So finally Rathod goes against his parents wish married Saloni . Thy happily lived in thr life until big strom come in thr life Sikandar who destroy thr lives totally , he nt only kill thr thread tht all of thm in a one piece (Roshni) bt also killed thr whole family, after tht incident Rathod lost his everything same as Arjun his best frnd , his family. Rathod cn't forgot tht day. Actually he & Arjun destroys lot of business of Sikandar & also kileed his several imp mens. Sikandar give lifetheart against Arjun. He call @ his home & give dhamkies & all to Arjun , Bt Arjun never feared . He continue his wrk. Department give him 24/7 protection frm thm.
Tht day Rathod is in Arjun's home. Arjun is away frm home. So Rathod is thr to protect Roshni . Suddenely Roshni got call on house no , tht Arjun met wit accident & he is serious. Rathod tries to handle her , bt she in panic. She requested Rathod to go & check for her sake. Before leaving Rathod tries to call Arjun , bt his phn is not reachble. Rathod cursed fate & goes frm thr. He returned home after 3 hrs only to found Arjun standing middle in choas , he look @ his surroundings & understands somthing bad happend , Ys Sikandar's men kidnapped Roshni frm home. & leave a note for Arjun. Rathod & Arjun rushed towards d place whr Sikandar put Roshni , thy try thr best to save her bt thy can't Sikandar killed her in front of thm .Top of thm Sikandar thx Rathod to help him . Rathod nor Arjun never forgot her scerams , her pleas. Arjun mad @ Rathod , Arjun accuses him for all. Rathod tries to clear his misunderstanding bt he failed. He lost his patience & agrued wit Arjun . Thy break all ties between them. Here Saloni dn't knew abt ths all. bcoz she is in clinic , she is happy tod , bcoz she got d best news of her life. She is gng to mother , she leave frm thr , she is her own world , She start to imagine Sameer's reaction after she announce d news, her child face , his name , his skin colour. She reached home in excitment & found Sameer is already thr. She senses somthing bad happened , bcoz Sameer look so tense , She ask him , bt he only request her leave him alone for some time. Bt Saloni nt understand nor leave him.
Saloni : Aaap ko pta hai aaj mai kya batne wali hue aap ko?
Rathod : Saloni plz leave me alone.
Saloni : Par Sameer meri baat to suno.
Rathod :Plz try to understand me.
Saloni : Plz aap samjho na... (She chidlishly tell him)
Rathod : Plz samjho Saloni , i really need...
Saloni : Oh god Sameer aap samja jaao na , plz im happy tod . (Rathod just turn his face ) (Saloni hold his chin ) Samaj jaao na , mai apni baat kise share karungi ...
Rathod : Plz yaar , just go away...
Saloni : Ahhh u tld me go away , really Sameer?
Rathod : Saloni , im nt mood to cracke jke. U knw wht happened tod ? (Rathod is abt tell her , bt stops)
Saloni : Wht happened, anything bad ?
Rathod : Roshni bhabhi , ... (he cn't find words )
Saloni : Wht happened to her? Tell me ? she is alright na?
Rathod : (Gather couarge & finally inform her )Sikandar killed her in front of us. And we did nthng , w r helpless , w just watching her murder.
Saloni : Sameer i want to meet bhai nw.
Rathod : No Saloni , w cn't go thr.
Saloni : Bt why , he needs me tod.
Rathod : (he yelled on her )No he dn't need us. And i warn u frm tod you r nt gng meet him. Frm tod u have to break all realtions wit him , if u want to live wit me.
Saloni : (never expect ths frm her husband) Sameer aap ye sab kya...
Saloni : Bt w have to understand him , w cn't do anything like ths.
Rathod : Plz dn't suggest me. I have enough wit him. Nw plz u dn't get start your lecture like your brother , r u to want to accuses me.
Saloni : (knows something happened between her brother & husband) Sammer plz try to understand him , he is in trauma.
Rathod : Ohh really , And im happy here right ? ohh ys see im happy (He held her shoulders & force her to see his face) (His anger rises mre & mre)
Saloni chose d bad time to manofying him. Thy bth argue madly Finally Rathod yelled loudly on her.
Rathod : Bas Saloni , i tried my best to handle u & ur brother , im tired now, damn tired , i can't handle u. My parents was right , u r nt gud person , u r nt mature enough , Several times thy tld me tht Sheetal is best for me , bt i refuse , bcoz of u i leave thm , Your d big mistake tht i made in my life , as soon as i marry you my parnts leave me , aftertht i lost Sheetal my best frnd. You entred my life to creat probles nthng else. My mother was right , U girls are only know how grab rich person & marry thm for your bright future.
Saloni : Sameer (she yelled out of her lungs)
Rathod : Why? means u agree wit me r u did d sme wit me ha ? (he angrily ask her)
Saloni : Just stop it , stop it , Its your mother thinking , nt mine , Inever use you for anything , Ionly love you. I want you bcoz i knew i cn't leave witout you. And if im nt mistaken u also love me , u accept my proposal.
Rathod : Ys , bcoz i ws blinded @ tht time.
Saloni : Sameer u hurt me.
Rathod : Ohh you only see wht i give you , bt dn't you see wht your brother gave me. He accuses me.
Saloni :Why u put my brother betwwen us , ths completely differnt thing.
Rathod : Just go away , i dn't want to talk wit you.
Saloni : (Had tears in her eyes) You thought im mistke of your life , i only marry you bcoz of ur personality , your money , get advantanges of ur position. Sameer u think im tht knid of person.
Rathod : You think wht u want... i m nt ans you.
Saloni : K fine (She wipe her tears & hold her tummy his part is nestled within her . ) If u think like tht , then i cn't live here now. I have to go frm your home.
Rathod : Ys please , And dn't think tht i stop you.
Saloni : If u tried to stop me r want me back in your life Sameer , i dn't come .
Rathod : Who tld you , tht i want you back? (He ask her scarstically)
Saloni : K Nw frm tod , you r nt mine. just forgot w ever meet . (& goes frm thr wit her bag)
After a week Sammer Rathod unwillingly goes to Arjun's home to meet his wife & say sry to her. Bt he found only Arjun. He ask Arjun abt her , Arjun tld him tht she never came here after Roshni's death. Rathod got shock , nw whr she gone? And top on tht after a week Rathod received a call frm Clinic to enquire why Mrs.Rathod is nt cmg for her routine chekup. Bth Arjun & Rathod goes tht clinic to get clue , bt return wid d biggest shock in thr life. Dr. informs thm tht Mrs. Rathod pregnat wit 48 days. Rathod cursed himself . he know he said those words to her bt in anger, he didn't mean it. He loves her mre than anything, Tod he accepts d truth , bt he also know he is late to understand her feelings for him.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nic update!!!!👏👏👏

poor saloni😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Emotional part...felt real sad for Saloni...
the Background story for Arjun and Rathod and their cold war was soo good...and justifying each other perfectly...loved it


[btw, change 48 to something before 10 or 12 weeks dear...I hope Saloni was in the starting weeks of pregnancy, right?? or did u mean 48 days and by mistake u put weeks??? then 48 days is perfect!!

total pregnancy period is 38-40 weeks only...48 is way beyond that

i hope u didnt mind me pointing this out...]
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
aww al circumstances made thm apart
cont sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Emotional part...felt real sad for Saloni...

the Background story for Arjun and Rathod and their cold war was soo good...and justifying each other perfectly...loved it


[btw, change 48 to something before 10 or 12 weeks dear...I hope Saloni was in the starting weeks of pregnancy, right?? or did u mean 48 days and by mistake u put weeks??? then 48 days is perfect!!

total pregnancy period is 38-40 weeks only...48 is way beyond that

i hope u didnt mind me pointing this out...]

Thx dear.. for correcting me i did mistake .
And i dn't mind dear. 😊
Thx for loving it. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor Saloni realy feeling very sad for her 😭 Rathod should have talk a bit mature,those words were too insulting 😲
background story is beautifully described..loved it so much 😃
update soon di.
Edited by -sree13- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm Ariya together😳
Poor Rathore and Saloni
Sometimes in anger we say lots of things we dont mean, and we lose everything as in their case
Saloni went away because Rathore lashed at her in pain and anger😭
Poor her, having to look after her kid all alone, when all the while she's thinking that Rathore has such a bad opinion on her😭
loved it dear
please continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just love rathore and shaurya's relationship soo much!!!hez cute baby😊
oh...roshni got killed!!and arjun blames rathore for her death!!!
and in fit of anger he accuses and insults her😭..poor her!!!
hope they find her soon!!
thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww felt very bad for saloni :( overall awsome update dearrr loved it

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