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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rathod :(got biggest shock in his life. he yelled on Chotu ), " Ye kya majak hai Chotu? Kis ka baccha uhta ke laaye ho? " 😡Chotu : " Mujhe nahi pata ki ye kis ka baccha hai , mujhe mila to mai ise yaha le aaya" 😃
Shree : Kahi tumne bachho ko kidnap karna to chalu nahi kiya?😆
Arjun & Rathod : Shut upp Shree...😡
Riya : Par sir ye aap ko "pa" kyu keh rha hai.?😕
Arjun : (look @ Riya & think pta nahi iski curiosity kab kam hogi) Riya tum is bacche se baat karna koshish karo.
Riya : (As per Arjun instructions , she goes near to Rathod & bent down to Shurya who hugged her Chief's legs tightly. "Hi , beta aap ka naam kya hai ? " Shaurya look @ her & hold mre tightly on Rathod. "Bata do na, agar tumne mujhe apna naam bata diya to mai tumhe chocolate dungi." Shaurya thinks a little & ans " Shaurya Rathod " Riya look @ her Chief who got irritated & shocked after his ans. All team looking @ Rathod weridly. Rathod ans thm " Kyu kya kabhi Surname same nahi ho sakta ?" Thy all nodded like Robot.
Riya : Accha Shaurya tumahare papa ka naam kya hai?
Shaurya : ( puts his hand forward & says) Pehe le chocolate to do... Riya give him chocolate frm her pants pocket.
Riya : Ab bata do , ki tumhare papa ka naam kya hai.
Shaurya : Tum mere pa se puch lo na... & look @ Rathod for ans.
Rathod : (gets angrier bt remain calm bcoz of child) beta vo mera naam jaanti hai , bas vo aap se puchna chahti hai ki...
Shaurya :(Cuts him ) Jaanti hai to phir kyu puch rahi hai? vo bhul gayi hai? & looking @ Riya worridly.
Rathod takes a deep breath & bent down to pick Shuarya in his arms , asa soon as Rathod took Shuarya in his arms , Shaurya spards his little hands around his neck & rested his head on his shoulder. Rathod look @ him & felt happy , he feel like sombody who belong to him finally got him. He softly patted Shaurya 's back.
Arjun look @ bth & found relived . dn't knw bt he felt attached to Shaurya. his smile , his chocolate demand remind him about somone.
Rathod : ( ask a soft tone to Shuarya ) aap konse school mai padete ho.
Shuarya : (instantly look @ him wth smiley face ) My name is Shuarya Rathod . im frm DAV schoo, frm Rabbit & Tortoise group , my role is 11 , i like pizza , burger. bt Mama dn't give ths. i like blue colour , bcoz ths is my pa's fav colour. , bt i hate Maths . Shaurya said in one breath & look @ all team proudly. All smile to him Even Arjun give a small smile to him.
Arjun think Rathod ka bhi to blue fav colour hai.
Arjun : Rathod jara yaha aana to
Rathod : (Try to Giva Shaurya to Riya , bt Shaurya dn't let him go away frm him, he feard tht his Pa again left him.So , Rathod took him wit him.)
Arjun & Rathod : ( goes to other room )
Arjun : Sach bata do Rathod , kahi ye tumhara to ...
Rathod : Tum aisa soch bhi sakte Arjun , tum acche se jaante ho ki uske chale jane baad mai kabhi kisi se pyar nahi kar paya , mai jimmedaar tha uske chale jane liye, vo to bahut pyar karti thi mujhes . kuch bhi kar sakti thi vo mere liye." Rathod hardly spoke.
Arjun : Jaanta hue Rathod , ki vo kuch bhi kar sakti thi tumhare liye , yaha tak apne bhai se zooth bhi bole the usne , sirf tumhare liye. pta nahi ki ab vo kaha hogi. Vo zinda bhi hogi ya ...
Rathod : (Cuts him mid-way ) Arjun mai jaanta hue ki vo zinda hai , use kuch nahi ho sakta , mera dil keheta hai Arjun she is fine, mai zinda hue , iska matlab vo bhi zinda hai. ( His eyes become moist )
Arjun : ( keep his hand on his shoulder ) Mai samaz sakta hue Rathod. , aakhir behen thi vo meri.
Shaurya : ( wipes Rathod tears ) Pa aap mat ro. mai hue na ab aap ke saath.
Rathod & Arjun ;( smile @ him )
here our trio waiting for thm
Shree : Chotu mujhe to pakka shak hai Rathod Sir pe . ye baccha unka hi hai .
Chotu : Kyu Shree .
Shree : tumne dekha nahi aane ke baad vo kaise Sir ke paas chala gya , aur jab Sir na use apni god mai liya tho , dekha vo kaise use pyar se ...
Chotu : Kuch bhi mat bol vo kitna pyara baccha hai.
Shree : Ho na ho par Arjun Sir jarur pta hoga iske bare mai
Riya : Kyu , Arjun Sir ko kyu.
Shree : Kyu vo kitne saalo se ek dusre ko jante hai , mujhe to lagta hai , ye Rathod Sir ka koi clg ka chakkar hai , jo ab saamne aaya hai unke bete ke roop mai .
Riya : kuch bhi mat bol Shree , Rathod Sir bilkul bhi vaise nahi hai ..
Shree : Tumhe kaise pta Ri? ( He asks in a mischivous tone )
Riya : Shree , pata chal jata hai ..
Shree : Par kaise ?
Riya : Uske liye dimmag hona jaruri hai , vo to tumhare paas hai hi nahi , tum apna dimmag sirf unhi baato mai lagay karo jise vo chalta hai.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
hey.. so the kid is indeed Rathod's.. And his mum is Arjun's sister?? hmm.. interesting.. thanks for the pm.. do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Awww..sho sweet! 😳

And shaurya is such a nice name...

good update : )

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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
arjun's sister is shaurya's mother!!!
shaurya is sooo cuteee 😊 😊
he is soo happy seeing rathore 😊
story will turn to past..!lets see..
nice update and thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
so the kid is arjun's nephew..hmm story is being interesting..update soon n thanks for the pm:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Now the story is more interesting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
The guy u hve chosen for shaurya is one of the cutest kid on tv..
The story is getting interesting..
Plz update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
wow!!!😳 the kid is soo cute
Shaurya : ( puts his hand forward & says) Pehe le chocolate to do...
this was very cute!!!!
plzz continue soon!!!! i want to know more abt the story!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
M lovin this family suspense thiing
Nd update was so cutte...loved it
Update soon:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
loved your update, was very funny between Ri, Shree and Chotu and emotional between Arjun and Rathore...
Please continue soon😊

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