MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 41

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: It is the evening of Anu & Anuj’s engagement ceremony; he has come to fetch her from her room.

Here's nugget to let out my imagination run a tad bit wild, whipped up something small 😳

Anu is standing in front of the mirror, her eyes cast downwards. He walks in from behind and encloses his arms around her waist and rests his chin on her shoulders.❤️

Anuj: Basks in the lovely reflection of their image as acouple. Moments later… "Anu!"

Anu: Her eyes still cast downwards, .. "mm…." 😳

Anuj: "dekho na! aaj ye aaina bhi sharma raha hain hume dekh ke"😳❤️

Anu: "huh?" And looks up and meets his piercing gaze. Turns around, resting her palms on his chest

"Aap bahut handsome lag rahe hai…" ❤️

Anuj: "tumse zyaada toh nahi.."😉

Anu: In his eyes, she sees her own reflection. "mein aur bhi khoobsurat lagne lagti hoon jab aaine mein nahi, khud ko aapke aankhon mein dekhti hoon…"😳

Anuj: Raises his eyebrow in appreciation, "shikhayat hai mujhe tumhari aaine se, tum mujhse milne aati ho, usse milne ke baad…."

Then turns her around to face the mirror…. "aaj se hum ek doosre ke parchai hai… jo kabhi saath nahi chodthi…"❤️🤗

Brings his face close to hers, his cheeks brushing hers…

Anu: Turns around and runs her fingers over his cheeks…😳

Anuj: chuckles, closes his hands over hers and runs them along his cheeks "ye ...shaadi tak badh jayega… " opens his arms enticing her for an embrace.🤗🤗

Anu: realizing what he was directing to, her flushed cheeks had conveyed more than what she intended to.

She took cover in his chest while her arms tightened around him.

The drum of her heart beat for him and his for her; and at that moment their hearts soared to the sky free of all worries.❤️❤️

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The scene was beautiful and well executed. Although some minor tweaks to it could have elevated the scene couple of notches higher.

Those poetic lines in hindi can be found in any movie/fiction. Hindi is not my 1st language. The show's professional writers would proably do a better job in writing shayri. I was expecting something along those lines.

Anyway, let me know if you liked this small nugget.😳

Beautiful smitha.... ❤️🤗

Specially loved the lines... Shikayat hai mujhe tumhari aaine se.. Tum mujhe milne aati ho usse milne k baad.. Hum ek dusro ki parchai banenge wooww... It's brilliant.. ❤️

Anuj saying yee shaadi tak badh jayega... Teri drabble ki duniya sach mein bohot pyaari hai... 🤗❤️

As I'm not disappointed with engg epis... But this scenes also beautiful ...

She took cover in his chest while her arms tightened around him.

The drum of her heart beat for him and his for her; and at that moment their hearts soared to the sky free of all worries.

Loved ur scene explanation.. I can imagine it...

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Tune aaine k baar me likha hai isliye yeh gif..

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Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anuj plans to take Anu out for picking their wedding ring.

A beautiful evening was ruined with meaningless sermon on middle class women. Although, I bet all middle class women are doing just fine than how it is forced to believe in this show.

Here is an alternative from la la land….😳

Anuj arrives, sees Kinjal has come out to see them off. He thanks her and holds Anu’s hands, and they both get into the taxi.

She is seen sitting at the edge of the seat looking nervous

Anuj: Anu, uncomfortable lag raha hai? aaram se baitho…😊

Anu: merely nods… but still looks uneasy😳

Anuj: kya hua? Koi parishani hai? …opens his arms and says “come here” 🤗

Anu: She scoots closer, and rests her head on his shoulders and slowly begins to talk….

“itni raat ko mein kabhi baahar nahi gayi….. ajeeb lag raha hai.” …. Nuzzles her face deeper into his chest… “woh bhi aap ke saath”😳😳

Anuj: Closes his arms around her tightly… and simply smiles.😊 “I know!” looks down to meet her eyes and says – “ mujhe pata tha tumhe awkward lage ga… but I wanted you to select your ring”❤️❤️

Anu: surprised! “kya hum ring lene jaa rahe hai? woh bhi iss waqt?”😲🤔

Anuj: Haan, mere dosth ke dukaan hai, meine request kiya tha…. You know I didn’t want you to feel embarrassed when it is crowded..🤪

Anu: is touched by his concern… says “mere liye aap hi sab kuch hai, mera gehna toh mein ne chunn liya”😳😳

Anuj: Smiles and winks at her.😉😳

They reach the store, pick the ring, finish shopping, and step out of the store.

Anuj: "We still have an hour…" … looks around and sees an icecream vendor is about to close down for the day. He points towards it and says… “chalo!” and literally drags her😎

Anu: Sprints along with him balancing her steps…😲

Despite her fuss about eating ice cream in the wee hours of the night, they both end up having it. They stroll lazily and sit at a secluded spot.

Anu: "pata hai? ye sab mere liye bahut ajeeb hai. Mere pehle shaadi mein… " 😕 she pauses seeing him expressionless. 😳 She feels that she must make a concious effort to stop reiterating her past to him. So, she changes topic..

"itni mehngi diamond ring ki kya zaroorat thi?.... aap hi mere liye sabse keemti heera…. " and snakes her arms with his, scooting closer to snuggle beside him.❤️🤗

Anuj: haan, Anu! Mujhe pata hai… mein keemti heera and all that you know! 🤔

jaanti ho, sabse precious,…keemti cheez kya hai?

Memories! .. yaadien. …

Ring ki keemat kuch lakhon ka hoga..par jab bhi tum isse dekhogi, tumhe aaj ka shaam yaad ayega.

This evening may not have been very romantic…..phir bhi… aaj se saalon baad bhi tumhe yaad ayega ki, hum aise saath baithe the…❤️❤️❤️

He sees that her eyes have welled up…

"Cheezon ka kya? Aaj rahega toh kal nahi…. par aise lamhon ko humse koi nahi cheen sakta…. Waqt bhi nahi." ❤️

Anu: shakes her head in agreement. Gets rid of her tears and says… "toh iss shaam ko aur yaadgaar banaye…" comes close to him, cups his face in her hands and claims his lips. 😳😳

Moments later, she pulls back…

Anuj: wiping his lips, says "icecream flavor se bhi meetha …."😳😉

Anu: ek baat boloon? Without waiting for his response…

she touches his cheeks and continues…."ye achcha hai… "

feels shy, looks down and says "par mujhe woh aap pehle jaisa… woh zyaada pasand.. "😳😳 and snuggles against his chest unable to meet his piercing gaze…

Anuj: wraps his arms around her tightening his grip and laughs… "achcha! woh kyun?"

Anu: manages to mouth words… "gudgudi hoti hai… 😳

She looks at him and sees that he is grinning mischievously …she pounds her fist against his arms and says...... "pata nahi.... bass pasand hai"😳😳😳

Anuj: Smiles at her impishness. “mujhe achcha lagta hai, jab tum apni mann ki baat kehti ho… “ lifts her face to meet her eyes, looks at her lips yearning to freeze the moment in time. ❤️

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All "things" around are precious because there are memories attached to it. We must move on and continue to make memories

Without the kiss, a simple scene along these lines is too much to ask?! 🤔 There are so many other alternate possbilities I could think of!!

She sees him in person in his new look, I wish she had complimented him. I wrote everything I really wanted to see in today's episode, even went ahead and imgined myself beside him 😉😳

Anyway, aisa hota toh kaisa hota? Drop in your comment to let me know.

err! please dont ask why the vendor was open till midnight!

Woow.. This was a simple and sweet private moment with simply talks can explore scenes... This sensible maan we want... Mehengi diamond.. Heera ap hai.. After all beautiful memories matters and yaade hi humesha humare saath hote... Koi cheez ko dekh k hum beeti yaadon mein jaate hai.. It's crt and that's perfectly uhh put in it.. ❤️

Dost ki dukan on anuj request.. Care of anu privacy.. And raat ko shoping krne jaana ajeeb lgta hai that's make logic.... 😊

Yaa it's ok to share about past.. But every time and every present moment with her bhaashan on her desh ki beti nd middle class ring diamond blah blah with her prev eng dukhda.. Is not necessary... They ruined such a beautiful moment... It's was totally meeh mehh.. Totally messed... Due to stupid bhaashan and rona dhona...kya kre makers aisa sochte hi nhi hai...

Overall.. It's simple sweetly and beautifully written ..❤️🤗😳😉

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Sab kabardkhana kr dia ise scenes ka.. 🤦‍♀️

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Shah family visiting Kapadias for a formal ritual without Anu.

An alternative small scene from la la land 😳 While the Shahs are all still on their way … AK calls Anu

She picks up the video call. … and is pleasantly surprised to see Anuj in maroon kurta, clean shaven, looking elegant. She is happy to see him excited.

Anu: aap kitne achche lag rahe hai?!😳

Anuj: Beams with joy.... "Thank you, Anu! " Runs his hands over his cheeks and ask “ye kaisa hai?”...😎

Anu: bohot bohot pyaara hai,😳❤️ …. par kyun…..and she feels shy.😳

Anuj: chuckles and says… “tumhe yaad hai? Jab hum udaipur gaye the… taxi mein… “ 🤗 ( reference to earlier drabble**)

Anu: moments later…. "Haan… yaad aaya" 😳

Anuj: batao, kaisa laga?😊

Anu: aapne mere liye ye kiya… bohot achcha hai…..

Anuj: sacch?! 😉

Anu: aap jo bhi pehnenge, jaisa bhi honge, mujhe hamesha pyyare lagte hai😳🤗

par aaj .... aisa lagta hai jaise chaand chamakne laga hai....😳😉

Anuj: happily flicks his eyebrows and asks "matlab… aaj tak pheeka tha? mujh mein chamak nahi thi? bolo!😲😕

Anu: aap bhi ne… sabka ulta matlab nikalna zaroori hai, kya?🤔

She sees her family walking in far behind him in the video..

"Aap peeche dekhiye…." 😊

Anuj: ulta toh tum kehti ho, jab tum mere samne ho, toh mein peeche kyun dekhu?

Anu: aarey! Bapuji, samar sab aa gaye, aap ke peeche dekhiye..!🤪

Anuj: "oh no!: makes a face 😕 and continues "I wanted you to see me first …chalo baad mein baat karenge.... I love you! " ❤️🤗 and throws a flying kiss.

Anu: Touches her phone screen as if to feel his face…😳😳

Call ends.....

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I wish someone had mentioned about his new look in a casual way. It would have been nice if Anu did, but I would have taken even if Mukku or Devika mentioned it.

Anyway.... I wrote this to fulfill my wish, by conveying what i wanted to my AK....😳

Let me know if you liked it. I had other drabble ideas as well on his new look, but chose to post this one

Did you like it? Drop in your comment to let me know...

**reference to my earlier drabble #21 (Check the 1st post index on this thread)

Awwee yeh video call convo kitni cute hai.... Banda chikna chikna.. Kitna cute nd handsome lg rha tha uss din total droolworthy.. I kw smit u like stubble.. Nd mee to.. But talking about that scene.. Yr koi to use acknowledge tariff krna chahiya tha yr for changing his look with chikna chandsa chamakta face... Chod do bhavana ko likhna hi nhi aata... But tune likh lia...

Overall I can say it's soo cute scene... ❤️

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Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anuj has come to the shah house with giant bag of letters,messages from across the world. They are in the Shah house main hall, opening,reading messages. Anuj leans towards Anu and says “I MaAn you”. She responds back “I MaAn you too”

An alternative continuation of the scene from la la land 😳

They both are seen untying the knot of a bag of letters. Anu is focused on the knot, Anuj is seen talking to Samar, bapuji and others. Anu quietly ties a knot to his fingers. He feels a pinch and looks down to see that his fingers are tied to the mail bag tightly.😳

He eyes towards her and sees her stealthily giggle.😆 She then gets up and goes to the kitchen.

Anuj shrugs with a smile, unties the knot to free himself from it and follows her. In the kitchen…

Anu: is smiling, she sees him walk in and stops smiling.

Anuj: woh kya tha?🤔

Anu: kya kya tha? Aap kyun sabke saamne… I MaAn..? 🤔

Anuj: Haan, mein apni honewali biwi se ...😉woh …. Chodo…. Kal raat jo tumne promise kiya tha…good night kiss… he comes near her and engulfs her in his embrace.🤗❤️

Baa walks in …. Anu hastily frees herself from him.. and says… “baa! mein nastha le kar aa rahi thi… “😲

Baa: aap dono yaha kya kar rahe hai chup chup ke? Koi sharm bacha hai ki nahi? 😡😈

Anuj: Baa aap ne kaha tha na? iss umar mein satsang karna chahiye…. Hum wahi kar rahe the…😳 and smirks😊

Anu: Eyes him in irritation and mutters “chup rahiye ne.. “ and tells baa “aap baithiye, mein abhi aati hoon”

Baa: zyaada der nahi lagana…🤔 leaves rolling her eyes.

Anuj: Anu! Tum yaha naukrani ki tarah kaam karogi toh mujhe achcha nahi lagta hai.😔 Tum yaha kyun rehti ho…😕

Anu: mujhe kaam karna achcha lagta hai, aur… yaha mein sirf hamari shadi tak hi ruki hoon…😳

Anuj: is irrated with her. Turns his face away 😳

Anu: achcha, aapne kal jo gift diya tha, woh pehnayenge…?😳😳

Anuj: mujhe kuch nahi pehnana hai… mein jaa raha hoon. Turns to leave ....😳

Anu: holds his hands stopping him…

Anuj: Turns around, raises his eyebrows asking what she’s upto…

Anu: She comes close to him, and rests her head on his chest.❤️😳

Anuj: He is still mad at her, stands there without reacting, without moving a muscle.😳

Anu: smiles shyly, holds his hands, and brings them around her waist forcing him to embrace her.🤗❤️

Anuj: faintly smiles…

Anu: while still resting her face on his chest slowly raises her right hand towards his neck, sliding them inside his shirt….😉😳

Anuj: stops by pressing his hands against it.

Anu: Looks up to meet his gaze

They smile slyly.❤️ He then brings her hands to his lips and plants a kiss… they both are lost in each others embrace…🤗.only to be startled on hearing….

ANUPAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😈💔 Baa loudly yelling l from the main hall😡

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I hated the scene where Anu is serving them tea/snacks etc, Anuj joining them, everyone laughing & having fun. It is bizzare to see this in her EX's house. This also makes AK look so dumb ( for lack of a better word) What does she take to leave the house??

I know, nothing like this can remotely happen, but still. Anyway, aisa hota toh....?😳 Drop in your comments to let me know

Haa really hate it she being maid in shah house... Kam wali bai... And anuj ki baat nhi manti.. Makes me smirk like anuj in ur drabble... Bohot gussa ata hai...😡

I didn't watched that epi and scene... But i hate that kitchen chai scene with zero chemistry nd all... Makers totally drained destroy that scene..

I love anuj smirk and disappointed to anu and rutha hua and last he helds her hand and implant kiss and loss in eo embrace...

Anuj: Baa aap ne kaha tha na? iss umar mein satsang karna chahiye…. Hum wahi kar rahe the…

Best reply by anuj.. 😆😆

Pr iska kuch nhi ho skta...

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Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu has called Anuj to tell him that Pakhi agreed to be a part of their wedding celebrations. They hang up. He calls her back..

I felt that their phone conversation could have been better, so wrote an alternative.

Anu then winds up for the day, dabs lotion on her hands and neck, turns off the lights on the bedside lamps, straightens the sheets on the bed and lifts the pillow ….

She is pleasantly surprised to see a box under the pillow. It has a note on it that reads … “For you…”❤️

She opens it to find a fine necklace with a pendant, two hearts intertwined. Another hand written note inside it reads –"Two months since you said YES! Two hearts joined together in friendship,united in love!” ❤️❤️

Anupama is overwhelmed, she sits back on the bed holding the box in her hand and calls Anuj.

Anuj: Hello! 😊 Smiles at her cheerfully

Anu: starts shedding tears.

Anuj: tum phir se ro rahi ho? Kisi ne kuch kaha?

Anu: Aap! Aap ki wajah se…. she holds up the box, and the pendant and says “ ye.. “😳

Anuj: Smiles "woh tumhare liye ek surprise..., tumhe achcha laga?"

Anu: bohot bohot bohot achcha laga….. achcha lagta hai jab koi hamari paravah hum se bhi zyaada karta hai

aur jo aap ne angreji mein likha hai, bahut achcha hai, ye pendant kitna pyaara hai…❤️🤗

Anuj: aur surprise dene wala?😉

Anu: aap… aap sabse pya... 😳sabse bade buddhu hai … 🤓aisa gift koi thakiye ke neeche chod deta hai kya? 🤔 Agar baa dekh leti toh?!😲

He rolls his eyes and asks🤔

Anuj: tum baa se itna kyun darrti ho?

She reasons, both go back & forth…

Anuj: achacha chalo! Kal mujhe jaldi uthna hai, good night ….Throws a flying kiss😳

Anu: good night.

Anuj: aisa nahi chalega….. good night kiss nahi dogi?🥺

Anu: "kal..." Holds up the pendant and says “ jab aap mujhe ye pehnayenge… “ 😳❤️🤗

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I am losing interest in this couple. Just threw something together, to keep their charm in my thoughts. How do you like it? Drop in your comment to let me know.

Beautiful smitha... That pendent surprise and she overwhelmed due to his beautiful gifts.... Tum baa se kitna darti ho... 🤣🤣

Yrr smitha kitna achcha soch leti hai yr tu... Kaash aise kuch scene kuch to mil jata yr... https://tenor.com/bLVwu.gif

Aise hai inke so called professional writers.. 😡

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anupama walks into Shah house to see that Toshu & Vanraj are having a heated discussion. Toshu went on a limb and called his dad a “loser”, along with verbal lashing to both Anu & Vanraj.

It is meaningless to hear the same dialogues,chars repeating the same mistakes over & over again. I felt that Anu should not have spoken during T's outburst. Anuj too should have broken the news about her contract in private. (precap)

Here's an alternative that I came up with. Aisa hota toh ....? 😳

Anu tires to talk and stop Toshu, but is asked to shut up. So, she chooses to be a silent witness to her son’s ill-mannered behavior.

Later she goes to her room, exhausted from the day long grind and burdened with the pain that her son inflicted on her and the family. She wonders where she went wrong with her upbringing that Toshu turned out to be like this. How come with the same kind of upbringing all 3 children turned out to be very different from each other?

She is deeply immersed in thoughts, shedding tears when her phone rings. She sees Anuj is calling her, a routine video call before winding up for the day.❤️

She picks up the call –

Anuj: happily, smiles and greets “Hello! “

Anu: blinded with tears, manages to bring a smile but fails…😒

Anuj: touches his phone screen as if could wipe away her pain… kya hua Anu? Waha sab theek hai?

Anu: haan, sab theek hai, bass roz roz ke jhagde,tu-tu-mein-mein se … wipes off her tears and continues….. aap bataiye, aapka din kaisa raha?

Anuj: It was great,infact I have something exciting …😊

Anu: interrupts him and says…. “kya hum shaadi ke baad …sirf hum dono kahi ghoomne chale? “

Anuj: you mean… honey.....😳😳

Anu: yaha se bahut dur … jaha koi nahi ...

Anuj: Sure! tum kaha jaana chahti ho… batao..🤗

Anu: kahi dur, jahaa bahut saara barf ho, aur har taraf pahad ho. Pahado ke beech mein ek chota sa ghar hoga, ghar ke peeche chota sa jheel hoga....❤️

Anuj: is intently listening, imagining her description.. "aur.."

Anu: continues… Hum subah ki chai, breakfast ugte suraj ko dekhte hue shuru karenge, phir bahar ghoomne jayenge… barf mein khelnenge, woh kya kehte hai…. snowman banayenge…..😳

Anuj: "aur…"

Anu: aur raat ko itni thand hogi, toh hum lakdiya jalayenge,saath baith ke haath sekhenge…..😳😳

Anuj: "aur.."

Anu: " aur… so jayenge…. " 😳Ye aur aur kya laga rakha hai? 🤔Ye boliye,hum jaa sakte hai na?

Anuj: Ofcourse!

Anu: Hum Kashmir jaayenge… waha.. ek

Anuj: Kashmir? Waha aatankwaadi...

Anu: aapko lagta hai ki iss ghar mein kya kam aatank hai?😈 Batayiye ne…. hum jaa sakte hai na?🤗

Anuj: laughs …..waah! kya baat kahi hai Anu👏…. Chirps her a kiss❤️😉

Tumne itna soch liya, utna hi kaafi hai, mein arrange karoonga…. 🤗Tum dekh lena tumhare liye bahut yaadgaar banaonga..😉😳

Anu: sach!?

Anuj: yeah. Aur suno….. ek exciting news hai tumhare liye…. He then breaks the news of her dance academy contract…🥳

Anu: is very excited and happy. Thenk you, thenk you…. Bohot bohot thenk you… ye sab aap ke wajah se …🤗

Anuj: meri wajah se tumhe ye mila, toh mujhe kya dogi?😳

Anu: mere paas kya hai aapko dene ke liye… ?

Anuj: ek Thank you kiss bhi nahi?🤔

Anu: kal, jab hum milenge… tab😳

Anuj: aaj kyun nahi… at least a goodnight kiss….🤔

Anu: eventually obliges and is about to kiss, Anuj closes his eyes in anticipation…😳😳

A quick knock and Kinjal barges in…..

Shocked Anu disconnects the call in a hurry...... "kinjal! woh mein..." 😳🤔

Anuj: Shah parivaar mein sab ke sab aatankwaadi toh hai

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The scene & lines describing about honeymoon is nothing out of the ordinary, must be in dime a dozen movies. So, I cant take full credit for it. The above piece might not fit in with the current storyline, but just wrote it break the boredom. Did you like it? Drop in your comment to let me know!

Waahh kya imagination nad dreams hai ani ki hm ke liya pahadi barf snowball firebone.. Kashmir jayenge that's great...great yr..

Anuj : shahs parivar sab k sab aatankwaadi to hai...

That's crt.. Shahs kisi aatankwadi se kam hai... It's so hilarious... 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu & Anuj meet in his apartment before their wedding. No one else is home, they get some time for themselves before others arrive. Earlier, he had sent in flowers for her with a love note.❤️

I did not like the scene in the kitchen or her serving tea and blushing. It was just unbearable. 😕 So, thought of this alternative.😳

She is in the kitchen, he comes in behind her and hugs, resting his chin on her shoulders. She’s happy that he’s here before everyone else and tilts her head towards his.😳❤️

Anu: aap aa gaye….. baithiye, mein mein.. 2 minute mein chai leke aati hoon…🤗

Anuj: pecks on her cheeks and leaves😳

Minutes later, she hands him tea. He asks her…

Anuj: "how was your day?"

Anu: "Accha tha… ghar ka kaam khatam karke mein… yada yada…. yada…"aap batayiye, aap ka din kaisa tha?"😳

Anuj: "It was good, infact meeting achchi thi, sabko mere presentation bahut achcha laga… aur … " he pauses and says… "mera din achcha raha kyunki, mein ne din ka shuruvaat tumhare haath ke chai se kiya tha" 😳

Anu: "ek baat bolu…? Aap mera mazaak toh nahi udaayenge?"😳

Anuj: chuckles and say… "nahi, kaho…"

Anu: "Mein ne aap ko bohot bohot bohot miss kya… aapka “good morning” voice message ....saara din sunti rahi.😳😳❤️

Anuj: "itna miss kiya toh mujhe phone kar deti…. Ya lunch pe milne aa sakti thi.."🤔

Anu: excitely continues... "aur jaante hai mein ne kya kiya?... roz jo alarm lagati hoon apni phone pe… usska ringtone aapka “good morning” wala voice message kar diya.*** taaki roz subah sabse pehle aapki awaaz sunoo .😉😳

Anuj: impressed.🤗 He says.."shadi ke baad usski bhi zaroorat nahi padegi… kyunki …" he stops not wanting to make her uncomfortable.

Places the now empty tea cup on the table, puts his feet up relaxes back and.....

Anuj: takes her hands in his and rubs his fingers over them. "Anu! Pata hai? Agar mere mummy papa aaj zinda hote, toh woh kitna khush hote…".

Anu: is caught off guard as she has never heard him talk about his parents and listens intently.

Anuj: GK kehte hai, ki mein bilkul mere papa pa gaya hoon. Mein unka apna khoon nahi hoon, phir bhi mein unki parchayi hoon❤️

"Angregi mein isse – nature vs nurture kehte hai…. Aaj mein jo bhi hoon, ye sab mere mummy papa ke sanskaar aur pyaar ki parchayi hai, unki parvarish ka nateeja hai" ❤️❤️❤️

Anu: feels overwhelmed, looks at him with pride and nods her head contently.

Anuj: "mein bilkul mere papa jaisa banna chahta hoon….. simple life, izzat ki kamai, chain ki zandagi….."

Anu: scoots closer, curls her arms in the nook of his elbow, rests her head on his shoulders and says …. “aur chota sa parivaar……. Hamara parivaar…"😳

Anuj: smiles and says… "hamara parivaar"

Anu: "mere aur aapka ….parivaar"😳❤️

Anuj: Bends his head to meet hers, brings her hands to his lips and chirps a kiss.😉😳❤️

"Parivaar! Ye kitna chota sa shabd hain na? par sab ke zindagi mein yeh chota sa word kitna important hota hai."🤗continues..

"Hamare parivaar mein hum dono kaafi hai... GK hai, mukku hai….Par mein bhi baap hone ka ehsaas ko mehsoos karna chahta hoon."

Anu: overwhelmed hearing his words, tightens her hold in his arms and manages to mouth words “ jaanti hoon”😳

Anuj: "You know…starting a family … ye decision hum dono ka hona chahiye. Sirf mera nahi. Most importantly tumhara. Kunki zyaada tar pain & stress toh maa ko hi jhelna padta hai...."😳🤗

Anu: is touched by his care and concern. She says… “ ek baat kahoon?" Without waiting for his response, she continues.. "Shadi ke baad kyun na hum bachcha godh le?" 😳❤️

"Zaroori nahi hai, ki bachcha hamara hi khoon ho… hum bachche ko utna hi pyaar denge jaise aapko mila, jaise mein apne bachchon se…" 😳

Anuj: is happy … he opens his arms & says..“come here.....“🤗

Anu: gets up and goes near him, he makes room for her in the single seater sofa. 😉 She obliges and sits with barely any room, snuggled tightly against him.😳

She nuzzles on his shoulders, and embraces him. He closes his arms tightening the grip around her.🤗🤗

Anuj: "Maa banne ke baad…." Anu corrects him… "Phir se maa banne ke baad..."

He repeats..”phir se maa banne ke baad, tum sirf maa banke reh jaao, yeh mein hone nahi doonga”

"Poori kohish karoonga ke tumhari har sapna poora ho… tumhe khudki ek pechaan banani hogi…"❤️

Anu: "pata hai?…… aapko jitna pyaar karoon, kam lagta hai...."❤️

Anuj: chuckles and says….. haan, bahut kam lagta hai,… isska bharpayi karna abhi se shuru kardo...." places his lips on hers, seeping into eternal bliss😉😳❤️🤗

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***Was it you Sneha, who had mentioned about using his VM as your alarm? 😆I took that line and used it here. So, credit goes to you!👍🏼

Based on my experience, I have noticed that a gentleman never broaches the subject of carnal desires, starting a family on their own. He will certainly carry forward the conversation once the lady initiates it.Thoughts?

Anyways, aisa hota toh…? Drop in your comment to let me know.

Btw, I just realized that this is drabble nugget #26… the magical number that AK's love life is stuck at!! 🤣

This is so beautiful mature and meaningful conversations between maan that we wanted something like this... Uhh penned it beautifully simi... ❤️🤗

But they drained down drastically maan charm and that scene by discussing shahs nd that stupid kitchen scene aaloo mixie.. Something... 😡😡

Aur haa that anu ka ott sharmna kaise bhul skti hu... Specially chai pite time... 😡

Chal. Smitha gnite..cyt...❤️🤗

Aaj k liye itna hi.. Baki jal pdhungi nd I will finish it in 3-4 days no wry... ❤️

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu & Anuj are discussing about their wedding in the dance academy

I would have liked for them to have meaningful conversation instead of playing Pictionary. Here is a nugget from la la land 😳

Anu: aap batayiye … aap kaisa shadi chahte hai?

Anuj: Ladies first… pehle tum batao…🤓

Anu: sacch kahoo toh aise dhoom dhaam ka shadi ajeeb lagta hai, iss umar mein, woh bhi itne bade bachon ke maa ho kar… ye sab…😲

Anuj: I can understand. But you know… tum hamesha kehti ho... kuch achcha karne ke liye, umar ki koi seema nahi hot hai...

Agar tum chaho toh, hum thoda bahut grand shadi toh afford kar sakte hai.❤️

Anu: aap boliye … aap kya chahte hai…

Anuj: jaise mein ne kaha, thoda sa grand shadi afford kar sakte hai. Par, I don’t think it is practical.

Ab hamari shadi ho rahi hai.. toh hamara future ka planning bhi karni hai.. you know.

Anu: Nods in agreement. Hum dono ka aise iss umar mein milna, yeh shadi… yeh sab kanhaij ki kripa hai. Kyun na hum kanhaji ke mandir mein … shadi rakha jaaye toh?😳

Anuj: Ye achcha idea hai. Mera jo bhi sapna tha shadi ko lekar… woh sab sapne mein hi achche lagte hai. We must be practical.😊

Ek aur baat, hume iss choti si event ke liye kisi se help nahi chahiye, hum khud manage kar sakte hai. You know, kisi se udhaar lene ki zaroorat nahi ..

Anu: agrees…

Anuj: achcha suno… shadi ke baad…. He looks up at her and sees that she is uncomfortable talking about life after marriage, perhaps she needs some more time to talk about intimacy, starting a family.🤗

So, he thinks of something else and says …

Anu, ye sab reeti riwaaz apni jagah theek hai, lekin hume ek doosre ko achchi tarah jaanna zaroori hai, you know… what do you expect from this marriage? Mein kya chahta hoon…. Isske baare mein baat karna zaroori hai.....

Tum jab bhi baat karna chaho… I’m here. Okay?🤗

Anu: shyness, hesitation, self-consciousness washes over making her forget words and ends up merely nodding her head.😳😳

Anuj lets out a chuckle and lightens the mood...

Anuj: chalo ek game khelte hai…. Tumne dekha hoga TV pe ….celebrity interviews mein, ek rapid fire round hota hai… aisa kuch khelte hai..

Mein ek word kahoonga, tum bina soche samjhe, jo bhi tumhare mann mein aata hai, bolna hai..

Anu: seems excited

Anuj: pehle mein start karoonga…tum jawab dena, uske baad tumhari baari hogi, aur mein jawaab doonga .. we’ll take turns…

Anu: is enthusiastic. …

Anuj: "Parivaar"

Anu: responds "mere bachche"

Anuj: raises his brow in appreciation and signals her to go next…

Anu: she ponders and asks "Rishte"?

Anuj: replies "vishwaas"… ab meri baari. "Pyaar"?

Anu: instantly comes the reply "kanhaji"…. She asks - "Shaadi"?

Anuj: says “pyara sa rishta”…… and asks- "sabse badi khushi"?

Anu: "pehli baar maa hone ka ehsaas" ……pauses and asks - "dosti"?

Anuj: "shararat, mazaak-masti" .…. he asks "Zindagi"?

Anu: aap…. 😳Pauses to meet his gaze and links his fingers with her own.

Mere liye mere zindagi ka doosra naam hi aap hai. ❤️

Anuj: looks at her lovingly… brings her hands to his lips….

Anu: continues… mujhe khoobsurat zindagi nahi chahiye…. bass aisi zindagi chahiye jisme aapka saath ho….❤️🤗

He comes close to her face, bends down to kiss her lips…..Anu places her finger on his lips pushing him back and says … “shadi ke baad… “😳😳😳

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There are things that couple must talk about before tying the knot. In this context, a much needed heart to heart conversation (of course nothing explicit), more so, because their equation is slightly unconventional. It is her 2nd time, plus the weight of her past can slow her down from moving forward.

How does it feel restarting a life in their 40's. I wanted to see these conversations happen. If time permits, I'll think writing a converstation that touches upon, starting a family, their career etc

Anyways, aisa hota toh.... drop in your comment to let me know 😳 Please pardon my poor vocabulary, hindi is not my 1st language. 😒

This how couple talks before marriage about their wedding planning nd also expectation form eo wedding..

Zindagi .. App.. Aap meri zindagi ho.. Wow.. Loved this line....

This will such lovely scene smitha.. ❤️

Rapid fire is great idea.... 🤗

But makers gaves us such a cringy baccho wala Pictionary game.. Stupidity.. Which including v nd k too.... Eeewwww.. 🤮🤮🤮🤮

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Shagun ceremony day. Anu & Anuj are in the kitchen.

The scene in today's episode was endearing, but I would have loved for them to have a conversation about the impending big step they both are about to take. Here is how I imagined -

Anu is making tea. He is sitting and staring at her. She asks..

Anu: aap yaha kya kar rahe hai.. (something to the effect that everyone is outside why are you here, I feel awkward)😳

Anuj: mein ne pehle bhi kaha tha… tumhe akele kitchen mein kaam karne nahi doonga

Anu: toh phir kuch kaam kijiye, aise baithke kya kar rahe hai?🤔

Anuj: okay! Batao kya karna hai…… rubs his palms together readying himself to work

Anu: gives him chores to do … in the meantime she asks….

Aapko meetha zyaada pasand hai ya namkeen?

Anuj: Namkeen accha lagta hai, meetha bhi pasand hai… 1 or 2 you know… kyun pooch rahi ho?🤓

Anu: aise hi… muhje meetha bahut bahut pasand hai….😛😛

Anuj: actually.... mujhe bhi…and runs his fingers over his lips suggestively😉😳

Anu: rolls her eyes. 🤔 And continues… hamari shadi ho rahi hai, iss ka matlab ye nahi ke humari pasand, na-pasand ek ho.🤔

Anuj: Sach batao toh mujhe yakeen hi nahi ho raha ki hamari shadi hone wala hai….❤️

Iss baare mein, mujhe kuch kehna hai.. tum bura toh nahi maanogi?

Anu: nai, batayiye…..

Anuj: Muje pata nahi ke tumhare mann mein kya hai… par… As you know… I am a simple man, mujhe ye thamjam bilkul pasand nahi…..toh mein soch raha tha ki harmari shadi bahut simple ho.😳

What do you think? Agar tumhe grand celebration chahiye toh mein compromise….

Anu: nahi,… mujhe bhi bahut simple function chahiye. Sirf badhon ka ashirwaad, aur bacchon ka pyaar…choti si party....Mere pass….yaani bapuji ke paas itne … she stops.. jab ladki waale sab karcha…😲

Anuj: Stop it Anu! Ye kya ladki wale laga rakha hai?😡 Gets irritated….

Humari soch badalni chahiye. Aage jaake hum dono saath mein rahenge, saath saari zindagi bitaayenge toh, shadi ka karcha bhi saath uthayenge…..👍🏼

Anu: magar… kya kahenge…

They continue exchanging their thoughts and come to a conclusion…..

Anuj: Anu, shaadi ke baad 2 din… sirf 2 din ke liye… hum kahi dur, matlab iss bheed se bahut dur…jaye toh kaisa rahega…. idea?😎

Anu: sabko chodke kaise….?Hum bapuji, kinjal, sa…🤓

Anuj: irritated with her, 😡 interrupts ...“Mohatarma ! Log shadi ke baad honeymoon pe akele jaate hai. Saare parivaar sameth teerth yatra par nahi”

Anu: laughs… pata hai mujhe….. mein bass aapko sataa rahi thi… aap gusse mein bahut bahut bahut pyaare lagte hai…😳🤗

Anuj: achcha! frames her face in his hands and brings them close to his own… his eyes hover over her lips, he tilts his head to meet her lips…..just then they hear the sound of tea boiling on the stove overflows… just like their cup of happiness.❤️

Anuj: Kisses on her nose and says…. “shadi ke baad dekh loonga…… shadi ke baad..” and frees her from his hold.😉❤️

Minutes later after fixing tea & snacks they both come out and offer it to everyone. They both sit next to each other, and Anu announces to everyone…

Anu: bapuji… hum dono ne decide kiya hai ki bahut simple shadi hogi. Shadi, woh radha-krishn ke mandir me hoga. Wahi, jo jignes bahi ke dukan se aage padta hai…

Anuj: adding to what she said, he continues…..bapuji, mein jaanta hoon ki aap shadi aapke ghar me rakhna chahte the. Lekin, hum dono chahte hai ki hamari shadi mandir mein ho.

Anu: Bapuji, kanyadaan ki vidhi aap hi karenge… par shadi mandir mein hogi. …

Everyone has mixed feelings about this idea and try to argue with them. But eventually give in their wishes.

Anuj: Anu, Shadi ke baad.. ..…woh bhi bataa do sabko…

Anu: starts to blush thinking about honeymoon and the intimate moments they had in the kitchen and begins to fumble on words.... woh mein, kaise…. kya kahoon.....😳😳

Anuj: Chalo…. Mein bata deta hoon… shadi ke baad, shaam ko… he looks at her teasingly…..😉

Anu: is nervous, embarrassed thinking about what he is about openly tell everyone…😵

Anuj: Shaam ko, ek choti si reception rakhna chahte hai…. Mere business partners, colleagues ke liye…

Turns to look at her… “shadi ke baad… “ and winks at her 😉

Anu: 😳❤️

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Honestly, I am not interested in candy floss romance for this show. I wanted to see the protagonist progress after divorce and create an identity of her own in a male dominated world. The story has taken different turn after AK was introduced, and I still hoped to see her liberate.

But, I can’t seem to understand where the story is going. Neither can I stand the silliness that is weaved into each episode. So tried to write something I would have liked to see while keeping the romantic zing in place.😊

Aisa hota toh….? Drop in your comment to let me know.😳

Lovely.. I loved this realistic mature convo between maan with some romantic kitchen moment with mix up comedy... Something like this we wanted... Not that ketup drawing on kharkra something.. 😡

But in show groom ki koi marzi puchi har nhi jaati that stupid baapuji.. Hell bent to do marriage in SH... 😡

Aise simple and mandir shaadi se bhi koi prob nhi thi.. Sh se bohot achcha idea tha ye .... 😒

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