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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Ali! ❤️🤗 Long time

Thank you dear❤️

hey girl! i go thru periods where im really active and then not so much! the forum has dropped to #5 so im back to do my part. 😘
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Posted: 3 years ago

Scene: Anu & Anuj’s mehandi ceremony. Anu is gifted with kangan.


The episode was huge let down. Here is an alternative from la la land.😳


Anu gets ready and comes out. As if on a cue Anuj also happens to walk into the house. One of his hands are hidden behind his back, as if hiding something. Their eyes meet, Anu feels the heat rise in her cheeks at his piercing gaze. He walks up to her quickly, holds her hands and whisks her away into her room.😉

He lets her in, and kicks the door close behind him.😉


Anu: aap yaha kyun laye hai. aur kya chupa rahe hai, aap ke haath mein kya hai?😲

Anuj: brings his hands forward, he is seen holding a jewelry box. "Ye…Tumhe ye dena tha….mere maa ke kangan" ❤️

Anu: is overwhelmed. A mixture of feelings culminate as tears making her eyes blur. She smiles 😊

Anuj: His eyes sparkle, and he signals her to open them.

Anu: opens the box to find a pair of traditional bangles and handwritten note.

Her fingers trace the bangles lovingly and then picks up the letter. She reads it –

Waada hai iss kangan ka,

Kabhi na choote rishta iss angan se.

Dedh sara pyaar aur ashirvaad, Maa!


All emotions erupt as tears uncontrollably. She looks up into his eyes.😳❤️

Anuj: nods his head and wipes off her tears. Picks up the bangles.

Anu: puts her hands forward.

Anuj gently slips in the bangle on each of her arms while their eyes fixed on each other.❤️

Anuj takes both her hands and plants a kiss on them.😳


He clears off the lump in his throat, but still chokes when he speaks "agar maa hoti, toh woh tumhe ye kangan apne haathon se pehnaati…" ❤️


Anu merely nods in agreement and rushes into his arms with a jolt, so hard that face thuds against his chest. She hears his heart thumping against her ears. While hers beats to match his rhythm.🤗❤️


Moments later, she pulls back. And squeals in pain. Her large jhumkas are stuck to his kurta buttons, tugging her ears.😲

He helps untangle them and she takes off her earrings.

Anuj: ek baat karni thi …

Anu: boliye ne..

Anuj: Mukku hamare honeymoon plan kar rahi hai..

Anu: starts blushing, and hides her face snuggling against him.😳😳

Anuj: pulls her close into his arms hugging her. Tum kya chahti ho?

Anu: hum kaha jaa rahe hai?

Anuj: Paris!

Anu: Lifts her head to look up to him. "itne doooor? Kya ham yahi kahi Jamnagar ke paas…."🤡

Anuj: smiles at her impishness. 😆 "Accha ye batao, tum kaisi jagah jaana chahti ho honeymoon ke liye.

Tumhe samandar pasand hai na…? kya hum kahi aur chale jaha samandar ho… you know .. Mauritius, Seychelles…" ❤️

Anu: Nahi… kya hum aisi jagah jaa sakte hai, jana har taraf pahad ho. Jaha zyaada bheed na ho, bahut thandh ho. Pahado ke beech mein ek chota sa ghar ho, jaha se hum khilthi dhoop badalon ke beech se nikalta dekhenge.❤️

Uss ghar me ek choti jagah hogi, jaha lakdiyan jalate hai…woh kya kehte hai… kinjal ne bataya tha, mein bhool gayi…

Anuj: Fireplace?

Anu: haan, wohi… razai odh kar, chai peeyenge, aur aapke seene mein sar rakh kar ….❤️😳🤗

Anuj: purrfect!! tumne itna soch liye, yahi bahut badi baat hai. Pulls her out to look into her eyes and says

"Ek kaam karte hai, pehli honeymoon aisi jagah jaha thandho, pahad ho. Agli baar, ham Seychelles jayenge jaha har taraf samandar ho… aur uske baad… Paris...." 😉😳❤️

Anu: "huh!!? itne saare…" 😲

Anuj places his finger on her lips interrupting her… brings his face close to hers, tilts his head and closes his lips on hers….sweeping her into eternal bliss.❤️❤️


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I am not familiar with the significance of "maa ke kangan". Just wrote something with my broken hindi inspired by dime a dozen filmy songs on kangan-aangan rhyming. LOL.🤣

Sneha, you had also mentioned about the "kangan" segment being a private one. This is inspired from your org.idea.

Added a bunch of HM ideas that Ekta, Hina,Azra & I were talking about.

Aisa hota toh....?😳 Let me know how you liked this piece.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu & Anuj’s mehandi ceremony. Anu is gifted with kangan.


The episode was huge let down. Here is an alternative from la la land.😳


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Posted: 3 years ago

So sweeet... wish we had got this on screen.. 😝

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Posted: 3 years ago

Uffffff🤩🤩💕💕💕

Loved the honeymoon discussions ❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago

Aisa ho jaata toh mera dil ho jata- la la la la la, la la la la la, la la la la la kuch private moment hona chahiye inka in sangeet jaise engagement ke time hua tha😒 again a beautiful one Smitha🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Pahaaad and jahaan thand ho 🔥🔥🔥 im toh saying let’s ff to this. Enough of SH, mujhe bhi dekhna hai their version of razai odhkar chai peena 🔥🔥😍😍🤩🤩

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved the honeymoon discussion! This girl's imagined in detail already 😉


A lovely version!

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Posted: 3 years ago

I loved it in serial also but little intimacy along with it would have made it more beautiful.

That's why I like your version better Smitha.💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

Usually elders of the family give ancestral gifts on these occasions , so it made sense ki GK gave them to Anu . But they should have showed an intimate moment of AK making her wear them in private...in front of everyone took the beauty out of it.

We fd can give them so many alternate scenarios which makers can use someother places but alas they copy only our taunts...not ideas😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Written beautifully 😍

I hope they show some honeymoon discussion in the show too.

Also, I hope they show a honeymoon obviously lol. And that Bapuji doesnt drop before that 😭

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