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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Shah family visiting Kapadias for a formal ritual without Anu.



Love your scene, yes someone should've mentioned he looks chikna, you did it ;)

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow lovely nice scene

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ya me too wanted someone to mention his new look in the show...

This was such cute one❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Miniwatch

Me too, I wanted someone to acknowledge it too. I want Anu to notice and show her preference for a stubble actually 😊

Agreed! Like all of you said, I wish someone had mentioned it as a passing remark at least. He looks younger/almost Toshu's age group.


I liked the little convo they both exchanged with their eyes. I thought it was nicely executed, Rupali was fabulous. I wish we get to see such scenes than the blushing!


@bold- Mini, I'll write something along those lines. I am torn between these to looks! smiley9


Added later: I had previously written about the stubble to fulfill my fetish for the stubble 😳

Edited by SmithaRam - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Agreed! Like all of you said, I wish someone had mentioned it as a passing remark at least. He looks younger/almost Toshu's age group.


I liked the little convo they both exchanged with their eyes. I thought it was nicely executed, Rupali was fabulous. I wish we get to see such scenes than the blushing!


@bold- Mini, I'll write something along those lines. I am torn between these to looks! smiley9


We also need a surprise makeover for Anu, and our man just bowled over speechless 😶

We all know Rupali looks hot 🔥

That should eventually be followed up with a dinner date

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Posted: 3 years ago

Scene: Anuj plans to take Anu out for picking their wedding ring.

A beautiful evening was ruined with meaningless sermon on middle class women. Although, I bet all middle class women are doing just fine than how it is forced to believe in this show.


Here is an alternative from la la land….😳


Anuj arrives, sees Kinjal has come out to see them off. He thanks her and holds Anu’s hands, and they both get into the taxi.

She is seen sitting at the edge of the seat looking nervous


Anuj: Anu, uncomfortable lag raha hai? aaram se baitho…😊

Anu: merely nods… but still looks uneasy😳

Anuj: kya hua? Koi parishani hai? …opens his arms and says “come here” 🤗

Anu: She scoots closer, and rests her head on his shoulders and slowly begins to talk….

“itni raat ko mein kabhi baahar nahi gayi….. ajeeb lag raha hai.” …. Nuzzles her face deeper into his chest… “woh bhi aap ke saath”😳😳

Anuj: Closes his arms around her tightly… and simply smiles.😊 “I know!” looks down to meet her eyes and says – “ mujhe pata tha tumhe awkward lage ga… but I wanted you to select your ring”❤️❤️

Anu: surprised! “kya hum ring lene jaa rahe hai? woh bhi iss waqt?”😲🤔

Anuj: Haan, mere dosth ke dukaan hai, meine request kiya tha…. You know I didn’t want you to feel embarrassed when it is crowded..🤪

Anu: is touched by his concern… says “mere liye aap hi sab kuch hai, mera gehna toh mein ne chunn liya”😳😳

Anuj: Smiles and winks at her.😉😳

They reach the store, pick the ring, finish shopping, and step out of the store.


Anuj: "We still have an hour…" … looks around and sees an icecream vendor is about to close down for the day. He points towards it and says… “chalo!” and literally drags her😎

Anu: Sprints along with him balancing her steps…😲

Despite her fuss about eating ice cream in the wee hours of the night, they both end up having it. They stroll lazily and sit at a secluded spot.


Anu: "pata hai? ye sab mere liye bahut ajeeb hai. Mere pehle shaadi mein… " 😕 she pauses seeing him expressionless. 😳 She feels that she must make a concious effort to stop reiterating her past to him. So, she changes topic..


"itni mehngi diamond ring ki kya zaroorat thi?.... aap hi mere liye sabse keemti heera…. " and snakes her arms with his, scooting closer to snuggle beside him.❤️🤗

Anuj: haan, Anu! Mujhe pata hai… mein keemti heera and all that you know! 🤔

jaanti ho, sabse precious,…keemti cheez kya hai?

Memories! .. yaadien. …

Ring ki keemat kuch lakhon ka hoga..par jab bhi tum isse dekhogi, tumhe aaj ka shaam yaad ayega.

This evening may not have been very romantic…..phir bhi… aaj se saalon baad bhi tumhe yaad ayega ki, hum aise saath baithe the…❤️❤️❤️

He sees that her eyes have welled up…

"Cheezon ka kya? Aaj rahega toh kal nahi…. par aise lamhon ko humse koi nahi cheen sakta…. Waqt bhi nahi." ❤️

Anu: shakes her head in agreement. Gets rid of her tears and says… "toh iss shaam ko aur yaadgaar banaye…" comes close to him, cups his face in her hands and claims his lips. 😳😳

Moments later, she pulls back…

Anuj: wiping his lips, says "icecream flavor se bhi meetha …."😳😉

Anu: ek baat boloon? Without waiting for his response…

she touches his cheeks and continues…."ye achcha hai… "

feels shy, looks down and says "par mujhe woh aap pehle jaisa… woh zyaada pasand.. "😳😳 and snuggles against his chest unable to meet his piercing gaze…


Anuj: wraps his arms around her tightening his grip and laughs… "achcha! woh kyun?"

Anu: manages to mouth words… "gudgudi hoti hai… 😳

She looks at him and sees that he is grinning mischievously …she pounds her fist against his arms and says...... "pata nahi.... bass pasand hai"😳😳😳


Anuj: Smiles at her impishness. “mujhe achcha lagta hai, jab tum apni mann ki baat kehti ho… “ lifts her face to meet her eyes, looks at her lips yearning to freeze the moment in time. ❤️


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All "things" around are precious because there are memories attached to it. We must move on and continue to make memories


Without the kiss, a simple scene along these lines is too much to ask?! 🤔 There are so many other alternate possbilities I could think of!!

She sees him in person in his new look, I wish she had complimented him. I wrote everything I really wanted to see in today's episode, even went ahead and imgined myself beside him 😉😳

Anyway, aisa hota toh kaisa hota? Drop in your comment to let me know.


err! please dont ask why the vendor was open till midnight!

Edited by SmithaRam - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Well i wanted some kinda scene for this! That all lines were good but a lil too exaggerated i felt.. maybe it wasn't.. lovedd it🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anuj plans to take Anu out for picking their wedding ring.

A beautiful evening was ruined with meaningless sermon on middle class women. Although, I bet all middle class women are doing just fine than how it is forced to believe in this show.


Here is an alternative from la la land….😳


Anuj arrives, sees Kinjal has come out to see them off. He thanks her and holds Anu’s hands, and they both get into the taxi.

She is seen sitting at the edge of the seat looking nervous


Anuj: Anu, uncomfortable lag raha hai? aaram se baitho…😊

Anu: merely nods… but still looks uneasy😳

Anuj: kya hua? Koi parishani hai? …opens his arms and says “come here” 🤗

Anu: She scoots closer, and rests her head on his shoulders and slowly begins to talk….

“itni raat ko mein kabhi baahar nahi gayi….. ajeeb lag raha hai.” …. Nuzzles her face deeper into his chest… “woh bhi aap ke saath”😳😳

Anuj: Closes his arms around her tightly… and simply smiles.😊 “I know!” looks down to meet her eyes and says – “ mujhe pata tha tumhe awkward lage ga… but I wanted you to select your ring”❤️❤️

Anu: surprised! “kya hum ring lene jaa rahe hai? woh bhi iss waqt?”😲🤔

Anuj: Haan, mere dosth ke dukaan hai, meine request kiya tha…. You know I didn’t want you to feel embarrassed when it is crowded..🤪

Anu: is touched by his concern… says “mere liye aap hi sab kuch hai, mera gehna toh mein ne chunn liya”😳😳

Anuj: Smiles and winks at her.😉😳

They reach the store, pick the ring, finish shopping, and step out of the store.


Anuj: "We still have an hour…" … looks around and sees an icecream vendor is about to close down for the day. He points towards it and says… “chalo!” and literally drags her😎

Anu: Sprints along with him balancing her steps…😲

Despite her fuss about eating ice cream in the wee hours of the night, they both end up having it. They stroll lazily and sit at a secluded spot.


Anu: "pata hai? ye sab mere liye bahut ajeeb hai. Mere pehle shaadi mein… " 😕 she pauses seeing him expressionless. 😳 She feels that she must make a concious effort to stop reiterating her past to him. So, she changes topic..


"itni mehngi diamond ring ki kya zaroorat thi?.... aap hi mere liye sabse keemti heera…. " and snakes her arms with his, scooting closer to snuggle beside him.❤️🤗

Anuj: haan, Anu! Mujhe pata hai… mein keemti heera and all that you know! 🤔

jaanti ho, sabse precious,…keemti cheez kya hai?

Memories! .. yaadien. …

Ring ki keemat kuch lakhon ka hoga..par jab bhi tum isse dekhogi, tumhe aaj ka shaam yaad ayega.

This evening may not have been very romantic…..phir bhi… aaj se saalon baad bhi tumhe yaad ayega ki, hum aise saath baithe the…❤️❤️❤️

He sees that her eyes have welled up…

"Cheezon ka kya? Aaj rahega toh kal nahi…. par aise lamhon ko humse koi nahi cheen sakta…. Waqt bhi nahi." ❤️

Anu: shakes her head in agreement. Gets rid of her tears and says… "toh iss shaam ko aur yaadgaar banaye…" comes close to him, cups his face in her hands and claims his lips. 😳😳

Moments later, she pulls back…

Anuj: wiping his lips, says "icecream flavor se bhi meetha …."😳😉

Anu: ek baat boloon? Without waiting for his response…

she touches his cheeks and continues…."ye achcha hai… "

feels shy, looks down and says "par mujhe woh aap pehle jaisa… woh zyaada pasand.. "😳😳 and snuggles against his chest unable to meet his piercing gaze…


Anuj: wraps his arms around her tightening his grip and laughs… "achcha! woh kyun?"

Anu: manages to mouth words… "gudgudi hoti hai… 😳

She looks at him and sees that he is grinning mischievously …she pounds her fist against his arms and says...... "pata nahi.... bass pasand hai"😳😳😳


Anuj: Smiles at her impishness. “mujhe achcha lagta hai, jab tum apni mann ki baat kehti ho… “ lifts her face to meet her eyes, looks at her lips yearning to freeze the moment in time. ❤️


----------

All "things" around are precious because there are memories attached to it. We must move on and continue to make memories


Without the kiss, a simple scene along these lines is too much to ask?! 🤔 There are so many other alternate possbilities I could think of!!

She sees him in person in his new look, I wish she had complimented him. I wrote everything I really wanted to see in today's episode, even went ahead and imgined myself beside him 😉😳

Anyway, aisa hota toh kaisa hota? Drop in your comment to let me know.


True to Anu and Anuj style, first kiss in public 😂


Oh all the could've, would've should'ves we think of!

Nice one Smitha!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Miniwatch


True to Anu and Anuj style, first kiss in public 😂


Oh all the could've, would've should'ves we think of!

Nice one Smitha!

Added the stubble piece for you Mini darling! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh ho Smithu… apni mann ki baat likh li na for his stubble 😳


Such a beautiful alternative… agree even without the kiss, they spending some quality time with each other and making memories would have been fantastic..glad you wrote it❤️❤️


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