MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 40

Beautiful os

Much better than episode

I wish they had talked about their honeymoon

Kiya baat yeh scene bhi ho sakta tha i like it

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu & Anuj’s mehandi ceremony. Anu is gifted with kangan.

The episode was huge let down. Here is an alternative from la la land.😳

Anu gets ready and comes out. As if on a cue Anuj also happens to walk into the house. One of his hands are hidden behind his back, as if hiding something. Their eyes meet, Anu feels the heat rise in her cheeks at his piercing gaze. He walks up to her quickly, holds her hands and whisks her away into her room.😉

He lets her in, and kicks the door close behind him.😉

Anu: aap yaha kyun laye hai. aur kya chupa rahe hai, aap ke haath mein kya hai?😲

Anuj: brings his hands forward, he is seen holding a jewelry box. "Ye…Tumhe ye dena tha….mere maa ke kangan" ❤️

Anu: is overwhelmed. A mixture of feelings culminate as tears making her eyes blur. She smiles 😊

Anuj: His eyes sparkle, and he signals her to open them.

Anu: opens the box to find a pair of traditional bangles and handwritten note.

Her fingers trace the bangles lovingly and then picks up the letter. She reads it –

Waada hai iss kangan ka,

Kabhi na choote rishta iss angan se.

Dedh sara pyaar aur ashirvaad, Maa!

All emotions erupt as tears uncontrollably. She looks up into his eyes.😳❤️

Anuj: nods his head and wipes off her tears. Picks up the bangles.

Anu: puts her hands forward.

Anuj gently slips in the bangle on each of her arms while their eyes fixed on each other.❤️

Anuj takes both her hands and plants a kiss on them.😳

He clears off the lump in his throat, but still chokes when he speaks "agar maa hoti, toh woh tumhe ye kangan apne haathon se pehnaati…" ❤️

Anu merely nods in agreement and rushes into his arms with a jolt, so hard that face thuds against his chest. She hears his heart thumping against her ears. While hers beats to match his rhythm.🤗❤️

Moments later, she pulls back. And squeals in pain. Her large jhumkas are stuck to his kurta buttons, tugging her ears.😲

He helps untangle them and she takes off her earrings.

Anuj: ek baat karni thi …

Anu: boliye ne..

Anuj: Mukku hamare honeymoon plan kar rahi hai..

Anu: starts blushing, and hides her face snuggling against him.😳😳

Anuj: pulls her close into his arms hugging her. Tum kya chahti ho?

Anu: hum kaha jaa rahe hai?

Anuj: Paris!

Anu: Lifts her head to look up to him. "itne doooor? Kya ham yahi kahi Jamnagar ke paas…."🤡

Anuj: smiles at her impishness. 😆 "Accha ye batao, tum kaisi jagah jaana chahti ho honeymoon ke liye.

Tumhe samandar pasand hai na…? kya hum kahi aur chale jaha samandar ho… you know .. Mauritius, Seychelles…" ❤️

Anu: Nahi… kya hum aisi jagah jaa sakte hai, jana har taraf pahad ho. Jaha zyaada bheed na ho, bahut thandh ho. Pahado ke beech mein ek chota sa ghar ho, jaha se hum khilthi dhoop badalon ke beech se nikalta dekhenge.❤️

Uss ghar me ek choti jagah hogi, jaha lakdiyan jalate hai…woh kya kehte hai… kinjal ne bataya tha, mein bhool gayi…

Anuj: Fireplace?

Anu: haan, wohi… razai odh kar, chai peeyenge, aur aapke seene mein sar rakh kar ….❤️😳🤗

Anuj: purrfect!! tumne itna soch liye, yahi bahut badi baat hai. Pulls her out to look into her eyes and says

"Ek kaam karte hai, pehli honeymoon aisi jagah jaha thandho, pahad ho. Agli baar, ham Seychelles jayenge jaha har taraf samandar ho… aur uske baad… Paris...." 😉😳❤️

Anu: "huh!!? itne saare…" 😲

Anuj places his finger on her lips interrupting her… brings his face close to hers, tilts his head and closes his lips on hers….sweeping her into eternal bliss.❤️❤️

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I am not familiar with the significance of "maa ke kangan". Just wrote something with my broken hindi inspired by dime a dozen filmy songs on kangan-aangan rhyming. LOL.🤣

Sneha, you had also mentioned about the "kangan" segment being a private one. This is inspired from your org.idea.

Added a bunch of HM ideas that Ekta, Hina,Azra & I were talking about.

Aisa hota toh....?😳 Let me know how you liked this piece.

Originally posted by: grace2021

I loved it in serial also but little intimacy along with it would have made it more beautiful.

That's why I like your version better Smitha.💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

Usually elders of the family give ancestral gifts on these occasions , so it made sense ki GK gave them to Anu . But they should have showed an intimate moment of AK making her wear them in private...in front of everyone took the beauty out of it.

We fd can give them so many alternate scenarios which makers can use someother places but alas they copy only our taunts...not ideas😆

Thanks for explaining Pooja! 🤗

Any particular reason your choice of color to highlight is purple?🤔🤣

Your versions are always so beautiful smitha😍😍❤️and I always look forward to reading them😁

Loved it

Even I wished the Kangan scene should have been private longer and better... but they rushed it up for the useless promotion

And the honeymoon talks should come in the show between the ya... we have seen everyone else talking about their honeymoon except them

Hi Smitha...

It is so so so amazing.....

The note written by Anuj's maa has added so much depth in that scene..

Loved all the honeymoon ideas.. how beautifully you have roped the general discussion of thread in this story.. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Originally posted by: snehaz16

Hi Smitha...

It is so so so amazing.....

The note written by Anuj's maa has added so much depth in that scene..

Loved all the honeymoon ideas.. how beautifully you have roped the general discussion of thread in this story.. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

🤗❤️ Hamare discussions ka bhi kya kehna!! 😆

Well I guess now Anuj finally wants to declare to the world, with so many moons...😳

Liked the talks and mushiness

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu & Anuj’s mehandi ceremony. Anu is gifted with kangan.

The episode was huge let down. Here is an alternative from la la land.😳

Anu gets ready and comes out. As if on a cue Anuj also happens to walk into the house. One of his hands are hidden behind his back, as if hiding something. Their eyes meet, Anu feels the heat rise in her cheeks at his piercing gaze. He walks up to her quickly, holds her hands and whisks her away into her room.😉

He lets her in, and kicks the door close behind him.😉

Anu: aap yaha kyun laye hai. aur kya chupa rahe hai, aap ke haath mein kya hai?😲

Anuj: brings his hands forward, he is seen holding a jewelry box. "Ye…Tumhe ye dena tha….mere maa ke kangan" ❤️

Anu: is overwhelmed. A mixture of feelings culminate as tears making her eyes blur. She smiles 😊

Anuj: His eyes sparkle, and he signals her to open them.

Anu: opens the box to find a pair of traditional bangles and handwritten note.

Her fingers trace the bangles lovingly and then picks up the letter. She reads it –

Waada hai iss kangan ka,

Kabhi na choote rishta iss angan se.

Dedh sara pyaar aur ashirvaad, Maa!

All emotions erupt as tears uncontrollably. She looks up into his eyes.😳❤️

Anuj: nods his head and wipes off her tears. Picks up the bangles.

Anu: puts her hands forward.

Anuj gently slips in the bangle on each of her arms while their eyes fixed on each other.❤️

Anuj takes both her hands and plants a kiss on them.😳

He clears off the lump in his throat, but still chokes when he speaks "agar maa hoti, toh woh tumhe ye kangan apne haathon se pehnaati…" ❤️

Anu merely nods in agreement and rushes into his arms with a jolt, so hard that face thuds against his chest. She hears his heart thumping against her ears. While hers beats to match his rhythm.🤗❤️

Moments later, she pulls back. And squeals in pain. Her large jhumkas are stuck to his kurta buttons, tugging her ears.😲

He helps untangle them and she takes off her earrings.

Anuj: ek baat karni thi …

Anu: boliye ne..

Anuj: Mukku hamare honeymoon plan kar rahi hai..

Anu: starts blushing, and hides her face snuggling against him.😳😳

Anuj: pulls her close into his arms hugging her. Tum kya chahti ho?

Anu: hum kaha jaa rahe hai?

Anuj: Paris!

Anu: Lifts her head to look up to him. "itne doooor? Kya ham yahi kahi Jamnagar ke paas…."🤡

Anuj: smiles at her impishness. 😆 "Accha ye batao, tum kaisi jagah jaana chahti ho honeymoon ke liye.

Tumhe samandar pasand hai na…? kya hum kahi aur chale jaha samandar ho… you know .. Mauritius, Seychelles…" ❤️

Anu: Nahi… kya hum aisi jagah jaa sakte hai, jana har taraf pahad ho. Jaha zyaada bheed na ho, bahut thandh ho. Pahado ke beech mein ek chota sa ghar ho, jaha se hum khilthi dhoop badalon ke beech se nikalta dekhenge.❤️

Uss ghar me ek choti jagah hogi, jaha lakdiyan jalate hai…woh kya kehte hai… kinjal ne bataya tha, mein bhool gayi…

Anuj: Fireplace?

Anu: haan, wohi… razai odh kar, chai peeyenge, aur aapke seene mein sar rakh kar ….❤️😳🤗

Anuj: purrfect!! tumne itna soch liye, yahi bahut badi baat hai. Pulls her out to look into her eyes and says

"Ek kaam karte hai, pehli honeymoon aisi jagah jaha thandho, pahad ho. Agli baar, ham Seychelles jayenge jaha har taraf samandar ho… aur uske baad… Paris...." 😉😳❤️

Anu: "huh!!? itne saare…" 😲

Anuj places his finger on her lips interrupting her… brings his face close to hers, tilts his head and closes his lips on hers….sweeping her into eternal bliss.❤️❤️

---

I am not familiar with the significance of "maa ke kangan". Just wrote something with my broken hindi inspired by dime a dozen filmy songs on kangan-aangan rhyming. LOL.🤣

Sneha, you had also mentioned about the "kangan" segment being a private one. This is inspired from your org.idea.

Added a bunch of HM ideas that Ekta, Hina,Azra & I were talking about.

Aisa hota toh....?😳 Let me know how you liked this piece.

Abe smitha kya bich latkaya thoda aur likhti naa yr...

This would be soo sweet moment.. If they show us private kangan moment specially maa kangan note ... Kya yr writer ki to buddhi bhrast hui hai... Chod...

Ohh.. Wow 3- 3 honey moon.. Ist one pahadi main.. That's great...☺️☺️☺️

Overall loved this part... Let's me read other parts too...

Itne saare pdhne hai soo my post will be in short words.. Plz don't mind...

And so sry for being very late reader..

Nd special ur HM part is..

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