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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Awesome update dear. Loved the way Trisha interrogate avinash and then Raghav agreeing to come to the party. The hotel room scene was brilliant, I loved how indirectly they both expressed their feelings for each other. Trisha and Raghav dancing together... So cute. I can imagine how shocked rajbir and bikram would have been seeing them dance together like this... So Trisha's drink was spiked and now she is missing. I'm sure Raghav would be going all out to save his life. I'm sure he'll be able to save her soon and then maybe they can directly confess their love...I wish.

Thanks Manisha, In next update Raghav will help her out of this danger and There will be a direct confession.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
awesome update dear loved reading it soo much .it was soo Ratrilious . loved the RaTri hotel scene soo much .Raghav teasing trisha they sharing the same room Raghav helping trisha to zip her dress was soo cute .Really loved all these scenes soo much. so now somebody nixed something in Trishas drink .hope Raghav saves trisha hope trisha is safe thanks a lot for such a wonderful update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

awesome update dear loved reading it soo much .it was soo Ratrilious . loved the RaTri hotel scene soo much .Raghav teasing trisha they sharing the same room Raghav helping trisha to zip her dress was soo cute .Really loved all these scenes soo much. so now somebody nixed something in Trishas drink .hope Raghav saves trisha hope trisha is safe thanks a lot for such a wonderful update

Thanks tasha for review. Raghav will definitely save her from this danger. But what he will do all in next update. Will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Hi Ananya 🤗
This is a lovely progress to the story as we all were in the wait of the case being solved and Trisha being involved as a victim. I liked the way Raghav interrogated Avinash and declared that for them every one is like a culprit and they have to go ahead in interrogation.
Avinash's ideas are not good as sensed by Raghav and he himself accepted the invite to be with her during the party.
Liked the way everyone were involved as a team. Be it Bikram and Rajbir too and even Swati.
So the room is deliberately given them as a single room becos the 667 has already a proof there.
Later, loved the teasing of raghav and Trisha asking him to go out for her to dress up but he had to enter without telling and what he saw, made them express much without even words uttered. Lovely scene when they hugged each other. I sensed worries of Raghav for Trisha. Obvious and very natural.
The confession tell so much from raghav's views. He has told her that she has curaya hai uska dil. Haye what a note of expressions. And when he asked him for dance and tease her that she can't dance like him . All to make her relieved and to be with her more close.❤️
And what a dance it was. Even the disguised Bikram and Rajbir could not come out of the spell 😉
But the culprit did his plan out. He made Trisha drink the dose he poured in her drink and now she is kidnapped.
Very tense situation for the team. Very worrisome Raghav and very confusing plan.
Nicely plot Ananya, liked the way U have changed the whole scenario. Now will wait for the next move and finding of Trisha by the team, and Raghav specially.
Thanks and loves ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Ananya 🤗

This is a lovely progress to the story as we all were in the wait of the case being solved and Trisha being involved as a victim. I liked the way Raghav interrogated Avinash and declared that for them every one is like a culprit and they have to go ahead in interrogation.
Yes Trisha is always strict about their laws. Trisha will risk her life to catch the culprit.
Avinash's ideas are not good as sensed by Raghav and he himself accepted the invite to be with her during the party.
Yes Raghav's intuition will be right how? you wil see in next update
Liked the way everyone were involved as a team. Be it Bikram and Rajbir too and even Swati.
So the room is deliberately given them as a single room becos the 667 has already a proof there.
It is necessary to show it like normal investigation so involvement of all members are required.
Later, loved the teasing of raghav and Trisha asking him to go out for her to dress up but he had to enter without telling and what he saw, made them express much without even words uttered. Lovely scene when they hugged each other. I sensed worries of Raghav for Trisha. Obvious and very natural.
The confession tell so much from raghav's views. He has told her that she has curaya hai uska dil. Haye what a note of expressions. And when he asked him for dance and tease her that she can't dance like him . All to make her relieved and to be with her more close.❤️
Yes I am glad that you liked all the RaTri scenes. I tried my best to give lots of Ratri scenes in the story. Raghav is hell worried for Trisha but to catch the killer the plan must go on.
And what a dance it was. Even the disguised Bikram and Rajbir could not come out of the spell 😉
But the culprit did his plan out. He made Trisha drink the dose he poured in her drink and now she is kidnapped.
Very tense situation for the team. Very worrisome Raghav and very confusing plan.
Nicely plot Ananya, liked the way U have changed the whole scenario. Now will wait for the next move and finding of Trisha by the team, and Raghav specially.
Thanks babita, next part will be little emotional. Will try to update by tonight
Thanks and loves ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3


Raghav - "Room no. 667 me chalo jaldi"

Rajbir, Bikram and Raghav ran towards Room no. 667 and opened it.

Raghav-"us cupboard me lash hai"

Rajbir-"kya lash "

Rajbir opened the cupboard and found no dead body in it but a note there with some blood drops.

Rajbir -" kaha hai lash yaha to bus ek note pada hai jispar khoon laga hai"

Raghav-" mujhe vo note dikhao"

Raghav read the note it was written - "mujhe pata tha agent Raghav tum zaroor aoge yaha par afsos tum apni Trisha ko nahi bach paogey use to marna hoga. "

Bikram - "oh no Trisha ko vo kahi aur lezakar marega"

Raghav called Swati - "Swati Trisha ka phone track karo jaldi"

Swati - "Trisha ka phone to Delhi highway par hai"


Raghav-" hume jaldi nikalana hoga lets go"

All the boys sat in the car and drove it as fast as they can.


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Trisha was sub conscious she heard a man speaking to her. The man has a mask on his face.

Man-"Agent Trisha tumhe mar kar mujhe bohot... Bohot khushi hogi"

Trisha - "tum is galat phemi me mat raho Raghav aur meri team mujhe zaroor bachane ayegi."

The man stop the car and looked at her phone he struggled with her and threw her phone in the bushes. During the struggle she got hurt from the car window and became totally unconscious.

Trisha woke uo at a lonely place which was a sort of house closed for many years.

She woke up and find a man sharping his knife and was looking at her with a mad smile.

Man-"are tum uth gayi ha.. Ha.. Ha.. Dekho me tumhare liye hi yeh chaku ki dhar bada raha hoon tum naseeb vali ho ki me tumhe baki ladkiyo ki tarah ek vaar me nahi marooga.. Me to tumhe aur tadpaonga jisase tumhare... Tumhare vo agent raghav ko bhi dard hoga. Ha... Ha... Ha!! "

Trisha was still very weak too respond due to drug which he mixed in her drink.


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Swati -" Raghav Trisha ka phone ek hi jagah par hai it stop moving. Tum log usse bas 5m ki doori par ho. "

Rajbir -" par Raghav 5m ki doori par hamare samne koi gadi nahi hai"

Swati - "stop bus yahi par hai"

Raghav - "par yaha toh bus jangal hai aur kuch nahi zaroor usne Trisha ka phone gadi se fak diya hoga"

Bikram - "ab Kya Raghav ab kaise dhoondenge Trisha ko"

Raghav-"yaha aas pass koi hotel yah Restaurant nahi hai"

Swati-"par Raghav thodi door par ek farmhouse hai jo kai salo se band pada hai"

Raghav - "Killer Trisha ko vahi le gaya hoga hume vahi chalna chahiye"


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The man came near to Trisha witn a blade. Firet time she was Afraid of someone. Trisha pushed him hard and try to run but he hold her hand and made her fall on floor.

Trisha - "tumhari dushmani kya hai mujhse aur un teen ladkiyo se"

Man-"tum CBI vale jaate jaate bhi sawal karke jaate ho pyaar karta tha un sab se par un logo ko meri pyaar ki kadar hi nahi thi to mene unhe mar dala. Tumse bhi me bohot pyaar karta hoon isliye to me tumhe araam se maroonga"

Trisha struggle a lot but he was so strong that he made her lie on the ground and right "LOVE" on her hand by the blade. Trisha scream badly with pain but he do not stop doing that.

Trisha was still lying on the ground and tears flowing through her eyes. She has only one hope Raghav and she was waiting for him to save her life. Then she saw a gun placed on the table which he had taken from her.

She made a plan for escape. She struggle to get to the table and grab the gun she was about to move from the room. The man came and stand in front of her. Trisha shot a bullet on his arm and ran towards the door. When she reached near the door she found it locked she tried to open it forcefully but she was not so strong to do so. The man was coming near to her with face full of anger. Trisha heart started beating fast, she move her step towards the room but the killer ran towards her an injected a drug on her neck.

Man-"Agent Trisha bohot bhaag liya tumne ab chup chap yaha zameen par lete raho. Me tumhe itna pyaar kiya aur tum mujhse bhaag rahi ho. Thik hai tum hai bhi un ladkiyo ki tarah mar deta hoon"

The man bring a knife towards her and was about to kill her, suddenly a bullet was fired and hurt his hand. The look behind and saw Raghav standing with gun in his hand. All the anger and pain was visible on his face.

Raghav - " Avinash apna mask utaro"

Man removed his mask and started laughing.

Man-"jitna suna tha tum usase jyada hoshiyaar nikale "

Raghav -" tumne in teen ladkiyo ka khoon kyo kiya"

Man-"vo.. Vo me tumhe kabhi nahi bataonga The mystery should remain a mystery "

The man quickly grab the gun and shoot himself.

Raghav saw Trisha lying on the floor. The blood stream are flowing through her hand. Raghav saw love written on her hand with blade.

Raghav - "Trisha ankhe kholo"

But she did not responded so he took her in his arms and placed her in car and took her to the nearby hospital.

She got bandage on her right hand and was dischared in few hours.

Trisha - "Raghav me kya tumhare ghar ruk sakti hoon meri mom ko pata chalega toh vo bohot pareshan hongi"

Raghav - "no problem Trisha"


Raghav's home

Trisha - "thanks meri jaan bachne ke liye agar tum time par nahi ate toh na jaane mera kya hota"

Raghav - "kya bol rahi ho Trisha me tumhe kuch nahi hone deta"

Raghav offered her a cup of coffee. They both were shocked from the incident so the night was silent.


In the morning.

Raghav woke up early due to noises from the kitchen. Usually he used to make breakfast so who can be there in the kitchen. Raghav found Trisha cooking breakfast in his kitchen. He was so happy as every morning he was bored of making breakfast himself.

Raghav - "tum yaha tume toh doctor ne araam karne kaha hai na"

Trisha - "me apne ghar me sbah apna nashta khud hi banati hoon tum fikar mat karo I am fine"

Raghav - "kash tum mere liye har nashta aur khana bana deti"

Trisha - "usme koi baat nahi me tumhare liye khud nashta bana kar le aya karoongi"

Raghav felt so happy to see Trisha caring for her.

While Raghav was getting ready she take out a book which she saw Raghav reading mostly and start reading it but she found a letter written in it. She read the leter and kept it safely in her pocket.


CBI Headquarters 8:30pm

The day was very hectic and busy for all.

Trisha entered the conference room and saw every one discussing about the pending cases.

Rajbir - "Boss apki tabiyat kaisi hai"

Trisha - "fine pehle se achi hai"

Rajbir - "Agar boss apki chot pehle se better hai toh party..."

Trisha smiled widely at Rajbir innocent face

Trisha - "ok done 9:00 baje dominos me"

All the members agrred but Raghav was silent.


Dominos

Trisha entered the restaurant. She was looking gorgeous in her red short dress and a loose bun.

Trisha - "Hi everyone toh order karte hai"

All ordered pizzas of there own choice only Raghav and Trisha was left to order.

"ek cheese delight Pizza"both said it together. Trisha and Raghav smiled that there same choice.

Rajbir - "so tum dono ko same pizza pasand hai nice"

Bikram - "tumhe kaise pata Raghav ki killer Avinash tha"

Raghav-"uske note se killer ko kaise pata ki me agent Raghav hoon. Yeh baat sirf teen logo ko pata thi me, Trisha aur Avinash. Doosri baat uski handwriting usne jo invitation card diya tha uspar jo handwriting thi vo same handwriting us note par bhi thi"

Rajbir - "seriously vo pagal tha hum logo ne pata lagaya uske baare me background clean hai par vo aisa kar sakta hai"

Raghav smiled-"pyaar acche accho ko pagal bana deta hai"

Rajbir - "matlab"

Trisha -" vo un teeno ladkiyo se pyaar karta tha par unke rejection ke baad he decided to kill them"

Raghav - "aur apse bhi boss isliye toh apke hath par LOVE likha tha. Par use kya pata tha jissase usko pyaar hua hai use pyaar se allergy hai"

Trisha - "crazy!!" though Trisha was very bold and used to ignore his teasing but this time when she listen the word LOVE her heart started beating fast. She ask herself if she was in love?

Trisha could see tension on Raghav's face though he sometimes smile on jokes or tease her but something was worrying him from morning.

After the party gets over Raghav asked Trisha if he can drop her. She refused but Raghav did not listen any of her excuse.


In the car

Trisha - "maine tumse poocha tha tumhe kabhi pyaar hua hai"

Raghav - "ha maine bataya tha ki agar tumhare jaisi koi hoti college me toh definitely pyaar ho jata"

Trisha - "aur agar me hoti to"

Raghav stopped the car, he said that to tease her but unknowingly he revealed the truth in front of her.

Trisha - "yeh gift tumhare liye"

Raghav - "yeh kya hai birthday toh tumhara hai na"

Raghav opened the small little box and found a letter in it. It was his resignation letter.

Raghav read it and understood that Trisha knew about his idea of giving resignation.

Raghav was silent, he don't know what she was feeling for him. Trisha's eyes was filled with tears. She move out of the car and start walking alone. Raghav quickly move out and made her stop by holding her hands tightly. He was feeling so guilty from inside.

Raghav - "Trisha meri baat samajhne ki koshish karo"

Trisha - "kya samjhu Raghav so yeh hai tumhara gift mere birthday par"

Raghav - "No Trisha it's not. Trisha mere zindgi ka ek maksat hai aur me apne maksat ko pura karne ke liye tumhari ya apne team members ki jaan khatare me nahi daal sakta"

Trisha - "Raghav you know one thing tum bohot selfish ho. Tumne yeh soch bhi kaise liya ki tum CBI se resign kar do ke toh me tumhare bina jee lungi."

Raghav-"Trisha kya keh rahi ho"

Trisha - "sahi keh rahi hoon tumhe dekhe bina mera din nahi guzarta. Tumhare jokes ki adat hai mujhe. Me nahi jaanti tumhare dil me mere liye kya hai par me aur nahi chupa sakti that I love you!!."

Raghav was silent. He came closure to her. Raghav was left with no reason to hide his love for her which he buried in his heart from past few years. Raghav move closure to her lips and kissed her, soon she too responded to kiss. The kiss deepened and soon they apart their lips. Trisha was still in her daze. Raghav hugged her tightly.

Raghav - "I love you Trisha"

Trisha - "I love you too"

Both started walking with there hands entangled like a couple. Trisha was so happy but still she was worried for Raghav's resignation.

Trisha - "so your resignation letter"

Raghav - "tumhe chod kar me apne maksat ko pura nahi kar paoga. Tum meri takat ho.so miss Trisha Mrs. Trisha sinha bankar mera sath dogi"

Trisha blushed and said - "hamesha ke liye"


Hope you like the part. Please review and like the story. All kinds of comments are welcomed. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Such a lovely update
Poor Trisha she was so hurt but still had faith in Raghav and her team.
Avinash was really crazy Trisha was brave enough to fight with him
Loved Raghav's deduction and the morning scene in his home so cute! Trisha was hurt by seeing his resignation letter she couldn't believe that he was ready to stay away from her
Raghav realised that he had hurt and revealed his love for her. Proposal and kiss was so cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Great story in totality dear.
Raghav and others going to that room where they had found that dead body and not finding it now... was that some sort of a plan by Avinash or was it just a matter of chance that the body was there when Raghav and Trisha entered that room and he removed it from there now...??
Loved to see the entire team searching for Trisha and the way Trisha tried to escape from that place... awesome she is so brave.
Then Trisha asking whether she could stay at his house... my heart skipped a beat, i thought of some intense romantic scene...oops naughty me...
But you very nicely depicted the morning breakfast scene and then the party at Dominos.
She obviously had to be upset when she saw the resignation letter, her reaction was well justified and then the last confession scene was awesome.
On the whole I really loved the entire story which was full of ratri moments...👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Az07

Such a lovely update

Poor Trisha she was so hurt but still had faith in Raghav and her team.
Avinash was really crazy Trisha was brave enough to fight with him
Loved Raghav's deduction and the morning scene in his home so cute! Trisha was hurt by seeing his resignation letter she couldn't believe that he was ready to stay away from her
Raghav realised that he had hurt and revealed his love for her. Proposal and kiss was so cute

Thanks uma, I was little bit scared that readers will like it or not. Trisha is very strong and practical but a girl from inside so she was hurt a lot when she knew about Raghav's resignation because slowly she started liking him. I tried to give readers lots of Ratri scenes because they are not in show. I am glad you like it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Great story in totality dear.

Raghav and others going to that room where they had found that dead body and not finding it now... was that some sort of a plan by Avinash or was it just a matter of chance that the body was there when Raghav and Trisha entered that room and he removed it from there now...??
Loved to see the entire team searching for Trisha and the way Trisha tried to escape from that place... awesome she is so brave.
Then Trisha asking whether she could stay at his house... my heart skipped a beat, i thought of some intense romantic scene...oops naughty me...
But you very nicely depicted the morning breakfast scene and then the party at Dominos.
She obviously had to be upset when she saw the resignation letter, her reaction was well justified and then the last confession scene was awesome.
On the whole I really loved the entire story which was full of ratri moments...👏👏

Thanks Manisha for giving review. It was a plan to divert Raghav so that they will first find there and their time will waste. She used third girls body for this.
First I too plan for a sort of romance in Raghav's house but then I thought after such a shock both will be stunned so I make it simply beautiful. I am happy that you like the ratri scenes

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