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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update Ananya. loved it soo much truly RaTrilious .loved all the RaTri scenes soo much .raghav first one to wish trisha that's soo cute .trisha taking raghav for a drive on the lake side raghav telling trisha that the place is not as beautiful as her telling her about he didn't find anyone like her In college for loving was soo awesome. Really loved each and every ratri scene .could imagine RaTri in the it. loved the case .now RaTri will go undercover to solve the case waiting for more RaTri moments .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

awesome update Ananya. loved it soo much truly RaTrilious .loved all the RaTri scenes soo much .raghav first one to wish trisha that's soo cute .trisha taking raghav for a drive on the lake side raghav telling trisha that the place is not as beautiful as her telling her about he didn't find anyone like her In college for loving was soo awesome. Really loved each and every ratri scene .could imagine RaTri in the it. loved the case .now RaTri will go undercover to solve the case waiting for more RaTri moments .

Thanks Tasha, I tried my best to give lots of Ratri scenes in it. In next update you will find Raghav and Trisha gone undercover to solve the case. Will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

Continued from the previous part.

Trisha - "To milte hai is Heaven's Hotel ke malik se Avinash Singhania"

Raghav-"fine chalo"


At Avinash residence.


Trisha - "Avinash ji hume apse kuch sawal karna hai"


Avinash - "ji pochiye"


Raghav-"apke hotel me do murder ho chuke hai apko kisi par shak hai"


Avinash-"nahi mere hotel ka koi bhi staf member aisa kyo karega. No mujhe kisi par shak nahi"


Trisha - "us din murder ki raat aap kaha the"


Avinash - "aap mujhpar shak kar rahi hai"


Trisha - "jab tak case solve nahi ho jata tab tak har koi shak ke ghere me hai"


Avinash - "ji me.. us din apne hotel ke bar me tha vaha mene kuch jyada dtink kar li thi isliye me vahi apne hotel ke kamare me ruk gaya tha"


Raghav - "aap ka room no. kya tha"


Avinash - "ji.. Ji vo 667"


Trisha -" thik Alisha ke bagal vala kamra"


Avinash - "ji tha par me sach keh raha hoon mene kisi ka khoon nahi kiya"


Trisha - "abhi to hum log chalte hai par zaroorat padi to phir se ayenge"


Trisha and Raghav was about to leave when they were stopped by Avinash.


Avinash - "ji aaj mere hotel ki 5th anniversary hai to ek choti si party di hai agar aap ayengi Trisha ji to mujhe bohot accha lagega"


Avinash forcefully handed the card to Trisha. Raghav understood that Avinash was mad over Trisha. Trisha was about to response but Raghav interrupted in between


Raghav - "ji off course hum log zaroor ayenge"


Trisha starred angrily at Raghav.



Trisha - "tumhe kya zaroorat thi ha bolne ki"


Raghav-"peechle do murders bhi aisi hi kisi party me hua the so possibility hai ki agla murder isi party me ho so we will be there for protection "


Trisha -" agar victim hi hum me se kpi ek ho to"


Raghav - "Matlab"


Trisha - "dekho jitne murders hua usme bas ek chiz common hai white gown aur married couple so agar me as a victim ban kar jau toh"


Raghav - "Fine thik hai me bhi tumhare sath chaloonga"



CBI Headquarters


Trisha narrated the plan to all the team members.


Raghav - "Bikram aur Rajbir tum dono hum log par nazar rakho ge"


Trisha - "swati tum mera phone continuesly Track karate rahana"



Heaven's hotel.


Trisha and Raghav arrived at the reception with their small luggage.


Trisha -" excuse me do room chahiye "


Receptionist -" sorry mam sirf ek room hi bacha hai baaki saare rooms already booked hai"


Trisha - "koi aur room khali nahi hai we only have to stay for one night"


Receptionist - "sorry mam no only one room is left"


Raghav - "fine please give us the keys"


Receptionist - "ji aap ka room no. 666 hau yeh rahi keys"


Trisha starred at Raghav. Raghav took the keys with a smile and move towards the room.



In the room.


They both entered the room with their luggage.


Trisha locked the room from inside as they entered the room. Raghav rolled his eyebrows and smile mischievously.


Raghav - "Trisha tumhara irada kuch thik nahi lag raha"


Trisha - "Raghav tum pagal ho kya tum aur me ek room me kaise stay kar sakte hai"


Raghav - "kyo raat me control nahi karpaogi apne aap ko mere pass ane se"


Trisha blushed but quickly composed herself. And move in anger towatds the Washroom but stopped and turn around towards raghav.


Trisha - "I need room to change Raghav"


Raghav-"so change karo mujhse kyo puch rahi ho"


Trisha - "Raghav tum kamare se bahar jao"


Raghav move towards her and come closure to her and said in mischievously - "aur agar me nahi jao to"


Trisha - "Raghav please leave the room"


Raghav came more closure to her. He was so close to her that she can fel the hot breath on her face.


Raghav came close to her lips. She quickly closed her eyes. He read her body language and smiled.


Raghav whispered - "jaldi ready hona my love"


Trisha was flushed with the response of Raghav.


Trisha was dressing in white gown inside the room. Raghav was waiting for her outside the room suddenly heard some noise from the end of the corridor. Raghav came near to them to listen about what they are talking. Raghav saw the waiter mixing something in the red wine. Waiter saw Raghav's shadow and screamed-"kon hai vaha "Raghav quickly ran towards his room and forgot that Trisha is changing. Raghav locked the room in hurry.Raghav saw Trisha wearing white gown but her back chain was open she was only trying to close it. Raghav was lost in her thoughts so beautiful and gorgeous she was looking.


Raghav came closure to her as he touched her bare back she shivered at the touch and turn around only to find Raghav infront of her. He was so close to her.


Trisha - "tum andar"


Raghav placed hands at her back and started closing her chain. She was looking at Raghav without a blink.


Raghav-"hogaya!! bohot sundar lag rahi ho "


Trisha -" Thanks"


Trisha was blushing profusely but she had to focus on case.


Trisha - "ab hume chalna chahiye party ke liye"


Trisha moved towards the door but Raghav hold her hands and pulled her towards him. And give her a gun.


Raghav - "take care!!!"


Trisha just can't control and hug him tightly. Raghav was stunned but soon he also take her into his arms. Trisha soon apart but the moment was precious for both of them. Indirectly both had expressed their love for each other.



They both were walking towards the hall. Raghav saw a room no. 667 locked from outside but the Receptionist told them that only one room is left.


Raghav - "Trisha mujhe lagta hai kj hume jaan bujhkar room no. 666 diya gaya hai"


Raghav take out his nailcutter and start opening the door. Trisha starred Raghav angrily but cool down to avoid any scene.


Raghav entered the room and started investigating. Trisha opened the cupboard and suddenly a dead body fall on her.


Raghav - "tum thik to ho Trisha"


Trisha - "ha yeh lash do se teen din purani hai"


Raghav - "yehi wajah thi ki vo log hume yeh kamara nahi de rahe the"


Trisha - "yani yeh ladki ka murder peechle party me hua hoga"


Raghav - "Trisha lets go hume abhi is lash ko vapas cupboard me rakh kar neeche jana hoga varna killer ko hum par shak ho jayega"


Trisha - "fine Raghav tum neeche party me jao me lash ko rakh kar ati hoon"


Raghav moved towards the party hall.

In the party hall

Trisha was dressed in long red and white gown with long descent diamond earrings in her ears. Trisha came near to Raghav and whispered :-

Trisha - "aaj phir tum kamare me choro ki tarah ghusse"

Raghav - "Trisha tum phir se shuru ho gayi please moral lessons mujhe mat do"

Trisha - "Raghav we are CBI officers aur tumhe yeh choro ki tarah harkate karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai"

Raghav become serious and pulled her towards his chest.

Raghav-"accha tum karo to sab thik hai. Trisha tumne bhi to aaj chori ki hai"

Trisha - "kya keh rahe ho mene kya chori kiya"

Raghav -(smirk) "mera dil"

Trisha - "Raghav!!"

She blushed profusely and smiled.

Trisha took a wine glass from the waiter and drank it. While drinking Trisha felt something different in tge taste but she ignored it. Raghav was continuously watching Trisha. Suddenly lights were switched off and music filled the hall with love.

Raghav came near to her and whispered-"mere sath dance karogi"

Trisha - "no raghav not interested"

Raghav - "darti ho ki mujhse better dance nahi kar sakti"

Trisha - "oh comeon Raghav tumse accha damce kar sakti hoon"

Raghav take her in between the hall and placed his hands on her waist and pulled her tightly. Trisha too responded and placed her arms behind his neck. Both are passionately looking in each others eyes. Rajbir and Bikram was undercover as waiters and was stunned to see both of them dancing together that too as a couple.

Trisha -"I proved that I dance... "

Trisha was about to continue but she felt her balance disturbed. Raghav quickly grab herand made her maintain her balance.

Raghav -" are you ok Trisha "

Trisha -" ha bus thoda chakkar sa lag raha hai"

Raghav-"tum rest karo chalo side me beth jao"

Trisha - "yes I will take care of myself"

Suddenly a gun was shot from the entrance. Raghav, Rajbir and Bikram ran towards the entrance. But there was no one.

Raghav-"yeh sirf ek distraction tha... Trisha!! Kuch toh sahi nahi hai uske sath"

Raghav reached wherehe made her sit but Trisha was not there.


So what happened to her all in next part.

Hope you like the part. Please review for more ideas.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the update dear of to read it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

thanks for the update dear of to read it

Your welcome tasha, No problem dear take your time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a lovely update
Truly Ratrlicious
The way Raghav and Trisha was made to attend party was well presented
Finally they ended up in one room and Raghav as usual teasing her and Trisha unknowingly blushing
Raghav knew drinks were spiked but still he allowed Trisha to drink it? But why? To reach upto the culprit? There dance sequence was great now Trisha is missing hope she is safe
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsm update... Love the hotel scean. Love their indirectly confession... Trisha unknowingly hugged him tightly... R:'tumne bhi to aaj chori ki hai...mera dil' this scean was awsm... Aww they dance together... Feeling tensed for Trisha... Hope she'll be safe... Update next part soon... Nd tnku sooo much fr this romantic update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update dear. Loved the way Trisha interrogate avinash and then Raghav agreeing to come to the party. The hotel room scene was brilliant, I loved how indirectly they both expressed their feelings for each other. Trisha and Raghav dancing together... So cute. I can imagine how shocked rajbir and bikram would have been seeing them dance together like this... So Trisha's drink was spiked and now she is missing. I'm sure Raghav would be going all out to save his life. I'm sure he'll be able to save her soon and then maybe they can directly confess their love...I wish.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Such a lovely update
Truly Ratrlicious
The way Raghav and Trisha was made to attend party was well presented
Finally they ended up in one room and Raghav as usual teasing her and Trisha unknowingly blushing
Raghav knew drinks were spiked but still he allowed Trisha to drink it? But why? To reach upto the culprit? There dance sequence was great now Trisha is missing hope she is safe

Thanks Uma, I am glad that you love all Ratri scenes. Raghav want that killers plan should succeed otherwise they will be not able to catch him.Raghav will never risk her life definitely some plan is there in his mind. What? You have to wait for next update. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina744

Awsm update... Love the hotel scean. Love their indirectly confession... Trisha unknowingly hugged him tightly... R:'tumne bhi to aaj chori ki hai...mera dil' this scean was awsm... Aww they dance together... Feeling tensed for Trisha... Hope she'll be safe... Update next part soon... Nd tnku sooo much fr this romantic update...

Thanks shaina for sharing your views. Trisha in danger definitely Raghav will help her out. How? You have to wait for next part. 😊

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