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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww such a awesome teaser .I could imagine Raghav teasing trisha do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nymphadora12

Thankyou so much! Would like to know your name too.

My name is Ananya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Aww such a awesome teaser .I could imagine Raghav teasing trisha do continue soon

Thanks, will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

CBI Headquarters


Trisha was working late night in her cabin.


Trisha - "oh God Finally kaam khatam hogaya. I should leave varna late ho jayega."


Trisha was winding up all the work and heard some noise from the office. Trisha looked at the clock it was 11:30pm. No one used to stay at this hour in the office.


Trisha moved out of her cabin


Trisha - "kon hai office me?" but she got no response. She moved towards conference room from where she heard the noise.


The lights were switched off. Trisha entered the room and felt a jerk on her shoulder. She was about to scream but a hand came on her mouth. The lights were switched on. She found herself in the arms of Raghav who was holding her tightly.


Raghav - "Sorry tumhe darana nahi chahta tha"


Trisha - "tum itni raat ko kya kar rahe ho yaha par"


Raghav - "tum hare liye kuch special hai"


Trisha - "special mere liye!! Kya hai?"


Raghav - "apni ankhe band karo"


Raghav closed her eyes and made her sit on the chair.


Raghav - "ab tum apni ankhe khol sakti ho"


Trisha opened her eyes and found a small chocolate cake in which "Happy Birthday To Trisha" was written. Trisha looked at Raghav with a cute smile on her face.


Raghav looked at his watch it was exactly 12:00am


Raghav - "Happy Birthday to you Trisha and many returns of the day"


Trisha - "tumhe mera birthday yaad tha."


Raghav -" ha off course tumhara birthday kaise bhul sakta hoon. Tumhare liye tumhara favorite chocalate cake laya hoon. So cut kare"


Trisha - "Ha par sath me katenge"


They both placed there hands on each other and cut the cake. Raghav made Trisha to eat a small piece of cake and Trisha too made him to do the same.


Trisha - "Thanks Raghav Mere liye yeh birthday hamesha special hoga"


Raghav - "thanks se sirf baat nahi banegi return gift to banata hai"


Trisha rolled her eyebrows and said-"mere sath drive pe chaloge"


Raghav was surprised to see Trisha asking him for a drive but he quickly agreed without taking a second as if he was waiting to listen this line from her mouth.



Trisha drove the car to a lake which was a bit km away from Delhi.


Trisha stopped the car and said Raghav to get down from the car.


Raghav - "bohot khoobsurat jagah hai par... "


Trisha - "par kya Raghav"


Raghav - "par tumse jyaada khoobsurat nahi"


Trisha blushed at the moment.


Trisha and Raghav shared some of their college experiences. In between Raghav sometimes tease her. Unknowingly Trisha hold Raghav's hand and Continue her talks.


Trisha - "tumhe apne college time me kabhi kisi se pyaar hua hai"


Raghav read her body language how desperate she was to listen his answer i.e.NO!!!


Raghav - "nahi tumhare jaisi mere college me nahi thi varna definitely pyaar ho jata"


Trisha was stunned at his answer and was looking at him with love in his eyes.


Trisha - "hum car me bheet kar baat kar sakte hai kya yaha bahar thand bohot hai"


Raghav - "Trisha aaj mera haath chodne ka irada nahi hai kya"


Raghav pointed towards his hand. Trisha blushed and removed her hamd and sat inside the car.


Raghav and Trisha continued their talk and don't know when they fall asleep with their hands together and Trisha's head on his Shoulder.



It was a bright morning. Raghav woke up first due to sun rays falling on his face. He found a light weight on his shoulder and realized that she was Trisha. Trisha felt some movement and she woke up too. Raghav and Trisha were so close to each other that their was a very little distance left between their lips. They both were having hard time to control their feelings and suddenly Trisha's phone ranged. Both were out of their thoughts and apart from each other.

Trisha - "yes mom"

Trisha's mom - "beta tum kaha ho kal raat se ghar nahi ayi tum thik to ho na"

Trisha - "ji mom me thik hoon vo...me kal apne dost ke yaha ruk gayi thi"

Trisha's mom - "par mene to tumhare saare dosto se poocha unhone to kaha tum unke ghar nahi ho"

Raghav can't control his laughing when he saw Trisha in such a situation where her mother was doing lots of questions to her and he laugh at the very moment but soon control himself when Trisha put hands over his mouth.

Trisha's mom - "yeh tere sath kon hai?"

Trisha - "maa meri abhi abhi ek nayi dost bani hai Office me uske yaha ruk gayi thi aur mere sath koi nahi hai me bas thodi der me ghar ati hoon"

Trisha ended the call quickly and take a deep breath.

Raghav-"accha laga yeh dekh kar ki jo itne logo ko interrogate karti hai koi use bhi koi interrogate kar sakta. "

Trisha -" Raghav!! "

Trisha drove the car and drop him to office so he could take his own car. Then they both went back to their respective residence.


CBI Headquarters

As Trisha entered the room. All wished her for her birthday.

Rajbir -" Boss aaj to party banti hai"

Swati-"yes Boss "

Trisha -" party toh banti hai par abhi nahi"

All were stunt.

Trisha -" Guys ek naya case aya hai"

Raghav - "Arun Mukherjee ki biwi Alisha Mukherjee ke murder ka"

Trisha - "Right Raghav! Arun Mukherjee ek bohot bada business man hai aur kai politicians se ache contacts bhi hai uske. Uski wife ki lash Heaven's Hotel ke room no. 666 me mili hai."

Rajbir - "Us hotel me to ek aur murder hua tha peechle hafte... Shayad ek couple ka tha usme uski biwi ka murder hua tha"

Raghav - "Trisha chal kar dekhte hai ki yeh Heaven's Hotel sach me logo ko kyo upar heaven me bhej raha hai"

Trisha - "Fine! Tab tak Rajbir aur Bikram tum dono Mr. Arun Mukherjee se jakar milo"


Heaven's Hotel

Trisha and Raghav move towards the room where the dead body was found. The body was well dressed in white gown

Trisha - "peeche se chakoo mara hai. Arun Mukherjee ne apne statement me kaha hai kilast time usne apni patni ko isi hotel ki party me dekha tha"

Raghav - "Trisha body jis position par hai ise dekh kar lagata hai ki kisine var peeche se kiya hai aur vo use pehechanti thi tabhi uske liye darwaza khola hoga"

Trisha - "ha sahi kaha par undono ki family me se aisa koi kyo karega"

Raghav-"body ko Dr. Arti ke pass behejane ka intazaam karo hawaldaar"

Trisha - "pejle jis ladki ki lash mili thi vo bhi yaha isi kamare me ruki thi aur usne bhi white gown pehana tha. Uska naam Tanvi gupta tha apne husband ke sath yaha par ek business meeting attend karne ayi thi"

Raghav - "isse ek baat to clear hai ki khooni koi family wala nahi hai balki isi hotel me hai"

Trisha - "hope Rajbir aur Bikram ko kuch pata chala ho"

CBI Headquarters

All were sitting in the conference room

Bikram - "Arun Mukherjee ko kisi aur pe shak nahi hai vo apne kisi colleague ki party attend karne gaye the."

Rajbir - "Swati us kamare ke samane ke cctv camera se kuch pata chala"

Swati - "nahi Rajbir us raat Alisha ke kamre me koi bhi nahi aya tha"

Raghav - "Agar khooni darwaze se aya hi na ho to"

Bikram - "matlab"

Raghav - "agar vo khidki se aya ho to kyoki hum jab vaha gaye the to khidki khuli hui thi"

Trisha - "Swati us party ka cctv photage hai na. Play karo shayad koi link mil jaye"

Swati played the video.
Raghav-"swati pause. Trisha waha us manager ko dhyan se dekho uske haath ka vo bracelet "

Trisha -" yeh toh vohi bracelet hai jo us lash ke pass se mila tha"

Raghav - "is manager se milna padega"

Trisha - "Hotel ke manager ko CBI lekar ao"

Interrogation room

Trisha - "tumne Mrs. Alisha Mukherjee ka khoon kyo kiya"

Nilesh(manager) - "yeh aap log kya keh rahe hai mene kisi ka khoon nahi kiya"

Raghav - "toh tumhara yeh bracelet us lash ke pass kya kar raha tha"

Nilesh-"mujhe nahi pata... Ha yaad aya us din jab mam hamare hotel me ruki thi to unke room ka lock kaam nahi kar raha tha isliye me unke kamare me check karne gaya tha par bohot raat ho chuki thi isliye lock sudhar nahi paya to hum logo ne mam ko side wale room me shift karne ke liye kaha tha ho sakta hai us samay shifting ke doraan mera bracelet vaha reh gaya ho"

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Trisha and Raghav came out of the room.

Trisha - "tumhe kya lagata hai yeh sach keh raha hai"

Raghav - "keh nahi sakte par yeh sure hai jo bhi killer hai vo isi hotel me chupa hai"

So will CBI be able to solve the murder mystery. Stay tuned to know.
Hope you like the part. Please review and give suggestions for better ideas. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a great start
Poor Trisha working till midnight all alone in office
Then enters Raghav with her bday surprise
Then follows long drive part which Raghav wanted for a long time but came from Trisha for sure he was shocked and surprised
There endless talks holding hands and then sleeping off in shoulders
Raghav enjoying her mothers questioning session
And team wishing her but they have an important case to handle
Case seems to be complicated
Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Az07

Such a great start
Poor Trisha working till midnight all alone in office
Then enters Raghav with her bday surprise
Then follows long drive part which Raghav wanted for a long time but came from Trisha for sure he was shocked and surprised
There endless talks holding hands and then sleeping off in shoulders
Raghav enjoying her mothers questioning session
And team wishing her but they have an important case to handle
Case seems to be complicated
Eagerly waiting for next part

Thanks, I tried my best to add lots of Ratri scene in the story. Glad you like the update. Will try to post the part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Very nice start 👏👏
I followed the story after reading the teaser recently. 😉
But it was not here in the first part.

The first wishes she got from Raghav. Wow !!!! Loved to see them alone and celebrating the private moment. Beautiful expressions of RaTri during the night they spend with each other in the car.
Loved the moment when Raghav laughed that there is some one who interrogates Trisha too😛
The case is not simple as it seems. Let's see what and how Raghav takes measures to solve the case later. Mystery to be solved after all.
So, the party has to wait for Trisha's b'day. Will wait for that. And Trisha will be in white gown as mentioned in the teaser, that means she herself will fall in danger as the other women who died were wearing white gowns.
Eagerly waiting for the next, thanks.
Loved to join U and your story.



Loves ❤️
May i know your name pls ??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start to the story. Loved the way Raghav made her bday special. She means a lot to him so has to be special celebration.
The long drive and the lake scene was well written by you,just loved it.
Trisha's mom is always after her, good Trisha has to say a lie for him and he laughs at that very moment... Hilarious
The case seems to be quite interesting, waiting to see how Raghav solves this case.
Waiting eagerly for lovely ratri scenes which you would have planned for the story.
Awesome dear.
May I know your name please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Very nice start 👏👏

I followed the story after reading the teaser recently. 😉
But it was not here in the first part.

The first wishes she got from Raghav. Wow !!!! Loved to see them alone and celebrating the private moment. Beautiful expressions of RaTri during the night they spend with each other in the car.
Loved the moment when Raghav laughed that there is some one who interrogates Trisha too😛
The case is not simple as it seems. Let's see what and how Raghav takes measures to solve the case later. Mystery to be solved after all.
So, the party has to wait for Trisha's b'day. Will wait for that. And Trisha will be in white gown as mentioned in the teaser, that means she herself will fall in danger as the other women who died were wearing white gowns.
Eagerly waiting for the next, thanks.
Loved to join U and your story.



Loves ❤️
May i know your name pls ??


Thanks babita for such along review. Yes Trisha and Raghav will go undercover for solving the case. And there they will share lots of cute moments together.
My name is Ananya.
Will try to update soon. Please read my previous story too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Great start to the story. Loved the way Raghav made her bday special. She means a lot to him so has to be special celebration.
The long drive and the lake scene was well written by you,just loved it.
Trisha's mom is always after her, good Trisha has to say a lie for him and he laughs at that very moment... Hilarious
The case seems to be quite interesting, waiting to see how Raghav solves this case.
Waiting eagerly for lovely ratri scenes which you would have planned for the story.
Awesome dear.
May I know your name please.

Thanks manisha,
Yes there are lots of Ratrilicious moments in next part.
My name is Ananya

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