RaTri SS : Black End!! Chapter 3 on Page 21 - Page 4

Amreen you wrote it well, The emotions of Raghav and Trisha are described perfectly. Good going. waiting for part two

Originally posted by: Az07

First of all a big sorry I couldn't reply to ur poll for stories as I had exams
After exam this story was such a treat
When u said u r writing a story on Ratri as a couple I never expected them as real couple & also as parents I was a pleasent surprise
I loved the Flashbacks of Trisha with her family! Raghav is really scared of Trisha 😆 that scene was so cute when he got up after her scary stare 😳 Ratri dated also? It was so cute of Raghav to ask for her scarf 😳 par woh diya kyun nahi? Hilarious part was Aap ki ma Hitler hai!
I could completely visualise raghav's situation after hearing about dead bodies he can't even say that to Trisha it was so emotional
Also I loved how Trisha was shown as mom & Cbi agent at same time her emotions were so well portrayed
Waiting for next part why Trisha in dangerous avatar? I am scared hope kids are fine! Update soon
Want more of Ratri fbs

No need of sorry yaar...
Thanks a lot... do u mind telling ur name by d wat?? 😆
Yup... thank god u have shown surprise on RaTri being parents... coz i had expected each one of u to be shocked but rest all are taking it easily 🤣
Obviously they dated... Does Trisha looks like a girl to u who will jump into a relationship immediately!!! 😉
Thank u very much... to know why will Trisha become fierce and what has happened to kids.. why are the blasts taking place n why was the mail sent to Raghav... wait for part 2 😳
Till then Ciao 😃

Originally posted by: Amreen...

No need of sorry yaar...
Thanks a lot... do u mind telling ur name by d wat?? 😆
Yup... thank god u have shown surprise on RaTri being parents... coz i had expected each one of u to be shocked but rest all are taking it easily 🤣
Obviously they dated... Does Trisha looks like a girl to u who will jump into a relationship immediately!!! 😉
Thank u very much... to know why will Trisha become fierce and what has happened to kids.. why are the blasts taking place n why was the mail sent to Raghav... wait for part 2 😳
Till then Ciao 😃

My name is Uma
I was really surprised to c them as parents!
I thought since Trisha & Raghav knew each other for a long time dating became a surprise I can understand there is change in relationship so dating was needed

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Awsm story Ammu
... Outstanding creation... Hats off to you
...waiting eagerly fr the next part.. 😉 I felt too angry with the kidnapper😡 they have kidnapped innocent kids... 😡 Waiting fr Trisha's angry wala look... 🥱 tnkuuu so much Ammu... Exam ka pressure hone k bawajoot tune ye outstanding story create kiya... Tnku my golumolu 😛

Thanks yaar!!!
Hmm... don't be so angry... Raghav will not spare them...
Par I was expecting u to be surprised seeing RaTri as hubby wifey as well as parents too 😆
Tera reaction toh bohot thanda tha... 😉
And mai golu molu nahi hu... 😡
Jaan le... 😉

Originally posted by: Rine

Amreen you wrote it well, The emotions of Raghav and Trisha are described perfectly. Good going. waiting for part two

Thanks a ton Rine...
will update soon!!

Originally posted by: Az07

My name is Uma
I was really surprised to c them as parents!
I thought since Trisha & Raghav knew each other for a long time dating became a surprise I can understand there is change in relationship so dating was needed

Hi Uma 😊
Yup... I know u were 🤣
Waise kya karti ho aap??

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Hi Uma 😊
Yup... I know u were 🤣
Waise kya karti ho aap??

I am doing my pg in medicine

Originally posted by: Az07

I am doing my pg in medicine

Oh... Wow!!
And I am trying for MBBS entrance... 😊

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Oh... Wow!!
And I am trying for MBBS entrance... 😊

All the best
One doubt what was about the number which Swati couldn't trace? And about Trisha fainting in her home?

Originally posted by: Az07

All the best
One doubt what was about the number which Swati couldn't trace? And about Trisha fainting in her home?

Thanks!!
That scene was something random... like Trisha scolding her on not being able to trace some number on some previous random case... u know it was shown just to show her irritation and frustration that she took out on her colleagues.. and Trisha fainting was a result of her anxiety thinking about her children... and then it was shown Raghav taking care of her... Wait I will amend the last scene a little... anything else u didn't understand.. actually this is my first attempt at crime fiction... I guess there are many loppholes...