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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amreen,
Truly speaking the story was full of emotions and thriller. You have shown trisha with such pure feelings for her children and how much she cares for her children. I love raghav consoling trisha. In this story you have shown raghav as a strong and bold character. The story was totally based on current terrorism. In negative zone I want to say that the story is very emotional even I feel like crying😭 when trisha react by listening her children name and by remembering beautiful past with her children. Please update soon waiting for trisha's dangerous avatar. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for this os ammu off to read it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Amreen,

First of all I want to inform you that my name is ananya not Deepak, actually it's my father name. I can't express my happiness when I read that you are going to write two grand stories and that also with a new touch of ratri as couple (padhane ke liye Mar Rahi hu) . I just love your stories and read all of them and I am happy that after such a long time you are going to write such lovely stories. As we don't get such romantic and cute ratri scenes in episodes but in your stories all the characters seems to come in real life.
I wish you best of luck for your upcoming exams and hope that you will score best in this exam.😳😊



Oh!!! my mistake 😆
But it was coz of ur username... but never mind!!
Well thanks a lot for the love dear... I have read ur comments and will soon reply 😊
Thanks a lot again for the good luck wishes...
Hope I do so!!
Loves ❤️


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chulbuli_Annu

mujhe to dono de do. dono chalegi


Zyada lalach achha nahi hai balike 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya925

Go ahead whatever you write is always awesome!!!?
Love you


Thank u...⭐️ me too ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Rine



Okay than 1st one 👍🏼



Yup... 100 votes se first part yeh chunaav Jeet gaya hain... toh ab vahi likha hai 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

all the best for bio ammu



Thank you ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

thanks for this os ammu off to read it



K... jaldi jaldi padh lo 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
First of all a big sorry I couldn't reply to ur poll for stories as I had exams
After exam this story was such a treat
When u said u r writing a story on Ratri as a couple I never expected them as real couple & also as parents I was a pleasent surprise
I loved the Flashbacks of Trisha with her family! Raghav is really scared of Trisha 😆 that scene was so cute when he got up after her scary stare 😳 Ratri dated also? It was so cute of Raghav to ask for her scarf 😳 par woh diya kyun nahi? Hilarious part was Aap ki ma Hitler hai!
I could completely visualise raghav's situation after hearing about dead bodies he can't even say that to Trisha it was so emotional
Also I loved how Trisha was shown as mom & Cbi agent at same time her emotions were so well portrayed
Waiting for next part why Trisha in dangerous avatar? I am scared hope kids are fine! Update soon
Want more of Ratri fbs
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Awsm story Ammu
... Outstanding creation... Hats off to you
...waiting eagerly fr the next part.. 😉 I felt too angry with the kidnapper😡 they have kidnapped innocent kids... 😡 Waiting fr Trisha's angry wala look... 🥱 tnkuuu so much Ammu... Exam ka pressure hone k bawajoot tune ye outstanding story create kiya... Tnku my golumolu 😛

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