RaTri SS : Black End!! Chapter 3 on Page 21 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Thanks!!
That scene was something random... like Trisha scolding her on not being able to trace some number on some previous random case... u know it was shown just to show her irritation and frustration that she took out on her colleagues.. and Trisha fainting was a result of her anxiety thinking about her children... and then it was shown Raghav taking care of her... Wait I will amend the last scene a little... anything else u didn't understand.. actually this is my first attempt at crime fiction... I guess there are many loppholes...

No loopholes only the no I couldn't understand I thought I missed something

Originally posted by: Az07

No loopholes only the no I couldn't understand I thought I missed something

Oh... check the scenes again... I have edited both and do not hesitate to tell me anything u find peculiar or difficult to understand!!!
Coz learning also makes man perfect 😊
Love u

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Zyada lalach achha nahi hai balike 🤣

bata hai ammu par tu itna aacha likhti hai ki hum lalchi ho jate hai

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

bata hai ammu par tu itna aacha likhti hai ki hum lalchi ho jate hai

Achha... 😉
Shukriya Shukriya 😃
Padha ki nahi... ???

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Achha... 😉
Shukriya Shukriya 😃
Padha ki nahi... ???

bahut aacha tha review shyaam tak De dongi

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

bahut aacha tha review shyaam tak De dongi

Oh.. Thanks...
kab padha??? vo actually aadhe ghante pehle maine thodi editing ki hain last scene aur ek aur scene mein... dekh lena agar nahi dekha ho toh...!! 😊

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Oh.. Thanks...
kab padha??? vo actually aadhe ghante pehle maine thodi editing ki hain last scene aur ek aur scene mein... dekh lena agar nahi dekha ho toh...!! 😊

ok

Well,I'm not surprised... Tera first story'kuch khas hain' se main samajh gayi thi ki agle story main Raghav Trisha shaadi kar hi lenge 😃 ...par tu to bohot aage nikal gayi... 👏 ...
Kuch bhi kahle tu... U r my golumolu 😛

wonderful update ammu loved it a lot jab tune kaha ki ratri will be a couple mujhe laga ki they will be dating but yaha to unke bache bhi hai thanks for this surprise loved it a lot. really a very emotional os .terrorism is really a current issue going on .Ratri kids kidnapped. RaTri are very sad .liked raghav trying to console trisha when he was still upset .really loved ratri as a couple here there bond is soo cute .loved the scene of raghav trisha with the kids .the scene where hari told raghav about the body and aarti told raghav to see the body bought tears in my eyes. hope the find their kids soon thanks for this os ammu loved it a lot

Nice beginning and loved the emotional track in the whole chapter. Thanks Amreen 👏👏