RaTri SS : Black End!! Chapter 3 on Page 21

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

I have no experience of writing any crime stories or thrillers... this is a first time

O really... ?///// 😳

Amreen... this is fabulous plus intelligence of your capability of handling this kind of theme... ! ⭐️👏 Just loved it.. !

Not liked what happened to the victims... n where RaTri kids are.. ! But loved the way you have penned down the emotions so well... So well put in that i read it without blinking once... ! Loved the emotional couple n the hard man taking the charge of every situation.. ! Be it how a strong lady... but when it come to her kids... every Mom wud react like Trisha did... ! Awesome narration..n apt wordings.. 👏

The track is very seriously going to take the tears out from every parent here... but it looked more natural how Raghav pacified Trisha n took care with full concern of what she is going thru...

Though he is going thru the same n even more... but his presence of mind is so sharp that he excelled here even dealing during the DNA test... !

Very powerful write Amreen... Three cheers to you n your efforts of giving us RaTri as a couple.. !⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Loved them in love n as lovers... they even dated... 😳 What cud be the time... haye...

The pink scarf is the loving thing... but its taking my heart away giving it to beat heavily...

Will wait for the next... the result has to be negative.. ! No thats not his son... 😳

Good going... keep it up ... !!! ⭐️⭐️

Edited by bawaswift - 9 years ago

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

ammu I have read this update 5 times till now really a wonderful emotional story really loved it a lot

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

you are a excellent writer ammu.really really loved this story

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Hello Sweetie 😊

Bang on with the first connect 👏 Presentation is awesome and the track is fully thriller and logical!⭐️

Raghav and Trisha as a couple have cutely open up with the kids around. The lovely family looks so complete with the two cute kids in their life! They are their everything and right now their life is at a stake.

Far from the thoughts to see Delhi in this condition. The criminal minds have no hearts, and this is where God never forgive them.

The loving couple solving every case so obviously, but their own kids are now kidnapped. This is the testing time for both of them. They have to go on with the case, with Trisha so broken heart and Raghav so helpless. I felt so sad over the happenings and the state their kids must be in.

The past recovers good thoughts that they dated before their marriage, they married and soundly living a lovely life altogether. But fate always tests the righteous. Here too RaTri are going through a testing time and i wish them good luck.

Like others, i too feel that the reports are not positive and Raghav will keep the promise to his beloved bossy wife and will find their kids.

Amreen, well woven the story and beautifully themed. 👏Truth will prevail and The case will be solved with the black end twisting into the bright light of happiness.

How are your studies going on dear? Keep yourself ready and space up yourself for the studies. Take care, luv ya ❤️🤗

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SanaaMalik

@SanaaMalik

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Wow yaar u are amazing Aahana and Sharad have to read this I can't wait for a part 2
[:)]

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Well I have tried made a banner for the story but it wasn't fully made before the posting so introducing it now...

Plz bataiyega kaisa hain 😳

Is the aggregation of pictures looking too chaotic???

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Shaina744
Well,I'm not surprised... Tera first story'kuch khas hain' se main samajh gayi thi ki agle story main Raghav Trisha shaadi kar hi lenge 😃 ...par tu to bohot aage nikal gayi... 👏 ...
Kuch bhi kahle tu... U r my golumolu 😛

😆
Waise Kuch Khaas Hai 1st nahi 2nd story thi yaha par meri...
Aur mai teri expectations se zyada smart hu na 😉
I swear shaina.. oops MOTI... I will happily kill u next time u call me golumolu... 😡

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Az07

@Az07

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Amreen...
Well I have tried made a banner for the story but it wasn't fully made before the posting so introducing it now...

Plz bataiyega kaisa hain 😳

Is the aggregation of pictures looking too chaotic???

Lovely banner Amreen

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
wonderful update ammu loved it a lot jab tune kaha ki ratri will be a couple mujhe laga ki they will be dating but yaha to unke bache bhi hai thanks for this surprise loved it a lot. really a very emotional os .terrorism is really a current issue going on .Ratri kids kidnapped. RaTri are very sad .liked raghav trying to console trisha when he was still upset .really loved ratri as a couple here there bond is soo cute .loved the scene of raghav trisha with the kids .the scene where hari told raghav about the body and aarti told raghav to see the body bought tears in my eyes. hope the find their kids soon thanks for this os ammu loved it a lot

Thank you Tasha...
Well I had first thought ki I will write it as RaTri are dating but then all this happens with a relative kid of Trisha but then that wasn't giving the feel I wanted in the fiction... so I wrote it!!! 😊
Am sure u all must have liked the surprise!!!
Thanks dear again that u liked the couple...
Is that so... well thats the best appreciation u can gimme... when u all say that u can connect emotionally wid my work.. I feel the happiest 😊
To know more wait for tomorrow...
Thanks n luv ya ❤️