Journey of Abhira (FF) Author's Note (13th Jun) - Page 2

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Chapter 2

On her way back home Akshara remembered that nobody would be home and she was alone. She missed how her MIL used to pamper her once she was back from the University.

The moment she entered Birla House, her phone rang. A smile appeared on her face as she knew who it would be. She answered the phone.

Akshara: yes I have reached and I am just opening the door. BTW how do you get to know isi waqt call krna hai.

Caller: that's because i am used to calling you at this time whenever i am not at home. I hope i didn't disturb you.

Akshara: I love you for this maa. Aur kya disturb?

MIL: leave there is no need to do this buttering.

Akshara: I am missing you

MIL: we will come tomorrow. BTW tell me one thing

Akshara: what?

MIL:Are you fine? I mean is everything fine between you and Abhimanyu.

Akshara: yes maa, but why are you asking.

MIL:no you were sounding a bit low.

Akshara: no i came back from the university just now,so i am a bit tired.(in her mind aapko sab kaise samjh aajata hai)

MIL:If you had gone to university then Abhimanyu would be in office.

Akshara: yes obviously.

MIL:OK, you take care.

Meanwhile Neil comes and sits with his mother.

Manjari: Neil did we do the right thing?

Neil:yes maa but why are you thinking like that?

Manjari: I talked to Akshara, she was sounding tensed and you know what Abhimanyu has gone to office and Akshara had just come back from the university.

Neil: maa you know na how bhai is and how much important his work is for him. When he went to office what could bhabhi have done alone that's why she would have gone to the university.

Manjari:I hope Abhimanyu doesn't get angry with us.

Neil: maa this was Anisha's plan and you know bhaiya doesn't say anything to her. Relax. Everything will be fine.

Akshara changes and sits in her room. She hasn't eaten anything since morning except for that cup of coffee. She was sad thinking about something but then told herself the day hasn’t ended yet and anything can happen.

She decides to call Abhimanyu.

Abhimanyu: hello anything important. I am a bit busy.

Akshara: no I was...

Before she could complete he disconnected the call and she regretted calling him.

It was 9: 30 pm and Akshara was sitting on the sofa waiting for him but there was no sign of him. Had maa been here she would have called him and asked about his whereabouts but she can't do it given he had already hung up on her. After 2 minutes he entered and she stood up.

Akshara: you freshen up i will serve the dinner.

Abhimanyu: i have done my dinner as we had a meeting and with that he went straight to his room.

Akshara had tears in her eyes but she controlled and went straight to the kitchen.

Flashback

When Akshara was back home she decided to make dinner for the two of them. A special dinner with all his favourite dishes. She with all her enthusiasm prepared the dinner and decided to wait for him.

Flashback End.

She cleaned the kitchen and put all the dishes in the fridge and did not eat anything because she didn't like to have her dinner alone. She was standing in the kitchen and clock struck 11. She decided to go back to the room and rest as it was her final viva tomorrow and now she had no expectations that he would door say anything.

When she entered the room he had changed and was working on his laptop. Just then Akshara's phone rang and it was Anisha. A video call it was. Akshara smiled and sat on the bed and received the call.

Anisha: are you guys free and where is bhai?

Akshara: he is here only. And what do you mean by free??

Anisha: nothing. First show me where is bhai.

Akshara turned the back camera and Abhimanyu waved at Anisha.

Anisha: Arre no back camera, I want to see you guys together.

Akshara looked at Abhimanyu and moved to his side and flipped the camera.

Anisha: now its perfect.

Now rest of the family comes into the camera and Akshara sees Aarohi.

Akshara: Anisha whats Aarohi doing with you people?

Anisha laughs hard and Akshara looks at Abhimanyu.

Anisha: you guys didn't understand anything yet.

Abhimanyu: Anisha what do you mean?

Anisha: we never went to kuldevi. We came to Bhabhi's house.

Akshara: but why

Nimisha: di now don't act innocent please.

Abhimanyu is irritated and asks Neil ye sab kya hai.

Neil:I haven't done anything bhai, all this was Anisha's plan.

Abhimanyu: what plan? Anisha kya baat hai

Anisha: leave all this. Neil bhai, nimi bhabhi, maa, Aarohi di lets do that for which we have called them.

Everybody says yes and they together shout "HAPPY 1ST MARRIAGE ANNIVERSARY"

With that they disconnected the call and there was uncomfortable silence in the room. Akshara took her night clothes and went to change. Akshara understood everything why her family had decided to leave suddenly early in the morning. They wanted to give them some alone time and Akshara laughed through her tears as she realised he didn't remember it at all and she was unnecessarily waiting throughout the day.

In the room Abhimanyu thought he could have at least wished her. He remembered how Akshara's face had dropped after the call.

Love Shay,

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Chapter 3

This one is soooo good, i m not happy that abhi is mean to akshu, but meaner the abhi, the harder he have to try for his redemption..Love the angst soo much, want abhi to regret so bad and reflect on his behavior and also akshu to not just melt on his one word

Originally posted by: chremma

This one is do good, i m not happy that abhi is mean to akshu, but the meaner abhi, the harder he have to try for his redemption..Love the angst soo much, want abhi to regret so bad and reflect on his behavior and also akshu to not just melt on his one word

Exactly what I wanted to say. Akshara should make Abhi work after all the aloofness he is subjecting her to

Waiting to understand was it a forced marriage on abhimanyu.... Am sure something big will be coming in future parts waiting for same... A very different concept and already in love with it♥️

Oh this boy forgot their anniversary

She was waiting for whole day and didn't eat anything

Nice update

Feeling bad for akshara

Originally posted by: chremma

This one is do good, i m not happy that abhi is mean to akshu, but the meaner abhi, the harder he have to try for his redemption..Love the angst soo much, want abhi to regret so bad and reflect on his behavior and also akshu to not just melt on his one word

Thankyou so much for such kind words.❤️

Your analysis is totally right about the redemption and yeah Akshu too wont melt easily.

I feel sad for akshu.......

She will make him pay for it right????

Awesome

Waiting for more updates

Ver nice story..