pritus ff ~kismat connection - 2~ pt 30(last pt) pg 45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: nakshkidiwani
dj nd rb went from ss from breaking heart... suddenly dey sees to dj frd..
dj-are ke kar raha..
his frd-haa bas chai pin waste aaya tha woh dekh chai ki dukan.. dj rb runned nd took tea took a deep breath🤣..
in house ak was crying..
gy-kya hua bahu ro kyo rahi.
ak-maa woh maa..
gy-kya hua.
ak-maa main naha rahi thi aur thanki main pani khatam ho gya main naha bhi nhi pai🤣

then rb dj enter in ss

Dj - nandini ki ma dekh mai thare vaste chai leke aaya hu

Bm - ye kya ap samdhi ji ke yahan se chai utha k le aaye🤣

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
Very very nice lovely adorable part
All scenes are superb.. ak made tatto for nk
Shivu ki excitement for ngo opening is so cute
all scenes in ngo is superb.. shivu's gift for nk so touchy
waiting to see how ak will solve rasmi problems
Precap interesting + scary hope all is well
Do update next part soon

awww sach a sweet sweet comments it is.. i was waiting soo much 😉just admiring it

aww u liked shivu.. haa nk shivu scenes aachi honi chahiye mainly main chahti hu family bond show karna now i will end this ff..

thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally..

i will do update last part soon..

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#313

part-30

ak-rashmi dekho tum pehle chup toh ho jao.. plz tum esse ro mat plz.. main promise toh nhi par haa kosish jarur karugi hmm.. rashmi hug to ak..

ras-bhabhi mana ki bauji ne mere liye bhut aacha ladka koja hoga par ek bar bhi unhone mujhse kuch pucha tak nhi ki main yeh karna chahti hu ya nhi. maine dekha nk bhaiya ke time kitna gussa hue the woh main toh ladki hu kya karege woh..

ak-sshhh rashmi main bas yeh chahti hu ek bar us insan se milwa do mujhe.. phir nk se bat karugi main oki.. bas haa.. i know tum galt nhi jiss3 pyar nhi karte usse shadi karna bhut muskil hain. main sath dungi hmm 0ar sayad nk se bolu toh gussa aur woh kahi bauji ko bata na de kya rashm8 usi din bol deti na..

ras-mujhse pucha hi nhi gya kya bolti.. rishta tay kar diya plz help me..

ak-sshh go on bed nd sleep.. mujhe kal milwao usse hmm tabhi kuch kar sakti hu main bas... rashmi went for sleep .. ak was truly confused... she went in room.. she sees that nk was sleeping to shivu he was in sleep..

ak-so gya..

nk-g uske papa ne sulaya.. ak closed to door she was thinking about rashmi.. suddenly nk hug to ak nd kissed to her on cheeks..

ak-kya hain from anger..

nk-uddi baba itnna gussa.. main hu made puppy face. kya hua.. hug to her..

ak-i m sry nk.. i m really sry hug to him.. thodi si upset thi bas.

nk-sry haa tell problem..

ak-woh nk think a while woh bas naya work uski tension bas..

nk-dont worry sab thik hoga mujhe tum par khud se bhi jayada yakin hain ak.. start kissing on her cheeks.. ak was still thinking about rashmi..

ak-nk woh..

nk-nk noticed that ak was lill uncomfortable... oo god i m getting nini... gudnyt so jao hmm jayada mat socho.. ak felt bad.

ak-nk.. i m really sry nk... woh mera man..

n-its ok.. took to her in his hand nd sat to her on bed... woh kya lori gati hain.. sun sun nanhi lori ki dhun hoja mithe sapno main gum caressing her hair..

ak-i m soo lucky nk.. soon she get sleep..

nk-kissed on her cheeks.. kitni tension leti ho.. now in morning nk was getting ready than ak came nd hug to him..

ak-i love u...

nk-hmm subah subah bhut pyar aa raha y..

ak-muahhh.. kissed to him on his back... mujhe samjhane ke liye kal rat.. nk u r vry vry sweet.. i really love u..

nk-bas jayada bologi na toh najar lag jayegi hmm.. aacha tumhe chod du kya ngo main..

ak-apart to him. aaj toh rashmi se milna h aur us... woh nk mujhe oki chod do.

nk-ak r u fine..

ak-haa..

nk-i want water.. give me.. ak was in her thoughts she gave purse to nk.. water i said..

ak-ooh sry.. woh main aati hu.. she went in hull..

nk-kuch gadbad hai kya yeh ak kuch alg sound kar rahi..

ak-rashmi main nk ke sath ngo ja rahi tum us ladke ko bolo kisi hotel main aaye hmm main pahuchugi. aur agar woh ladka mujhe aacha laga tumhare layak toh nk se bat karugi..

ras-tqq bhabhi..

ak-tum khush raho bas.. now nk drooped to ak..

nk-love u bye..

ak-hmm smile went outside.

nk-ak i said bye..

ak-ooh bye love u too.. he went in office.. thinking..

nk-sayad kam ki kuch jayada hi problem hain ek kam karta hu usse lunch pe bahar le jata hu khush ho jayegi..

here ak finished her work nd went in hotel... she was in one table.. than rashmi came..

ras-bhabhi... yeh hain nikhil..

ak-ak sees to him.. hloo.. baitho..

ni-hloo bhabhi.. hii i m nikhil.. i m panjabi...

ak-panjabi.. u know na rashmi hum marwadi hai.

ni-aur aap south Indian.. maine rashmi ko jab clg main dekha diwana sa ho gya pata hi nhi chala kab hum ek ho gye. jab inke bauji ne iska rishta tay kiya kya option bacha apke pass aane ke alwa..

ak-tum rashmi ke liye kya kar sakte ho.

ni-yeh toh nhi bata sakta hu par haa iski khushi aapke pariwar main hai aur main us pariwar ke sath isse hamesha khush rakhuga waha ka beta bankar.. main job karta hu mere mom dad rashmi ko beti man ke pyar karege. apne bhi pyar kiya hai na aap samjhati hai na..

ak fulfill with emotions..

here nk finish his work nd went in ngo..

nk-ak. wer r u search to ak..

one gir-woh toh gai kahi pata nhi kaha kam finish karke.

nk-ooh thanku i guess kuch kam par bataya nhi.. suddenly he got a call.. ohh oki meeting oki i m coming.. maharaja hotel.. he went der.. seat number 2..are mr varma nice to meet.. suddenly meeting.

va-haa kal main bahar ja raha so sry apko problem hui kya..

nk-no no its fine.. ak nk were just besides of each..

ak-tumse bat karke aacha feel ho raha. i think u r a gud human being.. main nk se bat karne ka try karugi promise nhi kar sakti thoda hangama ho tum dono ko sehna hoga hmm..

ras-main kuch bhi karugi sach bhabhi.. ak stood..

nk too stood..

nk-bye.. he was happy..

ak-i m soo hapy..

nk-are yeh aawaj.. turned nd sees in lill distance ak was der.. he was shocked.. ak tum. are tum yaha kya kar rahi ho.. sees to nikhil nd rashmi.. rashmi tum yaha yeh kon hain.. rashmi feared..

ak-woh nkk woh..

ras-dada woh..

ni-main rashmi ka boyfriend hu aur bhut pyar karta hu usske sath.. ak bhabhi hamara sath de rahi.. nk have lotss of qu on mind.. he was shocked.. ak tumne itni badi batujhse chupai..

ak-sry mere liye tumhe batane se jayada yeh important tha ki rashmi ke liye yeh ladka sachi hai ya nhi..

nk- atlest batana toh hak tha na.. nk went away..

ak-nk plz..

ni-sir i know aap gussa kar rahe i m panjabi par pyar toh pyar hai na apne bhi kiya hai.. duniya se ladke..

ak-nk plz gussa mat ho..

nk-ak i m not in anger.. main bauji se bat karuga..

ak-yahi socha tha nk meri bat sun lo.. maine tumhe hurt karne ke liye yeh sab nhi kiya.. tum apni behen ke liye sachi karo thabhi i took a step nikhil ko pehenna mere liye jaruri tha na.. kal rat ko hi mujhe pata chala maine socha bata du par kya. bhut late ho gai..

nk-tumhe kaise lag sakta hain i will not trust u ak i love u.. tumne keh diya mujhe nikhil par trust ho gya.. tum mujhe excuse mat do. i love u. hum dono ka family par barabar ka hak hai. rashmi agar kisi ko pasand karti h than it is gud na.. bauji se bat toh karni padegi na..

ak-nhi nk esse directly nhi main batati hu kaise thoda soch samaj ke hurt kiye bina..

nk-kaise... now in nyt everyone were in dining table... than nk came nd shivu too..

nk-no excuse oki..

sh-aap essa kyo kar rahe sadly sat on chair..

dj-ke ho gayo.. shivu aa yaha bata took to him on his lap..

sh-papa mujhe new school main dal rahe aur jo unki man ki subject hai woh read karne ko bol rahe..

dj-yeh ke hai munna.

nk-thik toh keh raha jis school main yeh jayega waha toh sab hindu hai aur jaha yeh chahta h jau waha panjabi bhi h Muslim bhi. i cant take it bas jaha main boluga wahi jayega iska kya matter hai ki yeh kuch bole padai hi toh hai..

dj-na galt bat na... isse hak hai iski jindagi hai aachi bat hai naye log se milega toh nai bat aawegi aur isse jisme interest hai woh karega toh bhut khush rehwega.

sh-yeh mujhse puchte hi kaha hain kuch.

dj-har baap ko apne balka ki icha janne ka hak hain aur puchna bhi chahiye.

nk-g i m sry bauji par nhi is par hamara hak inki life par

. main nhi manuga..

dj-par kyo..

nk-because apne bhi apni marzi se rashmi ki shadi karai hain na kya apne pucha usse ki woh ready hai ya nhi.

dj-haa pucha toh thabhi toh shadi tay ki kyo choti bahu.. bm nd gy3 think a while.

bm-g woh ladka haa bol diya toh apne rishta tay kar diya.. ek bqr pucha tak nhi usse..

dj-toh ke ho gyo tu khush hain na rashmi.. she was numb nd starts crying.. ke ho gya..

ra-woh kuch nhi..

nk-rashmi say main tumhara bhai hu esse rote hue nhi dekh sakta hu.

ra-bauji main kisi aur ko pasand karti hu aur woh panjabi hain..

dj-ke... from anger.. yo sab ke hai itna sab ho gya aur kisi ne bataya bhi nhi all were shocked nd starts crying..

ras-i m sry bauji..

ak-bauji kya ek bar apko kuch kahu.

dj-ke..

ak-chota muh badi bat hogi rashmi ne kisi se na kehke mujhe kaha ki woh usse pasand karti hai. maine usse samjhaya par aap sochiye ki agar woh us padke ke sath rahegi jisse woh pasand nhi karti toh uski life kitni gandi hogi. abhi shivu ko apne yahi kaha na naye log se milo main bhi toh south Indian hu phir aap mujhe itna pyar kyo karte hain.. main us ladke se mili hu woh rashmi ko bhut pyar karta hai aur bhut aacha bhi hai.. ek bar apni beti ki khushi ko dekhiye. ek bar bauji apne nk ka rishta bhi esse hi tay kiya woh dar hi apko unse dur le gaya aur mujhse bhi. kyo aap samaj nhi sakte beti ki pasand aap ek bar uski aankho ko dekhiye baki sab kuch mayne nhi rakhta bauji.

nk-haa bauji ak ne mujhe roka warna main toh turant aa raha tha shivu wali bat ak ne apko kehne ke liye kaha tha. aap man lijiye sayad hamara pariwar kush rahega.. aap hamare bauji dil se ho mana karoge toh rashmi usse shadi kar legi par kya khush rahegi..

ak-khabhi nhi bauji.. same caste ke hone se aacha same thinking ho yeh mayne nhi rakhta kya..

dj had tears nd he sees to rashmi..

dj-ek bar kal un log loga na bula main miluga.. all were happy..

ak-thanku bauji..

dj-beta main thara dusman na hu bas ek insan hi hu sayad rr ki shadi jabardasti kara ke woh sabak pehle mil gya nk se dur hua 0ar unse milke hi main aage fesla karuga nd went bm too.. rashmi hug to ak..

ak-u happy na..

ras-thanku so muchh bahbahi...

nk-qur mera tqq..

ras-thanku bhaiya..

sh-uiii mujhe kisi ne txx nhi bola maine kitna fight kiya papa ke sath..

rashmi took to shivu in her hand..

ras-jko jko.. thankuu vry muchhh...

sh-love u bua.. kissed to him on cheeks... next day all were doing work than nikhil nd his family came.. nk ak wlcmed..

nk-aao.. hloo..

ni-hii bhabhi hloo bhaiya... touched dj feet..

dj got lill happy..

ni-amm.

his mom-dekho g hum panjabi hai par yeh na kahege ki rashmi apna culture ko chode mera ek beta hi hai bas mujhe beti mil jayegi.. nikhil ki pasand hamari pasand.

his father - haa tussi chinta na karo yeh dharam toh hamne banaye insan toh sab ek hi hai na.. ek insan ke pass sabse jayada honi chahiye uski ijat woh hamare pass hai apke jaise..

dj passed smile nd sees to bm..

dj-g.. than rashmi came nd meet from everyone... nk watching to ak..

after sometimes.. everyone were happy..

dj-mujhe aacha laga sabse milke..

nikil father-toh g len den ki bat kar le everyone were shocked..

dj-ke..

fat-haa bhai rashmi toh hamrai hai aur hamara beta apka yahi len den hua na.. nd laugh..

dj-laugh haa..

his mother - haaa aaj sagun kar lete hai sawa rupie aur

nariyal deke..

dey starts giving sagun nd put tikka

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

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dey finished rasam nd called to pandit..

pa-g dono ki kundli toh thik se match ho gai par muhurat abhi ek hafte ke andar ka hi hai nhi toh sal bhar tak dono ki kundali ke hisab se subh muhurat nhi..

ni fa-koi bat nhi kar lenge aasi panjabi sa..

ni mom-par itni jaldi..

dj-hum kar lewege...

bm-par hmm par sal bhar tak thik hai..

gy3-itni jaldi..

nk-hum kar lenge maa..

ak-haa amma main bhi hu na kar lenge hmm... everyone gave sweets to each.. khush reh hug to rashmi.. after that nikhil family leaves.. in nyt ak was in room.. ak was getting confused..

ak-oo god kitna kam ho gya khud ki dress nk ki shivu ki sabki.. nk was watching to ak nd laugh. main watched to nk.. datt throwed pillow on him.. gande help toh karni nhi kal engagement hai shopping na..

nk-hmm mana kab ki chale sarkar.. itni tension main hu na sath.. hug to ak.. hum khud toh shadi ko enjoy na kar paye par i promise yaha ek ek pal enjoy karege hmm..

ak-really nk.. yani hamari bhi sagai hogi shadi hogi laugh..

nk-watt not a bad idea than suhagrat bhi haina..

ak-chii sach a..

nk-kya thabhi toh shadi karte hai na.. kissed to her on cheeks waise meri behen khush hai toh tumhari wajah se.

ak-meri behen haa hum dono ki ok.. dono ki mehnat hai na..

nk-main kaha tha..

ak-shooping..

nk-dattt.. sg..

ak-eee chalo.. nk got a call..

nk-uff decorating ke liye hai.. he attended it.. ak was pinching to nk.. oye stop..

ak-hihi hihi romance haa romance..

nk- pinch to nk..plzzz.. ak.. oki fine ek second... nk held to ak nd picked a tight kiss on her lips ak was shocked.. nk laugh... its over baby went outside..

ak-eee nk... laugh.. after sometimes ak went in hull.. main ready hu maa.. chale rashmi qre tumhari bat khatam kho gai..

everyone laugh..

ras-kya bhabhi..

dj-dekho sab sun lo ab na sona bas kam karna hai sabne apna shopping nipta lo aur sab phir khanpin waste dekh lena sagai din main howegi hmm.. munna bhi aawega ke..

ak-woh yeh sayad nhi jayege kuch kam kar rahe phone main.. dey leaves from der... in shop..

ras-hmm acha hai..

sh-amma dekho meri dress kaisi lag rahi..

ak-bhut aachi par apko kisne dilai.. nk said maine.. ak got happy sees to nk.. tum mujhe laga nhi aaoge..

nk-kaise nhi aata ek ek chiz enjoy karni hai.. main apni dress dekh raha..

ras-waww bhai aap kitne aache hubby ho bhabhi essh hai apki.. nk was selecting his dress he send pics to ak..

ak-nk apke upar sari dress aachi lag rahi typing..

nk-mujhe aapse sundar dikhana hai.. ak laugh..

a-typing impossible..

nk-laugh aacha itna attitude..

ak-tumhari najar se khud ko dekhti hu bhut sundar mehsus karti hu na.. nk passed smile..

bm-are bahu haso mat dekho tumhare liye saree... ak was seeing saree.. she was confused than she dropped one saree..

nk ko call karti hu puchugi.. suddenly someone held her shoulder nd skipped that saree nd put another duppata..

yeh wala said nk.. ak sees to nk..

nk-mera dress bhi isi colour ka hai..

ak-waww yeh toh bhut sundar hai tumhe pasand hai..

nk-haa bhut par ek bar try kar ke dekh lo.. room waha hai..

ak-aati hu haa.. nk passed smile ak went inside nd closed d door she unwear her blouse nd felt some hand on her back.. nk..

nk-hug to ak.. kaise pehchana..

ak-nk wore duppata.. gande thabbhi yaha aaye na kaise..

nk-bas aa gya.. upar se.. meri biwi uff hone wali dulhan ko main try karwauga..

ak-g nhi main khud pehen lungi.. nk kissed on her shoulder.. shadi se pehle suhagrat nhi hoti dulhe g..

nk-yeh dulha besabra hai bardast nhi hoga..

ak-karna toh padega hi kitna karcha kar rahe thoda sa sabar bhi kar lo na.. laugh.. nk wore blouse to ak.. wore duppata on her head nd grabbed tighter to ak.. coming close of ak..

nk-itni simple ho toh itni sundar lag rahi pata nhi us din kya hoga jis din tum isse pehnogi..

ak-bat najro ki hai aur kuch nhi.. nk came close of her ear nd said..

nk-u looking soo beautiful.. i waana touch u kissed on her nack nd she closed her eyes.. suddenly someone knocked d door... uff dusman dusman..

ras-bhabhi ho gya kya mujhe bhi try karna hai..

ak-laugh haa tum thoda sa wait karo main aati hu.. she leave.. nk g koi dekh lega toh kya bolega..

nk-yahi ki dono main khub pyar hai laugh.. nk was laughing nd opened d door.. suddenly he sees to bm..

bm-tu kya kar raha yha..

nk-aa aap woh woh woh ak ne bulaya call karke woh uska blouse nhi woh uska chudi fas gyi..

bm-kaha..

nk-gale main nhi gale main kaise lehnge main woh woh are call aaya.. bm laugh.. than ak came nd sees to bm..

ak-woh maa..

bm-chudi gale main caressing her hair nd went.. ak blushed.. dey finished shopping next day nk was busy

nk-hmm bas wahi rakh do aacha lag raha ghar... suddenly nikhil nd his relatives came. all wlcmed to them..

nk-hloo hii nikhil dey hug to each..

yeh ak nhi aai everyone were enjoying to party nd than ak was taking to rashmi... nk sees to ak she was in dressup like rashmi engagement first time.

nk-waww... kitni pyari lag rahi hai ak.. ak sat to rashmi nd nk gave flying kiss to her.. ak take it..

nk went near of ak..

nk-aaj mujhe kisi aur ko dekhne nhi dogi kya..

ak-pati ki najar biwi pe hi honi chahiye hai na.. than shivu came..

sh-waww meri amma kitni pyari lag rahi.. hai na yash..

yas-meri mummy bhi..

mo-nk tu toh bas meri behen ko dekh dekh ke najar laga dega aur ak tum kali ho jaogi..

nanu-mere bhai ki najar padke woh aur mehek jayegi..

mo-uff bhai prem bhai prem..

after that rashmi nd nhikil wore d ring nd ak watched to nk..

ak-main dulhan hu kisi ne bola meri shadi huh... she went in upstairs... shivu aap na isse bilkul mat khana hmm. she got a call nd came in hull.. hmm bas sab thik hai na ngo main koi problem ho mujhe batana hmm.. cut d call.. than shivu came.. kya hai baby..

sh-amma yeh thread band kar lo ungali pe.

ak-kya..

sh-plz plz shivu tied to it..

ak-shivu she sees it was a long thread.. uff.. suddenly roses were showering on her.. she got happy so muchh.. suddenly she sees to nk on upstairs in isara wat is this..

nk-sshh wait... he skipped a ring on thread nd it was going in aks finger.. ak was soo happy its came on aks finger.. she got a call.. hloo..

nk-meri dulhan hamari sagai ho gai na.. kaisa laga..

ak-bhut aacha bhut bhut aacha nk i love u suddenly she sees that nk was not here.. she was searching to nk here der... hloo nk nk.. he cut d call.. suddenly someone held to ak nd pinned with wall.. yes he was nk.. kaha gayab ho gye the..

nk-yahi toh hu put aks hand on his chest tum mere dil main ho aur main tumhare dil main..

ak-mere pass bhi ek surprise hain she took a ring nd wore to nk.. engagement ki bhut bhut badai..

nk-smile apko bhi miss ak.. coming near for a kiss..

ak-abhi shadi hone tak no touch oki dulhan toh 7 phere ke bad hi milti hain.

nk-meri better half hai na aap toh i can..

ak-u cant na.. oki.. ab no touchy jab tak shadi na ho jaye hamari dreams.. nk made face but ak kissed to him on cheeks.. itna de sakti hu..

nk-tqq g suddenly everyone were searching.. ohoo sab thoda sa romance bhi nhi karne dete.. uff.

ak-behen ki khud ki shadi hai toh.. nk laugh..

nk-hamari shadi..

ak-i m waiting for a biggg surprise... now party got finished nk went in his room nd sees all were here...

nk-oye yeh sab kya hai.. ak was busy with her nanad..

sh-papa papa bahar niklo apki no entry me nd mamma yaha bua logo ke sath soyegi..

nk-watt ak.. gave isara.. ak laugh..

than his sister came..

si-kya hai bhaiya aap bhabhi ko mat bulao yeh shadi tak hamare sath hi soyegi..

nk-wattt mera room..

dey gave nighty to nk nd pushed outside.. nk called to ak..

nk-wats this haa..

ak-kya laugh ab meri sari nanad ne bola ki bhabhi aap hamare sath enjoy karo toh main kya karu..

mujhe bhi tumhari yad aa rahi.. shivu came.. amma amma chalo na bye nk..

nk-yeh cut.. uff... after next day nk wokeup..

here ak too wakeup took bath nd nd she sees nks shirt..

laugh..

ak-mere nk.. wore it nd stand in front of mirror.. ak kya kar rahi.. kuch bhi toh nhi nk doing both acting. tumhe pata hain na mujhe ek ek pal tumhare sath rehna na.. kya karu nk.. ek kiss bas ek kiss dedo na ak.. nk plz itna tang mat karo gogo.. u so unromantic ak huh..

really ak u r soo boring ak sees to nk that he was watching to ak.. nk came inside..

nk-mujhe miss kiya ja rahi kyo.. huh.. i dont want anything.. ak held his hand..

ak-gussa gussa ho see i love u..

nk-u dont ak... no ways ak kissed to nk.. she smirk a little..

ak-hasi aai na dance practice karni hain kal mehndi nd sangit hai..

nk-so watt..

ak-kya surprise main na tumse shadi kar leti hu phir se kyo haa haa pinching to him.. bhut romantic bante ho na..

nk-ak.. ak pushed to nk on bed.. nk was top on her..

ak-ho gya chuu pyar surprise huh... hato..

nk-kyo i love u i really love u i was acting only dekhne ke liye ki tum kya karogi waise romance tumhare andar hai par par tum na manti nhi ho.. touched her hair..

ak-kaha naha dho ke aaye..

nk-niche mujhe laga yaha entry milegi ya nhi. he opened shirts button nd kissed on her beauty bons..

ak-nk felt it koi dekh lega na.. plz..

nk-ek bar toh mil raha karne do na plz ab toh rat main bhi alg ho gye din main starts kissing on her nack..

a-kam kon karega plz.. nk mujhe gudgudi ho rahi..

nk-oki fine mujhe yeh shirt pehnni hai bas do give starts unwearing it but ak held it..

ak-nk koi aa jayega gande aacha rat ko milna oki..

nk-ak. tumhe chahiye na which i want us din ruk gya tha na so..

ak-nk u r so naughty.. suddenly someone says ak nk went away...

nk-uff yr yeh log na... than ak went in bathroom.. one girl came..

g-dada woh sab aapko aur bhabhi ko dance practice ke liye bula rahe..

nk-oh hum aa rahe oki... than ak came out in saree..

ak-nk yeh dori band nhi ho rahi plz kardo..

nk tied it..

nk-hmm dance wale bhabhi g ko bula rahe..

ak-waww hum dance karege..

nk-i m not mehndi yakk..

ak-plz mere liye thoda sa..

nk-no ways aa jao.. he leave..

ak - main akli karugi kya.. she went for practice.. every one was here..

mo-are bhabhi aap alone dance karlo nk nhi aayega woh fuddu uai..

ak-woh dance nhi karte kya..

ra-never aao bhabhi hum hain na.. ak feeling bad but she practice.. next day ak got ready for sangit nd mehndi..

everyone wlcmed nikhil family..

ak was in lehnga with open hair nd mangtika..

nk grabbed aks hand..

nk-itni down kyo lag rahi..

ak-sabke hubby dance kar rahe siwaye mere pati ke alone alone dance.. main kitna bolu ki tum mere liye kuch karo huh.. nk yeh kitni big chance thi tumhe kaha main dulhan tum dulha yeh pyar hai..

nk-i love u na baba ab jo chiz karne main mujhe saram aati hai woh kaise karu..

ak-main pure hath bhar bhar ke lagwaugi mehndi dulhan gussa gussa ho gai meri dance aane wali hai bye... dey leave nk was trying to make happy to ak but she didnt.. sangit starts..

mohit nd nanu came nd dance on floor.. ak made face to sees to nk..

anker-ab hum bulayege dulha nd dulhan ko..

rashmi nd nikhil danced on ho sanam re sanam re tu mera sanam hua re.. now its time for ak..

ak was upset..

so ab hum bulayege hamari ak ko pyari si bahu.

ak came on stage.. now lights were switch off..

ak turned nd power came.. she was shocked.. that nk was near of ak.. he start dancing..

nk-jo bhida tere nanino se thanka toh (held her hand nd round to her) aashiq sarendar hua tune gusse main jab humko data toh aashiq sarendar hua.. (ak starts laughing)

she was beating to him..

aa sun oo gori mohobat main thori jane kab june se dec hua..

tune English main jab hamko data toh aashiq sarendar hua(nk put his head on aks shoulder nd she throwed it) pyar se mara galo pe chata toh(she sweetly hit to nk) toh aashiq sarendar hua..

than nk took to ak in his arms..

dil mera hain na samaj itna besabar yeh bewakuf bada chahta hai kitna tujheee dil magar nhi samaj saka..

(nk grabbed to ak by waist nd held to ak on air)

is darde dil ki sifaris ab karde koi yaha ki mil jaye se woh barish jo bhiga de puri tarah..

(skipped to her nd dey starts dancing sweetly)

kya ho asar tere sath reh kar na jane ki hosh mujhe na raha..

(ak kissed to nk on cheeks nd sweetly touched to nks cheeks)

labaj mere hai juba pe aake ruke ki hosh mujhe na raha. dhadkan tera hi nam jabe aankhe hi pegam yeh de meri najar ka hi yeh asar hai mujhpe ho hua..

nd der dance end but naksh were in their dreams..

but dey were watching in each eyes.

everyone clapping but they were watching to each.

than anker came nd said ak nk g..

ak-she skipped to nk.. kya..

everyone laughs..

nk-hamne dance kiya..

boy-bhut aacha g kho gye jo dance nhi karne wale the unhone bhut aacha dance kiya.. aap ek bar do pyar bhare words bole apni wife ke liye..

nk-do kyo tin i love u tum meri jan ho..

ak blushed..

wohh beautiful couple..

now its time for mehndi..

everyone were putting mehndi on their hand..

now ak said nk name on her hand..

ak-bas yaha heart ke andar banao.. than nk came..

kya kar rahe..

nk-mehndi dekh raha.. so sweet..

ak-bas haa isme kuch hain bhi jiska nam dekhna hai..

nk-mera kya.. nk showed his hand to ak.. ak was shocked nk..

ak-tumne mehndi lagai mere liye..

nk-kaisi lag rahi..

ak-mera nam bhut aachi..

mo-nk tu toh pura chamcha ban gya yr.. pura..

nanu-ak kya karti ho kon si dawai kilati ho nk ko mujhe bhi batao mohit ko wahi kilaugi main..

mo-oye main joru ka gulam nhi banuga na..

nk-toh tere hisab se wife ko pyar karna joru ka gulam banna hai huh..

ak-mere nk meri puch nhi saya hai.

nk-thats like my girl..

shivu came nd hug to ak showed his mehndi...

sh-hug to ak.. jab chot mere khabhi lag jati thi toh aankh meri bhi toh bhar aati thi ek choti si bhook se teri meri aankh teri hoti hai nam..

aaj bhi koi aankh lage toh yad aati ho tum maaMeri maa..

ak-love u beta apki mehndi bhut pyari hai..

sh-mujhe itching ho rahi kardo na.. ak did.

no amma yaha pe karo na plz karo na..

ak-aap na pehle lagate ho phir apko suhata nhi hai..

sh-plzz abhi kardo phir main apko khana kilauga hmm..

ak-oki baby..

nk-aur main mujhe bhi itching ho rahi..

ak-oki... mere pati bete ek jaise.. chalo ab dono so jao warna kal haldi main late ho jaoge na..

than nk shivu went nd wash mehndi.. dey took dinner..

nk give one bite ak shivu too..

sh-dekha papa hum dono amma se kitna pyar karte hai..

ak-main nhi karti kya..

nk-aap toh bhut bhut jayada karte ho hmm..

now next day haldi rasam goona starts.. ak was in yellow saree.. she was preparing haldi nd all..

more parts coming soon

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

#315

ak-haa amma kaise kaise hoga bataiye na..

gy-sab milke rashmi ko haldi lagayege isse purane jamane main pack ki tarah use karte the..

ak-yaha sab kitna different different hai but i loved it... me too shivu said.. apne khana khaya baby..

sh-haa mujhe dadi ne kilaya hain.. mujhe bhut maja aa raha yuhuuu... jaldi bua ko lao na main bhi haldi keluga...

ak laugh..

ak-pagal main rashmi ko lati hu.. she sat to rashmi on choki.. nk came der he said to ak in ears..

nk-dekh lo aachese phir main tumhe nehla dunga isse..

ak-aacha aur main nhi lagaugi kya..

nanu-aao na ak... aao.. bhabhi.. she put haldi to rashmi..

ak-aur lagate hai thaki tumhara colour aur jayada saf ho jayega..

ras-baap re yeh kisi torture se kam nhi...

ak-ho gaya main aati hu.. she was going outside... are yeh shivu kaha gaya.. suddenly nk came from back nd put haldi on all face of ak... aahhh.. turned..

nk-happy holi sry sry happy haldi.. yuhuu... he was running but ak following to him nd held to nk nd put all haldi on nks cheeks...

nk-laugh.. ab toh haldi bhi lag gai woh bhi mere hath se meri dulhan ko ab meri dulhan rat ko kaise ready hogi ek south indian dulhan marwadi dulhan ya panjabi dulhan ki tarah..

ak-surprise but hamari shadi kaise hogi.. nk i really wish khas esse hi rasam shadi sabki khushi se phir se hoti hum man se sath wachan lete than dj was watching to both..

nk-dont worry na ak sab thik hoga.. main hu na i promise sab kuch dil se karege for life time nd har shadi main hum esse hi enjoy karege.. par afsos rahega ki main tumhe woh shadi ki khushi nhi de paya like grand wedding.. dj laughs nd went inside..

ak-hum sath hai aur kya chahiye haa... bas mere sare dreams tumne pura kar diya nk.. hmm.. aao... dey went inside.. now in nyt nk was preparing for party than dj came..

dj-are munna tanne taiyar na hona ke.. shadi toh gudawara main hai..

nk-haa bauji par party ki sab injatzam toh abhi hogi na..

dj-ja taiyar ho haa.. bahu kaha hai..

nk-woh pata nhi.

dj-aur haa le tere waste sehra laya hu.. gave to nk..

nk-isse pehen ke main ekdom dulha laguga na.. dj gave angry look haa main pehnuga.. mere room main sari ladies hai so.. he went.. dj search to ak.. are bahu..

ak-g bauji bas rashmi ready ho rahi..

dj-are thare waste beauty palour wali aai hai.. maine sab waste bulai hai..

ak-pqr main khud ready ho jaugi na..dj felt sad nhi aapne itne pyar se bulai hai aaiye..

dj-yeh hui na bat... chal chal taiyar hoja.. now nk was ready shivu nd nk got ready nd came in hull..

sh- papa aap toh ekdom dulha jaise lag rahe.. giggling..

nk-kya karu tumhare papa hu na aur mere papa ne di hai so pehnna padega hi..

sh-waww so pretty nk sees to ak.. she was looking like bride...

nk-waww.. ak feeling lill uncomfortable due to she was looking like bride... ak came der.. she felt shy lill... nk said waww from eyes to ak.. she said datt..

dj-are chalo sab gurudaware.. nk ak shivu went in one car... nk was admiring to ak from mirror... nk touched aks Bengals...

ak sees to nk nd starts blushing..

dey reached in gurudaware..

nk wlcmed nikhil family every one sat on floor on bedsheets..

nk-aaj toh koi ekdom dulhan jaise lag raha aur sarma bhi raha waise hi..

ak-koi koi dulhe ki tarah lag raha hai.. mera bhi man kar raha shadi karne ko..

nk-aacha g phir kya..

ak-tum batao surprise kya hai.

nk-main mil raha kam hain kya itna loving caring hubby bas kuch pal ki duri hi phir toh tum meri hi hogi na..

ak-nai bat kya hai main toh hamesha se tumhari hu.. love u.. after finishing wedding.. naksh were outside nk was going near of ak but dj came..

dj-are munna chal main tare pass chaluga aa..

nk-pqr.. ak laugh..

dj-bahu chal mahre sath.. dey returned house.. nk ak went out from car.. are tum dono ruko sab andar aao.. dey went inside..

nk-yeh kya hua bauji ko..

ak-haa kya hua.. than shivu came nd grabbed both hand.. dey were on maindoor.

gy3 took aarati of both naksh a mandap..

nk-yeh sab kya hai..

dj-tum dono ne bhut kara is pariwar waste ab mahri bari h thari shadi bhi ek dream hogi hum the toh na waha aaj pure pariwar ke sath hogi.

ak had tears..

ak-kya meri bhi shadi she sees to her abba.. abba aap..

vis-haa beta hug to her.. tera man se kanyadan karne aaya hu beta dj ne bulaya kub khush reh.. ak starts crying..

ak-aaj main bilkul puri ho jaugi ab koi aash umid bachi nhi jisse nk ne aur mere pariwar ne pura nhi kiya i really love u all..

all-we love u too... now naksh entered with shivu..

dj-touched to shivu isse aacha gift kya hoga beta jo tumne hame diya hai.. chalta phirta sukun hamari jindagi ka.. naksh had happily tears... dey took their seats... pandit starts mantra... nd starts rasam..

vis gave aks hand on nks hand.. nd did kanyadan..

pa-ab aap dono uth ke phere le lijiye.. dey starts taking phera nd both were admiring to each nd took from heart...

pa-ab aap apni patni ki mang bhar dijiye nk took a pinch of sindur nd filled on aks mang some went on aks nose also..

ak was admiring to nk..

nk-smile i love u in low voice... now dey were dancing..

dj-hoo hoo hoo ek raja hain ek rani hai (with happily tears) went near of bm nd held her hand she was blushing..

hoo ek raja hain ek rani hai pass paisa hai aur jawani hai aur kya jindagani hain aur kya jindagani hain..

bm-showed to dj to all.. teri chahat ki sab nisani hain aur kya jindagani hain hoo.. dj took to shivu nd dancing..

ak-esse gulsan toh baharo main kila karte hain(touched dj nd bm feet) esse maa baap nasibo se mila karte hai..

vis-maine har roj dua mangi hain teri khatir mera har khawab ban gya hain hakikat aakhir (hug to ak).

ak-in rishto ko hum nibhayege apki pooja bhi ajmani hain aa..

nk grabbed everyone hand..

nk-aur kya jindgani hai hooo hoo aur kya jindagani hai.. sab nisabo ki hai kahani hai teri chahat ki sab nisani hain aur kya jindagani hain..

dance finished nk was going in his room.. it was dark nd decorated ak was on bed like bride...

nk closed d door.. went near of ak.. held her hand..

nk-ak i m soo happy ki aaj bauji ne khud hamari shadi karwai.. aaj main wada karta hu ki tumhare alwa kisi aur ko dekhuga bhi ak.. ak sees to nk.. nk unwear her duppata..

ak-main wada karti hu nk duniya main sabse pehle mere liye tum rahogi aur koi nhi..

nk-aur hamara beta shivu bhi..

ak-aaj woh dada nana sabke karib ho gya hain aur hum ek dusare ke..

nk-toh means aap meri ho i can do wat i want..

ak-yes u can.. nk was swlly swlly coming near of ak.. she laugh.. kya hua..

nk-y u laughing..

ak-pata nhi esse hi maybe i m soo happy na..

nk-ooh me too..

ak-aaj na itna sukun mil raha mujhe bata nhi sakti bauji ne sab mere liye soch aur kiya bhi..

nk-thinking uff yeh phir start ho gai.. he kissed to ak.. ak was lill shocked but nk moves his hand on her nack nd start unwearing her nack less..

nd was giving hard kisses to ak nd start sucking it soo much.. ak too hug to nk nd starts moving her lips on her.. nk laid to her on bed nd starts removing her dress.

he touched her toungue...

nk removed her blouse but nk sewarni was soo irritating ak skipped to nk..

nk-wat happened.

ak-this serwani is soo irritating nk laugh..

nk-u want my soft body..

ak-chii gande..

nk-gande haa unwear one button... ak kissed on his chest.. nd ak went top on him nd starts kissing..

nk covered to both nd dey were happily leaving their lifes..

after sometimes naksh were on Hong Kong.. both were like same dressup like serail..

ak was talking in phone..

ak-haaa baby sab laugi apke liye mera bacha re.. aap tang toh nhi kar rahe na dada g ko.. apki bhut yad aa rahi baby..

sh-uiii mere toh exam hain na... par aap apni gumi gumi enjoy karo..

nk-miss u beta..

sh-miss u too papa u know main daily gumi ja raha icecream gifts..

ak-dekha nk kitna bigad gya hai yeh.. u happy na baby..

sh-kitne bar puchogi aap.. u know amma meri frd ko na behen hui kal.. itnuuu chotuu si sach.. naksh sees to each..

nk-u want sister..

sh-i want but kya karu kahaa se lau aap dogi amma..

naksh laugh..

a-hum kal aa rahe oki.. dey cut video calling.. ak hug to nk.. yeh honeymoon yadgar rahega nk.. shivu kitna happy ho jayega yeh touched her stomach yahi dar tha bas..

nk-haa ak i m soo happy shivu ka bachapn jiuga main ab.. haina..

ak kissed to nk..

ak-love u.. after that naksh went in ss shivu hug to ak..

sh-meri sister laye ho kaha hai..

ak-laugh beta itni jaldi kaise milegi..

gy-haa munna hame bhi ek pari chahoye bahu jaisi..

nk-maa apko aaj se 8 mahine bad apki poti i guess mil jayegi..

gy-laugh huh.. kya bola 8 mahine.. hug to ak sach bahu.. she blushed..

ak-haa.. everyone were soo happy...

sh-uiii yeh kya ho raha mujhe meri siater kaise milegi..

gy-milegi beta bs sabar kar hmm... khush raho beta..

after 8 month ak was getting pain..

ak-nhi nk mujhse bardast nhi ho raha aah..

nk was crying..

nk-dont worry ak.. doctor aao na.. uu.. aao na.. he was shouting..

gy-laugh kya kar raha subah se sare hospital ko bahu ki bajaye tune sar pe utha rakha hai.. nurse was taking to ak on room nk too went..

nu-aap bhi aayege..

nk-haa meri biwi ne mera hath pakda hai na.. dey went inside... nk was getting chakar to sees to ak..

nk-yeh sizer kyo la rahi take it from doctor..

do-oo god sat in chair aap hi kar lijiye sizar bhi le li sab le liya..

ak-nkkk from anger.. mujhe pain ho raha doctor plz nk ko nikalo..

nk-ak pain hoga na tumhe thabhi toh bol raha nhi bina chaku kechi ke karo sab..

do-aap bahar jaiye toh.. dey pushed to nk.. after some time nk hwart kids voice..

gy3 hug to nk..

nk-main dubara papa ban gya.. maa shivu ko phone karke bulao jaldi mujhse jayada wait woh kar raha na..

than nk went inside baby was in aks hand..

ak-apki beti nk.. nk took to her..

nk-awww kitni chotu si hai ak kaise kar rahi haww.. aww mera pritu bhi essa tha kya i really miss this..

ak-haa nk shivu toh isse aur bhi jayada pyara tha.. shivu toh same tumhare jaisa hain.. den nk sees to shivu..

pritu aao beta.. shivu was soo happy..

sh-meri sister hain haww amma yeh toh kitni small chotu si hai..

ak-haa baby aap na isse bhut jayada sundar the..

nk took to shivu in his lap..

nk-papa beta milke baby ko kilayege..

nk took to baby..

sh-haw kitni pyari ho ekdom white white mere jaisi hai na papa..

nk-haa baby.. hum tino jaisi hai..

sh-hloo main apka bhiya hu apse bhut sara pyar karuga u know aap jaldi se big ho jao phir hum keli karege football papa ke sath..

nk-ladkiya football nhi kelti makeup karti hai bas..

ak-oo g nhi meri beti football kelegi hain na baby..

sh-hihi aap dono lad kyo rahe.. papa main isse godi main lu kya..

nk-abhi yeh bhut small hain thodi si big hogi na bolegi bhaiya mere ko jhoola jhulao.. keli karo papa kandhe main gumao mummy choti banao..

sh-"main meri behen ko keli bhi karauga..

ak-shivu mera bacha aao hug to shivu..

nk-mera beta mere jaisa..

sh-dono jaisa na..

all came.

dj-are la mahri nanhi pari ne..

rashmi - main lungi..

nanu-main..

mo-main..

shivu-no ways main lunga..

happy family ever..

d end story.. thankuu so much princess nd misri both support make this ff so pretty much than my writing ur comments r soo valuable..

love u thanku soo much

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

#316

My last and late comments...

after a longgg time...

hmmm what to say about previous part actually i forgot also...

i wanted to tell u it could be good if ngo starts at udaipur but u have a right decision..

finally naksh were back in ss and rashmi wedding also happening

but bechari is not happy with shaadi... and all love marriages hi love marriages woww... twist in tales and love stories of everyone...

waiting ki aage kya hoga do update soon...

NGO has happened and the way shivu took care of her was awww...

its really a very good act of opening an ngo and helping girls salute ak nd nk for supporting her...

Lovely family nazar na lage...

precap wat to say abt it

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Posted: 7 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
My last and late comments...
after a longgg time...
hmmm what to say about previous part actually i forgot also...
i wanted to tell u it could be good if ngo starts at udaipur but u have a right decision..
finally naksh were back in ss and rashmi wedding also happening
but bechari is not happy with shaadi... and all love marriages hi love marriages woww... twist in tales and love stories of everyone...
waiting ki aage kya hoga do update soon...
NGO has happened and the way shivu took care of her was awww...
its really a very good act of opening an ngo and helping girls salute ak nd nk for supporting her...
Lovely family nazar na lage...
precap wat to say abt it

i m sry for late update.. i m soo happy to read ur comments admire it dont be said last 😭ek part hain final comments woh wali ki bhi dena na..

thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally..

aww u liked happy family dont worry kiski najar nhi lagegi na.. i tried to write udaypur us wish fullfill na ho essa hogi toh nhi na⭐️..

i updated full read nd tell.. again ur truly comments nd appreciation made my writing soo beautiful...

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Posted: 7 years ago

#318

Hmmm finally the ff came to an end so soon...

i felt like it strted a few days ago but if finished 30 parts and ended...

Must say one of the best ending u have given to an ff...

u showed everything

love family bonding care nok-jhok emotions everything in this part...

Naksh ki shopping and bm caught them ahhah

Ohir naksh engagement then dance

phir mehandi haldi eveytging u covered and also naksh ki surprise weddding

wat a plan that tooo by dj

naksh ki adoori rishthe ko poora kar diya

unki family and

finally nakshi also came and naksh became four haoppy and sweet family forever

tooo cuteee fff 👍🏼

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Posted: 7 years ago

#319

I must say this last part is the best of bestest part of this ff.. so adorable sweet cute outstanding super se bhi upar wala part... ending is also just perfect 😛it has all kind of emotions

Doesn't want this ff to end ever but what to do.. you can't believe after reading last scene I feel like crying it was like khushi k aanshu.. feel like how happy family this is so smooth so caring.. it's just a sweet ending 😃

From starting to end it was wow part.. like the way naksh support rashmi the way they tell dj about rashmi nikhil was very nice way good writing.. then naksh small small scenes shopping mall scene haldi mehandi dance scene was so romantic 😳then their full on wedding scene.. vish ka kanyadan karna was nice scene after that Hong Kong scene and nakshi ka aana so mesmorize beautiful scene

Nk ka hospital sar par uthana aur labour room scene was hilarious 😆he is so cute hubby

And last family scene steal the heart of this part.. it was so beautiful like this foursome awesome family scene 😊

Do wrote more and more ff like this..and many many congratulations to you on completing this wonderful ff.. it was one of the best ff of you

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Posted: 7 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
Hmmm finally the ff came to an end so soon...
i felt like it strted a few days ago but if finished 30 parts and ended...
Must say one of the best ending u have given to an ff...
u showed everything
love family bonding care nok-jhok emotions everything in this part...
Naksh ki shopping and bm caught them ahhah
Ohir naksh engagement then dance
phir mehandi haldi eveytging u covered and also naksh ki surprise weddding
wat a plan that tooo by dj
naksh ki adoori rishthe ko poora kar diya
unki family and
finally nakshi also came and naksh became four haoppy and sweet family forever
tooo cuteee fff 👍🏼

how sweet nd big comments yr i m watching it bar bar nd read it ur this ff ki last comment i m admiring it soo much that u felt it all is well thats end is well na..

thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally nd ur big big support i loved it soouch.. haa

my frd forever⭐️haa perfect ending sab i wana try to give i really happy ki u r soo happy..

thanku once again..