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Posted: 7 years ago

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part-28

ak was making dinner in kitchen.. nk nd shivu was in room..

nk-yeh hain na hamari clg ki pic hain beta.. shivu was on nks lap..

sh-wawww meri amma kitni pretty lag rahi.. aur aap bandar nd laugh..

nk-aacha papa ke sath masakari haa haa haa.. teasing to him.. see hamane clg main act bhi kiya tha..ak was seeing to both nd felt to happy she wiped her tears. sabko bhut pasand bhi kiya tha..

sh-aap dono alg kyo hue the?

ak was sad..

nk-meri hi galti thi beta.. jab aap apni amma ki stomach main the.. ak said in between both...

ak-toh papa ne mujhe fight kar li ki mera beta hoga toh mere ghar main rahega aur main kuch karna chahti thi padna chahti thi.. beta yahi soch hame alg kar di.. nk was confused..

haa aur jab itne sal tumhare papa akle rahe toh akal aa gai unhe...

sh-hihi see jhagda jhagda karne se sab angry angry ho jate hain..

ak-phir manaya bhi toh na beta.. jao toh dekh ke aao maine stove band ki ya nhi.. go.. he went..

nk-ak tumne bataya kyo nhi.. sach meri galti thi na..

ak-nk biti bat ko batane se kya fayda.. aur phir badi muskil se sab thik hua hai.. aur kya batate ki shadi se pehle hamne.. shivu aa gya.. chiii nhi nk hamara bacha hamara hai bas..

nk- laugh oki miss... hamara bacha.. i m really happy aacha aaj toh apko inam dena banta hai bete se jo milaya mujhe du kya.. du.. coming close than shivu said..

sh-no amma apne close kar di.. kya ho raha..

ak-apke papa bol rahe ki main ek aur album dikhauga... shivu sat on nks lap..

sh-dikhao na dost.. uiii sees to nk.. nd make puppy face..

nk-papa bhi toh dost hi hain na... see... he was showing album to shivu.. ak felt naughtiness he pinched to nk on nack from her nail.. nk watched to ak.. she was watching album..

nk-gudgudi hui.. ak laugh inside... she again pinched.. aahhh..

ak-kya hua nk..

nk-pata nhi kuch.. sayad kida...

sh-ohoo uchlo mat na papa..

nk-sshhh.. he was showing album ak was swlly swlly pinching to nk but he held her hand nd picked a kiss on her cheeks.

meri kida... gave naughty look..

ak-nk..

nk-tum karo toh sararat main karu toh in low voice..

ak-badmasii.. laugh..

sh-mujhe bhook lagi hain..

nk-chalo khana khate hai..

ak-aao mera baby... took to shivu in her hand ... put to him on chair... kya khaoge batato jabse mera baby gussa gussa hua khaya bhi nhi aachese hena..

nk-aur aap..

sh-haa maine bhi yahi bola ki aap bhi khao aachese main kilauga took one bite..

nk-but maine bhi ek bite li..

sh-aap kiski bite pehle khaoge amma.. ak was confused.. she took both bite mixed them nd ate... both were happy..

nk-dekh lo apki amma bhut smart ho gai hai mera asar hain..

sh-nooo.. meri amma bhut samart suru se hain.. kissed to her on cheeks nd hug to her.. meri pyari amma... nk passed smile..

ak-are ab dono khao mere hath se...

she feed to both from her both hand...

nk nd shivu gaves bite to ak..

ak-bass.. lill shout voice main fat jaugi itna kilaoge toh dono..

nk-ak bas thoda sa rice..

sh-haa amma thodi si bas small one..

ak-eee.. no ways.. nd leave..

sh-ohoo yeh toh gai..

nk-haa kitna kam khaya na.. both sees to each nd laugh... pritu uuu kitna kilaoge haa.. ak was arranging thing on cupboard..

than nk hug to her.

ak-kya hua nk g.. he kissed to her on her cheeks...

nk-i love u.. tumne kitne aachese shivu ko samjhaya.. ak mujhe yakin nhi hota ki itni aachi meri kismat kya thi ki mujhe tum mili.. means kitna bhi pyar karu utna hi kam hain..

ak-bas na jayada tarif mat karo udne lag jaugi main..

nk-toh udd lo aacha hai hum hawa main romantance karege..

ak-na baba na gira diya toh..

nk-yakin nhi mujhpe haa... dont worry nhi girawuga kissed to her on nack.

ak-shivu dekh lega na sshhh...

nk-dont worry maine usse bagal main kelne bheja hai.. woh mera bhi beta hain na

ak-aacha toh..

nk-toh uska dil bilkul saf hain.. aur woh hum dono se bhut pyar bhi karta hain.. main usse ek romantic lover banauga..

ak-kya laugh no ways mera beta police officer banega. nk skipped to her..

nk-kya..

ak-haa mera beta jab chotu sa tha na toh bolta tha main police banuga.. main usse itna aacha officer banauga ki sabki rakhsha karega woh..

nk-par ak hamara ek beta hai dar nhi lagega kuch.

ak-kya hoga nk.. hum apne liye nhi dusro ke liye khafi kuch kare yeh jiwan hain..

nk-par r u sure shivu ready hai..

ak-pata nhi nk par jab usse maine sunna toh yeh mera dream sa ban gya.. aur u know na ki mai dusaro ki help karne main kitna maja aata hai mujhe.. relief milta hai mujhe.. than dey sees to shivu..

nk-are aap waha kyo khade ho..

ak-mera bacha.. aao.. shivu came nd hug to shivu...

he was sad..

nk watched to him..

ak-aa jao solo haa...

sh-hmm passed smile.. now he was sleeping.. ak slept to shivu..

ak-kya hua baby..

sh-nind nhi aa rahi amma..

nk-ak tum iske bal ko aachese sehlao.. main bhi karta hu... shivu was in between..

nk nd ak were caressing his hair..

nk-beta aap hamare liye bhut khas ho jab aap haste ho hum haste hain aur jab gussa hote ho hum sad hote hai.. apki dream hamari dream..

ak-aur aap jo chahoge hum karke denge apko.. aap hamara ansh ho pyar ho.. we really love u beta... he got sleep...

nk-sshhh ak come..

ak-kaha..

nk-outside come come.. held her hand... dey went outside..

ak-shivu alone hainn na..

nk-sshh bas bahar means garden main ak.. thodi der bas... ak opened d door nd sees that garden was decorated lill...

ak-kab kiya..

nk-bas abhi kiya.. karwaya.. sry..

ak-so cute.. par kyo...

nk-aaj apne itna aacha kam kiya mere bete ko mujhe milaya.. tumpe toh myjhe itna itna itna pyar aa raha.. opened his arms.. ak hug to him..

ak-meri bahe hai yeh.. thankuuu tumhara pyar is everything nk.. baki yeh sab kya karna..

nk-dil main base pyar ko dikhana.. bas..

ak-aacha dekhao...

nk took to ak in garden.. she took cardigan...

nk-aaj tumne jo kiya woh sayad abhi jo kahu bhut less hai.. papa bete ko milaya ak i really love u aur pyar karuga tumhe jab tum bhuddi ho jaogi na esse.. showed a pic of old ladies ak laugh..

ak-aacha.. mere toh teeth honge bhi nhi..

nk-toh mere kon se honge ek nakli teeth ki set banwa dunga.. milke share karegi..

ak-chiii..

nk-chiii aur pata hain apne aap ko koi itna sundar kaise dekhega showed mirror to her.. meri itni sundar biwi hain jo sayad apne aapko is mirror main dekhegi toh usse bhi apni khud ki aachai najar aa jayegi..

ak-with terry eyes.. itni aachi nhi hu.. sees to her..

nk-put aside mirror... coming close meri najar se dekho toh najar aayega na tumhara bholapan pyar sabke.. aaj main wada karta hu ki tumhe hamesha trust karuga.. itna pyar karuga ki pyar bhi kahege pyar ho toh essa ho.

ak-bas nk.. jayada mat bolo najar lag jayegi mujhe dar lagta hain..

nk-dar uska nam nhi hoga hamare riste main ak... coming close of ak..

ak-pata nhi..

nk-main tumhara hu tum meri aur hamara bacha hamare dil ki khadi..

coming soo close nd put his lips on her.. nd start kissing to ak..

aks teras drop from her eyes.. nk softly kissed to ak..

nk-i love u...

ak-smile... now nk moves lill more than high nd starts sucking her lips like madly..

grabbed to her tighter... ak was caressing his hair..

now dey were in their dreams..

in morning shivu ak nk were sleeping on bed..

nks sleep broke nd he sees to both nd passed smile..

he went in kitchen nd made tea.. he sees that shivu was watching to ak with incent face..

nk-kya hua beta..

sh-woh kuchh nhi aap kya laye ho..

nk-apke liye milk aur apki amma ke liye tea..

sh-waah aap cook bhi karte ho..

nk-thoda thoda.. gave to him milk. shivu took a zip.. chiii yeh toh bhut bad hai.. amma mujhe badam sheck ke sath milk deti hain..

nk-sry... made sadly face..

sh-koi bat nhi apne try kiya.. it is big na... suddenly ak wokeup nd sees to both..

ak-kya chatar chal rahi..

sh-kuch nhi dooo.. papa ne na tea banai apke liye.. ak took it..

nk-it is gud..

ak-bhut bhit aachi nkkk.. esse aadat mat bigado meri..

nk-kyo..

ak-main kya karugi tea de di milk bhi.. main na tumpe hukum chalugi phir..

nk-aacha g thik h chala lo thoda tum aur thoda main.

ak-hmmm... kya karwaoge..

sh-ek pyara sa upma..

nk-oye meri turn thi..

sh - hihi meri bhi.. main dor hu both ki na. toh meri first..

nk-oki g..

ak-main aati hu naha ke phir banaugi.. she went in bathroom..

now shivu was sat on door.. nk watched to her sad face..

more part coming soon

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 7 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

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nk-kya hu shivu esse chup chap kyo baithe ho haa yaha..

sh-bas esse hi kuch nhi.. nk sat besides of shivu...

nk-main notice kar raha hu ki aap sad ho.. kal se jab apke apni amma aur meri bat suni.. apki abhi bhi bura lag raha ki main apki amma ko hug karta hu..

sh-nhi essa nhi hain bas kuch soch raha tha..

nk-aap mujhe dost bolte ho aur apni problem share nhi karte ho haa.. tell apko bura laga kuch maine kaha amma ne bola.. batao na beta.. aap sad toh ho kal rat ke bad se.. kya bat hain kahi amma ne jo police wali..

sh-woh...

nk-yahi bat hain na.. bolo..

sh-haa woh actually mujhe bhut dar laga jab amma ne bola ki main police banuga woh toh bachapn main game main bol diya maine ki main banuga par mujhe polic nhi bannna.. mujhe help karne hain people ki but main esse bhi kar sakta hu na sabko collect karke main kar sakta hu na like jisko bhi cast hain na unki pain ko dur karu..

nk-passed smile.. beta apki amma kehti hai ki aap mere upar gye ho but asal main aap apni amma ki chawi main.. i m really proud ki itni choti si umar main apki soch kitni big hain.easy u can say to ur amma main janta hu woh apko insist nhi karegi bacha..

sh-nhi main essa nhi kar sakta because meri amma ki dream hai yeh maine unko always sad dekhi hai.. ab thodi si khushi hui unko unki dream nhi toduga jo bolegi main karuga.. unka dil tod nhi sakta main khabhi bhi..

nk had tears..

nk-itni love karte ho apni amma se..

sh-bhut sariii.. but unko hurt nhi karuga..

nk-nd life long esse hi sad rahoge baby.. dekho yeh aachi bat hai ki aap apne amma se itni pyar karte ho.. aur jaise aap karoge jo dream apki hogi apki amma ki hogi baby.. aap bolo..

sh-nhi meri amma bhut sad ho jayegi i love with him sooo much..

nk-aacha ek bat puchu aap jitni love apni amma se karte ho aur kisi se bhi utni love karte ho kya..

sh-nhi main apni amma ko bhut love karta hu bas.. nk was sad.. aur haa meri yeh secret kisi ko mat batana meri amma ko bhi nhi..

nk-pakka nhi batauga hmm chalo... dey went to take breakfast... ak was arranging thing...

ak-hmm kya bat ho rahi thi akle akle.

nk-papa bete ki bat thi apko kyo bataye..

ak-are shivu apne drawing sikhi h na uski competition hai aaj... aap apni man se draw karna jiski drwaing sabse best hogi usko prize milega..

sh-really..

nk-wawww hum bhi jayege dekhne.

sh-waaww uiii..

nk-wat happened..

sh-kuch nhi..

ak-aacha nk tum ready ho plz shivu ko bhi ready kar do..

nk-bilkul aao beta.. shivu aap kya draw karoge.. went in bathroom..

sh-pata nhi..

nk-main batau.. aap na woh draw karo jo apki man main hain.. aur jo aap chahte ho life se. beta main aur apki amma dono apki khushi chahte hai agar apko dairy milk pasand hain aur main apko munch dunga toh aap khaoge..

sh-no..

nk-toh aap woh karoge jo aama ko pasand hai woh karo jo apko pasand hai because jab aap apni man ki chiz karoge tab hi hum khub khush rahege beta jindagi aage badne ka nam hain. kisi ko khush karne ka meaning yeh nhi ki usko bura feel karao..

beta agar unko yeu pata chal ki aap sad ho unki dream se toh woh tut jayegi beta..

sh-toh mqin kya karu..

nk-aaj aap draw karo esse draw karo ki apki amma ke heart tak apki bat pahuch jaye.. after that dey took bath nd came in hull..

ak-kya hua..sh-kuch nhi chale..

ak-breakfast kar lo haa..

kuch hua kya dono has rahe..

nk-nhi.. chalo late ho rahi..

ak-apki sab chiz rakh li hain maine..chalo. dey went in school..

ak nk sat on table..

sh-mujhe dar lag rahi bhutt amma..

ak-beta yeh socho mujhe sirf sikhne ke liye participate karna hain baki sab bhool jao.. shivu kissed to ak nd nk give tumbesup..

now shivu starts drawing.. nk ak were worried.

ak-nk shivu kar lega na held his hand..

nk-hmm apka nhi shivu ka exam hain madam.. kar lega dont worry.. time finished shivu came near of ak.

ak-ho gai na ab daro lat oki..

sh-mujhe lag raha aap dar rahe..

nk laugh..

ak-huh.. judge aa gai..

te-so hum ab nam batayege jo jita hai us bache ka.. uska najariya itna sundar hai apni maa ke liye so first prize milta hai pritu shinghaniya ko..

nk-wawww.. ak got happy tears shivu hug to nk.. ak watched to both..

sh-thankuuu papa apne himat di samjhaya mujhe i really love u papa..

ak-papa..

nk-i love u too beta..

sh-aap bhut aache papa ho..

ak-papa..

te-shivu aap aaiye apni maa ke sath..

sh-aao amma.. dey went on stage..

ak sees shivu drawing.. he made a small mom baby pic.. now in second one he made police pic mothers dream. nd in last kid was alone thinking about helping to others..

in last maa hug to baby nd she throwed police wardi..

ak had tears in her eyes.. she sees to shivu nd hug to him..

ak-aap itna deeply sochte ho.. aap sad ho police nhi banna apko..

sh-nhi amma but main nhi bol paya bachpan se apko meri dream thi na usse break nhi karna tha aap hurt ho jati..

ak-nhi beta aap jo chaho woh meri dream hain.. pehle kyo nhi bataya..

sh-socha jo aap bologi karuga..

ak-beta main apki khushi chahti hu bas..

sh-thabhi mujhe papa ne realize karwaya ki aap mujhe kitni pyar karti ho txx to papa... dey watching to shivu..

te-bhut aacha hain apka beta.. maa bete ke realtion ko kitna samjhata hai.. beta kuch bolo aap..

sh-mujhe yeh nhi pata god kaise hote hain to all..

par jab se apni ammma ko dekha yahi sikha ki woh god hain.. aur hamesha unhone meri har dream puri ki mere liye har khushi di aur hasti rahi... puri wish puri ki meri..

main na bhut happy tha ki main amma ko samaj jata hu.. ak starts crying unki dream thi mujhe police banane ki. maine socha unki dream puri hogi par main wrong tha..

jab meri frdship dost se hui maine kelna sikha aur jo mom ki pyar thi usko bhi sikha ki us pyar ko aage kaise leke jau.. unhone samjhaya ki apni amma ko bataugi kya chahta hu main.. bache ko unke papa amma kitna pyar karte hai yeh sikha maine..

aur aaj main proudly boluga ki main bhut lucky hu jo esse papa mile essi amma mili i love u both..

nk had tears.. aao na papa yaha..

te-aao aap dono hi apne bache ko troffy do because aap hi esse parents ho jinhone india ka future bhut brite kiya hai..

nk came der.. nd ak was crying nk held to her..

ak-thankuuu..

nk-my pleasure...

teacher gave trofy to both..

shivu held it..

dey r happy family nk took to shivu in his arms..

sh-apne pucha tha na ki amma se jitna kisko pyar karte ho..

nk - haa..

sh-aapne mujhe amma jaise samjhaya papa main apko bhi utna hi pyar karta hu jitna amma ko i love u papa.. kissed to him..

ak was sooo happy.. happy family..

end

preacp - nk surprise to both ak nd shivu.. in aks bdy

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 7 years ago

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#293

such an emotional yet beautiful part 😊
naksh ka pain shivu ka pain all scenes written beautifully
ak handled both relation very well.. shivu ko hospital le jakar samjhana.. nk ko video bhejkar himmat dilana was just superb scene
finally shivu understand the true meaning of father in his life😛
last family patch up scene is awesome.. they become happy family now 😃
now waiting for next part to see more bonding between nk and shivu do wrote soon

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: nakshkidiwani

vis sees to rb nd dj..
vis-qre subah subah aap log yaha.. aaiye na baithiye.. dey sat on sofa.. rj sees to both nd was shocked..
vis-kaise aana hua..
rb-bqs subah walk pe nikle se toh chai..
dj hit to him from side..
dj-toh chai pani kiye bina socha thoda gum le toh thara ghar dikha aa gye hal chal lene..
vis-yeh toh bhut aacha hua... are ak ki maaa chai pani ka itjam karo she was shocked..
rj-ggg woh.. she went in kitchen..
choti gajab karte hain yeh bhi aaj toh dud aaya hi nhi chai kaise banau🤣
rb-meri chai aane wali hain bas with brighting face🤣

rj - choti ab tu hi bata kya karu mai mujhe to kuch sujh hi nahi raha hai
Kaki - ek kam karte h didi pahle nasta pani lekar chalte h.. agar vo log jaldbaji me honge to chai ke liye khud hi mana kar denge 😉

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
such an emotional yet beautiful part 😊
naksh ka pain shivu ka pain all scenes written beautifully
ak handled both relation very well.. shivu ko hospital le jakar samjhana.. nk ko video bhejkar himmat dilana was just superb scene
finally shivu understand the true meaning of father in his life😛
last family patch up scene is awesome.. they become happy family now 😃
now waiting for next part to see more bonding between nk and shivu do wrote soon

aww soo sweet comments i m just admiring it soo much i m happy that u felt this part..

yr maine bhut socha ki yeh pqrt touchy ho bas..

haa ak ne handle kari nd dey will live like a gud family..

thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally 😊i will do update soon next part

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
rj - choti ab tu hi bata kya karu mai mujhe to kuch sujh hi nahi raha hai
Kaki - ek kam karte h didi pahle nasta pani lekar chalte h.. agar vo log jaldbaji me honge to chai ke liye khud hi mana kar denge 😉

rj put nasta on table.. dj nd rb were waiting for tea..

bit choti maa took nasta nd both became sad..

vis-aap bhi gajab karti hai chai bhi toh laiye..

rj fire on anger😡thinking tera sar kaha se lau..

rj-g woh mujhe laga ki dj aur rb pi ke aaye honge woh dud khatam ho gya..

dj nd rb broke 😭

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 7 years ago

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wow lovely lovely part 😃cute cute happy family moments like every scenes😳from starting to end it was just adorable part
naksh scene in garden is awesome.. like the way nk samjhaofy shivu about the true meaning of happiness 😊
shivu's drawing is awesome finally dil se shivu accepting nk as his father.. the happiness came on nk's face was beyond of earth 😳now naksh ki family complete ho gayi.. precap ak's bday wow do wrote soon will be waiting

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#298

its a sweet and cute part...

so smooth and caring part it was...

smalll emotions and values at times play a very big role in our life...

its so good that ak want her son to be a man who can help others,,,,

but naksh also thinks the same in other way...

and naksh love for his mom was awww...

I am a mom lover so i connected to it very well...

The way nk made naksh realise and handle the situation was outstanding...

waiting for more cute and bonding parts ahead...

naksh drawing was wowww...

MOm dad love is the best in the world...

do write next part soon ..

m waiting

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
wow lovely lovely part 😃cute cute happy family moments like every scenes😳from starting to end it was just adorable part
naksh scene in garden is awesome.. like the way nk samjhaofy shivu about the true meaning of happiness 😊
shivu's drawing is awesome finally dil se shivu accepting nk as his father.. the happiness came on nk's face was beyond of earth 😳now naksh ki family complete ho gayi.. precap ak's bday wow do wrote soon will be waiting

thanku sooo soo much for ur comments lovly nd preety soo much hapy that u liked all d scenes 😃..

aww u enjoyed it i m soo soo soo much happy..

essa nhi hai yr bas kuch likhne ki try ki happy family scene nhi likhi thi na soo likhne ki try ki thi maine..

haa nk is happy happy now uski surprise watch karna bas.. i will start new part soon

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
its a sweet and cute part...
so smooth and caring part it was...
smalll emotions and values at times play a very big role in our life...
its so good that ak want her son to be a man who can help others,,,,
but naksh also thinks the same in other way...
and naksh love for his mom was awww...
I am a mom lover so i connected to it very well...
The way nk made naksh realise and handle the situation was outstanding...
waiting for more cute and bonding parts ahead...
naksh drawing was wowww...
MOm dad love is the best in the world...
do write next part soon ..
m waiting

awww u liked this part aww soo sweet i m admiring

amma ki lover i know u loved ur amma soo much thabhi try ki kuch aacha put karu nd u connected with this..

yeh best tha.. thanku so much for ur lovly comments loved it totally..

awww.. nk ki ak ki shivu ki sabki understanding.. ⭐️

haa mom dad bete ko love sabse aachi hoti hain.. i will try to update next part soon