pritus ff ~kismat connection - 2~ pt 30(last pt) pg 45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#281

hmmm hmmm ab itni comments de deke i dont know wat to write more...

it was a nice part..

but i wanna say u dont drag some situations tooo much,,,,,

I liked the +ves and -ves which naksh had told for each other,,,,,

bechara shivu he cried nd waited for his mom...

that was a bad situation but ya parents need to be ready to face any situation...

it would a great part where naksh realise the true meaning of father.. nd then the true bonding of family strts...

i liked wat ak said we plan a baby only wen shivu is ready...

its true than all he was the one who even dont know any relation properly he nd ak both have the chance to know relationships in a deeper way...

do update soon the next part waiting for nk nd shivu realisation and cute family union... 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
once again a superb amazing part😳 all scenes are just wow
naksh ki masti in godh bharai was 😳nk ka akshi ko chidana beech beech me romance karna then that game scene ek dusre ki galat aadat k bare me batana just wow scenes 😛
car scene is beautiful 😃
at last poor shivu left alone.. this is so heart touchy scene
waiting to see how ak make their relation strong do update soon

oo god ur comments soo soo soo cute yr 😃feeling soo happy to read it yr..

thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally.. 😃maine socha romance jayada hua nhi toh likhu aachese.. yeh usp hain naksh ki na..

haa yr god bharai main woh scene aww u liked it waww..

haa aage part aur bhi touchy hota chale jayega i will try my best to best i will do update soon next part 😛

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
hmmm hmmm ab itni comments de deke i dont know wat to write more...
it was a nice part..
but i wanna say u dont drag some situations tooo much,,,,,
I liked the +ves and -ves which naksh had told for each other,,,,,
bechara shivu he cried nd waited for his mom...
that was a bad situation but ya parents need to be ready to face any situation...
it would a great part where naksh realise the true meaning of father.. nd then the true bonding of family strts...
i liked wat ak said we plan a baby only wen shivu is ready...
its true than all he was the one who even dont know any relation properly he nd ak both have the chance to know relationships in a deeper way...
do update soon the next part waiting for nk nd shivu realisation and cute family union... 😃

awww i m just loving it from dept of my heart 😃sab kuch bol di kya but kuch bachi toh rehti hi na😉.

i just loved ur true comments which u felt u said yeh aacha lagta sabse jayada..

drag means wattt..

awww nd i like +true+loving=comments 😛

atlest u like naksh convo..

haa i cant say much about next part but main pura apna kind use karke likh daulgi baki like karna ya nhi in ur hand..

thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally..

i will do update soon next part

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Posted: 7 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
rb with fear
rb- dadda ji agar mai dudh la sakta to subah se aise bhikhariyo ki tarah nahi ghumta 😭
Dj - manne kuch nahi sunni mare ko abhi k abhi dud chahiye bas 😡
rb - dadda ji ek bat bolu ham bahu ke mayke walo se dudh mange kya 🤣

da-ab bhik mangega kya un loga se haa.. woh bechare sab chai pine waste dud rakhe honge aur tu.. ja lele aur pile par manne na kahiye pin waste bas 🤣

ak heard it nd broke completely. she starts crying..

ak-dada g apne mere ghar ki chai pine se mana kar diya 🤣

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Posted: 7 years ago

#285

part-29

shivu was crying alottt... ak was watching to him from door.. than nk came..

nk-main bat karta hu pritu se woh samjhega hamari bat.. ak maine jan bhuj ke kuch nhi kiya.. bhala main shivu se tumhe kyo chinuga.. mera ansh hai woh..

ak-i know nk...

nk was shivering..

nk-ak pritu mujhse life long hate toh nhi karega na i m soo worried bat karo na usse.. pehle main meeting pe tha phone slient tha aur jab meeting ke bad dekha toh switch off ho gya.. tum mujhe galt mat samjhana.. bhala apni bache ki maa ko apne bache se dur kyo karuga main..

ak-nk essa bolne ki jarurat hi nhi tum uske papa ho yeh main janti hu tum jante ho par yeh bat shivu ko nhi pata na... uska gussa bhut tej hota hai.. plz abhi tum uske pass mat jao main bhi abhi is topic main bat karugi usse na toh yeh lagega main tumhari tarafdari kar rahi aur woh aur jayada chid jayega.. he need some time... woh bacha hai hum usse yeh nhi keh sakte ek din main sab kuch samaj lo..

nk-ak.. hug to her... kya se kya ho gya socha shivu ko pyar denge par yeh toh ulta ho gya mujhe dar lag raha bhut..

ak-kuch nhi hoga hmmm.. bas... hmm bas... nk main maa hu mujhe yaha bhi dekhna hai aur waha bhi.. agar shivu bolega to sayad main tumhe aamne samne samjha nhi paugi plz mujhe samjhana..

nk-ak pritu ke liye yeh dard kuch bhi nhi.. bas mere bete ko mujhe dila do.. plz... ak say yes in isara..

she leave in room.. nk was watching to ak nd shivu..

ak-baby...

sh-aap badal gye ho mujhe itni fear lagi.. pehle toh choti choti bat main call karte the.. abhi apko new new frd mil gya na toh aap mujhe pyar nhi karte.. ak hug to him nd sat to him on her lap..

ak-main apko pyar nhi karugi haa.. amma bolte ho mujhe haa god ko bhi maa bolte ho na.. tumhare teacher kya bolte hai ki sabse pehle uth ke apne mom dad ko dekho unke paw chouo.. ab kya hua.. beta Amma ko pata hi nhi chala ki aap jaldi aa jaogi pata hain apko apke dost ka phone band ho gya..

sh-woh mere dost nhi hai woh bad hai.. unhone janbhuj ke bataya nhi.. thaki aap unke close aa jao aur main dur chala jau.. mujhe yaha unke pass nhi rehna..

ak-baby essa kyo bol rahe apko toh maa se jayada woh pasand aaye the meri shadi karai ab piche kyo hat rahe..

sh-maine socha sath rahege par unhone apko mujhse alg kar di.. main kid hu na so unko laga kar denge.. par main apke bina nhi reh sakta.. aap unke pass mat jana amma.. mera unse koi realtion nhi... aap unse round round back lelo tab hum khud ke ghar main jayege aur aachese rahege waise hi pehle jaise...

ak-shivu.. nk broke to listen it.. ak sees that nk is crying... he went in room... beta essa nhi hota jab hum kisi se frdship kar lete hai usse todte toh nhi na.. woh apki life ka sabse important hissa hai..

sh-unhone apko bola na ki aap mujhe behla lo..sees to ak from anger.. go jao unke pass main bura hu angry rehta hu.. jao.. mqin ro lunga..

ak-beta.. main apko chodke kaha jauga no.. i m not going oki.. she was crying... basss aap relax karo main unke bare main kuch nhi bolugi bas... chup ho jao.. hug to shivu.. here nk was upset.. he was thinking about shivu nd ak.. ak anger shivu support..

nk-i need u ak... mujhe bhut dar lag raha.. god kya mera rishta mere bete se banne se pehle tut jayega kya... kaisi dikat hai ki na main shivu ka sath de pa raha na ak ka.. na woh mere pass aa pa rahi..

after some time..

ak-baby main dinner banau apko bhuk lagi hogi na main aati hu.. stood to him...

sh-main apke sath jauga.. nhi toh aap phir dost ke sath bat karoge aur woh apko mere liye aur bhadka denge..

ak-shivu.. gussa thik h par aap esse mat bolo.. kisi ke liye wrong word use karna nhi sikhaya na... woh apke papp..

sh- kya..

ak-nothing.. chalo..she went in kitchen shivu following to her..

kaise jau nk ke pass woh kitna sad honge.. kaisi condition hai yeh... nk came outside.. ak passed smile to sees to nk..

nk-prrit.. ak gave isara to nk that dont say anything...

he sat on table...

sh-amma mujhe yaha khana nhi khana hum dono andar khayege bas.. agar aap mujhe pyar karte ho toh aap mere khaoge but mere room main.. ak sees to nk..

nk-goo.. in isara..

ak had tears..

a-sryy nk with terry eyes..

nk-goo in isara.. ak took dinner nd went in room..

nk was in his room..

ak-are baby main toh water lai hi nhi ek minute..

sh-aap dost se miloge.. with terry eyes..

ak-apko apni amma pe trust nhi hai.. main bas pani leke aaugi haa.. i want hot water.. jau..

sh-turant aana mujhe dar lagta hai..

ak-hmm.. she went in kitchen nd put chapati nd veg on plate. took it on table in hull..

she heat to water nd came on room..

sh-aap kilao na amma bhut din ho gye khai nhi..

ak-main kilati hu ruko.. put cell on table nd made a video...

nk was upset soo much suddenly he got a msg... it was a video msg..

he played to video..

ak-nk thoda sa time leke tumhe msg kiya.. ghar ek hai dil bhi ek hai. par kya kare aamne samne bat nhi ho sakti.. tum bade ho shivu ke papa ho aaj mera farz maa ka jayada hai.. i m sry main sayad utni aachi patni ban nhi pai par hame apne bache ko ek aacha insan banana hoga.. main yakin dilati hu shivu ko apne papa ke dard ka ehsas hoga.. par yeh duri nhi god ka exam samaj lo.. sukh free main milte ahi par sadness valuable hota hai jisse hame mithana hoga nk.. sayad shivu abhi uthna samjhadar nhi h par tum ho.. agar rat ko na aa pau na tumhare pass toh bhi tumhe himat rakhni hogi kyoki yeh dard hi hamara pyar hai.. dikhana hoga..

aur jab hum ladlenge isse toh hum ek honge na.. maine tumhare liye dinner rakha hai table pe plz eat karo.. main ek pic bhej rahi tumhare ansh ki jo jald tumhara hoga really nk.. i loveeu..

nk went in hull sees plate.. he starts eating.. make video nd send to ak..

ak was sleeping to shivu..

ak sees it to put earphone..

nk-thankuuu aap aaj ek aachi maa ke sath ek aachi patni bhi ban gayi.. ak tumhara samjhana hi mere liye tumhare pass rehne ke barabar hain.. main bas yahi kahuga ki tum mere bache ka khyal rakhna aur usse mana lena main usse bhut pyar karta hu ak.. uski nafarat nhi pyar dekhna hai aur papa word sunna hai..

after that ak got sleep nk too sleep in other room..

morning ak went in nks room.. he was sleeping peacefully... ak kissed on his forehead.. nk wokeup nd sees to ak..

nk-ak he had tears.. pritu thik hain..

ak-r u fine.. sry hug to him..

nk-tum sry kyo bol rahi ho.. galti meri hai na maine call kyo nhi uthaya mujhe shivu ki care karni chahiye thi.. dil main base pyar ko show karna bhut jaruri hain jaise tumhe kiya but sayad apne bache ko nhi kar paya..

ak-yeh duri bardast hi nhi hui.. pehli bar tumse dur hui pass rehke bhi.. kitni bechain ho gai thi main..

nk-ak mera dil aa gya tumpe.. esse tumne mujhe aur pritu dono ko samala.. i love uuu... bas mujhe mere bete se mila do.. plzz..

ak-miloge nk maine socha hai kuch. woh tumse nafrat toh nhi karega... than shivu was shouting..

ak-mujhe jana hoga.. can i go..

nk-i need u ak... ak kissed to him on cheeks...

ak-main aaugi par shivu ke sath.. he will say sry.. hmm.. she went.. kapde nikale h tumhare breakfast bhi bana diya plz kha lena.. she went in shivus room..

sh-amma kaha ho aap..

ak-main yahi hu baby..

sh-aap kaha gai thi..

ak-apki dress lene see.. aao nahai nahai kar lo... she took to him..

dey were taking bath..

ak-aacha shivu apke dost bhi aaye the na.. camp main..

sh-haa..

ak-kya kya kiya waha..

sh-maine na drawing sikhi aur u know hum gume bhi aur na maine na new new game bhi sikhi..

ak-shivu itnii masti main toh bor ho gai..

sh-hihi.. aap bor ho gai..

ak-haa u know main itna wait kar rahi thi apka.. kab aaoge u know call bhi kari but lagi nhi..

sh-really..

ak-haa... kitna miss kiya.. aacha apke dost ko kisne laya.. means kon kon aaya tha..

sh-uske mom dad..

ak-oohhh.. mom dad aacha dad ka meaning kya hota hai..

sh-dad means thinking means.. woh hmm jiske sath hum keli kare bat bataye football kele.. easly bat kare like mere doost..

stooped..

ak-passed smile.. thinking shivu dil se nk ko pyar karta hain par sayad is pyar ka usse ehsas nhi hai.. par main realize karwaugi usse..

ak-beta aaj aap school ke bad mere sath gumi chaloge..

sh-really.. yaieee... masttt maja aayega..

ak-aap aur main bas.. haa woh nk ko nhi leke jayege hum..

sh-he was shocked..

ak-i dont like him.. u were ryt.. bad hain nk.. chii hum dono alone gumi karege aur nk ko kahi nhi leke jayege.. unhone apke liye gold chain lai mere liye bhi maine unse kaha kyo laya.. bola care haa.. but woh bhadka rahe mujhe hena..

aur to aur u know ek bar jab mujhe apki fee deni thi na unhone bonus diya meri work pe uff so irritating na..

sara din u know shivu yeh kiya shivu woh kiya.. dikhawa karta hain bas..

main aati hu haa unko nhi leke jayege haan..

sh-yeh amma unse phir angry angry ho gai kya..

he took bat ak was getting ready to shivu..

ak-shivu maine na char sandwich banai hain bas nd laugh.. pata hain nk ko nhi dungi. hena aacha kiya na..

sh-haa but confused..

ak-are yr.. u know sab pati bolte hai kitchen ka kam karo bas meri man thi office aane ki par nk ne roka bhi nhi.. dono jagah work karo uff..

aur to aur apni family ke pass tumhe leke gye.. uff..

bad boy.. hum unse bat bilkul nhi karege hmm aao breakfast karne..

sh-bag leke aata hu..

yeh amma itni hate kar rahi unse.. woh bure haina..

confused.

now nk sat on table..

ak-shivu aa gya.. thoda natak karo na..

nk-ak..

ak-yeh kya hai nk.. sara time mujhe tang mat karo..

sh-kya hua..

ak-kuch nhi beta... yeh mujhe tang kar rahe.. bol rahe main ghar chodke chala jata hu agar shivu mujhe galt samaj raha..

sh-kyaaa..

nk-haa aapne kalrat ko bola na.. i m bad one..

sh-woh main angry tha..

ak-kyo mere bete ki bat ki value nhi kya.. tumhe jo karna hai karo nk.. i hate u oki we both hate u.. hena shivu..

sh-aap chila kyo rahi..

ak-yeh isilayak hain hena..

sh-chilao mat.. chale kya school...

he took sandwich nd was going..

ak gave thumbs up to nk.. he passed smile..

ak dropped to shivu..

ak-hum akle jayege oki..

sh-amma woh ghar chodke chale jayege kya..

ak-apko tension ho rahi kya..

sh-nhi bas yuhiii..

ak-jaye toh kya chale jaye he is bad na..

sh-hmmmnnn...

he went in school..

now nk was working in office.. he was sad vry much.. remind all those moments..

nk-kitne pass the na hum dono aaj kitni duri ho gai.. mera beta mera khoon kitni nafarat kar raha mujhse..

than ak came der with lunch box..

nk-ak.. runned nd hug to her.. starts crying.. main weak pad raha.. jabse shivu aaya hai na usne mujhe kuch bola na bat ki.. yeh duri khatam hogi bhi nhi agar usne keh diya go tih kya main chala jauga..

ak-nk woh hamara beta hai.. na tum itne hard ho na main toh hamara bacha itna hard kaise ho sakta hai..

nk-ak tumhari bat sunke tasali milti hain mujhe..

ak-bhook lagi hain na.. breakfast bhi nhi kara pai aur dinner bhi.. lunch toh kara du..

sat to nk on chair.. arrange lunch on table.. nk was admiring to ak.. held her hand..

ak-kya hua..

nk-i love u ak.. log kehte hai patni woh sathi hai jo bina soche hamari kitni care karti hai.. aaj dekh bhi liya.. i m soo lucky ki tum mujhe mili.. ak feed to nk..

ak-bat mat banao.. sry aaj chilai na bina matlab ke..

nk-apne bache ke liye aur dat bhi khani pade na toh bhi karuga.

ak-aacha.. datu aur.. slap to him sweetly..

nk-ek aur..

ak-nk.. hug to him..

nk-ak sab thik hoga na.. feed to her..

ak-hope soo nk.. kosish karna hamara kam hai par dena ya nhi god ke.. main shivu ko samjhaugi puri tarah..

more part coming soon...

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

#286

in school shivu was sat in chair than yash came..

ya-kya hua.. kya soch raha..

sh-kuch nhi.. mujhe confusion ho rahi bhut.. tumhare mama kaise hai aache hai ya bure..

ya-woh toh tere dost hai na.. woh bhut aache hai meri maa kehti hai mama g kisi ka bura kar hi nhi sakte par tu kyo puch raha..

sh-esse hi.. kya tumhari mamma tumse jayada pyar karti hai ya tumhare papa se..

ya-iska kya matlb hota hai. meri mamma mujhe bhut pyar karti hai aur mere papa usse bhi jayada.. woh dono mujhe bhut pyar karte hai aur ek dusare ko bhi..

sh-tujhe jalan nhi hoti agar teri mamma ko koi jayada pyar kare..

ya-jalan kyo hogi haan. meri jagah meri hai aur meri maa mere papa ki patni hai unko ko bhi papa ki love mil rahi na.. shivu was confused more high... now its time for leaving.. shivu was waiting for ak.. she took to shivu on auto...

ak-see aaj maine nk ki car bhi nhi lai.. woh jaye to jaye hame kya hena..

sh-amma main bhut confused hu..

ak-kyo..

sh-yash kehta h uski mamma ko woh aur uske papa dono pyar karte hai.. mujhe dost aache lagte hai but phir bhi mujhe bhut bad lagta hai jab woh apko hug karte hai.. mujhe bhut chid aati hai main chah ke bhi..

ak-khud ko rok nhi pata hu hena... beta aaj main tumhe us rishte ke ehsas dilaugi jo tumhe nhi pata... aao. stooped d auto..

shivu was confused... ak sat to shivu on chair...

ak-beta apke dost pehle mere dost the.. hum sath main clg main padte the..

shivu was shocked..

sh-kya.

ak-haa beta woh mere sabse best frd the itne ki main unse duniya main sabse jayada pyar karne lag gai.. apko pata hain mere abba ne kabhi mujhe pyar nhi kiya.. par nk ne mujhe itna pyar kiya jitna kisi ne nhi kiya.. amma abba ek dusare se bhut pyar karte hain.. bache unka ansh hote hain...

shivu apki amma ko sabne sadness di kisi ne sath nhi diya par apke dost ne mujhe bhut pyar kiya beta.. phir main kho gai jab apke meri stomach main the..

sh-aap kho gai..

ak-haa beta mujhe nhi pata tha ki nk mujhe kojega meri fault thi ki maine unko tumse dur rakha beta woh tumhare abba hain beta..

sh-kya.. mere abba.. par aajtak apne kyo nhi batai..

ak-aap apne dost main sirf ek dost hi kojte the na socho main kya batati kal apne itna gussa kiya unka dil tut gaya beta.. jab aap unse pehli bar mile unko pata bhi nhi tha ki aap unki baby ho phir bhi unhone apse kitna pyar kiya aur jab main unko mili woh kitne happy hue.. aap mante ho na woh apko itne sweet lage ki aapne apni amma se ladke mujhe unki patni banaya.. beta aap hum dono ke bich ki kadi ho dhaga ho jo hum dono ko bhand ke rakhta hain..

jo blood apki hai woh apke abba ki hai toh woh apko apki amna se dur kyo karege.. haan.. aao.. she took to shivu inside hospital..

shivu was confused... one woman was getting pain due to labor pain..

ak-beta woh ek amma hai jab aap meri stomach main the na esse hi pain hui thi mujhe batao jab koi itni pain se kisi ko duniya main layega woh apne baby se pyar nhi karega.. than his hubby grabbed to her nd starts crying..

ak-woh us baby ki abba hai dekho kaise ro rahi.. nk bhi roya ki usne apni baby ke is moment ko miss kiya.. par pata hai nk ne mujhpe gussa nhi ki pyar ki. usne kaha woh shivu ko bhut pyar karege essi bond hoti hai ek abba aur ek bete main.. shivu had tears..

aao... ak took to shivu inside room.. than one mother was playing with small baby with her hubby..

ak-pata hai aap itne hi chotu se the jab meri god main aaye.. sab bhool gai apki ek smile mere liye khana thi jisse mera pet bhar gaya.. aur woh dekho.. uske abba jab usse lete na toh duniya ki khushi ruk jati.. amma abba ke lite apna baby essa hi hota hain.. haina..

than shivu sees to one men nd boy..

ak-beta aap itne sweet ho kisi ko pain nhi dete.. aap soch kaise sakte ho ki apki amma apko pyar nhi karegi.. beta nk aur main apse itna pyar karte hai jitna koi nhi karta.. aap jab paper sign karte ho apki sir name abba ki hoti hai.. apki need abba puri karte hai.. beta abba se ek baby ki woh rista hain jo sayad apki mere sath bhi nhi hoti.. beta nk bhut aache hai.. agar aap unse pyar nhi le sakte gussa bhi mat karo..

nk ne apko kitne riste diye dada g dadi nana papa.. sab baby ko dekhte ho na apne papa ke sath kelte

hai toh apko need rehti thi na apne abba ki.. aaj apko pata hai apke abba nk hi hai..

unke sath play karo unko sadness mat do.. aap mante ho na woh bhut aache hain.. beta apne dil ki bat mano hamesha kisi ko yeh mat kaho ki woh bura hain.. agar apki amma ko itni sadness ke bad koi pyar de toh aapka angry hona sachi hain kya..

sh-no..

ak-aap sad hote ho na mujhe sad dekh ke..

sh-hmm..

ak-than jab mujhe koi pyar kare toh apko happy hona chahiye na.. hamra family papa bina aadura hain mante ho na.. baby agar aap nk ko apnaoge na toh woh hum dono ko aur pass kar denge.. beta aaj jo hui woh hamari galti thi nk ki nhi woh bhut work karte hai na.. so unka call miss ho gya.. aapne toh mujhe unse milaya unke purane best frd se toh woh hum dono ko apg kyo karege haa..

woh toh apko txx bolne ke liye gold chain laye see.. shivu sees pic..

sh-apki aur unki..

ak-see.. showed her chain..

sh-dost ne di..

ak-haa beta hum tino ki.. hum tino ek kadi se jude hain. beta amma abba apne bache ko aage badate hai unko dur nhi karte samjho aap beta.. shivu hug to ak..

sh-mujhse fault ho gai.. mujhe abba ka meaning nhi pata par jo apne bola woh sachi hain..

main dost se bat karuga aur sry bhi boluga...

ak-thats like a gud boy i really love u beta...

sh-amma main papa ki realtion nhi janta but try karuga ki dost se aachese papa ka realtion banau..

ak-jeko jeko mat banna.. we really love u.. aap hum dono ka ansh ho blood ho.. aap ek bete ho mere bhi nk ke bhi dono ko barabar ka man saman ho hmm...

dey reached house.. nk was upset.. he was watching pic of shivu..

nk-i love u beta apki amma ko dur kyo karuga aap mere bhi bacho ho i really love u... sees to ak nd shivu on pic..

we also love u.. says ak nd shivu..

nk turned nd sees to both..

sh-i love u papa... nk was shocked nd soo soo happy.. a tears rolling in his eyes ak starts crying..

nk-pa.. kya kaha..

sh-papa..

nk-phir kehna yakin nhi ho raha say again..

sh-papa... nk hug to him nd starts kissing to him..

nk-i love u i love u i really love u aap mere bete ho starts crying.. aap bache ho aap akk.. thankuu beta main na apse itna pyar karta hu jitna apki amma bhi nhi karti hogi main na apko keli karauga apko gumi le jauga aur aap hi apni amma ko hug karna kissy bhi hmm..

sh-aur aap kya karoge.. meri amma ki love meri side wali hogi apke side ki love kon dega..

nk-main karuga..

sh-y asking me haa.. main apni hisse ki pyar lunga aur dunga bhi.. nk hug to him..

nk-i m sry beta..

sh-koi bat nhi dosttt.. uiii papa.. ak laugh nk too..

nk-papa nhi nikal raha..

sh-nhi ajib lag raha..

nk-aap mujhe dost hi bolo main apka dost hi hu haa jab apke dil se voice aayegi na toh khud papa nikal jayega...

sh-really dost..

nk-hmn really..

ak-mujhe bhook lagi hai.. nk sees to shivu..

nk-dostt aaj main kilauga..

sh-main bhi.. yaiee clapped with each..

dono dono ki hisse ka..

ak-na baba itnaaa saraaa..

nk-haaa.. shivu apki amma hug nhi kar rahi.. shivu called to ak.. she hug to nk nd shivu..

sh-i love u too both of uuu😃..

end..

precap-shivu competition nk helped him nd he says papa from heart ak is so emotional...

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 7 years ago

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: nakshkidiwani

da-ab bhik mangega kya un loga se haa.. woh bechare sab chai pine waste dud rakhe honge aur tu.. ja lele aur pile par manne na kahiye pin waste bas🤣
ak heard it nd broke completely. she starts crying..
ak-dada g apne mere ghar ki chai pine se mana kar diya🤣

dj - ari na bahu manne thari na padosi k ghar ki chai pine se mana kiya
then ak goes
dj to rb - ab tu bata tu manne chai kaise pilayega 😡
rb - dadda ji ham bahu k ghar samdhi ji se milne vaste chalte h phir to vo hame chai jarur puchenge hame mangna bhi nahi padega😃
dj - ye to chokho idea hai.. chal chalte hai
they enter in ms

Edited by Pragati-naksh - 7 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
dj - ari na bahu manne thari na padosi k ghar ki chai pine se mana kiya
then ak goes
dj to rb - ab tu bata tu manne chai kaise pilayega 😡
rb - dadda ji ham bahu k ghar samdhi ji se milne vaste chalte h phir to vo hame chai jarur puchenge hame mangna bhi nahi padega😃
dj - ye to chokho idea hai.. chal chalte hai
they enter in ms

vis sees to rb nd dj..

vis-qre subah subah aap log yaha.. aaiye na baithiye.. dey sat on sofa.. rj sees to both nd was shocked..

vis-kaise aana hua..

rb-bqs subah walk pe nikle se toh chai..

dj hit to him from side..

dj-toh chai pani kiye bina socha thoda gum le toh thara ghar dikha aa gye hal chal lene..

vis-yeh toh bhut aacha hua... are ak ki maaa chai pani ka itjam karo she was shocked..

rj-ggg woh.. she went in kitchen..

choti gajab karte hain yeh bhi aaj toh dud aaya hi nhi chai kaise banau 🤣

rb-meri chai aane wali hain bas with brighting face 🤣

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#289

with every part our expectations on u gets incrreasing...

but must say a cute realisation part it was...

ur idea of going to hospital and explaining the meaning and love of a mom dad is 👍🏼

very nice part it was...

dont think my comment is short but u have written only one point that is relaisation ..

isiliye i cant explain more than feeling it...

ab se write more of cute cute scenes...

waiting for real family bonding ahead...

Do update soon next part...

it was really very difficult to juggle between two relations u showed very neatly,,,,'

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
with every part our expectations on u gets incrreasing...
but must say a cute realisation part it was...
ur idea of going to hospital and explaining the meaning and love of a mom dad is 👍🏼
very nice part it was...
dont think my comment is short but u have written only one point that is relaisation ..
isiliye i cant explain more than feeling it...
ab se write more of cute cute scenes...
waiting for real family bonding ahead...
Do update soon next part...
it was really very difficult to juggle between two relations u showed very neatly,,,,'

i m thinking only one thing.. which is ur feeling my heart is just seeing this comment like this ..

awww just thinking ki u felt it aur mera write karna sab safal ho gya..

main yahi sochi only if my frds will read thus part only their heart passed smile 😃.. oo god ur comments just loved it.. words nhi teri feeling ki value bhut more hain meri life main..

thanku so much. thanku is less vry less...

thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally 😳i will def try to put this tipe tochy scenes i will do update soon next part ⭐️

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