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Posted: 8 years ago

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part-30

dey returned house... ak arranged dinner from outside.. she sat table.. shivu came nk too..

ak-aa jao.. maine dinner arrange ki hai... hug to shivu.. yeh mere bache ke liye jo apni amma se itna pyar hain..

sh-aap itne aache ho koi bhi apko khubbb pyar karega... kissed to ak.. aacha is cute cute amma ka bdy hain parso..

nk-hmm.. toh kya hua.. pinched to shivu..

sh-haa nothing bas esse hi..

nk-aao hum dinner kar le hmm..

ak was shocked.. thinking.. mera bdy aa raha aur nk shivu ko koi chinta nhi.. shivu nd nk were giggling...

nk-are ak aao na kha lo.. hmmm.. now ak starts eating..

ak-aacha shivu kya gift doge mujhe is bar..

sh-khub sariii love loge na aappp..

nk-main bhi itniii sari love.. are shivu mera ho gaya.. aao na thoda kuch work hain..

ak-jao phir main aati hu yeh sab utha ke... than shivu nk went in room..

nk-sshhh amma na sun le baby hum kuch plan karte hain na ak ke bdy pe..

sh-outing jaye..

nk-sshh kuch aacha dif sa..

sh-hum na unko dress gift karde.. unko na hum brush gift kar dete hain unka kharab ho gya hai..

nk-sshh pqgal no joke oki.. shivu laugh hihi.. hum kuch aacha sa karege haa apko mera sath dena hoga..

sh-oki mere papa dost.. kissed to him... than ak came nd sees to both..

ak-thinking haa yeh dono mere bdy ke liye soch rahe honge i know.. kya kichari pak rahi mere pati aur bete ke bich..

nk-kuch nhi hum toh khane ki..

sh-school ki in same tone..

nk shivu sees to each nd gave angry look..

ak-aacha aacha aap dono school main khanne pe kya le jana hai yeh bat kar rahe haa..

nk shivu both said - haa.. kaise pata..

ak-ek mera dil hain dusara meri jan pata kaise nhi chalega.. so jate hai late ho rahi na..

sh-i m getting nini... ak was sleeping to shivu he got sleep.. nk came out from bathroom.. ak sees nd passed smile..

hug to nk from back..

ak-i love uuu.. kya decided kiya mere bdy pe..

nk-konsa bdy kaisa surprise..

ak-bano mat oki.. i know papa beta milke kuch toh plan kiya hain satth main..

nk-oyee nothing we did.. surprise bata do surprise nhi rehta.. ak kissed to him on cheeks..

ak-bata do i cant wait.. plll plzzz..

nk-plzzz in puppy voice.. no ways wait nd watch picked a kiss on her lips... i loveee uuu.. so lo oki kal ki rat bhut pyari rat hogi hm hmm...

ak-catttyyy..

nk-love u..

ak-huh... now dey slept.. nk nd shivu got ready ak too ready for office... dey finished breakfast.. now nk drooped to shivu.. ak nk went in office...

ak-aaj bhut kam hai mujhe..

nk-ak aaj kuch kehna hain.

ak-kya..

nk-promise ki tum woh karogi..

ak-promise lene ki jarurat hai def karugi.. bolo toh..

nk-ak i planned rat ko alone main tumhe surprise dunga.. sach..

ak-really hug to him.. i love uu.. par shivu..

nk-mera bhi beta hai ak woh... maine uska bhi injtam kiya hain bas promise karo rat ko bas tum mujhe apna thoda time dogi phir kal hum apne bete ke sath tumhara bdy manyege.. plz main wait karuga.

ak-par mujhe jana kaha hai..

nk-pata chal jayega madam.. bas time ko dekho.. hm.. ak hug to nk... i love u bas haa ab main tumhara boss hu oki..

ak-oki sir g... dey went in office. ak was doing her work.. suddenly nk send to her file... she opened it..

ak-sees a latter... do pyar ke word kitne mithe hote hain esse hi rasbhara hain mera pyar aaogi mere pass toh thoda sa chakne ko milyega.. nkk.. laugh.. hmm means lunch in ur cabin... she went in nks cabin.. may i come in sir.. sees to room.. it was decorated with bloons...

nk-no sir. i m ur hubby oki.. aa jao.. nk throwing rose on ak.

ak-bas bas.. nk held to her by waist.. koi dekh lega..

nk-koi nhi aayega.. bas kuch hi pal phir main tumhare sath tumhara bdy manuga tumhe pata bhi nhi kitna wait kiya maine.. is pal ke liye...

ak-bhook lagi hain khana.. nk arrange lunch for both...nk sat to ak on his lap..

ak-nk..

nk-i warn to everyone kuch nhi hoga.. dey starts eating..

ak-is bar bhut khushi wala bdy manugi sach nk... now dey finished lunch... nk felt naughtiness.. he starts pinching to ak.. aahh nkk mujhe gudgudi ho rahi chodo..

nk-thodi der bas thodi der..

suddenly priti cqme nd sees to both nk skipped to ak..

pr-ohh sry..

nk-i sqid to all dont come but..

ak-nkk.. plz.. she went.. priti too..

pr-outside.. wawww yr nakku is soo romantic na..

ak-oyee woh mere nakku hai..

pr-jalan ho rahi kya..

ak-woh bas.. aacha nhi lagta nd went priti laugh..

pr-how sweet couple.. in shivus school he was thinking about gift..

sh-kya du bata na yash..

ya-mqin kya batu tu unhe na apne hath se ek photo frame bana ke dede.. u know outside uncle na framing karke dete hai..

sh-uiii but paise kaha se lau..

ya-simple tu paise jama karta hain na apni saving kain se yahi gift apne amma ko dede..

sh-haa gud idea main unse bhut sara love karta hu aur yahi gift dunga thanku yr chal na hum un uncle se bat karege ki woh mujhe photo frame bana ke de...

now in evening ak nk took to shivu.. he was jumping in back seat..

nk-kya bat hain aap bhut happy happy ho..

sh-haa aaj mqin bhut happy hu..nk stooped d car..

nk-lo apka ghar aa gaya..

ak-hmm bas itni mat haso apki teeth dikh rahe aao...

sh-yuhuuu.. dey entered in house nd sees to nanu mohit nd yash.

ak-akka aap..

na-haa main.. kaisi ho..

ak-aachi hu..

sh-yaieee.. maja aaya bhuttt... yash tu yahi rahega..

na-woh hum na yash se milne aaye the socha ek din tumhare bdy pe bhi wish kardenge..

yas-tu chal na mere sath aaj hum sath sath rahege... phir kal mami ka bdy maneyege.. yash in shivus ear..

maine na papa se bat ki hai woh na hamari photo frame banwa denge..

sh-really. amma mujhe jana hain.. plz..

nk - haa tum jao..

ak-par..

mo-dont worry bhabhi kuch nhi karege.. aur haa nk tu apna plan aachese enjoy karna hmm..

nk-haa..

ak-thik hai..

sh-yaieee... main aata hu beg leke..

ak-main chai bana ke lati hu..

after that dey took tea...

mohit nanu went..

ak-nk main aati hu fresh hoke.. she went in bathroom..

came outside... searching to nk..

nk kaha ho nk.. sees on bed one red coloured pretty saree..

ak-are yeh toh ek latter hain.. pyari si hasi hain pyari si muskan pani ke upar atki hain meri nanhi si jan..

passed smile i guess water somthing kuch.. she got ready.. she wore that saree nd did makeup with open hair..

ak called to nk but didnt take..

batayega bhi nhi kaha hai laugh.

she went outside.. sees a car..

ooh sir g ne car bheji hain..

ak sat in car... nk sir ne bheji hain..

driveer-g maam kaha hain..

ak-mujhe nhi pata.. sees a latter..

pyara sa rasta hai sidde chalte jana hai timtim timtim tare hai charo or sea ka najara hain... she passed smile..

siddhe chalo... dey went in their way..

taro na najara hai sees in sky.. haa us way main chalo..suddenly ak sees a boat..

ak-waawww it is so beautiful... ak came outside.. thand..

suddenly she sees that one girl came nd taking to her.

gi-aaiye maam... she took in boat to ak... it was a separate boat.. girl skipped to ak on hull..

it was a open hull she can see water all over it.. suddenly power went..

nk... than one spotlight went on nk.. he was coming close of ak.. went near of ak sat in his knees..

nk-jab dur the duri ka ehsas tha par dur rehke bhi dil milte rahe..

pass aaye saso se sase takrai aur ab tum dhakan banke mere dil main samai.

pyar bhara sath hai jingai main tum ho sab kuch hain..

i really love.. 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1..

happy happy happy bdyyy ak...

ak-with happy tears than.. suddenly power came.. she sees all over glowing lights...

music was playing happy bdy ak it was saying.

it was like dreamy..

ak-thankuu thankuu so much.. it means alottt nk.. i really love u thanku.. nk gave roaes to ak.. nd wiped her tears...

nk-hum is khushi main akle samil nhi honge wait. nk took table nd switch on lappy.. ak sees all ss family.. dey were put cap nd saying all happy bdy to u happy bdy dear ak.. all dj bm rashmi gy3..

gy-khub jiti reh..

dj-thari lambi umar ho..

ak-thankuu.. nkkk.. she starts crying..

bm-ro kahe rahi munna chup kara..

nk-bas grabbed to her..

ak-nk khushi toh sochi thi pyar bhi par tumne mujhe sab de diya sab kuchhh.. tum bhut aache ho.

nk-kyoki tum itni aachi ho... all ss cut cake..

ras-bhabhi aapka cake hai yeh..

ak-tum kha lo mere side se..

sabko bhut bhut txxx ab jaldi se sab aao mujhse milne..

gy-aayege beta tu apna dhayan rakh tera gift bhut bhut sara pyar..

nk cut d lappy. he gave to her his cell..

nk-bat karo.

ak-hlooo..

thankuu abba.. aap kaise ho i m gud haa main celebrate kar rahi nk ke sath i m soo happy g... she cut to cell phone..

nk-bas yahi khushi dekhni thi tumhare face pe tum jab hasti ho bhut sundar lagti ho.. ak was admiring to nk...

a-starts kissing to nk on face.

nk-bas itna aa raha..

ak-bhut bhut bhutt.. ak hardly kissed to nk on cheeks nd gave mark..

nk-kiss karna hi tha toh lipe pe karti..

ak-aacha sweet sweet chahiye mujhe aur khush karo main tumhe bhut khush kar dungi.

nk-aao... he said ak in loud voice..

ak-kya kar rahe..

nk-magic... suddenly one girl came nd took cake... she went..

ak-yeh kon thi..

nk-mujhe kya pata..

ak-yaha sirf girls hi hai kya..

nk-bhut jalan ho rahi kyo..

ak-huh...

nk-cake cut karo... she starts cutting cake..

happy bdy to u happy bdy to u happy bdy dear ak.. happy bdy to uuu..

ak feed to nk.. shivu ko bhi samil hona chahoye tha i know but kya karta woh so gya..

ak-abhi mera bdy chalu hua hai mera beta har bar mujhe kuch new new deta aaj tum sath ho sab pura ho gya.. mera pura pariwar hain i love u i m soo happy hug to nk..

aaj jo bologe tumhe dungi nk.. tumne mujhe pura liya hain..

nk-took to ak in his hand nd took to her in room..

dance karogi..

ak-oki.. nk starts music... dey were seeing in each other eyes.. nk swlly swlly went close of ak..

kissed on her nack..

nk-i love u.. ak held to nk by his shoulder nd hug to nk..

ak tumahara gift meri body main hain..

ak-body pe.. kya hain...

nk-jiska nam mere dil pe likha hai maine ussr sach main hamesha ke liye apne dil pe likhwa liya hai..

ak broke hug nd was shocked..

ak-nkk tum she starts unbuttoned his shirt nd throwed it... sees on nks chest..

nk wrote aks name it was a permanent tettu..

ak had tears..

a-nk.. in shout voice. itna dard kisne kaha tha sehne ke liye.. i dont like it.. turned..

nk aaj tumne khud ko nhi mujhe dard kitna pain hua hoga.. i hate u i hate u..

nk-ak kehte hai yeh hamare sath hamare god ke pass jata hai marne ke bad bhi.. maine tumhara nam hamesha ke liye amar kar diya thaki marke bhi mithe nhi..

ak turned nd kissed to him on lips..

nk was silent..

ak-bhut bolte ho thoda chup bhi rehna chahiye start kissing on his chest. nk start feeling it..

nk-ak..

ak-i lovee u it is sooo big gift everrr...

nk-copped her face with his hand..

nooo.. big gift hamara shivu hai hamari pyar ki nisani pyari si... jo dard tumne saha hoga shivu ko is duniya main lane ke liye yeh dard toh mamuli sa hain na..

a-hmm.. nooded yes... once again thanku..

nk-happy bdy to u... pushed to ak on bed nd went on top of her...

ak pulled near of her to nk..

swlly swlly he put his lips on ak nd start kissing to her..

ak was pulling to nk... nd starts shacking his lips sweetly.. nk was enjoying every touch of ak. but today she was soo happy with nk..

so she waana give so much pleasure to nk..

nk was enjoying nd touching her hot breath.. ak opened her mouth nd nk suck her lower lipe..

nk gave his toungue in aks mouth nd touch d lawa nd grabbed aks toungue..

it was their first french kiss..

nk moves vry close of ak nd she starts moaning soo much..

after that nk moves his lips on her nack nd starts rubbing nd shacking it so much..

he throwed to pallu also.

nd kissing on her chest nd was touching her bare body..

after sometimes dey change their position..

nd ak wss madly kissing to nk... nd borrowing her nails on his chest also..

it was pleasure full nyt for both in last ak kissed to nk softly on lips..

nk-aaj ki rat mujhe jagte rehna hain sona nhi tumhari baho main..

a-nk tumhari baho main hi sukun milta hai i really love u koi kami nhi life main..

nk - ak main hamesha try karuga ki tumhe har khushi du..

ak-nk tumahara trust hi sab hain mere liye..

nk tight hug to her..

nk-ak walk pe chale..

ak-itni rat ko..

nk-hmm plz..

ak-okiii...

more parts coming soon

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

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naksh were in road .. dey were walking in one sowl..

ak-khabhi khabhi sochti hu nk ki yeh kaisa ehsas hain jo don logo ko ek kar deta hai hain na...

nk-hmm jo log ek dusare se anjan hai woh ek dusare ki dhadkan ban jate hain.

ak-par un logo kya nk essi kitni ladki hongi jo maa ban jati hogi aur unko ladke raste par chod dete honge. unki help karne wala koi nhi. koi suicide kar leti hogi toh koi pagal ho jati hogi. kisi ka rap ho jata hain.. starts crying.. unki help karne wala is duniya main koi nhi..

nk-muahh.. bas kissed on her forehead.. hum kisi ki paresani ko kam toh nhi kar sakte hain na..

ak-par bat toh sakte hain na.. nk maine hamesha se socha tha ki main unki puri madad karugi jinko kisi chiz ki jarurat hain...

nk-bas ak... dard ko dard hi kam sakta hain na... basss... hmm..

dey were walking..

ak-tumhara support hain toh main kuch bhi kar sakti hu nk.. kuch bhi.. aaj tumne mujhe bhyt pyara surprise diya i really love u..

nk-love u too.. now in morning naksh were sleeping in their house.. suddenly nk wakeup nd sees to shivu who was waiting for ak..

nk-kya..

sh-shhh yash nanu was also here.. nk too sat.. dey decorated to room fully.. ak swlly swlly opened her eyes nd sees to shivu..

ak-mera baby.. sees to all nd shout aaahhh.

nk-omg eeaise kon chilata hi..

sh-hawww... happy bdy meri sweet amma kissed to her yash too nanu too.

ak-thanku thanku hug to shivu mera baby.. than mohit came..

mo-ab main aa sakta hu andar..

sh-aa jao...

mo-happy happy bdy meri pyari behen.. all gave to her gifts..

sh-amma meri gift kolo na..

nk-haa kholiye na... main bhi dekhuga.. ak opened it nd sees a beautiful pic.. it was nk ak shivu pic.. troffy wali..

ak-wawww baby kitni pyari gift hain main isse apne room main samne lagaugi thaki uth ke daily dekhu..

mo-pqta hain ak iski khas bat kya hain yahi ki shivu ne apni puri saving money se yeh gift liya hain.. naksh fulfill with emotions..

ak-mera bacha.. starts kissing to shivu itna pyar karte ho.. nk main hamesha yeh sochti thi ki bhagwan ne meri life main sukh kyo nhi diya.. jisse pyar kiya usse chin liya.. par sayad godne shivu ko meri jholi main isi liye dala thaki main proudly bolu ki main iski maa hu.. beta apka pyar dekhke aaj bolugi ki main lucky hu jo apke jaisa beta mujhe mila starts crying nk too..

nk-we r soo lucky beta.. kissed to pritu nd sat to him on his lap..

sh-ohoo aap log kitna rote ho.. haske khushi nhi bat sakte kya.. nanu was also crying mohit held to her..

wiped both tears..

ak-aap itne pyare ho yeh khushi ke tears hain...

sh-hum na gumi gumi jayegi oki..

nk-g boss.. aao ready ho jao aaj jisko jo chahiye woh milega full fun mere side se..

sh-yaieee..

yas-yaieee.. now dey got ready nd went in moll... dey were having lunch..

sh-papa mujhe woh toy chahiye..

ak-shivu..

nk-ohoo aao.. he took to shivu.. shivu was taking toy suddenly he sees outside to one kid..

kya hua shivu.. he had tears..

sh-papa kya main isse kisi ko gift kar sakta hu..

nk-hmm bilkul.. shivu took one toy.. nd went outside.. ak sees to shivu...

nk went with shivu..

nk-kya hua beta.. shivu gave toy to kid.. he was poor.. papa main toh aur bhi le lunga par isko iski jarurat hain na toh hame deni chahiye na..

nk-kissed to shivu mera beta.. aap ekdom apni amma jaise ho god bless u..

ak mohit came der..

ak-mera bacha..

nk-mera bhi hain..

mo-oye nk tere jaisa na ho better hain gussa king..

nk-oyee..

ak-mera pati aur beta donooo khubbb ache hain.. are shivu aao na ek bar.. dey went..

mo-kya soch raha..

nk-main kuch soch raha hu mohit mujhe tera sath chahiye bas ak pritu ko surprise dena hain..

mo-kya..

nk passed smile.. now he went for lunch..

ak-nk aao na..

sh-papa hum tino us jhule main jhulna hain..

nk-oki baba chalo... now he went ak grabbed to nk tight nd nk grabbed to shivu.. oye pritu santi se baitho oki..

sh-yuuu..

nk-ak tum dar kyo rahi.. shivu laugh..

sh-darpok amma..

ak-mera fun mat karo oki.. now dey came out..

jan bachi..

nk-darpok..

ak-huh...

nk-aacha shivu aur ak main aap dono ko ek surprise dunga..

sh-wawww.. do na plz plz...

nk-wait na lunch karke gumke phir jayege hmm..

sh-uiii mujhse wait nhi hoga..

ak-nk kitna surprise doge..

nk-bas mujhe thodi si kam hain hm.. phir main aauga aur aap dono ko leke jauga hmm.. aap dono enjoy karo..

sh-main bhi jauga..

ak-haa nk..

mo-are wait karo na... hum aate hain... hmm... now nk mohit leave..

na-are aap log enjoy karo.. dont worry ak.. now ak nanu were waiting in evening nk mohit didnt come..

shivu watching to nk nd hug to him..

sh-papa aap aa gaye..

nk-haa sry bhut wait karna pada na formalities bhut ho gai na... aaiye.. nk covered shivu nd aks eyes..

sh-ohoo main kaha ja raha mujhe kuch nhi dikh raha.. nk took to shivu in his hand..

nk-bahana mat banao oki.. aao..

sh-uiii..

ak-hum kaha ja rahe.. now dey went in car.. nk stooped d car... nd unfold blindfold..

ak shivu sees to some people on table..

pe-happy bdy maam..

ak-g thankuu..

sh-uiii yeh kya hai.. mujhe laga hum kahi aachi jagah jayege..

nanu-yeh kya hai..

nk-aao toh.. ak shivu sat on chair..

nk-ak aaj tumhara bdy hain.. maine tumhe surprise diya par tumhare aur mere bete ke andar ek aacha insan hain.. dono ki dream bhi same hi hain..

aaj main yeh elan karta hu ki hum ek ngo kolege ak was shocked.. nanu clapping..

haa ak sees to ak... main janta hu tum kitni help karana chahti ho if yeh tumhara dream hain toh mera bhi hoga.. iska nam second house hoga aur tum iski malkin hogi.. jo ladki besahara hai uska yaha wlcm hoga tum unhe in courage karna aur aage badne ke liye mortivate karna..

ak-nkkk..

nk-ak... aaj yeh tum yaha ki social worker hogi.. aur i know yeh responsiblity tum aachese nibhaogi..

one men-nk g ka yeh vichar bhut aacha laga hame yaha essi koi socity hain bhi nhi.. jisse galti hogi bhi tab bhi ek naya ghar hoga.. ak g aap kuch kehna chahegi..

ak-main kya bolu sayad logo ka dard mujhse bada hain par i wish nk jaisa husband sabko mile maine kal rat ko bas icha jatai thi ki main yeh work karna chahti hu.. essa pati dekha jo wife ko itna pyar karta par wife ke dream ko apna manne se nhi balki pura karna yeh pehli bar dekha.. nk aap bhut aache hain main bhut pyar karti hu apse i really love u.. i wish sab girl ko apke jaisa jivansayhi mile i m blassed nd so lucky..

sh-wawww papa aap bhut sweet ho... ab main yaha sabki help kar pauga..

nk-haa aur took to shivu in his hand.. mera beta hamara beta ak ko guide karega ki ak ne work finish kiya ya nhi.. beta papa har time amma ke sath nhi rahege toh mujhe promise karo ki tum apni maa ke khane ka pine ka dhayan rakhoge..

sh-promise.. u r best papa in whole world..

uiii..

nk-kya..

sh-cake cut hi nhi kiya...

nk-abhi mangata hu na. nk ordered cake.. sat in table..

ak-hum tino cut karege... dey starts cutting it..

nk-happy bdy dear ak..

sh-amma..

na-bhabhi.. happy bdy to u.. ak feed to nk.. admire to him..

ak-love u..

nk-smile... love u too.. gave paper.. ak just felt so proud..

she feed to all...

end..

precap-opening of ngo nd rashmi marriage fix also..

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 8 years ago

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Again a wonderful part
nk shivu planning for ak bday so cute scene
Office romance is also cute 😳
Then nk's surprise.. so romantic scene
Shivu's gift for ak is heart touching so sweet baby shivu
then their wholeday outing.. ngo surprise scene is also nice.. precap super interesting do wrote soon

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
Again a wonderful part
nk shivu planning for ak bday so cute scene
Office romance is also cute 😳
Then nk's surprise.. so romantic scene
Shivu's gift for ak is heart touching so sweet baby shivu
then their wholeday outing.. ngo surprise scene is also nice.. precap super interesting do wrote soon

i was waiting since long ... aww u liked this part i m soo much happy.. thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally..

😉dont worry esse cute cute surprise milte rahegi hope tu pasand kare..

😃but sadly yeh ff bhi end ho jayega now i will do update soon next part

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#305

dj nd rb went from ss from breaking heart... suddenly dey sees to dj frd..

dj-are ke kar raha..

his frd-haa bas chai pin waste aaya tha woh dekh chai ki dukan.. dj rb runned nd took tea took a deep breath🤣..

in house ak was crying..

gy-kya hua bahu ro kyo rahi.

ak-maa woh maa..

gy-kya hua.

ak-maa main naha rahi thi aur thanki main pani khatam ho gya main naha bhi nhi pai🤣

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#306

part-31

after that naksh were in their room. shivu was in deep sleep..

ak hug to nk..

ak-i love u..

nk-smile bhut pyar aa raha mujhpe..

ak-nk tumne mujhe aur mere bete ko bhut pass la diya hain.. shivu kitna sochta hain aaj pata chala ki woh bhi mere jaise banna chahta hain... tum bhut aache hubby ho..

nk-par idea toh tumhara hi tha na.. tumhe dekh ke hi mujhe laga ki tumhe ek ngo main kam karnq chahiye. ak kitne log ka bhala hoga na..

ak-essa lag raha jaise mera dream pura ho gaya... nk i promise main isse aur patni dono ke farz ko nibhaugi aachese..

nk-g dekh lunga soch lo bhut tanne milege agar time nhi diya mujhe toh..

ak-g boss milega na dont worry.. nk eyes close karo na..

nk-are kyo lagta hain aaj meri ijat pe hamla hone wala hain..

ak-bhala ek ladki kya kar legi haa..

nk-aacha ladki haa.. he closed his eyes... ak was infront of nk..

ak-ab kolo..

nk-hmm..he sees that ak made tattoo on her hand... nks name tattoo.. ak wat is this..

ak-jqb tum gye the na moll main banwaya.. kaisa hain.. tum dard seh sakte ho toh main nhi seh sakti kya..

nk-but ak iski kya jarurat thi.. ak put finger on his lips.. pyar ko aage badate hain kyo kya word use nhi karte hmm...

nk hug to ak..

nk-oki boss i love u tooo... hug to ak.. in morning ak was getting ready to shivu..

sh-kissed to ak..

ak-wat happened..

sh-amma ngo kab banegi..

ak-beta papa se pucho.. abhi toh jamin koj rahe na woh milegi tab chalu hogi..

sh-amma mujhe na papa ko kuch gift deni hain.. unhone kitni sweet gift di na..

ak-haa beta apke pass koi plan hain..

sh-laugh.. haa.. told to ak...

after that nk got ready nd came in hull..

nk-ak breakfast ready ho gya kya..

shivu came der..

sh-papa ngo kab banega..

nk-laugh omggg itniii hadbaddd ban jayega meri bacha.. aao meri god main.. he took shivu on lap.. beta apko pata hain hame jamin kaha mili apke dada ke hometown pe..

sh-waawww really sab sath sath.. nk laugh..

nk-hmm..

ak-wawww really nk..

nk-haa u know ak ab hum waha house main rahege aur main apna yaha ka work waha se manage kar lunga.. nd u know mujhe ngo ke liye house mil gya hain aur bas usko repair kara ke opening karege hum..

sh-yaieee.

nk-oye apko na studies pe dhayan dena hain got it..

sh-amma ki care..

nk-woh kar sakte ho..

ak-nk shivu kitna lucky hain na hamare liye..

nk-haa he is our bestieee kissed to him ak too kissed..

sh-uiii dono side se gila gila kar diya..

nk laugh..

nk-toh kiski kissy se aap gila gila nhi houge haa haa pinched to him... dey went in their work..

afyer that some days ak nk shivu were packing their thing..

ak-sab kitne surprise ho jayege na..

nk-hmm bas kal hum waha honge ak.. u know i m soo happy..

sh-papa mujhe udd ke pahuchna hain. he was in Spider-Man costume..

nk-aacha uddo kaise udoge haa aap..

sh-essee suuu.. qk laugh..

ak-are mera bacha esse uddi uddi karega.. bas thodi der aur hmm... shivu was dancing.. nk kissed to ak.. ak pinched to nk..

ak-shivu hain..

nk-main bhi toh hu na... laugh.. now in nyt dey took flight nd reached udaipur..

nk ak nd shivu were on full swim for surprise..

dey entered in ss house nd sees to guest..

dj sees to them nd got happy..

dj-munna.. nk ak touched their feet..

ak-g namashte... bm gy3 came nd hug to her..

shivu-yeh sab kon hain..

guest-bhut pyara bacha hain.

dj-mahra pota hain..

nk-bauji yeh sab kya hain means aapse pehle mila nhi..

dj-kal there pass phone kara laga na.. abhi bas karne wala tha.. yeh log rashmi ne dekhne waste aaye hain aur pasand bhi kar liya hain..

ak-kya sach main aati hu milke usse.. she went inside..

nk-wawww kitna aacha news mila mujhe bhi ek news deni thi sabko hum yaaha ek ngo open kar rahe... nd told about it..

dj-yeh toh bhut aacha hua... kitna aacha vichar hain charo or khushi hi khushi hain.. ak went in rashmi room..

nanu got happy..

na-are waah... tum kab aai..

ak-bas abhi hi aai.. congrats rashmi hug to her.. i m soo happy tu khush hai

ra-g...

ak-u know hum kyo aaye hain ngo ki opening hogi.. nk ne mujhe surprise diya hain.. aapko toh pata hain na akka..

na-haa maine isko kisi ko nhi bataya tha.. hum sab milke opening karege iski..

ak-i m soo happy nk jaisa pati nasib se milta hain.. par i m sure ki rashmi ko bhi bhut aacha ladka mila hain.. hena.

ras-hmm..

ak-kya hua rashmi tum.. kuch.. suddenly gy3 came..

gy-are bahu pata hain parso sagai ka muhurat nikla hain bhut khush hu main.. hey bhagwan tune meri sun li..

ak - congratulations maa... sees to rashmi... now in nyt nk was searching to ak here nd der..

nk-ak.. sees to ak.. she was serving food to all..

tum yaha ho..

dj-baith munna tanne kitna kam rahwe hain..

ak-bauji apke pasand ki kheer banai hain maine aur di apke pasand ki curd hain.. aur rashmi tumhare liye aalu ke parathe..

dj-waah maja aa gaya..

ak-are maa bm aap bhi lijiye na.. aaiye dey sat nd starts eating..

gy-kuch karne hi nhi de rahi hame.. bhut tasty khana bana hai..

dj-jiti reh bhut choko hain sabki pasand ka khana banya hain..

nk-meri pasand ka..

shivu giggling..

nk-kya..

ak-woh main bhool gyi..

nk-huh mujhe pata tha kon mujhe pyar karta hain..

shivu gave one bite to nk..

sh-main..

nk-waww methi ke parathe..

sh-ha papa beta ki fav dish dadi ne banai..

gy-essa ho sakta hain ki hum teri pasand ka na banaye..

ak-haa..

gy-are are meri bahu bhi khayegi meri fav wali dish..

dj-mahri bhi..

ras-meri bhi..

nan-meri bhi..

nk-meri bhi..

sh-aur main uiii..

ak-kya main itna kaise khaugi..

gy-sabki main se ek ek niwala.. dj gave one spoon kheer gy3 too gave bm to gave one bite rashmi too nanu to nd nk too..

ak-aaj itna pyar hain ki samet bhi nhi pa rahi hug to gy3..

nk-are ab acutely exam kal se hain..

hmm kal ngo ki opening hain yuhuuu...

more part coming soon..

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#307

in next morning..

ak was ready for opening nk sees to her nd hug to her..

nk-koi itna sundar kaise ho sakta hain..

ak-jiski najar itni sundar hain woh mujhe sundar hi bolega na..

nk-hmm aaj to man ho raha ki bas kissed to her nack.. bas ak nhi jate na waha kuch naughty game khelte hain..

ak-nk.. koi aa jayega.. koi aa jayega.. nk.. than shivu came der..

sh-uiii.. nk skipped to ak..

ak-are baby aap aa gaye..

sh-haa amma... chalo na late ho rahi.. a

ak-haa main apka hi wait kar rahi thi.. chalo.. showed her toungue..

now in ngo... everyone were soo happy... nk ak nd shivu in chair..

one men-toh ab hum iski opening karege.. aur miss ak g se kahege ki woh kuch kahe yaha par..

everyone clapping..

ak-main kya kahu yeh koi ehsan nhi motivation hain un girl ke liye jo har gai jinka jingi ne sath nhi diya woh ladkiya jo besahara hain unke man ko janne ki kosish karege aur hamara yahi mission hoga ki hum woh sab kuch thik kare unki life main jo unhone khoya hain.. yeh life kuch nhi hum jo soche essa ho jaruri toh nhi.. main janti hu woh pain jab koi hamse gussa hota hain.. chah ke bhi hum himat nhi juta pate ek past jisko dekhte hi aankh bhar aati hain.. she had tears in her eyes..

haa aur is safar main mera beta jisne mujhe samjha pyar kiya.. i m lucky ki is bache ko pane ke liye duniya ke kilaf gai..

par nk jisse maine galt samjha sayad life main aadhi bat ehsas galt hain jab main nk se dubara mili toh pata chala ki kitni badi kami thi meri life main.. shivu ko maa ka pyar diya par sayad papa ka pyar toh nk hi de sakte the.. ladki ko bhi jaruri hai ki woh ladko ko samjhe unki hamari soch bhut alg hain par bhagwan ne hame apas main isiliye milaya hain thaki woh hamari kami ko aur hum unki kami ko pura kar sake.. nk ne meri dream sapna pura kiya.. sara family sath hain.. mujhse lucky kon hogi main kosish karugi ki sab girl esse hi fight karna sikhe aur esse hi independent rahe.. bas.. every clapped soo much.. now ak was roaming in all house..

nk-aao main tumhe dikhata hu ak ki kitni problem hain hamari life main.. see.. ak watched to all girl..

ak starts crying..

ak-nk yeh toh 30 40 girl hain... log ke andar itna pain hain..

nk-bhutt maine entry kari kuch girl toh bahar se aai hain.. jinki family hi nhi.. aao..

one girl was crying..

ak-kya hua..

g-aaj apki bat sunke thoda aacha laga main bhut khush thi yeh meri beti hain..

ak-so cute..

gi-nhi mujhe do beti paida hui thi.. mere sasural wale hamesha kehte the ki unko pota chahiye.. apko pata hain jis din meri bachi hone wali thi mere hubby ka accident ho gya aur woh nhi rahe... woh bhut aache the.. usi din mujhe do beti hui. maine khud ko thoda samala. par mere sasural wale unhone meri ek beti ko mar diya ab isse leke yaha aai hu.. bhut relief mila ki aaj bhi girl ki itni ijat hai..

nk had tears in his eyes..

ak-tumhare papa..

gi-woh mqin aanath hu.. ak hug to her..

ak-ab kehna mere pass badi behen hain tumhare pass second inning house hain yaha tum apni beti ko palogi kam karogi.. tumhare pass itni sari sister hain sab suno main sqbse kehti hu aaj hum yaha rone ki bat nhi karege.. hum jiyege khud ke liye jiyege apne bache ke liye jiyege aur jis din kuch pa lenge duniya ki dikhayege ki hum best hain hmm..

all said yes...

nk-bqs.. ak was crying nd nk hug to ak..

ak main office ja raha tum jab bhi free ho jaoge aa jana house hmm aur haa khane ka dhayan rakhna mera sipahi hain yaha.. pointed to shivu..

ak laughs..

ak-bye..

nk-bye.. nk was in office.. working..

here ak was doing her work than shivu came.. he took plate..

ak-beta aap khana kha lo amma thoda busy hain..

sh-ohoo tin bar bol diya apne kha lo kha li.. aap kab khaogi muh open karo warna mujhe papa shout karege... shivu feed to ak..

ak-she was working.. shivu side aks hair... thanku baby aap bhut sweet ho...

sh-suno sab kid dekha na main apni amma ko kitna love karta hu sab esse hi karna all mom nd ak was admiring to shivu..

ak-yaha aao baby..

sh-uiii kya hua.. ak kissed to him..

ak-aap best superboy ho.. suddenly ak was getting call shivu took it..

sh-hloo. papa..

nk-mera bacha aapne lunch kari.

sh-haa..

nk-amma ko karaya..

sh-haa.. maine unko kila di..

nk-gud boy... amma se pucho kitni der lagegi...

ak-mujhe late ho jayegi..

sh-haa amma ko thodi late ho jayegi aap care karna aur khana kha lena oki.. bye.. dey cut to cell.. now in nyt nk went in house..

nk-aaj main jaldi aa gaya.. uff sat on chair thak gya yr.. ak to hain nhi ek kam karta hu maa ko bolta hu khane ke liye.. maa.. suddenly two hand were giving rest to him..

nk-waww kitna aacha lag raha turned nd sees to ak. tum kab aai..

ak-abhi aai sir aao dinner karlo.. mere pati ka time mere pati ka hain hmm..

nk-waww tum waha bhi manage kar rahi yaha bhi thats so gud..

ak-bas yaha ghar ki bat kam ke time pe kam. hmm aao.. nk sat on chair ak feed to him..

nk-shivu kaha hai..

ak-hain kahi.. aao room main chalte hain.. now nk went in room.. it was dark.. suddenly tv was on.. video playing..

in video.. sh-uiii haye papa aap aa gaye.. hlooo.. nk got happy..

ak - aao baitho.. dey sat on bed..

sh-see papa maine amma ko kila di oki.. in video shivu feed to ak..

sh-uiii sry maine thodi badmasi kari.. nk laugh...

i love u papa meri aur amma ki dream puri karne ke liye... dey cut cake..

nk-waww ak yeh than power came.. room was decorated with bloon..

nk sees a panting..

nk-mere papa world best papa hain a small gift for u... nk shivu pic..

than shivu came nd hug to nk..

ak-shivu na tumhe surprise dena chahta tha nk kabse tab maine kaha ki jis din ngo ki opening hogi na us din dena..

nk-it was amazing.. thanku beta left to shivu in his hand..

sh-i love u papa amma ke bad kisi ko kitna pyar kiya woh aap ho..

nk-i m blassed now jo kami thi na puri ho gai.. jiske sapne dekhe woh pure hue.. thanku mere bache.. yeh hamara ansh hain ak..

ak-iski kuch habit tumhare jaisi kuch mere jaisi hain..

sh-amma cake cutting.. ak took cake..

meri amma ne banai..

nk-mummy ke chamche..

sh-huh..

ak-nhi mera baby mera dil hai hena..

sh-haa.. nk cut d cake nd feed to each..

ak-main pani leke aati hu..

she went in hull.. she heard some voice..

ak-koi hqin kya.. sees to rashmi on stairs..

rashmi tum ro rahi.. she hug to ak..

ra-bhabhi bhut dar lag raha..

ak-esse rota kon hain.. sab girl ko apna ghqr chodna padta hain hainana..

ras-nhi bhabhi main yeh shadi nhi karna chahti. ak was shocked..

ak-kya..

ras-haa i m so worried main kisi aur se pyar karti hu.. bhabhi koi sunne walanhi aap toh girl ki help karti ho plz suno meri..

ak-tumne bauji ko nhi bataya y..

ras-woh other caste hain mujhe pucha bhi nhi aur rishta taye kar diya main kya karu bhabhi pyar toh pyar hota hain na.. har gai dil.. ap mera sath doge na woh bhut aacha hain..

ak-haa par rona band karo par.. she was confused.. kya hoga?

end.

precap-ak meet from that boy nk saw to her wat will happen?

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 8 years ago

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#308

It was a nice and lovely part...

May the first and best B-Day celebrations in ak life..

Nks sweet surprise to ak was cutee

But I loved shivs words for him mom...

He is really the bestest part in ak life more than his dad and nk

ShIivu love for his mom was worth watching...

ND his intentions also match with his mom...

Do update soon next part of ngo opening

now Rashmi wedding will happen

Guessing that all naksh dream of wedding also get fulfilled.

Expecting more cute scenes

Do update fast

Sorry for late comments

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Posted: 8 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
It was a nice and lovely part...
May the first and best B-Day celebrations in ak life..
Nks sweet surprise to ak was cutee
But I loved shivs words for him mom...
He is really the bestest part in ak life more than his dad and nk
ShIivu love for his mom was worth watching...
ND his intentions also match with his mom...
Do update soon next part of ngo opening
now Rashmi wedding will happen
Guessing that all naksh dream of wedding also get fulfilled.
Expecting more cute scenes
Do update fast
Sorry for late comments

but saying na

aww i was waiting since long but saying na sabar ka fal sweet hota hain like that ur comments..

it was true nd ur heart feeling hain.. i m soo happy ki u liked maa beta bond soo much.. i m trying to give all mixed scenes..

thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally..

i can understand ur feeling u r mamma baby na..

😃i will write all scenes in wedding which naksh missed caught it oki..