pritus ff ~kismat connection - 2~ pt 30(last pt) pg 45

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hiii everyone...

hope all r good...

Do u remember our first season of kismat connection???

Now to give u more of NAKSH we "PRITUS" are back with our brand new season with different concept...

So y late letss Move on to introduction...

INTRO:

Ak is a chulubuli girl who is from a telugu state...

Nk on a other hand is a marwadi boy...

So our story will be naksh meeting in college for studying MBA...

Stay tuned for the story will naksh bonding will unite them ya separate them with hatred...

Wats in their destiny...

how will their kismat connection start...

So please stay tuned and enjoy our ff...

this ff will be updated by ruchi...😃

Edited by _nakshi_ - 7 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow nice great :)))

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It's u da !! Wow great super da:/))

All the best sister:))

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

waaw wawww u open it.. waawww.. thanku thanku so much princyu love u. ...
this time ak would be a South Indian girl.. nk will be marwadi.. congoo my princyu 🤗..
pritus ff is back now.. hope we will get more love..

Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

so d story will be entertaining nd emotional too.. but it will start from simla.. someone is der.. let's see who's it..
part-1
pritus ff beginning :-
kitni din kitne sal yeh toh pata nhi par woh sayad hain mere man main mere dil main.. kismat ka her pher hai ya phir yado ka safar.. main hu khush hu pata nhi.. par ek dua karta hu khas koi kismat connection ho jaye aur main us pari se mil jau.. kya kahu kitni pyari h woh...
sir sir chai.. sir sir chai.. said one men to nk.. yes he is our hero nk. he was in blue jins nd white t shirt nd pink jacket.. cute fair..
nk-hmm.. nhi closed his notebook... smile.. tum thak gye hoge bol bol ke.. gave money.. mere side se ek tum le lo.. yaha thand bhut bad gai simla kitni dur hain..
boy-bas aa gya.. train stooped.. apne mujhe paise diye meri chinta ki toh main apko dua deta hu ki aap jis manjil ko khoj rahe woh apko jald hi mil jaye..
nk-thanku.. sees to one woman with kid.. she was trying to put baby nd things both at d same time but was unable.. nk helped her.. took to baby..
wo-thanku woh main akli hu bache ko saman ko manage karna thoda muskil hain.. aap jaise bhi h yaha..
nk-g ek aacha insan toh sayad nhi ban paya par is baby ko dekh. thought something.. bhut pyari si gudiya h.. kissed to her. .
wo-thanku.. nk put out all things of her nd gave to her baby.. than two girls admiring to nk..
jisse bhi apki shadi hogi na woh bhut khush rahegi.. apki shadi ho gai h kya..
nk-nhi.. khabhi khabhi jo dikhta h woh hota nhi main bas thodi si kosish kar raha help karne ki.. koi perfect nhi hota h..
girls-waaw yr he is sooo cute khas mujhe bhi essa hubby mile.. in low voice..
second girl-hmm hmm essa kar tu line mar le na waise bhi aaj tu job pe ja toh rahi hi h priti. . yeh shadisuda nhi h..
nk-bye baby... chalta hu aap dhayan rakhiga..
priti-so cute na yr.. kon ladki h jo iske liye bani hain..
than camera sifted on one house.. one girl was sleeping suddenly her alarm ringing so much.. she closed it. went in bathroom..
she was doing brush..
hooo... amm.. weee... clean to mouth.. haa baba haa i m getting ready... aaugi na office main hm.. kya party par naman ne toh nhi bataya essa kuch. ok bye.. a smile came on her face. she took bath nd got ready.
ak-ohoo yeh naman bhi na batata hi nhi kuch bhi..
suddenly someone knocked door. . she opened it...
hlooo miss akk g...
ak-haa g ak g... ab yad aai apne dost ki kyo..
nq-g aa hi gaya batane ko jo maine nhi bataya aaj tak.tumhari job abhi hi lagi h aur yeh problem aa gai actually main boss hain na woh badal gaya h aur aaj unko intriduce karane ke liye party hain .plz sad mat hona .

ak-nhi naman mujhe yaha aaye 4 sal ho gye kitni lucky hu main jo tum mujhe mile.i really love u yr.boss koi bhi ho mujhe toh bas kam se matlb h party kitne time h.

na-abhi nun main .i will take u oki.bye.

after that nk was in his house which he got from company.he got ready nd opened to window of his room.he felt fresh air.wahi meheakti hui subah thandi hawa par pata nhi kaha h woh ehsas jo mujhe h par isko pura karne wali sase nhi hain khas mujhe ek bar toh woh insan mil jata jisko main koj raha hu.

he got a call .hmm i will be der in some time.aa raha hu main thodi der main.

here ak was with naman nd dey werev in one car.he sees to her from side.

na-ak woh main tumse kehna chahta tha ki.touched her hand but she took it back.

ak-woh office pe mujhe na priyanka ne bola tha ek project mila tha na.waise boss gye kyo.

na-woh hua yu ki boss ko us jana tha is company ke side jayada nhi de paye so woh isse bech ke ja rahe.

ak-hmm..mera dhyan dene ka fayda hua work karni h bas.tumne kitna aacha hindi sikhaya mujhe .now i can say proper hindi jo mera dream tha.

na-madam g dosti ke liye toh bade bade pahad tod sakte h toh yeh hindi kya chiz h .ak reminds somthing

ak-hmm

na-wat happened ak tum itnna kho jati ho aaj bhi .

ak-pata nhi main kuch nhi.aunty ko dinner pasand aaya rat ko.

na-haa woh chahti h ki tum jaisa khana banane wali koi mujhe mile.

ak-mujhse bhi behatar milegi.

na-ak woh main keh raaha tha ki .

ak-woh hull aa gaya.aao.

na-pata nhi kab main keh pauga ki i love u i really love u.

more part coming soon...

Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

ak-mujhe bas jindagi jini h na ki pyar aur shadi.mera dil bas sukun chahta h naman plz mujhse kuch bat mat kehna jo main sunna nhi chahti hu.koi kismat meri kisi ki dor se bhandi hui nhi h jisse main seh saku.

dey entered in hull.der was so much croud.ak naman meets from all frds ...

na-boss aaye kya new boss..

one boy-nope yr..

ak-priti tu kya kar rahi yaha.dekha kya boss ko...

pti-nhi yr boss ko toh nhi par dekha ek cute se ladke ko.everyone laughs.

ak-tu bhi na bas shadi aur ladka na.

pri-haa yr he was so handsome u know woh ek ladies ki help kar raha tha aur to aur itne cute se usne baby ko liya tha .mujhe toh essa hubby nhi woh hi chahiye yr kon tha woh paata nhi.

ak-tu bhi na .pichi pilla.(pagal ladki)..ella ..

pri-telgue madam g apni bhasha samajaiye to sahi..

ak-i mean u so sweet girl g ..

pr-tqqq..naman laughs...

ak-sshh ..now old boss came on stage..nd said..

old boss-so i dont know kitna tang kiya aap sab ko rulaya bhi hasaya bhi but all is well thats end is well..kuch problems h so i m quiting but hope yeh pura mahol waisa hin hoga jaisa tha even aur bhi aacaha hoga with new boss..waisa hi pyar aur respect dena mrr..ak got a call..

ak-hloo naman i m coming from outside oki...

na-k...

boss-nk shinghaiyab.ke liye...aaiye..

pri-wat yeh toh wahi h mere sapno ka rajkumar..

nk-so hiii to everyone main yaha malik banke nhi aaya hu bas ek essa insan banke aaya hu jo aap logo se help lunga aur dunga bhi kisi ne mujhe kaha thareminds old talk(kaise karo nhi janti mai par boli hu itni ki kisi ko pyar deni chahiye thabhi milegi na)he said these lines to all..main koi god nhi banuga par haa yaha freely sabko sabkuch karne ki aajadi rahegi.tqq..

na-so nice yr..

everyone-too gud yr...

nk went in side .everyone meets from nk...

than ak cut her call...sees to one old ladies..

ol-beta tumhare pass kuch paise h do din se bhuki hu khaya nhi kuch..

ak-haa amma i have ..take this aur haa yeh mera number h jab bhook ho mere ghar aa jana .pyar batne se badta h aur dene se milta h yahi sikha h ..

old-jiti raho beti khub khush raho.bhagwan kare tumhe woh khushi mile jispe tumhara hak hain ..

ak-tqq amma...she went inside..kya hua kon h new boss..

pri-woh na..

na-are tum logo ne golgappe khaye ki nhi..vry tasty..see boss ..nk was in back position..ak didnt see..

pr-my dream men yahi tha ak subah mera naku..

ak laugh..

ak-ella wat name ee..

pr-jal mat mera nakku..

ak laugh -pichi..she was trying to see nk but didnt see..mujhe toh work karna h ..naman i cant stay here mere ghar par koi guest aa rahe ...plz main kal aau office main chalega kya..

na-hmm chalega na y not...bye chod du ghar..

ak-no i can manage..naksh were back side of each..

nk-g tqq i will try my best..g hloo ..

ak-ohoo esshh my duppata..its went on nks mouth..he felt it..ella ..eeesshhh mera dupata..

nk-yeh..ak took back step nd dey touches each back..dey felt a connection..

akkk...he felt..ak heartbeat skipped a little..

she took back her duppata nd leave fastly..nk finished his meet nd turn..

he sees all over...but didnt find to anyone..

nk-itne salo bad yeh ehsas ne mujhe chua ya kisi ne mujhe chua ..mera dil jor se dhadka jaise pehle dhadka tha par kyo..kya woh yaha...???????

so guyzz i know der will be lots of confusion but i will clear all ..i will try my best also..hope pritu will get love this ff also like pre one..but haa kismat milayegi toh unhe aachese but how yeh aap par h aap kitna like karege..plzz press like button if u like this part nd leave comment nd say somthing also...

Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 7 years ago

It's just the beginning...
But intros were simply superb.. .
With gng parts I will give detailed comment. . As of now congoss ND all the best.. .
One is dreaming of love ND another is filled with hatred. ..
Hoping for best in future. .

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 7 years ago

very happy to see pritu ff again 😃superb part.. introduction is amazing ak is Telugu girl and nk is marwadi boy both characters are interesting 😊 like ak nk entry.. nk is such a helping guy and now ak's new boss eagerly excited to see their chemistry how they came close to each other
naman character is also interesting do wrote next part soon will be waiting

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
It's just the beginning...
But intros were simply superb.. .
With gng parts I will give detailed comment. . As of now congoss ND all the best.. .
One is dreaming of love ND another is filled with hatred. ..
Hoping for best in future. .

aww how sweet.. it was just intro.. 😳.. story goona start with new part..
thanku so much for liking this part nd ur loveuuu comments 😊 i will do write more part like this

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
very happy to see pritu ff again 😃superb part.. introduction is amazing ak is Telugu girl and nk is marwadi boy both characters are interesting 😊 like ak nk entry.. nk is such a helping guy and now ak's new boss eagerly excited to see their chemistry how they came close to each other
naman character is also interesting do wrote next part soon will be waiting

yupieee i know how much u was waiting for this ff 😃. .. haa but abhi aur bhi interesting hogi story.. yeh just entry thi open ly i said to both..
how dey will falls in love i will show it 😛 thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments..
isme thodi si pehle ff ki jalak bhi hogi 😳 i will write next part also

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

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part-2
nk-he called to every employee at stage.. main sabse miluga hand milauga..he starts searching to ak.but didnt find to her...txx to all .i m really thankful that u excepted me...enjoy d party..he sat in corner..kya hua mujhe yeh sayad mera bharam hi tha woh yaha kaise nhi aa sakti hai kyo nhi aa sakti par chua hua ehsas khabhi galt kyo bolega plz ek bar mujhe mil jao mere pap se mukat kar do ..yeh mera fault hi hai pura than he got a call..hmm i reached simla attand kar liya party new work hogi kal se maa..aap kaise ho..

gy3-tu bata beta hamesha bahar bahar hi rehta h ghar bhi aaya kar khabhi yeh log hum sab tujhe bhut pyar karte h beta..

nk-i know maa but aap apne bade bete ki care kariye na he is perfect one main jaisa hu thik hu aur haa apne bade jhet (dj)ko keh dijiyega ki main company main kuch kam toh kar hi lunga ..aap thik ho na..

gy-koi tera dard samjhe ya nhi main toh samajhati hu beta teri fault nhi thi hum bade tujhe apna mante h aur dj ..

nk-plz maa i waana take rest mujhe bekar main sab yad mat dilaiy..bye aap apni bete bahu ki care kariye oki..tc..pata nhi sab mujhe bacha kyo samajhte hai m big now sachi galt toh samaj hi leta hu woh umar behekane ki thi par aaj nk badal chuka hain..galti inasan se hoti h bhagwan se nhi..

in aks house...

ak-are aap aur lo na ..uncle aapne mujhse help mangi hain main mana thodi karugi..aakhir apke rent pe rehti hu ..apki bahu ki delevery honi thi bhaiya bhi yaha nhi the unko lr jana mera farz tha..

un-txx beta sirf hospital nhi tum toh khana bana ke de rahi bhut bada dil h ..yeh ghar mera h par isse sajaya tumne h..

ak-wat uncle i m just like ur daughter ..aap mere liye abba ki tarah ho woh bolti h na ki ehsani nhi karni hoti pyar hoti hain..

un-ehsan beta ..dekha small word mistake ki..

ak-sry sikh jaugi..go plz...than naman came in aks house..

na-ohoo madam ji ki love start ho gai for all haa wat u made..

ak-meri dish but usse pehle meri riswat deni padegi na..give me..

na-ohoo u nd urs riswat..lo..ak took it..it was a cd of movie...new movie of bunny..but in telgue..

ak-dont worry na ur telgue became so gud nd my hindi became vry gud also..meri dil main itna pyar ho gai h ki jo bhi wat meaning of fire in hindi..

na-😆aagni madam g..

ak-yup..aagni pe khud jaugi main..

na-than mmaa..

ak-are hum yaha baithi h ...baithe h i mean aao na movie watch kare..oki..

dey were watching movie..but naman was watching to aks laugh her face..

ak-see my bunny is so handsome...i really like him ..his acting movie oo god truly loved it..

na-tumhari hasi bhut pyari hain ek masum bache ki tarah(ak remind old things tum jab hasati ho toh ek bache ki tarah lagti ho miss khatpat queen)ak had tears in her eyes...

i m really sry ak if u felt bad kuch galt bola kya..

ak-no i remembered somthing u have no fault...main lati hu rasam i made today ...

she went in kitchen...main bunny ko like karti hu par aaj bhi movie dekhti hu kisi ke sath woh sath badal gya par bat kyo nhi naman har pal us insan ko mat yad dilao main aage aa gai hu bhut ..jiugi bhi apno ke sath..

she gave rasam to naman..

na-yum yeh hath main bhut taste hain yr...amm ur bunny usse bhi kilao khabhi pata nhi ek tum hi diwani ho iski ya koi aur bhi hai..

in nk house...

nk-ya txx ..he took cd from one shop ...bunny movie it is so nice to watch..new hain main aaj bhi usse dekh raha par bagal main woh jagah kali kyo hain ..meri life main kuch aache pal the kyo jana nhi ehsas toh tha par kya karta main...bas inko dekh 6 sal cut kar diye maine ...6 sal kam nhi h god kyo intajar ke ek ek pal yad hote h par sath bitaye hue palo ki umar kam si lagti h par yeh bhi sach hain unhi yado ko samet ke life main jite rehte h ham issi aas main ek din woh hoga jo hum chachte hain...

morning nk got ready for office...

he went in office ..went in his cabin...here ak nd naman too reached in office...

ak worked in one file...

nk-manager to pune ki file h usse toh aaj milna h wer is that file..

ma-g sir it is almost completed bas main us girl ko bol raha tha ki woh apko dede...

nk-g fastly...

manager went near of ak..

ak-miss ak..u finished that file..

ak-g main la hi rahi thi usko..main khud sir ko la ke deti hu..

ma-g sure..

ak was going near of nks cabin but one men was coming from front..he has tea in his hand..its went on aks dress..

ak-eelaa..u cant see ..i was going in sir cabin..priti yeh file sir ko dedo aur kehna ho gya pura,