Samaina TS: Dil Ka Rishta (Part 3 page 8) - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: mystique123

Yaay!!!!

Finally I am here darling. Sorry for being late to unres.

From the moment I read your title I have been humming "Dil Ka Rishta Bada Hi Pyara Hai" 😊

Boring? oye hello...this is so beautiful, so refrain from using such words in the future updates, samjhi 🤗

How much my heart craved to see flirtatious Naina and you granted me the wish for a fraction of time.😊

So I loved your version of breakup. Sunaina pitching in to help Sameer to get his love back was the greatest breather. Moreover, we all wished for a heart-to-heart convo between Sameer and Preeti. Preeti being the only sensible human around and the kind of bond she shared with Sameer always called in for her to drill sense into him. I loved the way you wrote the confrontation, Preeti's anguish, her pain, above all her realization of the depth of Sameer and Naina's relationship. I was emotional while reading the convo, she let her heart talk about all the pain Naina endured which Sameer was unaware of and also gave piece of mind to Mundit. This was fantastic dear⭐️

Oh, I forgot to mention the restlessness of Sameer in not finding Nain in college and also his reaction on hearing Naina in hospital, these two are bonded for a lifetime.

Hospitals scare me and now the reference of ICU is making me restless. Hope Naina has not taken any drastic step. After all, Naina and Sameer are always meant to be together.⭐️

Lots of Love ❤️

Isha seriously I m so happy after reading your review ... Readers like you motivates me to write. . Though I m not perfect but still I try to give my best because you take so much time and effort to review ... I m glad u are liking my version of breakup ... Don't be scared with hospital scenes Kyunki Naina sang sameer toh final hai hi.. .😉😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: JaySee

Read both parts at one go. Fantastic story. Feel like crying by seeing the condition of Chachaji and Sameer. Two men in Naina's life who genuinely love her wholeheartedly. Continue soon.

I m glad u liked it and could connect well ... Thank you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Agarwals were pathetic as always.. Actually ridiculous 🥱

I liked how Sameer didn't give a damn to anyone else, just talked to Chachaji

Kaam k bandhe toh chachaji hi hai baaki sb bkwas hai Sameer is smart faltoo logon par time waste nai krta Voh 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
Great start cant wait to read more...plzz cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

PART 1-

First of all, I liked the title for this TS. It reminded me of that song 😆

After knowing about her condition, Sameer was craving to meet her.. I must say that, you have shown his anxiety to meet her was beautifully written 👏

I always love Preeti's character.. And you have used her character so beautifully to confrontation and not only for Sameer but also for MunDit 😳

Thanks for the PM dear

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Posted: 7 years ago
#46

PART 2-

The hospital confrontation was beautifully written dear and the dialogues were written perfectly for each character 😉👏

Rakesh aur Taiji toh kabhi sudharne hi nahi wale.. Beti ki toh kabhi chinta hi nahi unhe 😕

The hero in this part is one and only Sameer.. I loved his every action and dialogues in this story 👏

And thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: mystique123

Dearie...dil le lo yaar... ❤️🤗

This confrontation was beautifully crafted. Now I know why you said CVs have stolen your dialogues. Your thought process got almost copied, except that plot was different.😃

Yaar you have become an expert now. Just look at the dialogues, the tashan ⭐️

My heart ached in pain when I read Chachaji blaming himself and chachi for Naina's accident.
Countless 👏 for the Rakesh-Sameer convo. That devil deserved more than that from Sameer. I just want to send him and Taiji to mars.😡

I loved the maturity with which Sameer expressed his relationship with Naina to chachaji.

When you love people,You have to give things up Sometimes you even have to give them up: Just like Sameer and Naina. But I am sure destiny will play its role and will bring them together forever.

Jaldi se update the next part, I just cant wait to read chachaji accepting the relationship.❤️

Lots and Lots and Lots of Love 🤗

Dil le lo Isha for a wonderful review 😳 the quote u used sums up my entire story that's what I wanted to convey 😊 ... Thank you so much for appreciating my work
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Priya2910

Tai ji and Rakesh should be hanged. They are the real villains 😡. But Naina's real strength is her Chacha ji and Sameer. The two men who will do anything for her happiness. Real appreciate that Sameer opened up and spoke to Chacha ji, trying to clear the doubts.

It's an amazing update. Please continue and thanks for the PM.

Cheers, Priya

Thanks dear. . I m glad u liked it soo much
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Radkam

Daring Sameer! Mere FF mein you Naina ne Sirf drama kiya tha but yahan toh sach much suicide! 😕 jaldi se milva dou...Sam Kong Delhi mat Bhejo please!

Chinta mat Karo Radhika marne nhi dungi Naina ko afterall heroine hai 😆 ... Sam ka kya hoga next update mei Pta chal jayega😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Aare CVs ne toh such mooch tumhare dialogues chori kar liye kal! 😲

Awesome update Suman!!

All the Agarwal clan dialogues and reactions are so aptly written. Very much in line with their characters.

Sameer toh ekdum chaa gaya! I was cheering when he screamed at Rakesh! But alas nobody's words can ever affect Rakesh for the better.

Aur Taiji ko toh chance hi mil gaya aag mein tel dalne ka aur Bela ko baate sunane ka. They are both so insensitive and moti buddhi!

Will be eagerly waiting for the next update dear.


Meri Dil ki Ichha thi Sam aur Rakesh ka jhgda ho 😆😆 so likh diya . . M glad u liked it soo much... Yes CVs ne chura liye dialogues mere 😆... Anyways thank you so much for liking it😛

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