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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Muskan2001

Meenakshi!! Itne jaldi khatam ho gaya yeh chapter! And yeh dil maange more! 😆

Chachaji's situation was perfectly justified. These are the times when you have to bow down in front of your elders, no matter how wrong they are. An advantage for them and helplessness for you. That scene reminded me of Monday's episode and you aced it so well!

This chapter reminded me of so many instances from the show! Sameer's love confession was on point! Saare Mt. Abu wale din; especially the day after she took care of him revive ho gaye! Yeh un dino ki baat hai when love wasn't conditional but pure and selfish. He couldn't bear seeing her in pain. Sameer could do anything to see her in happiness...even if that is walking away from her and killing himself through the painful separation. To some love is selfless, but for them love is selfish. Their love is selfish for each other because they are willing to go to any extent to see the other happy. Naina tried to take her life only so that he can move on and Sameer is leaving her for the same reason. Sameer's confession left me with such a heavy heart...thank you so much for such a wonderful chapter with such vivid details that cherished so many memories, Meenakshi!

Can't wait to read the next chapter! 😃

P.S:- Is there a chance of this TS becoming an FF? Or maybe an SS at least? 😉😃

Muskan

Thank you Muskan for such a wonderful review... It makes me feel my efforts are being paid well ... Yes Sameer's Nainalove for each other is strong but show mei they are not using this point as a result we audience are getting frustrated which obviously comes out in the form of os or TS 😆😆 ... But m glad u were able to understand what I tried conveying ... .Regarding this TS changing into SS looks difficult but certainly I'll try something else soon after this ends 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: asmita21180

Is Rakesh and tai ko to OS bhi achha nahi dikha sakte..nikkame hai dono...

Chachaji ko aise pata lagna bahut shocking raha hoga...Hope he understands what sameer said...
Waiting for next update..

Taiji aur Rakesh k bare mei acha nhi socha ja skta u r right 😆😆 .stay tuned to know what happens next 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Loved the update suman...
One thing that I want to compliment you about is the essence of your dialogue writing ... It's really amazing ...I especially loved the convo between chachaji and Sameer ...

I'm so glad that you are slowly becoming a pro at weaving tales and keeping us entertained with regular updates...

Thank you so much for the PM...
Waiting for the next part ASAP
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mayashika

Suman Di! 🤗


You seem to be expert in crafting out beautiful yet thought provoking dialogues that it just steals my heart. You were right, CVs have copied your dialogues with minor changes and of course, the plot is entirely different, hahhah!

Chachaji's guilt made me so sad, these good for nothing Taiji and Rakesh. Argh! They just care for their so called respect and act like they care about the whole world!

The reaction of Chachaji was expected, the initial shock would obviously be there..I have full faith on Sameer's patience and maturity to win over Chachaji and Chachiji. 😳

Update soon, dear!



Thank you Shreya.. .. I m learning all this from you all 😉 ... So thank you for that too
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Antara1703

Great start cant wait to read more...plzz cont soon

Thank you dear 😊 ... Will update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: _.SilentHeart._

PART 1-

First of all, I liked the title for this TS. It reminded me of that song 😆

After knowing about her condition, Sameer was craving to meet her.. I must say that, you have shown his anxiety to meet her was beautifully written 👏

I always love Preeti's character.. And you have used her character so beautifully to confrontation and not only for Sameer but also for MunDit 😳

Thanks for the PM dear

Thank you Sona ... Kya Baat hai Sbko title Bhut pasand aarha hai seems I struck the right chord 😉 ... Yup Preeti is mine favt too... And she is capable of lot more but CVs aren't using it anywhere
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: _.SilentHeart._

PART 2-

The hospital confrontation was beautifully written dear and the dialogues were written perfectly for each character 😉👏

Rakesh aur Taiji toh kabhi sudharne hi nahi wale.. Beti ki toh kabhi chinta hi nahi unhe 😕

The hero in this part is one and only Sameer.. I loved his every action and dialogues in this story 👏

And thanks for the PM dear

Taiji aur Rakesh dono mirchi kha Kar paida hue hai 😆 isliye unke dialogues aise hai ...
BTW thank you for appreciating dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -vandy-

Loved the update suman...

One thing that I want to compliment you about is the essence of your dialogue writing ... It's really amazing ...I especially loved the convo between chachaji and Sameer ...

I'm so glad that you are slowly becoming a pro at weaving tales and keeping us entertained with regular updates...

Thank you so much for the PM...
Waiting for the next part ASAP

Thank you soo much Vandy I always wait for your comment... I m glad you are liking my style of writing ... Will continue soon😛

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