Samaina OS- Unnamed Relation - Page 6

Originally posted by: mehraan

Lovely SHREYA ...i luv it!!..

School romance of them had its own charishma...An electrifying chemistry ..undeniable attraction!!..Thanx for bringing thse parellels yet again n providing the required closure toboyf n handkiss...want more from u😆!!

Originally posted by: Azraa01

It was lovely. And the canteen romance was just too cute..
Thank you for the pm

Originally posted by: IamIbe

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Wow! Where do I even start? First I need my heart to recover from the ending.

Perfect payback for the teasers you give us and slowly torture us😉 I am happy you felt so dear. Your writing style is amazing, I still have a lot to learn😳

First of all, I am so glad you wrote another OS because I absolutely love your writing dear. Don't stop writing because trust me you are meant for it.

And I am very much humbled. 😳 This motivation will go a long way and I will remember each and every comment, not have any plans to stop writing again. 😳

Second, a jealous and sulky Sameer Maheshwari is the cutest thing on this planet and totally gets my SamAina feels reeling.

Mine too, my face just lights up when sulky Sam is involved. Cute thing!

I like how you drew a parallel here between this boy and Sameer but with a reverse perspective. It added layers of depth to the time that has gone by and also portrayed the distance that SamAina have travelled together.

Right! I wanted to draw two parallels from the show which had her heart captured. Glad you liked it, that's what I had in my mind, they indeed travelled a long way together in the span of one year with all those turn of events.

Third, you read my mind virtually. I wanted Naina to call Sameer her boyfriend in the show. Which she did but not the way I wanted. i wanted it to be done in school where we saw a more innocent version of Naina and her calling him her love would have portrayed the first inklings of comfort arising in their relationship. Something you have done here accompanying it with that beautiful description of our innocent SamAina's first brush with physical intimacy. Totally had me fangirling and blushing there.

My thoughts! Naina was 'chi chi' when Shefali said the word boyfriend...Now she does so freely, it doesn't annoy me at all but I sometimes wished if they could show the changes in her thoughts and not say the boyfriend word out of the blue..Just wanted to show that and I didn't quite add the physical intimacy as I thought it didn't need here, this was more of a heartfelt one. I may keep the physical intimacy maybe for my other works.😉

So do continue writing your beautiful ideas. I can't wait to read more from you. 👏👏

I will surely write more ❤️

Originally posted by: richurachna

wow awesome... Beautiful pen down

lobe sameer jeolus and naina feeling like boyfrnd

thanks for PM

Originally posted by: PrabhakarVK

Romantic!. Naina hesitating to say that Sameer ia her boyf... was cute and nostalgic. Their school days were full of innocence and their masoom nirdosh dosti.

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Waah...dheemi aanch pe karara kiya hua jalta bhunta sameer...maza aa gaya!! I loved that you incorporated the scene with b...friend hi thik h...in the school canteen...bas inke romance me kahin SS na aa jaye...is baar comment chotu sa h...I know...lekin know that I loved it.

Originally posted by: Muskan2001

Wow Shreya! 👏👏👏

Loved it! Finally you showed us what the entire fandom has been desperate for; a jealous Sameer! I could visualize the entire thing so vividly...hayeee!

Thank you so much Muskan dear😳 Glad you loved it!

Yeah, jealous Sammy kab milega? Kab tak imagine karenge

History surely repeats itself. Loved the way you portrayed that. Ishaan, bhai, thoda zyaada hi jaldi line nahi maar rahe ho? Don't you know that girl is already taken? That too by someone who's very possessive when it comes to sharing her! 😆😳 That name reminded me of Ishaan Khatter...I've been listening to Dhadak on loop 😆

Poor harmless guy he was but Sameer doesn't want to hear anything, he dashed off with the the knowledge that she would come behind him😉 Possessive he is, hahhhah!

Ishaan! Yeah, I am neutral towards the lead but the song dhadak has totally stolen my heart too😳 But I used the name as I am fond of that name.

Hayeee! Shreya, you need to make these OSs longer 'cause yeh dil maange moreee!!!

I know Muskan but leisure times comes only in weekend and most of the times, I catch up on sleep or go out or you know, usual things! Not getting enough time for writing makes me sad.

Have few concepts in my mind, hope soon I can draw a well plot for it and convert it to words soon!😳

I'm in awe with your writing style, especially the way you describe their emotions 😳

Really? You have made me so happy dear😳 Motivation is most welcome, hehe.

The proximity and that endearment left me speechless! Can't wait to see that on-screen too! 😳😆 They had called each other their own and let the feeling of happiness take over!

Thank you Muskan! Yes, yes, yes! Can't wait to see it on screen too, hopefully soon😉

I can't stop dreaming now!

That's amazing 😉Humko bhi batana through stories, hehe.

Write more soon!

Muskan 😃