I guess am quite late but like they say better late than never.
You right back so many sweet memories with this. You know I'll give you a trivia. The show that we All love so much started to air on Sony from the 5th Sept and since am an ardent kbc follower, and sat watching it, what followed next was an instinctive watch and there on I got simply hooked on to it. And the best part of it was when the show on the 5th October completed a successful run of 1 month, i got the confirmation from my doctor that I am pregnant with my bundle.
So the first few episodes are very special to me and I feel a connection with the show which seems special to me.
Coming to your os, I loved part where sameer decides to have a confrontation with naina and find out what is it that makes her tick. He is narrowed and hassled by the behenji on one hand but on the other our sweet little naina too seems to be lost in a whirlwind of emotions that she feels for the bad boy.
Her defence mechanism is something To reckon with, especially with her hand she can stall the toughest of storms but I guess the same doesn't go for our hero Mr Maheshwari. The stumble and then the fall, ah! That was magical. The slow brush of his lips near her nape did the trickwhich made the both of them shiver. The desires, the unknown feelings, especially the ones which were hard to fathom were all unleashed and unravelled in a go. Though they are yet to comprehend but something seems different to them too.
Now I guess they would both sit and ponder as to why naina can't stay away from him and his drawn to him like a moth is drawn to fire. As for sameer he too would gain some insight as to why he can't stay angry at her for prolonged periods. What's this feeling that mirrored in their eyes.
short beautiful yet the os had depths of an ocean. Such thought provoking os's are always a delight to read and comment for.They give ample of points to swoon about and leaves you with a sweet sensation where you hope and pine for more.
Hope you come up with more such ideas.
It was sheer pleasure reading your work!
Well done my dear Shreya!
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