Samaina OS- The Unexpected Kiss - Page 6

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani

It was good dear

Yhi umar h karle galti se mishtake...🤣

Just kidding

My God Sameer ko dekho behenji bol rha tha Naina ko phir bhi itne feel lene lag gya apne galti se mishtake Mein☺️

Plzzz write more dear you are extremely talented

And thank you so much for the PM

Lots of love for you

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

Haay dil le lo!!

By seeing the title of the story I thought it will be based on college track and bold romance but I got a surprise

You made that joota churai incident more beautiful

I was smiling throughout out the update

Naina getting affected by his statement and Sameer getting soft seeing her reaction was my favorite ..it was lovely

Then Sameer falling over Naina and that such a intimate moment shared by both of them

Uff it was breathtaking

Loved the update but it was too short

I'm still in samaina romance zone and have gon way ahead in imagination after the tender brush of lips all thanx to you

Thanx a lot for the pm

Love

Laalchi reader

Originally posted by: doublecross

I guess am quite late but like they say better late than never.

You right back so many sweet memories with this. You know I'll give you a trivia. The show that we All love so much started to air on Sony from the 5th Sept and since am an ardent kbc follower, and sat watching it, what followed next was an instinctive watch and there on I got simply hooked on to it. And the best part of it was when the show on the 5th October completed a successful run of 1 month, i got the confirmation from my doctor that I am pregnant with my bundle.

So the first few episodes are very special to me and I feel a connection with the show which seems special to me.

Coming to your os, I loved part where sameer decides to have a confrontation with naina and find out what is it that makes her tick. He is narrowed and hassled by the behenji on one hand but on the other our sweet little naina too seems to be lost in a whirlwind of emotions that she feels for the bad boy.

Her defence mechanism is something To reckon with, especially with her hand she can stall the toughest of storms but I guess the same doesn't go for our hero Mr Maheshwari. The stumble and then the fall, ah! That was magical. The slow brush of his lips near her nape did the trickwhich made the both of them shiver. The desires, the unknown feelings, especially the ones which were hard to fathom were all unleashed and unravelled in a go. Though they are yet to comprehend but something seems different to them too.

Now I guess they would both sit and ponder as to why naina can't stay away from him and his drawn to him like a moth is drawn to fire. As for sameer he too would gain some insight as to why he can't stay angry at her for prolonged periods. What's this feeling that mirrored in their eyes.

short beautiful yet the os had depths of an ocean. Such thought provoking os's are always a delight to read and comment for.They give ample of points to swoon about and leaves you with a sweet sensation where you hope and pine for more.

Hope you come up with more such ideas.

It was sheer pleasure reading your work!

Well done my dear Shreya!

Originally posted by: msdfan

Ohh Thank you so much Shreya darling.. ❤️

Res

Will be back after reading 😳

Unres.. bohot time laga diya maine, sorry yaar guest aye the

You have written first OS and gave dedication to me.. There can't be any big thing for me than that 😳

First of all, a lot of thanks for the dedication.. I didn't expect this from anyone from this forum, that someone would do something like that for me 😃

Yesterday we were discussing about your OS.. and we got it today, very fast ha 😉

Firstly, congratulations dear for your first story in the forum 😊

It was a beautiful OS dear.. Loved it so much!! 👍🏼

You don't know that, how badly I miss the word Behenji from his side.. thanks for that

He was so angry because she told the shoe stealing incident to other girls.. As he wanted to keep that thing in both of them, privacy isn't it 😉

But she revealed it accidentally.. par Naina ne clarify kyun nahi kiya

Sameer was very angry with her.. He went there to teach her a lesson but something else happened there, which was not expected 😆

Never thought that, just shoes stealing incident we can get an unexpected intimacy between them 😉

That kiss was beautiful ☺️.. Neck kiss is always beautiful than lip kiss.. As a girl, I will prefer neck kiss, it's more elegant

This is your 1st OS.. and you have written it so beautifully 👏.. I hope in future we will get more stories from you 😳

Again thank you so much Sweetie.. I'm overwhelmed by your love ❤️😃😳

Thanks for the PM dear

Originally posted by: Bluebee

Loved it very much...😳

Sameer humesha ki tarah angry young man mood main😆

Aur humare naina humesha ki tarah book kholke apne he khayaloo main magan 😆

Sameer ka angry young man wala look bohot hot hota hai...aur yanha to woh bechare naina pe toot pada..lol..☺️

Abhi agar mujhse yeh upekha hai ki main aur ke liye nahi bolungi to tum galat hao..😆

I'm too lalchi...abhi aese he acche acche hot ideas ke sath aate rehna😉

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

There is only one kind of shock worse than the totally unexpected: the expected for which one has refused to prepare..

Beautiful Shreya.👏👏 The build up was really intense and nostalgic.The brooding angry eyes and the guilt filled subtle eyes when clash ,it is bound to be a conflagration.

The narrative has an ample scope of delving deeper for intense meanings.Ahh!I loved this.

Keep coming with your best.👍🏼

Thanks for the PM.

With love-

Minu

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Thank you so much dear😃

Dil le liya😆 The suprise was the intention itself, hehe.

I am happy that this incident which I have twisted according to my imagination could please you😳

I know, it was short but it was because I haven't written for so long and didn't want to start with something that needs a little detailing...Next time would try to make it a little long🤗

Do pen down your imaginations sometime dear😳

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

Oohk I'll wait for the detailed one

And I've penned down my imagination on the forum

" come to me " an os about the morning after their marriage

Originally posted by: Muskan2001

It definitely did...and I'm sure all your other stories will continue to increase the excitement within us 😃

Back with a bang, isn't it?

I'll definitely read your drabbles...yay SamAina stories!

I completely agree, third person narration gives the liberty to explore various perspectives while first person narration allows the writer to relate to the character 😃

Muskan 😃

Originally posted by: shelly_nair

Shreya that was awesome work. Do continue writing. Don't stop here. We need more updates. Wonderful.