Samaina OS- The Unexpected Kiss - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yaar shreya, please continue this one, atleast make it a TS. Loved it, left me wanting for more. I just miss those early school days, Sameer's actions were so different, he wants to be indifferent when it comes to naina, but he gets affects easily with every action of her, however small it maybe.

He completely thinks every action related to her is in corelation with him. He used to get so frustrated man!! I loved it. I still see those early episodes regularly.

Thanks for the pm dear 😊
Edited by shravyarao - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Heyy Shreya!!
I got so excited as soon as I saw a PM - a new OS!

These are the scenes we long to see on the show...hope CVs get to read this too 😉😆

I too find it hard to write in third person perspective😆 my first SamAina OS was my first attempt at this too... and I must say, you've aced this skill too well! Where were you all these days...

The change in his emotions...the pang of guilt in hers...truly loved it!

Waiting for more...😃

Muskan 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Awesome shreya
You should write more
This was their first touch cum kiss
Beautifully written..
Samaina and library's a better love story than twilight 😆
Loved it
Thank you for the pm
Edited by _Dimples_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow Shreya! I was thinking from a long time if you too write...I couls see it in your comments...n I was proven right :)
Thank you so much for a trip down the memory lane here...the familiar behenji n fights...the shoe stealing incident...Since the slap precap recently, all I could think of was an angry Sameer n an irate Naina...what if after both slap each other n their frustations are vented out, Sam isn't able to take it anymorwe, pulls her to himself n kisses her straight on her lips, oblivious to the gang watching them...I know, too far-fetched a romance for our innocent show, but then no tax on imagining hehe...so when I started reading this, especially an angry Sameer n Naina, n then Sameer tripping over her, you can imagine what exactly would I've thought...hehe...so yeah tad bit disappointed, but I know you'll come up with an OS on a proper kiss too someday hehe...I really liked how Sameer's lips accidentally touched her neck n he felt it...the emotions reflecting in both the eyes were the same...the behenji and Salman are in love...I would actually like to read this as a story on what happens next...you can explore the back story too if you want...only if you find the idea worthwhile!
Loved this piece n interested to read more Samaina stuff from you dear! 🤗

Love,
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: chaaru26

It was an amazing os..

Reading the title i expected it to be a liplock but you suprised me it was something different and this made it more beautiful😉
Loved it...

Haha, I know the people are certainly saying they expected it as a liplock but I would keep it for some other time😉 I wanted it to be a surprise, hehe.
Thank you so much Chaaru😳
Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Though looking forward to college romance, school is aakhon aakhon mei romance is still my fav! U picked the perfect situation to start the 2-sided fire!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was so good it almost reminsiced school day memories you wrote a story based on initial episodes liked it very much ... I wish u could add more to it may be make it 2 shot
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hayee Shreya, you write so exceptionally well
Why is your first SamAina story so late?? Plzz keep writing more on our lovely couple
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was good dear
Yhi umar h karle galti se mishtake...🤣
Just kidding
My God Sameer ko dekho behenji bol rha tha Naina ko phir bhi itne feel lene lag gya apne galti se mishtake Mein☺️
Plzzz write more dear you are extremely talented
And thank you so much for the PM
Lots of love for you
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Haay dil le lo!!
By seeing the title of the story I thought it will be based on college track and bold romance but I got a surprise
You made that joota churai incident more beautiful
I was smiling throughout out the update
Naina getting affected by his statement and Sameer getting soft seeing her reaction was my favorite ..it was lovely
Then Sameer falling over Naina and that such a intimate moment shared by both of them
Uff it was breathtaking
Loved the update but it was too short
I'm still in samaina romance zone and have gon way ahead in imagination after the tender brush of lips all thanx to you
Thanx a lot for the pm

Love
Laalchi reader

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