IshRa TS: I see you, I see you not. (Final Pt 3 - Pg 10 - 10/05)

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: SA1234
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I hate u 😡

But I don't hate you 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: kaa1202
Wow!!! Nidoo, u beauty...
The second part is even better..
Her dialogues are superb considering the situation in which she is..
Some dialogues r wow..
"7 years! 7 years and he has learnt to mask his emotions so well, even from you. How did he fall so in love with you?"
"Because Adi is mini him. And because you wanted to see him once, in all his might and glory."
When I thought the above dialogues r awesome but the end was icing on the cake...👏

"Are you really the infamous mother?" his eyes mocked her.
"I am the manhoos mother, " hers replied with utmost sincerity, finally rendering him speechless.
I am waiting for the confrontation...😎

Thank you so much for those kind words Kaartik 🤗 😃 😃 Even I'm waiting for the confrontation 😆 Need to wrack my brains harder 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Zoyamalik2005
Amazing! You 're a talented writer. And I love that you let them talk through their eyes. Don't stop. Do NOT stop.
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Thanks a lot Zoya 😳 😳 You're a talented and insightful writer yourself 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written...

Originally posted by: Shre28
I love the back to back crisp confrontation. The last line stole the show. Continue soon

Originally posted by: fSharm
Awesome writing dr...
Well done..

Thank you everyone 😃 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: gargpoo
Its damn awsm...
The convo through eyes...
He has learnt to mask his emotions...
With the last line u nailed it...
Cont soon

He has, indeed 😳 😊

Thanks for your comment 😳 Will continue soon 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Anku-
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Originally posted by: Neetz
unreserved onpage 6

Replied to both 😳 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Mdwst
The last line " I'm the manhoos mother".. Oh my..
The sarcasm from her .. His realization that left him speechless .. Do continue

Thanks Viji 🤗 😳 How're you?

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: nafnaf
Second shot - as good as the first !!!!!!!!!!!
Absolutely amazing!!!!
Ishita's thoughts and arguments with herself - her heart and mind!!!

I loved this particular thought:"7 years! 7 years and he has learnt to mask his emotions so well, even from you. How did he fall so in love with you?"
Brillinat!!!

Both jealous - Raman of Mani and Ishita of Shagun!!!!
I could imagine Ishra across the room from each other and staring at each other!!!!!!!

Her look of resignation when he asked Simmi to take their daughter inside - his heart "broke into a zillion pieces" I loved that line!!!

And then the final line from Ishita - heart wrenching!!!😭

Please, please, please update soon as I cannot wait any longer!!!!

Thank you so much for the pM!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much for the detailed comment 😳 😃

They had to be jealous. They belong to each other, and anyone else is a hinderance.

@bold - That is the exact thought I had in my mind while writing this. I could imagine DT & KP nailing it, and hence visualize it clearly. Glad it came across 😳

Since you always shared your feedback and comments here, may I please know your name 😳