We've Only Just Begun - IshRa FF IMP Note Pg 50

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: -Ara-
Anku,
I logged in for you!

I will read this once you complete it. Or once the chapters pile up.

I love you. Keep up the good work.

Thanks Ki 🤗 Love you back

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: mayasundar
Hi Anku,
Beautiful start to your story.

I liked both their point of view.

Your are an amazing writer

Please pm if you can for the next update

Thanks dear 🤗 so happy you like.

And I hadn't thought of PM's but since so many are asking I shall do so.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ishrasoul
awesome dear
i also wanted that cv give a good closure to this realistic track...
but what can we do... cv are hell bent to irritate viewers...
leave them...

just lovely part...
will be eagerly waiting for next one...

Thanks dear 😃 Hope this story satisfies you then.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Divanii
Pls PM me
Like this SS

Thanks, will do 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: sush_rddt
it is as perfect as anything can be..
i am happy that u chose this track which was left unjustified!
you have written beautifully!
both the POVs and their anguish!!!
superb! continue soon

I am glad I chose it too, it was one of my most favourite tracks left open ended and not justified. The pain and anguish both characters went through needed justice. So hopefully my vent towards it will prove to do good for this story 😆 Thanks for commenting.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: kaa1202
It was awesome Anku..
Probably another track which had loads of Potential again made a mockery by the makers..
The Emotional turmoil which they went through in this was missing in the original show..
I dunno whether I had read any of your stories before or not but u really are writing well especially the emotional take on the couple.. It was refreshing & enlightening.. Do cont soon...

They did go through a lot on the show, but it wasn't reflected in their emotions. Raman still showed real hurt for himself and Ishita. Ishita was made into a typical FL who had a threshold to bear everything and not humanly react to the accusations meted out to her or Raman. No human is that resilient. So hoping to alter that here.

And I haven't written anything on IshRa at all before, this is my first 😊 Hopefully I do justice to it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Mreddy
This is superb. Was one of my fav tracks and CVs ruined the ending. Wished that the family would live separatley just like your story but that did not happen and we had silly track. Yours is the best.

Yes had hoped to see them think of themselves ONLY but it got ruined completely. And didn't like that one bit. I also hate how they treat intimacy on the show,so tried to change that too 😊

Glad you liked, thanks for commenting 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: avni_19
OMGG! Ankuu..that was beautiful dear.. So many real emotions, scenes. I loved it.. If I have to pinpoint which line or their state of mind was perfect, then i will have to quote the whole story in my comment box.. It was that brilliant, emotional at many places.
I so loved how u described their intimacy level of theirs.

CVS have literally ruined everything. Nothing is shown as what we want..Its all a biz after all... But seriously u r definitely doing a great job dear and I hope I can expect a PM from u for future updates!

Cont soonnn...!!!

Thanks a ton for this beautiful comment Avni 🤗 It makes me happy that the part left you satisfied while reading, that's the best compliment I could get I suppose.

All your feedback will always be welcome, so do keep commenting. And shall PM you the next time I update for sure 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -Gan-
aww Anku this is soo beautiful!!!! Wish Cvs paid so much attention to story about the characters they created themselves . Thank you for giving us this.

Thanks so much Gan for dropping in to comment, even when you're off the forum atm. 🤗

I hope to see you around as story progresses, your comments will be much awaited.