We've Only Just Begun - IshRa FF IMP Note Pg 50

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Boo2014
Wow.

I am so glad you wrote about this track, which unfortunatley the CV's as usul could not follow through aptly.

You write so beautifully and give the perspective of what both Raman and Ishita are going through.

'He loved her, worshiped her, and there was nothing he couldn't do for the women who had left her own world and come into his life without wanting anything in return, only for his daughter.'

and

'ur Raman, mere liye meri family, mera ghar ... it's where you are. My relation with everyone is because of you, and if you are hurt by them, so am I.. aapko dukh hota hai toh takleej mujhe bhi hoti hai Raman.'.

This was just perfection.

Please continue as soon as possible 👏

Boo 🤗 so happy to see a comment from you.

CV's always skip highlighting the deeper emotions and justifications the characters need. Through fanfictions we can change that at least.

I am so happy you liked the part 😳

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: nafnaf
This is an absolutely amazing story - I am so glad that finally someone is tackling this track as like you say it ended very unsatisfactorily!!!!!
I love that you have given points of view of both Ishra!!!!!👏👍🏼

The family does take them for granted and it is about time they realise that Ishra have feelings too and they get hurt as well and they need to be treated with the respect that they deserve!!!!!!!!!!💔🥺

Thank you so much for this story and I look forward to the next update soon please!!! I would really appreciate it if you were to pm me please!!!🤗

Hey Nafna 🤗 Thank you for the comment.

Both of them went through a great deal in this track and hence needed their feelings to be justified. I wouldn't have started the story without mentioning their ordeal.

The family barely understood their worth, it was this track that could make them do so, but didn't. So hopefully I can highlight it here.

And sure dear, will PM you.

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

NOTE

Hey guys thanks for all your comments 😃 Means so much. I hadn't thought of PM's when I posted but since so many of you asked for it. I'd just request all those who want a PM to like one of my two posts on the first page and I shall PM all of you whenever I update.

I see so many silent readers, liking there.. so many are my friends 😆 PLEASE do comment guys, it would mean a lot

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Lovey

@Love9

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Sry for late comment anku .

Love ur story yaar ,its very very interesting ,

Would love to read it more .

I know my comment is chotu sa but plz bear with me as i m very lazy in typing yaar😆

Do pm me.

Update soon will be waitng

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Anuhyaa

@Anuhyaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Hey Anku...

So nice to finally see you pen down the story...
Congratulations for standing relentlessly on the idea and finishing the first part...😊

It was so beautiful and wholesome for your first effort..
It moved like some show-reel infront of my eyes,effortlessly...

& I loved what you did with the track ...Here atleast Ramam & Ishita are thinking about themselves along with their families... & them moving out would teach everyone some responsibility which was much needed for the Bhalla clan..

& Coming to your writing...it was rich,deep and nuanced.

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

FINALLY anku!

im gonna be reading this tonite and promise to edit 😳

I AM SO GLAD you finally did this! 😳 promise me you'll have romance, you know how we crave it anyways on the show... these stories are our only salvation and escape and bahana to have romance and REALISM with and on IshRa ;)

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Alu-

@Alu-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Finally finally. I promise I read this yesterday, but honestly got no time. Wow anku I don't believe you took months to write such a beautiful piece. Your writing skills everything are so spot on. Everything was perfectly described I'm amazed. Continue soon

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zeny_Nian

@zeny_Nian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Anku that was amazingly written!! Emotional, realistic, heart wrenching! IshRa they are life to each other...that's how we knew them until few months back!! And this track was so realistic made us hooked to this show quite after a long time! But they failed miserably to keep up with the line!

thanks to you for puttin to words the way we all wanted this track to move actually...their plights the way you've gathered through words are clearly visualized!

great start...eagerly waiting for next what!

ps-if you're pming, pm me too!

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

it was awesome anku di
I am happy that finally some one decided to write to this track, seriously this track had so much potential but again cvs again used that track
I loved that IshRa are separate here and will start their new life.
wow yaar, bathroom scene was so beautiful, reminded me aani di TS, seriously we lost our so much wonderful writers and members only because of this stupid track. hope to see them back soon
and please don't take so much time to update, we want to read more with lots of IshRa moments