We've Only Just Begun - IshRa FF IMP Note Pg 50

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Posted: 9 years ago

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Anuhyaa
Hey Anku...

So nice to finally see you pen down the story...
Congratulations for standing relentlessly on the idea and finishing the first part...😊

It was so beautiful and wholesome for your first effort..
It moved like some show-reel infront of my eyes,effortlessly...

& I loved what you did with the track ...Here atleast Ramam & Ishita are thinking about themselves along with their families... & them moving out would teach everyone some responsibility which was much needed for the Bhalla clan..

& Coming to your writing...it was rich,deep and nuanced.

I am so so glad you like it 😃 And thanks for your comment. As I said, I was vary because this is my first FF for IshRa.

And yes, IshRa are way too giving, and people take advantage. I think they need time off for their kids and themselves.

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: serendipity.
FINALLY anku!
im gonna be reading this tonite and promise to edit 😳
I AM SO GLAD you finally did this! 😳 promise me you'll have romance, you know how we crave it anyways on the show... these stories are our only salvation and escape and bahana to have romance and REALISM with and on IshRa ;)

I am so so glad to see you here Reenz, awaiting your comments post reading 🤗 I chose a family based FF, but there'll be lots of romance, since there's barely any haddi 😆

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Alu-
Finally finally. I promise I read this yesterday, but honestly got no time. Wow anku I don't believe you took months to write such a beautiful piece. Your writing skills everything are so spot on. Everything was perfectly described I'm amazed. Continue soon

Alu 🤗 didn't take months to write it. Took months to start writing it 😆

Thanks so much, glad you liked. 😛

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Maya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Hi Anku and Neekita

Beautiful update and thanks for the pm

I hope you update it soon

Edited by mayasundar - 9 years ago

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: zeny_Nian
Anku that was amazingly written!! Emotional, realistic, heart wrenching! IshRa they are life to each other...that's how we knew them until few months back!! And this track was so realistic made us hooked to this show quite after a long time! But they failed miserably to keep up with the line!

thanks to you for puttin to words the way we all wanted this track to move actually...their plights the way you've gathered through words are clearly visualized!

great start...eagerly waiting for next what!
ps-if you're pming, pm me too!

Thanks so much dear for appreciating and commenting with so much heart 🤗 I am glad you could relate to the point of views I listed and that it gave you a feel IshRa do or did. I hated the conclusion the track got too Hoping to change that here.

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Albeli26
it was awesome anku di
I am happy that finally some one decided to write to this track, seriously this track had so much potential but again cvs again used that track
I loved that IshRa are separate here and will start their new life.
wow yaar, bathroom scene was so beautiful, reminded me aani di TS, seriously we lost our so much wonderful writers and members only because of this stupid track. hope to see them back soon
and please don't take so much time to update, we want to read more with lots of IshRa moments

Thanks 😃Glad you enjoyed reading. And indeed creatives have a habit of ruining the best of tracks horribly. This was one, which had immense potential. Hope I can live up to your expectations.

And shall try and update often 😊

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: yhmmylife
Hi Anku finally read it. Sorry for being late.

This track had so much potential but as usual the cv's and their writings 😕.

Loved both their POV's.

And your writing is too good .👏..koi doubt mat rakhna 😆

Thanks Anjali 🤗 love you for the encouragement. And hopefully you'll like my take on it.

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: -Atii-
Hi. I love you. *Hides face*

😭

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kaa1202

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Nicely done Anku..

Their assurance to each other was nice with a tad emotional dialogues in it. This is what we clearly missed in this show. His talk with his children was icing on the cake. We craved to see that but they made Ruhi acting as an adult & sidelined Adi by giving him a girlfriend. Kids meant to ask certain & those questions are the proof that they are children & it was beautifully portrayed in this..

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