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sririt

@sririt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awesome. Please PM me next time

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Maya

@mayasun

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hi Anku,

Beautiful start to your story.

I liked both their point of view.

Your are an amazing writer

Please pm if you can for the next update

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Firstly, so sorry for not being able to read through and comment till now, given how excited I was for your first write-up on IshRa 😔 But as I told you the other day, your words, whether a story like this or a review or an opinion post, is something that needs time, calm and patience, because it is so well thought through and penned down, that reading it in a hurry will be an injustice to the writer you are 😊 😊 And I'm so glad that I read it peacefully today, dedicating the time that it deserved 😊 😊

Coming to the 1st part, I'm trying to find words that describe what I'm going through at this moment. The family track was one of the most realistic and touching track when it started. To pick it up and try to give it the closure it deserves, is a mean feat in itself. And I'm so thankful to you (and Neets) for bringing to light the way it should have been dealt in the first place.

I love love love each individual's thought process - Ishita's and Raman's. Each feels the hurt for the other. They move out for each other's respect. Both of them understand what the other person has given to the family, and what he / she deserves. Insult to one, pricks the other. Such is the depth of IshRa's relationship that all of us die for (or used to die for before they got stupider by the minute 😆)

His breaking down in the shower, and her handling him was the most natural, heart-touching moment. Trying to normalise their abnormal circumstances at the moment, it is taking them both immense effort and it shows.

I've told you this earlier, and will reiterate - I love the way you pen down thoughts. Its not just that I as a reader need that peace and calm to read it through, but also the fact that the piece brings along its own serenity with itself is what's commendable. I, for one, am in love with the sad, but beautiful beginning to this story, and as you say, "We've only just begun" 😉 Will be waiting for more (after reading Pt2 😛) 😃 😃

Edited by -Nidoo- - 9 years ago

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

awesome dear

i also wanted that cv give a good closure to this realistic track...

but what can we do... cv are hell bent to irritate viewers...

leave them...

just lovely part...

will be eagerly waiting for next one...

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MlovesKSG

@MlovesKSG

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Pls PM me
Like this SS

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

it is as perfect as anything can be..

i am happy that u chose this track which was left unjustified!

you have written beautifully!

both the POVs and their anguish!!!

superb! continue soon

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-Atii-

@-Atii-

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

LATE BUT RES LOVE YOU.

unres

Ankuuu! Such an AMAZING fic! I can't believe this is your first YHM fic!! SO SO good!! Like everyone, i'm glad you chose this track to write on...because this track had such a beautiful beginning but such a horrible ending!! So, i'm so glad! You have written it brilliantly and put forth Ishra's emotions beautifully!! Loved it!!

Sorry for being so late..😳

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

It was awesome Anku..

Probably another track which had loads of Potential again made a mockery by the makers..

The Emotional turmoil which they went through in this was missing in the original show..

I dunno whether I had read any of your stories before or not but u really are writing well especially the emotional take on the couple.. It was refreshing & enlightening.. Do cont soon...

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Mreddy

@Mreddy

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

This is superb. Was one of my fav tracks and CVs ruined the ending. Wished that the family would live separatley just like your story but that did not happen and we had silly track. Yours is the best.

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

OMGG! Ankuu..that was beautiful dear.. So many real emotions, scenes. I loved it.. If I have to pinpoint which line or their state of mind was perfect, then i will have to quote the whole story in my comment box.. It was that brilliant, emotional at many places.

I so loved how u described their intimacy level of theirs.

CVS have literally ruined everything. Nothing is shown as what we want..Its all a biz after all... But seriously u r definitely doing a great job dear and I hope I can expect a PM from u for future updates!

Cont soonnn...!!!

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