We've Only Just Begun - IshRa FF IMP Note Pg 50 - Page 3

Mind Blowing

Wow.

I am so glad you wrote about this track, which unfortunatley the CV's as usul could not follow through aptly.

You write so beautifully and give the perspective of what both Raman and Ishita are going through.



'He loved her, worshiped her, and there was nothing he couldn't do for the women who had left her own world and come into his life without wanting anything in return, only for his daughter.'

and

'ur Raman, mere liye meri family, mera ghar ... it's where you are. My relation with everyone is because of you, and if you are hurt by them, so am I.. aapko dukh hota hai toh takleej mujhe bhi hoti hai Raman.'.

This was just perfection.

Please continue as soon as possible 👏

This is an absolutely amazing story - I am so glad that finally someone is tackling this track as like you say it ended very unsatisfactorily!!!!!

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Finally the update is here.. was waiting from long for this.. and have to admit it was really worth waiting.. as its a Great Start Anku...

I loved that YOU choose this track to write as in the show this track where ishra were misunderstood and leaved bhalla house was not up to Mark CV 's started it well but then they Messed up the track with that Toshiji.. ishita planning to reunite family and that juice track.. and we didn't got proper closure they ended the track with that lame juice track... so I am waiting how you will make this story go further...

I loved ishita here... her.. love her care her respect for Raman and how she is with Raman in this decision of his and how his self respect matters to her.. how she feels his pain and trying to soothe to take away his pain... really loved the way you portrayed ishita's character here.. 😳

Really felt bad for Raman the way he got misunderstood even after doing so much for his family his siblings.. his siblings blamed him his father being unfair to him.. must be very hurting for a man like Raman who is always ready to do anything for his family his siblings... and he had to leave his family... really loved how Raman thinks about ishita and fought for her... how much he loves her... as you said Raman is like a child who wants to proove that its worth having him... and he surely is worth having in life he is a responsible son.. careing and loving brother for his siblings.. dotting father.. and loving husband.. 😳

Loved ishra moments... there intimacy .. there gestures to each other.. thank god here they already taken that step in there marriage and already consummate there marriage loved all ishra moments waiting for many more in upcoming updates 😳

Anku that was an Awesome.. beautiful update.. Great start... 👏 will be waiting for next part eagerly continue soon.. 🤗

Anku... Thank You mat bolo otherwise we gang will take all credit sochlo 😆 😉 just Kidding 😆

Originally posted by: meghnaghosh

Awesome...beautiful...continue soon 👏

Originally posted by: kingmanu

This track had so much potential but very disappointed the way cvs dealt it.

They made raman accept staying in iyers house but how I wished ishrarudi lived seperately.

We would have got most wonderful track.

Coming to your ss, this part is awesome, ishrarudi are living seperately, that's what I wished.

Loved reading it, and I know forum writers give logical ending to their writings, wanna see how you're gonna unite bhallas👍🏼

Originally posted by: -K.13-

You finally posted it - yayyy!

So we've talked about this before, but this had the potential to be one of my favorite 2015 tracks. They had set everything up perfectly - Raman's emotions, Ishita's unwavering support, the realistic struggles of a joint family rooted in money, the role of the kids, & so on. As the track was building up, I was so excited to see Raman & Ishita survive independently & the Bhallas come to realize the worth of both Ishita & Raman. Unfortunately our CVs gave is BS (no surprise there)...they utterly ruined what could've been an ode to classic, realistic YHM.

But that's in the past.

I'm so happy this is the topic of your SS because just from this update...you have developed this rich and meaningful work of writing. It has the depth I wanted to see on screen. It has a couple waving true hurt and justice being given to both their emotions. I seriously can't wait to see where you take this & thanks for writing as most people have abandoned the forum/show (leaving me bored 😆)! ❤️

Originally posted by: Neetz

Anku, I can't tell you how much I loved reading it. Gut wrenching to say the least. Tbh, my heart feels heavy and eyes welled up. It's that touching. Plz give me some time to make a detailed post. I don't have my laptop with me. Gone for repair. I will reply properly as soon as I can because there are a few lines I wanna highlight and that won't be possible on phone. In case I don't get my laptop by tomorrow, I will sit and type on my phone as much as possible on this. I hope you understand. Don't feel discouraged or anything. I will keep prodding you on. Lol

Great work! Awesome! 😊

P.S. Thank you so so much for taking this up and writing it so beautifully. Lots of Love. 🤗