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Well Well!
First I will comment on the previous part which is Raman's POV.
The Way you handled that part which showed his agony is incredible & mind blowing too. Main reason for saying that is generally guys are not expressive. They are more vulnerable even though they act as arrogant. Writing a POV for a male especially from a female is not easy rather say its difficult & it won't appeal mainly to male readers. We guys generally act & comment like stupids but we are not. I dunno your age but I am saying this either u r a freaking genius or u had a load of experience in your life to write that piece.
I am literally dumbfounded
The last part is like a cake walk to you considering the previous part which is a lot more tougher to write. I dunno whether am I right, I am saying my views after reading some novels in these years& coz of that I believe I can able to find certain nuances in writing.
Kudos to your overall writing & thinking Nidoo..
P.S:- I am not that much expressive. Excuse me😃
With Regards-Kaarthikk.
Ghum Hai Kisikey Pyaar Meiin
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