Lo Siento: IshRa TS | FINAL: Page 11 [04/09] (Sht 1: Pg 1,Sht 2: Pg 5)

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: DivanIsh
RES---

Will wait for you to UnRes Pankhuri 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: -Anku-
Reserved. I know I have another spot reserved. But shall read all the parts together and post a comment here 😳

I was wondering the same when you reserved again 😳 Take your time, will be waiting for your thoughts 😳 😃

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: nish161
Edited 😊
Nidoo,
Due er en begavet skribent(you are a gifted writer)danish not spanish 😉
That's all,actually wanted to write a lot,but I don't think my words would do any
justice.so I'll jus leave it at that.
Thanks for the pm 😊
P.s.ignore the typos
P.p.s.please do write more 😃

Haha... I'm going to reply in English 😛

Thank you so much for the appreciation Nish 🤗 Feels great 😳

Your P.P.S. - Will try to 😊

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: kaa1202
Well Well!
First I will comment on the previous part which is Raman's POV.
The Way you handled that part which showed his agony is incredible & mind blowing too. Main reason for saying that is generally guys are not expressive. They are more vulnerable even though they act as arrogant. Writing a POV for a male especially from a female is not easy rather say its difficult & it won't appeal mainly to male readers. We guys generally act & comment like stupids but we are not. I dunno your age but I am saying this either u r a freaking genius or u had a load of experience in your life to write that piece.
I am literally dumbfounded

The last part is like a cake walk to you considering the previous part which is a lot more tougher to write. I dunno whether am I right, I am saying my views after reading some novels in these years& coz of that I believe I can able to find certain nuances in writing.

Kudos to your overall writing & thinking Nidoo..

P.S:- I am not that much expressive. Excuse me😃

With Regards-Kaarthikk.

You are very expressive, Kaarthik 😃 And I feel over-whelmed by all these kind words 😳

Writing from Raman's POV is always very different and difficult because of 2 reasons.

As you mentioned, men generally do not put up their emotions for everyone to see, but that doesn't mean they do not feel anything on the inside. They're human beings too, after all. Being a female, trying to think from a male perspective always tires me out mentally. I try to keep the gender thing out, and only bring in the human angle. For example, how must a spouse feel if he / she figures out they're not going to have a child, irrespective of the fact whether the spouse is husband or wife, and then co-relate it with the person's past experiences and feelings.
Because of the layers of the highly complex character that Raman is. He has had so many myriad emotions in one lifetime, and has reacted differently each time, and KP, as an actor, has done poetic justice to it because of which we as viewers can visualize these layers. How will this man react in a situation then becomes more unpredictable.

The last part, actually for me it was tougher than even Raman's POV. Emotions and self-talk comes easy to me, and not physical confrontations or dialogues 😛

As for my age, genuius, and / or experience, I'd rather keep you guessing 😆

Thank you so much Kaarthik for such a detailed comment 🤗 Feels amazing 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Such a Beautiful Ending..

Beautifully written..

Superb dear

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Hi Nidoo...
This TS has left me speechless...you have written with such beautiful expression and emotion...read all the parts in one go...
Cannot say anything but Brilliantly written...

Do continue writing such stories...

Ps:Thanks for the pm for this and do continue pm me the links for the stories😊

Thank you 😳 Glad you liked it 😊

Can I know your name please?

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: sweeetz
This ws beautifully written...
Loved how it ws all put up
The emotions and love aptly protrayed...i wonder y cant dey show sumthng like dis in the show
Absolutely loved the story

Thank you 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Mdwst
Wow simply superb, very emotional.
Her pain and anguish, his guilt oh boy nothing to say
The best line " it's not the tears they shed for each other, but the tears they shed with each other.", perfect, that's their relation, Powerful. Well written.👏

Thank you so much Viji 🤗 Glad you liked it so 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: .TIA.
Such a heart wrenching update 😭
All the pain and guilt they were going through worded so beautifully
I don't really have words to describe what I felt.
I simply loved it 😛 🤗

Aww Tia.. Thank you so much 🤗