Lo Siento: IshRa TS | FINAL: Page 11 [04/09] (Sht 1: Pg 1,Sht 2: Pg 5) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Anum_says

Really Nice.

Originally posted by: Riahshroff

Read both the updates n loved them 😳

So well penned 👏 I could feel the pain and agony both of them were going through 😊

Lovely

Originally posted by: .TIA.

Shot 2

Loved it 😳

Raman feeling so heartbroken and helpless was so well written.

U have written both their feelings so beautifully 😊

Originally posted by: anisha960

both the parts were awsme !
though emotional
perfectly potraited emotions
plzz pm d next prt

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

First RES 😃😃😃

Finally UNRES

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what do i say

you know what i am thinking that i should stop commenting part wise and comment in the end when a particular shot is done...that's because i speak so much in the first part that i am left with nothing to comment on the second

it was once again a perfection and you know it

i can proudly copy all my words from first comment here but that makes no sense...my feelings remain the same...or no actually they are larger this time

it is comparatively a little less tough to write women's emotions because they are evident and women are good at expressing

when it comes to men, they don't express their emotions so when you sit to pen down, it becomes much tougher but yet you did it and you did it brilliantly

his pain mixed with guilt and shattering of hopes 👏...i just don't have the words to compliment

i have read so many write ups where people have penned down Raman's breakdown during so many other tracks but trust me on this i have not read anything better than this

That is all i can say

thanks a lot for writing this

P.S. I don't know if my words above will make sense coz when i am either too emotional or too happy then i blabber

and right now i would say i am sadly happy

sad to read his suffering and happy for the way it is shown

Hats off

Originally posted by: nish161

Hey nidoo,
How do you do it every time man,like seriously
I'm flabbergasted, it excellent.
I love your title.
Esto es heremoso(this is beautiful) Spanish again 😆
P.s.thanks for the pm 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Anu_IshraDivan

RESS!!! 😃