Lo Siento: IshRa TS | FINAL: Page 11 [04/09] (Sht 1: Pg 1,Sht 2: Pg 5) - Page 12

Originally posted by: -Atii-

Loved it!

imperfectly perfect.. i have said this before...imperfectly perfect describes them so perfectly..

woww..
superb title imperfectly perfect

Originally posted by: lachu6

woww..
superb title imperfectly perfect

OMG Totally unbelievable - so amazingly written and so insightfully expressed - "dil chagaya"!!!!!!!!!!⭐️ So emotional 😭

Originally posted by: nafnaf

OMG Totally unbelievable - so amazingly written and so insightfully expressed - "dil chagaya"!!!!!!!!!!⭐️ So emotional 😭

Really well done- please continue in this way - loved reading this and all your other stories🤗

Nidoo..read all 3 parts in one go..

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

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my latest UNRES till date and i feel like hiding me face😔😔😔

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what do i say...if you were here with me or i was there with you...i would have simply hugged you and i mean it seriously

it was out of this world

how i wish you were the writer of the show

if I can still watch YHM bearing those non-sense tracks just for Ishra then if you were the writer, i cannot even imagine the heights of craziness i would have had for the show

i first said part 1 was best then i read part 2 and i was muddled and now part 3 is here

you literally write to kill me i swear

i just felt it was all happening in front of my eyes and i was cherishing it all not as a reader but as a viewer

you spelled some magic with your words and i was just lost

it had so many beautiful lines and i can copy them all but i fell in love with the ending

The strength of their relationship was not in the tears they shed for each other, but in the tears they shed with each other, and the night once again witnessed their love over powering their agony.

brilliant it was 👏

P.S sorry for the delay

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved it

Originally posted by: -Anku-

Reserved. I know I have another spot reserved. But shall read all the parts together and post a comment here 😳

EDITED

Sorry for this. I sometimes just forget after reserving You should slap me for this 😆

When this track came up I had expected .. sorry not expected but imagined a scene where IshRa just look into the others eye and realize each others pain. I had hoped for them to approach each other and understand the other knows the truth even without having to say it. And then they would break down in each others arms, seeking solace for the pain they were undergoing. But what we got was although acted well. In terms of direction and writing it was very weak. For them to meet in a hotel and underplay the whole situation was a let down.

But BELIEVE ME. Your three shot has fulfilled my wish of such a scene in the show. Your first two parts explain Ishita and Raman's ordeal so immaculately that you can imagine Karan and Divyanka in front of your eyes acting those scenes out. Raman and Ishita have their own pain to go through here. Ishita obviously is going through this for the second time. Hopes being crushed, all those dreams she's seen with her husband breaking. And for Raman there's guilt of giving her hope where there wasn't. She had learnt living with the truth and he feels bad about rehashing the pain. And then their love and relation is so beautiful that they worry for each others ordeal more than their own

The last part was my most favourite one. When they finally face each other and share the pain together. ESPECIALLY LOVED how they looked at each other and knew in one instant that the other KNEW the truth. What followed was poignant, heart touching and just simply beautiful. It is what IshRa are. They care so much about the others feelings than their own. And you bought that out so so vividly through your writing. You have a way with words and emotions.

At the time that you were posting this I was also writing a similar piece. My first for the couple and show. But then you wrote it so well, I didn't find the need to continue mine. Plus post this the show aired a scene which disappointed me and I was disheartened to continue the story I was writing.

I am going to write on this same scenario but in a different way now. I had hoped for something to happen immediately after Ishita found out about the report before Romi's wedding. So I'd like to write on this same ordeal they face but in a much different scenario 😳 I want to, but the problem is that I NEED PEACE to write. Which I fail to get at my own house 😆

Anyway enough about me. I'd just like to say that I LOVE your writing Nidoo. Love reading stories from you. Do write more 🤗

Nidoo one more awesome update. you kept all emotional of Ishra their pain and their try to hide each other pain not to let each other know their emotional turms oil that was erupt inside themRaman is so loving Ishu he try to avoid to answer her question or to let her know about what the doctor said. and Ishu try to kept her pain inside her for the happiness of the family of this moment and once she alone she had to go through the pain ful fact of her life and that she can not share with raman cause she did not to shatter his dream it hard when it come to reality and you can write it and make we feel how Ishra are going through👏👏 the end was their cute moment when Ishu was teasing him and they know and understand each other very well and their journey from beginning till now make them grow together and stronger.thank you for writing the beautiful story dear. Hope we have chance to read more story in future from you.Have a wonderful start for new week my dear.🤗🤗