Lo Siento: IshRa TS | FINAL: Page 11 [04/09] (Sht 1: Pg 1,Sht 2: Pg 5)

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-godschild-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Hey. I just read both the parts together n absolutely loved them 😳

U have written both their views ans the pain they are going through so well 👏

I have no words to describe it. So heart touching and beautiful 😛

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Mehak Ashraf

@Mehak_KPian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Loved Raman's POV. You penned down his feelings beautifully. 😊

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ishra123

@ishra123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Beautifully written
Well written.
Thanks for pm

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usaonly

@usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Nidoo I read both story Ishu story full of sad pain and hurt that she can not conceive and shatter Raman and Ruhi dream. Raman story full with pain hurt and guilty that he weave the beautiful dream for her that she can become a mother for true sense but it not happen . Both story show us like the mirror that reflect all what they had in their hard for each other and they love each other so much that they don't want each other to go through the sadness pain and shatter dream.thank you so much for writing the beautiful story and full with emotional of Ishra.And that was brilliant act by DT an KP that they portray the role of Ishra that can made us feel them like real thing happen infront of our eyes.👏👏

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

I am not going to write my views now.. Will write it after reading the next part.. Plz update it soon Nidoo😊

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: EkPaheli
Such a lovely beginning Nidoo and I am sorry for not being able to comment earlier 😳
I loved the way you have written Ishita' POV here and the way she is heartbroken for him, thinking that though she found completion in her life thanks to him and the little family that they now have thanks to Ruhi and Adi both being there with them, the one thing he hoped from her is the one thing she cant give him.

Also thanks to you I know two spanish words 😆 thank you! I hope to learn the language someday along with a few others, they sound just so amazing - learning Spanish, Italian, French and Russian would be nothing less than a dream 😳

Great to see you here, Aani 🤗 No worries 😳

Thank you so much 😳 Glad you liked it 😃 I feel she's more hurt for him (and Ruhi) than her, and that's what prompted this piece 😊

Spanish, French, German and Mandarin are in my list. Some day

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: .TIA.
What a beautiful start 😳 I loved Ishitas POV and how she feels so much for him.
Her pain and agony is portrayed so beautifully. Loved it Nidoo 😛

Thank you so much Tia 🤗