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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

Very sad sad update 😭

But i am sure after this raman goes to search for ishu in her class dosent find her then ishu ignoring him and finally through simmi he comes to know she is ishu and the u will show romance in his dream 😆 as ishu is not in a podition to dream romance and then may be u reviel that he remembers choti ishu 😉

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

UNRES on 62 as well 😊

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#473

The chapter was beautiful.

This is the reason I don't like teenagers! I mean the mental age. Every teenager thinks that he/she is the center of the universe! Did he ask you to dream about him? Now he doesn't act like the one in your dreams so you're going about crying and hurting yourself and blaming it on him and fate? Seriously, girl grow a pair!

@maanvir You don't need my horrible scenarios. You're doing great. With my scenarios it's not gonna be an IshRa story.😭

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Prayosha

@Prayosha.DivAn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Hey Di...

Ishitane aisa kyo kaha...ki uss ke saath rone wala koi nahi hai...

Mai hoo na...puri update me jab se Ishita ne rona shuru kar diya tab se mere bhi Ansu nahi ruke...

Jab Ramanki awaj dusre washroom se aa rahi thi...tab muje laga hi...ki Yeh Raman Shagun ke saath hi hai...& yeh part bahot hi sad & Emotional tha...actualy to nuje complain karni chahiye ki aap ne muje rulaya...par Realy mai kahungi...yeh part muje bahot achcha laga...Dil ko chhu liya...bahot beautifuly likha tha...

But Today I want to say...I hate you Raman...itni aasani se Ishita ko bhula diya...par muje pata hai...Ramanto hai hi Ishita ka...Ishita ne Raman ki kami mehsus na ho iss liye uss ke sapno ka sahara liya...& Raman ko Ishita ki kami mehsus na ho iss liye Gusse & dusri ladkiyo ka sahara liya...Shagun ke paas jana koi pyar nahi...mere Attraction hai...True love to Ishita hi hai...

& aap ne Boy's POV ke songs puchhe hai...mere comment maine 60th page par complete ki hai...please phir se padh lena...aap ko sab ke POV milenge...

Edited by prayosha - 10 years ago

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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

Emotional part...

well written by you...beautifully written

Waiting for the next

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Anum_says

@Anum_says

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#476

😕😔😭

Raman | Shagun | Kiss 💔

Mano it was sad. But Brilliant

Loved it..

And Song..

Ummm...

Tere Hoke Rahenge from Raja Natwarlal..

Deewana Kar Raha HaiHai

Tu HiMera

Haan Hansi Bangaye

Chand Asmanoun se Laapata Hogaya..

OK I don't know about Situation..

Isliye filhal bas Yeh songs mere mind mai aaye.!

Update soon

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Isha Pathare

@Isha_Pathare

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#477

Sad update

Want to read raman's pov as well

How was his journey of 10 years

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prathyu2695

@prathyu2695

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#478

Hiii di, sry aajkal reply nahi kar rahi thi. aap ne pucha na boys pov se : i thought

"TU HI TU HAR JAGAH AAJ KAL KYUN HEY"...

"K AISE BATAOON TUJE KI DIL MERA KYA KEH RAHA" ...

"jara nazar uthake dekho baite hum yahi bekabar humse kyun ho itne bure bhi ham nahi..."

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Deep

@rk654

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#479

simply Awesome ...so beautifully written part..👏.loved it..

MS sanskari ko apne hi sapane pad gaye bhari😭😭..

really you described ishita's state of mind very beautifully..very emotional update...

thank you for the pm dear😊

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#480

Awesomee updateee...Even if its sad, koi nahi..its a lesson thrown to all ur readers through ur update.."Its good to dream but not all dreams come true and too much expectations lead to disappointments.." I loved how u explained the whole message through Ishita's tears and pain. Beautiful.

Cont soon...

Well my song suggestion from RKB... "Yeh ladki haye Allah...hayre Allah" : ;)