Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 47

Originally posted by: ..TeriDeewani..

For Mano di

Do congratulate her..

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Superb update like always😳

Originally posted by: prayosha

HIii Di...

Am I late???????? I don't think so...Because nowdays you are also very busy...right...

1st of all big Congratulations 👏 for completing 50 pages only in 6 parts...I know...iss me mai late ho gai...kyonki already 60 pages complete ho chuke hai...sorry...

& I want to give you a big Huggg...🤗 Itne beautifuls part 6 & 7 likhne ke liye...aap soch rahe ho mai badal kaise gai... to...jyada khush mat hoiye...mai sirf starting ki baat kar rahi hoo...end ki nahi...😡

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Part ~ 6

- Kisme Kitna Hai Dum

Yeh part padhke muje laga ki haa...ab IshRa ki story start hui...Raman ki Jhansi ki Rani & Ishita ka Ravan Kumar...superb Update...yeh jaan kar aap khush hongi ki iss update se meri koi complain nahi...

- "Oh hello! Excuse me"
- "Hey you!"
- "Behri ho? Sunayi nahi deta ke mai bula raha hun?"
- "Andhe ho? Dikhayi nahi detha ke I am not interested"
- "Tumhari itni himmat ke RKB ko ignore karo"
- "Look. I don't want to mess with you and spoil my day. So please let me go"
- "Smart ho samajh gayi that nobody messes with RKB"
- "But RKB messes with everyone"
- "Kya Bhai? Bachhi se kyun panga le rahe ho?"
- "Mai kisi se nahi darti"
- "Ooo"
- "Bhai...lagta hai apko takkar denewali agayi"
- "Really???? 1950 ki model 21st millennium ke Stud ko kya takkar degi"
- "Kya bhai? Is classic beauty ko aap 1950 ki model bol rahe ho...Not fair"
- "Pssst...Tujhe ye adhe litre tel me banayi hui 2 chotiwali chashmish kis angle se beauty lagi"
- "Sanskari! Oh I see!"
- "To Miss Sanskari. Tumhe to pata hi hoga ke hamare desh me badon ki izzat ki jati hai. To apne sanskaronka ek namoona humein dikhao, hum sabke pair choo kar aur yahan se chalti bano"
- SLAP
- "Agar kisi se izzat chahte ho, to pehle doosron ki izzat karna seekho. 'Give respect, take respect' seekha to hoga na school me. Oh mai bhi kisse pooch rahi hun? Apne attitude ko side me rakh ke dhyan doge to hi to yad rahega na ke kya seekha hai"


Realy Di...yeh part padh kar na Dil khush kar diya aap ne...& maine pehle hi kaha tha ki muje yeh RKB ka attitude pasand nahi...& aap ne reply me kaha tha CK ka Raman Hero & Yeh Raman Vilian hai...to mera jawab bhi sun lo...IshRa ki story me Raman na kqbhi vilian tha...& na kabhi hoga...haa Akdu hai...Sadu hai...Gusse wala hai...par wo kehte hai na....Tedha hai...par mera hai....wese hi Raman to Ishita ka hi hai...😉

Muje Song & uss se related situation bahot achchi lagi...& aap har song se related same situation likhte ho...aap ki wo Baat muje bahot achchi lagi...aap bahot beautifuly song ko scene me convert karte ho...

Love You for that...


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Part ~ 7

- Koi Mil Gaya

Ab iss part ke bare me mai aap se ka kahu...Haaye...Dil bahot bahot bahot khush kar diya aap ne...half part padh kar maine socha tha ki yeh part to mai 20-25 bar to padh hi lungi ... . Par aap ke Dvil kido ne mere sapno par paani pher diya...par koi ni...wo part IshRa special to tha...to 10-12 bar to padh hi lungi mai wo...

Iss part me Ishita ke 2 new friends bane.. ...Simmi & Vandita...wo bhi bahot achcha tha...pa Vandita ki Raman se kya problm hai.khar Ishita ne 1st part me Raman ko Vandita Balake functionme dekha tha...to wo problem bhi jald hi solve ho jayegi..to no problem...par mera intret ishRq me jyada hai to usi ki baat karungi...

Yeh Shagun muje bilkul pasand nahi...Apshagun...& Part 8 ke Teasing teaser se to lagta hai...ki Raman ko Ishita yaad nahi...yaa phir Raman naraz hai...& Shagun uss ki Girlfriend & nahi bhi hogi to bhi Raman Ishita ko chhidha ne ke liye use Girlfriend batayega...



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Part ~ 8(a)

- Jab Koi Apna Na Rahe

Pichle update me aapko sapnon se jagane keliye sorry...

Is update me pakka no sapna...

Sirf haqeeqat...

Lekin agar haqeeqat sapne se bhayanak hui to????

Read at ur own risk

Yeh kya keh diya aap ne...

Part a to bahot achcha tha...par aap ki inn bato se lagta hai...ki aap hum chhote chhote bachcho ko koi bada heart Attack 💔 dene wali ho...

Muje yeh Ishita Simmi ki Nanad Bhabhi wali baatein bahot achchi lagi...& muje yeh bhi yaad hai...aap ko aap ki Nanad bahot pyari hai...

Ek sachchi baat bolu...jo muje bahot achchi lagi...aap be Raman ko meri age ka dikhaya...not axactly...I am 17+ ...17 & 6 months...meri Birthdate 14th Feb. ...aap ke CK ke IshRa ki Wedding Anyversary...hai na...

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Haay...yeh kek kar to aap ne mere Dimag ke Ghodo ko IshRa land me janha marji chahe waha Ghumne ke permission de di...ab dekho...mere Ghodo par mera koi control nahi...ab wo kaha ghum kar aaye yeh aap ko bhi sunana parega...to suno...

My Imagenations ...My Songs...

(1) Ab Ishita ne Raman ko dekh hi liya hai...uss ka Dimag use keh raha hai...ki RKB se punga lena...uss ka pichha karna safe nahi par uss ka Dil thodi manega...


Dil hai...ke maanta nahi...
Ho...Dil hai ke manta nahi...
Badi mushkil hai...yeh janta ...hi nahi...
Ho...Dil hai...ke manta...nahi...


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(2) Ishita Raman ko apne Dil ki baat kehne ke liye...kitna bhi try kare kare...par keh hi nahi pati...


Mera Dil bhi...kitna Pagal hai...
Yeh Pyar jo tumse Karta hai...(2)
Par samne jan tum aate ho...(2)
Kuch bhi kehne se darta hai...
Oh mere sajan...oh mere sajan...
Sajan sajan...oh mere sajan...

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(3) Ab Ishita ka Dil Raman ko pukarega...to kabhi na kabhi to Raman ko ehsaas hoga hi...ki Ishita usski wo hi Dost hai...jise wo apna life partner bana na chahta tha...


Tu...tu hai wahi...
Dil ne jise Apna kaha...
Tu hai jaha...mai hooo waha...
Ab to yeh Jeena...tere bin hai...saja...
Aa mil jaye iss tarha...do lehre jiss tarha...
Phir ho naa...hudaa...haa yeh waada raha
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(4) Ab ishita bhi Raman ki Jhansi ki Rani hai...aise thodi maan jayegi...wo bhi to thoda ruthegi...haq bsnta hai...aakhir 10 years se Raman ka intjar kar rahi hai..

Mai tainu samjava ki...naa tere bina lagda jee...
Tu ki jane pyar...mera...mai karu intjar...tera...
Tu Dil toyu.jaan meri...mai tenu samjava ki...
Naa tere bin lagda jee...


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(5) Ab hoga IshRa pyar bhara milan...



WAda raha sanam...
Hoge Judaa na hum...
Chahe na chahe Jamana...
Humari chahto ka...
Mitt na sakega fasaana...

& isss jamane me...sab se pehle aaogi aap...2nd Ishita ki Amma...3rd shagun...& 4th Angad Malhotra...

Angad ka naam maine last me liya hai...par I hate him the most...& reason to aap ko pata hi hai...

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(6) Ab Ishra to ek ho hi gaye...& Raman ki family to Ishita ko bahu msnti bhi hai...par amma ko mana na baki hai...& Amma manne ko taiya nahi...



Kasam...ki Kasam ... hai Kasam se...
Hum ko pyar hai...sirf tum se...
Ab yeh pyar na hoga phir hum se...
Log kehte hai paagal...
Hoo mai yeh bhi naa janu...
Dil lutaya hai maine...
Ab kisi ka na manu. ...
Chain de kar ke maine...
Bechainiya yeh li hai..
Ninde uda ke maine..
Tum se wafaye ki hai..
Kasam ki kasam hai Kasm se
Hum ko pyar hai ..sirf tum se..

Yeh song mera favourite hai...kyonki mere feelings iss ke saath judi hui hai...mai IshRa & Raman se itba pyar karti hoo...ki itba pyar nai kabhi kisi aur ko nahi kar paungi...& mai araay ko jag jag kar yeh stories padti rehti hoo...& mera bhai & mummy sach me muje pagal kehte hai...

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(7) Jab IshRa Amma se Chhip chhip kar milenge...tab kitna maja aayega...


Zehnaseeb, ZehanaseebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebMere kareeb, mere habeebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz haiTere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz haiIss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai
Huaa ameer dil ghareebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebZehnaseeb, ZehnaseebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb-----------------------------------------

(7) Amma ek din to maan hi jayengi...& IshRa ki shaadi fix ho jayegi...



Oh Piya...Oh Piya...
Doli le ke aa...(2)
Chalu mai teri hi gali...(2)
Piya ki gali to lage sab se Bhali...jag se Bhali...


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(8) Shadi to fix ho gai...par pata nahi Shaadi ke din Raman kaha gayab ho gaya...Ishita ko kitna wait karva raha hai...



Maine Payal hai chhankai...
ab to aaja tu harjai...(2)
MEri sqnso me tu hi basa...
Ohh Sajana..aaja na ab tarsa...(2)


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(8) OMG!!!! Shaadi ke mandap me koi aaya to...par Raman nahi...Raman ki maut ki khabar le kar...Hold on Di...jab mere Ghode daud rqhe hai to apne kide mat daudao...Raman mara nahi hai mai narne dungi kya Raman ko...may be accident or blast...but wo wapas aayega...

Paas aaye..

Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui

Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi

Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi

Jaa mile.. jaa mile..

Ishq saccha wahi

Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

Rang thhe, noor tha

Jab kareeb tu tha

Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan

Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa

Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan

Hamari adhuri kahani..

Hamari adhuri kahani.. (x2)

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Ab Raman ke jane ke baad Devdas mode pat chali jayegi...


Nagme hai...Shikve hai
Kisse hai...Baatein hai...
Baatein...bhul jati hai...
Yaadein...Yaad aati hai...
yeh yaadein...Kisi dilo Janam ke...
Chale Jane ke baad aati hai...
Yaadein...Yaadein...Yaadein...

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Raajhan dhoondan main chaliya,Raajhan mileya naa ye..Jigra vichh agan lagaa ke RabbaLakeera vichh likhdi judaai ..
Kho gaya, gum ho gayaWaqt se churaya tha jo,Apna banaya thaHo tera, woh meraSaath nibhaya tha jo,Apna banaya tha

Chadariya, jeeni re jeeniChadariya, jeeni re jeeniAankhein, bheeni ye, bheeni ye, bheeniYaadein, jheeni re, jheeni re, jheeni
Chadariya jeeni re jeeniChadariya jeeni re jeeniHai aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeniYaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni
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Incomplete...

Originally posted by: Angels_Ring

Awesome part. ...

Waiting for the next. ...

Originally posted by: mayraa

Congratulations for become Goldie Di...

Update was superb as always...

Loved ishu simmi bond...

After listening simmi I've doubt whether Raman remembered anything about ishu...

Waiting for their meeting...

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

u r awesome!!!

mannu di!!!

i love u !! its superb so now she will tell him or?

Originally posted by: 9900

Oh it's awesome 😊

Ishu is so cute😳. So much love towards raman😊.

Such a lovely ishitha. But raman will break her heart nuh😭

Love the bond between ishu and simmi 😊.

They're awesome together😃

Waiting to see what will happen next😃

Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Don't expect long comment :/

Irrespective of HOW much I liked the update... I am sad no ISHRA meet :(
N title waise hi heartbeat badha raha hai

Update agla jaldi :(