Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 46

Don't expect long comment :/

Irrespective of HOW much I liked the update... I am sad no ISHRA meet :(
N title waise hi heartbeat badha raha hai

Update agla jaldi :(

I wanted it to be longer! 😭

😳 Kitna cute update tha yaar!

Simmi aur Ishu ki bonding bahut bahut adorable hai!

By God, I'm glad I'm a reader of your stories!

omg d convo between simmi n ishu was damn sweet n cute
bt bhulakkd simmi ne to kuch bataya hi nhi raman ko
n now he is a rkb so im not sure how will he behave??
god this was awesome
update it soon di

when she knew about RKB hi Raman hai..so .suddenly ishita ko Ravan me Ram nazar aane lage 🤣🤣...today,.she came earlier then usual...waise writer humesha apne experience se likhte hai..Aap ne bhi aisa kiya tha...don't feel shy..you're not alone..mostly mai bhi aisa karta tha😆😆...MS Shaali ko koi samjhaye Atom bomb ki kya aukat jo nuclear bobm ke samane faate😆...simii is so cute yaar.about a blooper.you corrected very smartly.hats off to your Dimaag ke kiden.thosi ji ko as saviour le aa ye😉...

Hi All!

Eagerly waiting for the second half?

Here it is...

Part 8 (b) : Koi Rahe Na Jab Apna

All through the way I mentally practiced what to say and how to say.

After imagining his reactions, I re-wrote the script mentally.

This went on till I reached the ladies room.

My nails would not need trimming for next few weeks as I had bit them to their boundaries.

I decided to check my appearance once before facing him so rushed towards the washroom which had a mirror.

"You look beautiful" I heard a voice which was unmistakably his.

Is he here already? I skipped a beat and turned immediately only to realise that it was my imagination.

"You took really long to come here" I heard him again.

I turned back yet again to find no one.

Ayyo! Ishu its just your imagination!

I smacked myself and resumed walking.

"You know how long I have waited for you?" This time it was more clear and closer.

I can't be imagining this.

Is he here already?

"Come on. Come closer" I heard his husky voice.

My heart started to beat loudly.

So he has already seen me.

I looked all over the place but couldn't see him anywhere.

So he must be hiding somewhere.

Don't worry I will find you.

"Aur kitna tadpaogi"

His impatience gave me a kind of satisfaction.

My ears stood straight to find from where the sound came.

I then heard some footsteps and realised that it was coming from the washroom at the end of the row.

Finally! I have caught you.

Here I come RKB!

Although the gap between me and the washroom was quite short, it felt like miles as I dragged my nervously and excitedly trembling feet towards it.

On reaching there, I inhaled sharply and gently pushed the door that was slightly ajar with a huge grin.

My heart skipped a huge beat and my breath hitched when my eyes landed on them.

Them not him.

He wasn't alone.

I clamped my mouth and stood rooted to the spot as I died a thousand deaths in a second.

Main toh jiya na mara

"Oh shit!" I heard him curse.

"OMG! What will we do now RKB?" Shagun screamed helplessly clinging onto him closer than how I had found them earlier.

"Relax. Just relax" he tried to calm her down.

"How can I relax? She has seen you kissing me. What if she complains to the Principal?" she yelled.

I came out of my reverie as I realised my presence was not welcomed.

I had to leave the place immediately for my own good.

I turned away in a jolt and wanted to run away but my legs felt heavy and I could not run even if I wanted too.

I tried my best to drag them to take me away from the place where I had come face to face with the reality.

"Hey" I heard him call me.

I continued walking or running whatever it could be termed as.

"Listen Miss Sanskari. Please don't..."

I paused for a moment without turning back assured him "Don't worry. I won't tell anyone" I tried my best to overcome the lump in my throat.

I did not wait for his acknowledgement. I just fled, fled from the scene.

Tell me what else could I do?

Hai ve das main ki kara

I was here to ask him for the piece of my heart that he had taken with him when he left. But unfortunately he had lost that piece of my heart long before to leave me disheartened all my life. And he had slipped his hand into someone else's even before I extended mine towards him.

Dil jude bina hi tut gaye

Hath mile bina hi chut gaye

Everything seemed like a fairytale just an hour ago or to be precise few minutes ago.

Of all the places, Appa had to get a transfer to this place,

Of all the schools, I had to get an admission here,

Of all the people, he had to be the first one I messed with,

And of all the students, I had to befriend Simmi.

It all appeared like the game plan of the destiny to make the childhood sweethearts meet. But what I failed to remember amongst all this is that destiny had another face too and today it had shown its ugly face in full bloom.

Ki likhe ne lekh kismat ne

I don't even remember how and why I rushed to my classroom, grabbed my belongings urgently and reached the very place where I had been waiting to catch a glimpse of him this morning.

I just mounted my bicycle hurrily, pedalling it with all my strength in a mad rush to an unknown destiny.

I tried to shake off the tears that clouded my view in an unsuccessful attempt as they refused to stop flowing.

Baar baar rod ankhiyaan

As I clutched the handle tightly in my right hand, I wiped my tears on the sleeve of my left shirt.

I wish I had not done that as it brought back the memory from the previous day when I first saw him as my Raman.

My Raman...Do I even have the right to call him that?

I felt immense pain when I realized that hereafter I will see him only as RKB and not Raman.

Tainu jo na vekh sakiyan

Khole aaye aaj kudrat ne

10 years...For 10 years.

Every morning I woke up to think of him & every night I slept to dream of him.

What was I going to henceforth?

Can I still wake up with his thoughts and sleep with his dreams?

Kataan main ki ve din

Teri saun tere bin

What do I name the state I am in?

Dead....after facing the reality and Alive...to face it everyday.

Main toh jiya na mara

Life is not a dream and today I learnt this lesson well.

Dreams...huh...

I was a fool to live in my dreams. I not only dreamt of him with closed eyes but dared to dream of a future with him with open eyes.

And when the dreams woven with open eyes breaks, it breaks you within.

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna

I was broken with in and I needed an external break down where I could pour out all the pain that I felt.

But who?

Is there anyone whose arms I can cry in?

I had always had Raman of my dreams whenever I faced a trial and I willingly broke down in his arms.

But today its him who has broken my dream who do I share the pain with?

Vandu could never be an option, Simmi was not an option either in this situation, Amma was always against him, Appa would not understand my pain.

The world felt lonely.

Jag suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna

Jag suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage

Jag suna suna

Just then it started to drizzle.

Finally I had someone to cry with.

I was thankful to the thick rain droplets that merged with my tears.

Now I could cry freely and I cried clutching the handle tightly with both my hands and the legs continued to pedal in full speed.

Hai to yeh kyun hota hai

Jab yeh dil rota hai

Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein

Honk...honk...honk...

The continuous honking brought me out of my reverie and I found myself in front of a speeding car in my direction.

I took a sharp turn in reflex and fell down with a thud wounding myself.

I reached home in a disheveled state pushing my bicycle as it was damaged due to the fall.

It definitely needed a repair and once again the credit goes to RKB.

"Ayyo Ishu" Amma screamed on looking at my state.

"Ayyo ye kya hogaya Kanna? Gir gayi kya?" she asked worriedly.

"Haan Amma bahut buri tarah se" she could not fathom what I meant. I had indeed fallen, madly and badly. Madly for him and badly because of him.

"Kitni chot lagi hai tumko. Dhyan dena tha na Ishu" she instructed while wiping the blood off my wounds.

"Bhool gayi thi Amma" she was asking me about the external wounds but I was talking about the internal ones.

"Dard horaha hai kya?" she caressed my head and asked lovingly.

"Bahut dard ho raha hai Amma" I sobbed unable to control my tears anymore.

"Shhh shhh" she cajoled me while placing my head close to her bosom and tapping my head gently "Doc ke paas chalein kya?"

"Nahi Amma. Doctor ki zarurat nahi hai. Ye chot to waqt ke sath hi theek hoga"

"Ishu I think you need rest. Tum change kar lo. Mai tumhare liye haldiwali doodh lati hun aur bandage kar deti hun. Phir tum so jana. You will feel better"

I simply nodded.

If only she knew that neither haldiwala doodh, nor the bandage could heal my pain.

And I dreaded even at the thought of sleeping as I didn't want to face him again.

A gut-wrenching cry echoed inside me "Agar khule ankhon se dekhe hue sapne ko is tarah tootna hi tha to phir kyun...

Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake"

-----------------------------To be continued------------------------------------

I realise this was a very sad and disheartening update...

But do you remember my promise of Romance ka tadka?

I don't break promises...so soon your wish of IshRa romance will be fulfilled...

I had requested for song suggestions...very few have come in and those few are all from a girl's POV...I wanted smthng from Boys POV...

So there...that's a hint for u all...And yeah u can keep guessing

RES

Originally posted by: sukanksha

😛 😆 sach Mein...
I will tell jiju 😉
Jokes apart so what was the sapna?

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

I haven't quit reading! Are you kidding me? This story for me is full of suspense since I haven't been able to shake off the horrible scenarios I've got in my mind regarding IshRa! Let's just say, the concept of dream boys frightens me and I don't see a way where it ends good for the girl!

I just haven't been on IF that regularly.

Congrats Goldie! 👏

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

Are my reactions getting predictable? I've gotta come up with different reactions then! 😆

Originally posted by: asma18

Hey manu di 😊
1st of all congratulations
.1000 post k liye ab toh aap goldie hogaye ho
👏 👏 🥳
...
"""Koi Rahe Na Jab Apna"""
Aur aap ne aaisa kyun kaha

Lekin agar haqeeqat sapne se bhayanak hui to???? 😲

kya hone wala hai. ..???
😕
aap update complete kijiye. ..tabhi pura comment mile
ga. ...