Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 45

Originally posted by: maanvir

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Waiting for unres

PS: Advance Warning: Is story me kuch zyada hi pagalpan hai...Phir daure pade to mujhe mat blame karna...😳

HIii Di...

Am I late???????? I don't think so...Because nowdays you are also very busy...right...

1st of all big Congratulations 👏 for completing 50 pages only in 6 parts...I know...iss me mai late ho gai...kyonki already 60 pages complete ho chuke hai...sorry...

& I want to give you a big Huggg...🤗 Itne beautifuls part 6 & 7 likhne ke liye...aap soch rahe ho mai badal kaise gai... to...jyada khush mat hoiye...mai sirf starting ki baat kar rahi hoo...end ki nahi...😡

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Part ~ 6

- Kisme Kitna Hai Dum

Yeh part padhke muje laga ki haa...ab IshRa ki story start hui...Raman ki Jhansi ki Rani & Ishita ka Ravan Kumar...superb Update...yeh jaan kar aap khush hongi ki iss update se meri koi complain nahi...

- "Oh hello! Excuse me"
- "Hey you!"
- "Behri ho? Sunayi nahi deta ke mai bula raha hun?"
- "Andhe ho? Dikhayi nahi detha ke I am not interested"
- "Tumhari itni himmat ke RKB ko ignore karo"
- "Look. I don't want to mess with you and spoil my day. So please let me go"
- "Smart ho samajh gayi that nobody messes with RKB"
- "But RKB messes with everyone"
- "Kya Bhai? Bachhi se kyun panga le rahe ho?"
- "Mai kisi se nahi darti"
- "Ooo"
- "Bhai...lagta hai apko takkar denewali agayi"
- "Really???? 1950 ki model 21st millennium ke Stud ko kya takkar degi"
- "Kya bhai? Is classic beauty ko aap 1950 ki model bol rahe ho...Not fair"
- "Pssst...Tujhe ye adhe litre tel me banayi hui 2 chotiwali chashmish kis angle se beauty lagi"
- "Sanskari! Oh I see!"
- "To Miss Sanskari. Tumhe to pata hi hoga ke hamare desh me badon ki izzat ki jati hai. To apne sanskaronka ek namoona humein dikhao, hum sabke pair choo kar aur yahan se chalti bano"
- SLAP
- "Agar kisi se izzat chahte ho, to pehle doosron ki izzat karna seekho. 'Give respect, take respect' seekha to hoga na school me. Oh mai bhi kisse pooch rahi hun? Apne attitude ko side me rakh ke dhyan doge to hi to yad rahega na ke kya seekha hai"


Realy Di...yeh part padh kar na Dil khush kar diya aap ne...& maine pehle hi kaha tha ki muje yeh RKB ka attitude pasand nahi...& aap ne reply me kaha tha CK ka Raman Hero & Yeh Raman Vilian hai...to mera jawab bhi sun lo...IshRa ki story me Raman na kabhi vilian tha...& na kabhi hoga...haa Akdu hai...Sadu hai...Gusse wala hai...par wo kehte hai na....Tedha hai...par mera hai....wese hi Raman to Ishita ka hi hai...😉

Muje Song & uss se related situation bahot achchi lagi...& aap har song se related same situation likhte ho...aap ki wo Baat muje bahot achchi lagi...aap bahot beautifuly song ko scene me convert karte ho...

Love You for that...


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Part ~ 7

- Koi Mil Gaya

Ab iss part ke bare me mai aap se kay kahu...Haaye...Dil bahot bahot bahot khush kar diya aap ne...half part padh kar maine socha tha ki yeh part to mai 20-25 bar to padh hi lungi ... . Par aap ke Devil kido ne mere sapno par paani pher diya...par koi ni...wo part IshRa special to tha...to 10-12 bar to padh hi lungi mai wo...

Iss part me Ishita ke 2 new friends bane.. ...Simmi & Vandita...wo bhi bahot achcha tha...par Vandita ki Raman se kya problem hai.khar Ishita ne 1st part me Raman ko Vandita Balake functionme dekha tha...to wo problem bhi jald hi solve ho jayegi..to no problem...par mera intret ishRq me jyada hai to usi ki baat karungi...

- "Raman"
- "Who the hell called me that?"
- "Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?"
- "Woh mai...mai...woh"
- "Ye bakri ki tarah mai mai kya kar rahi ho? Batao yahan kyun ayi ho?"
- "Wo actually..."
- "Thappad to maar chuki ho. Ab kya karne ayi ho?"
- . I just hugged him and said "I love you" placing a soft peck on his cheek.
- "Kuch yaad aya?" I asked hopefully.
- "Ishita" a husky whisper brought me and my thoughts to a screeching halt.
- "Ishita Vishwanathan Iyer"
- "Tumhe mera naam yaad hai?"
- "Aur bhi bahut kuch yaad hai. Paas aaogi to bataunga"
- "Mai janti hun tum kya kehna chahte ho"
- "Kuch zaroori baat kehni hai. Aao yahan"
- "Arrey Ishita...Suno to"
- "Shhh...Mai hun"
- "Ab batao mai kya bolnewala tha"
- "Waise to bada bolti ho. Ab kyun bolti band hai?"
- "Bolo na...Kya hua hai aaj?"
- "Koi mil gaya
- "Koun?"
- "Hai koi"
- "Meri taraf dekho aur batao ke kahin woh mai to nahi"
- "Nahi dekhogi?"
- "Dekhogi nahi. Par sunto logi na jo mai kehna chahta hun"
- "To theek hai suno"
- "I Love...

YOU Ishita Iyer"

Ek sachchi baat bolu...iss part me sirf Ishita ki hi nahi...meri bhi heartbeats ❤️ tez ho gai thi...pehle maine socha ki Raman Shagun ka naam lega...phir laga nahi...Ishita ka hi naam lega...par msi bhi bewkuf hoo...yeh kaise bhul gai...ki iss story me aap ka kam hi wahi hai ki har achche wale IshRa scene ko Khwab bana dena...

Yeh Shagun muje bilkul pasand nahi...Apshagun...& Part 8 ke Teasing teaser se to lagta hai...ki Raman ko Ishita yaad nahi...yaa phir Raman naraz hai...& Shagun uss ki Girlfriend & nahi bhi hogi to bhi Raman Ishita ko chhidha ne ke liye use Girlfriend batayega...



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Part ~ 8(a)

- Jab Koi Apna Na Rahe

Pichle update me aapko sapnon se jagane keliye sorry...

Is update me pakka no sapna...

Sirf haqeeqat...

Lekin agar haqeeqat sapne se bhayanak hui to????

Yeh kya keh diya aap ne...

Part a to bahot achcha tha...par aap ki inn bato se lagta hai...ki aap hum chhote chhote bachcho ko koi bada heart Attack 💔 dene wali ho...

Muje yeh Ishita Simmi ki Nanad Bhabhi wali baatein bahot achchi lagi...& muje yeh bhi yaad hai...aap ko aap ki Nanad bahot pyari hai...

Iss part me maine ek baat notice ki...Ishita ek Achchi sanskari ladki ki tarha apne Honewale pati ko Nanad ke samne aap kehkar bula rahi thi...& apne dream me to tum keh rahi thi...

Ek sachchi baat bolu...jo muje bahot achchi lagi...aap be Raman ko meri age ka dikhaya...not axactly...I am 17+ ...17 & 6 months...meri Birthdate 14th Feb. ...aap ke CK ke IshRa ki Wedding Anniversary...hai na...

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Aur uske sath koi romantic number apki pasand ka...

Kyunki jald hi lagnewala hai

Ishita ke khwabon me Romance ka tadka...

Ye bath bhi hai ke

Kuch khwab to reh jayenge adhoore...

Par phir bhi dekhte hain

Haay...yeh kek kar to aap ne mere Dimag ke Ghodo ko IshRa land me janha marji chahe waha Ghumne ke permission de di...ab dekho...mere Ghodo par mera koi control nahi...ab wo kaha ghum kar aaye yeh aap ko bhi sunana parega...to suno...

My Imaginations ...My Songs...

(1) Ab Ishita ne Raman ko dekh hi liya hai...uss ka Dimag use keh raha hai...ki RKB se punga lena...uss ka pichha karna safe nahi par uss ka Dil thodi manega...


Dil hai...ke maanta nahi...
Ho...Dil hai ke manta nahi...
Badi mushkil hai...yeh janta ...hi nahi...
Ho...Dil hai...ke manta...nahi...


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(2) Ishita Raman ko apne Dil ki baat kehne ke liye...kitna bhi try kare kare...par keh hi nahi pati...


Mera Dil bhi...kitna Pagal hai...
Yeh Pyar jo tumse Karta hai...(2)
Par samne jan tum aate ho...(2)
Kuch bhi kehne se darta hai...
Oh mere sajan...oh mere sajan...
Sajan sajan...oh mere sajan...

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(3) Ab Ishita ka Dil Raman ko pukarega...to kabhi na kabhi to Raman ko ehsaas hoga hi...ki Ishita usski wo hi Dost hai...jise wo apna life partner bana na chahta tha...


Tu...tu hai wahi...
Dil ne jise Apna kaha...
Tu hai jaha...mai hooo waha...
Ab to yeh Jeena...tere bin hai...saja...
Aa mil jaye iss tarha...do lehre jiss tarha...
Phir ho naa...hudaa...haa yeh waada raha
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(4) Ab ishita bhi Raman ki Jhansi ki Rani hai...aise thodi maan jayegi...wo bhi to thoda ruthegi...haq bsnta hai...aakhir 10 years se Raman ka intjar kar rahi hai..

Mai tainu samjava ki...naa tere bina lagda jee...
Tu ki jane pyar...mera...mai karu intjar...tera...
Tu Dil toyu.jaan meri...mai tenu samjava ki...
Naa tere bin lagda jee...


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(5) Ab hoga IshRa pyar bhara milan...



WAda raha sanam...
Hoge Judaa na hum...
Chahe na chahe Jamana...
Humari chahto ka...
Mitt na sakega fasaana...

& isss jamane me...sab se pehle aaogi aap...2nd Ishita ki Amma...3rd shagun...& 4th Angad Malhotra...

Angad ka naam maine last me liya hai...par I hate him the most...& reason to aap ko pata hi hai...

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(5) Ab Ishra to ek ho hi gaye...& Raman ki family to Ishita ko bahu msnti bhi hai...par amma ko mana na baki hai...& Amma manne ko taiya nahi...



Kasam...ki Kasam ... hai Kasam se...
Hum ko pyar hai...sirf tum se...
Ab yeh pyar na hoga phir hum se...
Log kehte hai paagal...
Hoo mai yeh bhi naa janu...
Dil lutaya hai maine...
Ab kisi ka na manu. ...
Chain de kar ke maine...
Bechainiya yeh li hai..
Ninde uda ke maine..
Tum se wafaye ki hai..
Kasam ki kasam hai Kasm se
Hum ko pyar hai ..sirf tum se..

Yeh song mera favourite hai...kyonki mere feelings iss ke saath judi hui hai...mai IshRa & Raman se itna pyar karti hoo...ki itna pyar mai kabhi kisi aur ko nahi kar paungi...& mai raat ko jag jag kar yeh stories padti rehti hoo...& mera bhai & mummy sach me muje pagal kehte hai...

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(6) Jab IshRa Amma se Chhip chhip kar milenge...tab kitna maja aayega...


Zehnaseeb, ZehanaseebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebMere kareeb, mere habeebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz haiTere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz haiIss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai
Huaa ameer dil ghareebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebZehnaseeb, ZehnaseebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb-----------------------------------------

(7) Amma ek din to maan hi jayengi...& IshRa ki shaadi fix ho jayegi...



Oh Piya...Oh Piya...
Doli le ke aa...(2)
Chalu mai teri hi gali...(2)
Piya ki gali to lage sab se Bhali...jag se Bhali...


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(8) Shadi to fix ho gai...par pata nahi Shaadi ke din Raman kaha gayab ho gaya...Ishita ko kitna wait karva raha hai...



Maine Payal hai chhankai...
ab to aaja tu harjai...(2)
MEri sqnso me tu hi basa...
Ohh Sajana..aaja na ab tarsa...(2)


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(9) OMG!!!! Shaadi ke mandap me koi aaya to...par Raman nahi...Raman ki maut ki khabar le kar...Hold on Di...jab mere Ghode daud rahe hai to apne kide mat daudao...Raman mara nahi hai mai marne dungi kya Raman ko...may be accident or blast...but wo wapas aayega...

Paas aaye..

Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui

Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi

Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi

Jaa mile.. jaa mile..

Ishq saccha wahi

Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

Rang thhe, noor tha

Jab kareeb tu tha

Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan

Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa

Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan

Hamari adhuri kahani..

Hamari adhuri kahani.. (x2)

Aap ko yeh song story me use karna tha...par iss song par story ka end mat hone dena...iss song ke saath to Story ke nai shuruat honi chahiye...

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(10) Ab Raman ke jane ke baad Ishita Devdas mode par chali jayegi...


Nagme hai...Shikve hai
Kisse hai...Baatein hai...
Baatein...bhul jati hai...
Yaadein...Yaad aati hai...
yeh yaadein...Kisi dilo Janam ke...
Chale Jane ke baad aati hai...
Yaadein...Yaadein...Yaadein...

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Raajhan dhoondan main chaliya,Raajhan mileya naa ye..Jigra vichh agan lagaa ke RabbaLakeera vichh likhdi judaai ..
Kho gaya, gum ho gayaWaqt se churaya tha jo,Apna banaya thaHo tera, woh meraSaath nibhaya tha jo,Apna banaya tha

Chadariya, jeeni re jeeniChadariya, jeeni re jeeniAankhein, bheeni ye, bheeni ye, bheeniYaadein, jheeni re, jheeni re, jheeni
Chadariya jeeni re jeeniChadariya jeeni re jeeniHai aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeniYaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni
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(11) Ab entry hogi...meri story ke Devil & aap ke story ke so called Hero Angad ki...Jo Ishita ko Raman ke Khayalo ki Duniya se bahar layega...phir bhi ...Raman ko Ishita ke khwabo ki duniya se mita na saka...kyonki...Raman Ishita ke khwabo se jaa na saka...😉

Kabhi Kabhi Ishita Zindagi Me Yun Hi Koi Apna Lagta Hai

Kabhi Kabhi Ishita Woh Bichad Jaye Toh Ek Sapna Lagta Hai

Aise Me Koi Kaise Apne Aansuon Ko Bahene Se Roke

Aur Kaise Koi Sochle Everything's Gonna Be Okay

Kabhi Kabhi Toh Lage Zindagi Me Rahi Na Khushi Aur Na Maza

Kabhi Kabhi Toh Lage Har Din Mushkil Aur Har Pal Ek Saza

Aise Me Koi Kaise Muskuraaye, Kaise Has De Khush Hoke

Aur Kaise Koi Sochle Everything's Gonna Be Okay

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Ab muje yeh to pata nahi ki Raman wapas kaise aayega...kyonki aisa koi song mere Dimag me nahi aaya...par Ishita hai to Raman ki...to End me to Dil Wale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge


Kaisi lagi...mere IshRa ke khwabo ki Duniya...
It was all my imagination...now its all up to you...How will our story progress...

Agar aap ko inn me se kuch bhi achcha na laga ho...& koi bhi meri baat buri lagi ho to Dil se...
I am realy very very very Sorry
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Sorry ...Mobile bar bar Hang ho raha tha...iss liye complete karne me thodi der ho gai...
& abhi abhi muje pata chala aap ne 1000 post complete karli...to phir se bahot bada...CONGRATULATIOS...

Yeh kuch jyada hi lamba ho gaya hai na...😉

Superb update like always😳

Part 8 a updated...

First of All Congratulations u r a Goldie now..

Awesome part. ...

Congratulations for become Goldie Di...

amezng dear. Its awesome plz continue soon.

u r awesome!!!

Oh it's awesome 😊