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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 7

Scene 1

As the sun rays peeps into the room where two love birds sleeping peacefully cuddling in each other arms... Ishita wakes up due to the sun ray and looks towards her husband and thinks: muje nahe pata tha raman kay meri zindagi mein kabhi itni sary khushiyaan bhi hoon gi aur ye sab apki waja say hua hai. Ap ne meri zindagi mein aakar meri zindagi ko khushiyoon say bhar diya.

Ishita carefully gets up so raman does not get disturbed... again looks towards raman and remembers the last night and a smiles appears on her face... ishita takes a saree of raman's favorite color blue and goes to take bath...

Coming from bathroom, ishita starts to get ready before raman wakes up, unknown to her that he is already up and silently admiring her wife's beauty... not making any noise he slowly slowly goes towards ishita and hugs her...

Raman: aj kis kis ko apne qehar say marne ka irada hai? Oho madrasan mere favorite color mein?? Hmmm I am impressed...

Ishita: ap bhi na... kaisi lag rahi hoon mein?

Raman: looking stunning... Bus aik kami hai... took sindoor and fills her mang and says: aj say har din har subha mein tumhari mang bharoonga kiyonkay ye haq mera hai... Ishita smiles...

Raman: ishita I love you so much...

Ishita: I love you too raman.. thank you...

Raman: I love you to theek tha per thank you kis liye??

Ishita: meri zindagi mein ane kay liye...

Raman: mein nahe tum meri zindagi mein ayi thi is ley muje tumhain thanks bolna chahiye...

Ishita: nahe raman muje apko...

Raman: ab is pay bhi larogi madrasan????

Ishita: mein kahan lar rahi hoon??? Aik to mein apko thanks keh rahi hoon aur ap muje say larr rahe hai koi bhala apni biwi say yoon larta hai wo bhi raat... Ishita stops immediately thinking what she is going to say...

Raman: acha larte nahe hain to kiya kartey hain madrasan???? And start tracing patterns on her face by his fingers...

Ishita start losing her senses and closes her eyes... raman comes towards her ears and start kissing her earlobe... Then bite her

Ishita moans raman...

Raman whispers in her ear : wesy thank you to humein ruhi ko kehna chaheye cos uski waja say aj hum aik dosre kay saath hain... and he leaves to freshen up... Leaving ishita blushing...

Scene 2

Raman comes in living roon seeing ishita running from here and there...

Raman: ishita kahin jani ki tayari hai kiya??

Ishita: haan hum ghumne ja rahi hai na,,,

Raman: haan mein bhool gaya... let me take key...

Ishita: no raman... car nahe hum public transport mein jain gay ... Maza ayega...

Raman: nahe...

Ishita: mein ne kaha na bus ... ishita grabs his hand and leaves...

Raman and ishita sits in a public bus and takes a seat... and bus starts... raman was not happy in traveling bus... suddenly bus put break and ishita falls towards raman... Ishita hairs was covering her face raman removes the hairs and tug them behind her ears ...

Raman: wesy muje nahe pata tha bus ka safar itna romantic bhi ho sakta hai...

Ishita smiles and says yahan mat shuru ho jana...

Raman : cheee... Public place mein romance... Kaisa sohti ho... lagta hai koi bohat deperate hai... and takes her in side hugs protectively... Ishita rest her head on his chest... As no one is seeing them raman places a light peck on her lips...

Ishita face was flushed and she hides her face in his embrace and says: ab kon desperate ho raha hai...

Both smiles...

Raman and ishita enters shopping mall and start shopping ... They buys gifts for all family members...

Raman sees a beautiful gown in combination of pink, blue and green... he immediately likes it he ask ishita ... She also likes it but seeing the price tag she backs off and says: nahe lena wesy bhi muje western dress zyada ache nahe lagty...

Raman: to tumhare liye kon lay raha hai mein to apni friend kay liye lay raha hoon...

Ishita: itna mehnga gift...

Raman: haan to Punjabi hoon... Humara dil bara hota hai... Wesy bhi meri marzi mein job hi gift karoon...

Ishita: theek hai jo karna hai karo...

After shopping both goes to see city's popular places and then dinner...

Scene 3

Raman and ishita was returned home very late night... ishita goes to fresh up... Landline rings...

Raman: hello...

Toshi ji: haan puttar... Tujhe yaad hai na kal kiya hain??

Raman: haan maa yaad hai muje kal ishita ka birthday hai mein ne ruhi kay camp mein baat kar li hai wo aj sham tak dehli ajaye gi romi ko kehna kay wo usy pick kar lay...

Toshi ji: wo kal ka plan...

Raman: haan wo bhi yaad hai mihir say keh kar sari preparation kar li hai ap sab ki ticket bhi ready hai kal shuba ap sab yahan hoon gay aur tayari...

Ishita comes and listens just word "tayari" : kaisi tayari raman kis ka phone hai...

Raman cuts the call...

Raman thinks thank god kush suna nahi jagga jasoos kahin ki kuch bhi is say chupana kitna mushkil hai... says: kuch nahe wo maa ka phone hai kal ki special day kay liye maa ne tayari ka kaha hai..

Ishita thinks: to sab ko mera birthday yaad hai...

Raman: kal humein puja karne jana hai bohat lambi puja hogi subha say sham tak... Ghar ki shanty kay liye rakhi hai...

Ishita: ghar ki shanty???

Raman: haan to...

Ishita: isley kal ka din special hai???

Raman: haan kiyon kal kuch aur bhi special hai??

Ishita thinks kisi ko mera birthday yaad hi nahi... Then says: nahe bus aise hai ...

Raman: ishita walk pay chalein??

Ishita : raat kay 11.30???

Raman: chalo na...

Ishita: acha chalein...

Raman and ishita goes on walk while returning rain start to drop... ishita want to enjoy rain but raman stops her and says: agar barish enjoy karni ho hai to ghar kay angan mein kal lo muje muft mein logon ko picture dekhane ka shoak nahe hai...

Inside house:

Ishita was enjoying rain while raman was only observing her each and every move from far... ishta ask raman to accompany her he refuses but ishita forcefully takes him in rain...

Raman start to sing

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai
Mohabbat barsa dena tu, saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Raman ask for dance... ishtia nods in affirmation both dances ...

Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Kyun ek pal ki bhi judaai sahi jaaye na
Kyun har subah tu meri sanson me samaye na
Aaja na tu mere paas, dunga itna pyar main
Kitni raat guzaari hai, tere intezar mein

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai
Mohabbat barsa dena tu, saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Raman closes the distance and took her lips into passionate kiss...

Both part aways for breath ... raman cups her face and says... HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY DEAR WIFE...

Ishita smiles and hugs him... Says: muje laga ap bhool gaye...

Raman: kaise bhoolta...

Ishita ask for tomorrow surprise...

Raman: jab itna pata hai kay kal surpise plan kiya hai to thora sabr kar lo agar mein ne bata diya to surprise ka maza nahe rahe ga... Chalo andar aur chage kar lo warna sardi lag jaye gi..

Ishita: ap ko bhi...

After changing both goes to bed and sleep peacefully again in each other embrace...

Precap: ishtita birthday party...

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Edited by sparkingsoul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bday Surprise!!!!! RKBin full romantic mood😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Romantic update Wow ishita birthday surprise Lovely Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was romantic nice updt

love it surprise party wow
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice story...pls continue and do pm me ur updatesss...
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So romantic update...
Cho chweet...
Continue soon...
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here go part 8


here go part 8

scene 1:

raman wakes up after passionate night.. and thinks : aj madrasan aisa surprise doonga kay tum bohat kush hojao gi... and leaves the room silently so ishita does not get disturbed...

ishita wakes up after 20 mins and says: ye raman kahan chale gaye...

raman: mein ne kahan jana hai yahin hoon and comes with breakfast... places on bed...

ishita : nashta ... ap ne banaya???

raman: haan aj humari birthday hai na aj ka din mein tumhare liye yaadgaar banana chahta hoon... chalo khao...

ishita: nahe..

raman: yeh kiya??? itni mehnat say mein ne tumhare liye nashta banaya aur tum kah nahe rahi??

ishita: ap kilao to khaoongi... and smiles...

raman: ohoo romance in breakfast... haan good... chalo aj yeh bhi sahi...

raman feeds ishita breakfast

ishita: ap bhi khao na.. yeh lo... bohat tasty hai...

ishita also feeds raman... both lovingly look at each other...

raman: mein ne tumhare liye itna acha breakfast banaya chalo muje isky badaly gift do...

ishtia : kiya chahiye apko???

raman: morning kiss...

ishita feels shy but then gives raman a light peck on his lips... raman was shocked to see this side of ishita...

scene 2

ishita: ramna jaldi na mandir jana hai ... wapsi per ap ne muje mere birthday ka surprise bhi to dena hai...

raman coming in living room says: dheeraj madrasan dheeraj... sabar ka phal meetha hota hai...

both was about to leave ... landline rings ishita receive the call...

ishita: hello ... raman apka phone...

raman took the phone and says: no its not possible... i cant be there ... i m busy... okay i will try...

and cuts the call.

ishita: kiya hua...

raman: kaam hai muje abhi chandigarh waly office jana hoga... choro mein nahe ja raha aj tumhara birthday hai... pata nahi kitne time lag jaye... phr tumhara surprise bhi to dena hai na?/ mein nahe ja raha ...

ishita: koi baat nahe raman ap kaam pay jao wesy bhi abhi to hum ne mandir jana tha na jaldi say kaam kar kay wapis ajao... jao...

raman: per...

ishtia; no problem jao...

raman: okay... chalo mein tumhain mandir drop kar deta hoon...

again phone rings... ishita took the call and says: mummy jee... Jee... theek hai... mein khareed loongi...

raman: kiya hua?

Ishita: wo mummy jee ki call thi wok eh rahi thi kay yahan unki favorite lawn ki sale lagi hai to mein madir kay baad wahan ja kar kuch shopping kar loon..

Raman: maa bhi na...

Ishita: koi baat nahe jab taka p kaam karo gay to mein bhi busy rahoon gi ph rap muje wahan say pick kar laina theek hai...

Raman: yeh lo mere office ka no jab free hojana to call kar dena okay chalo... thinks: wah beta good plan kay mutabiq ja raha hai sab...

Raman drops ishita and goes to airport to pick family...

Scene 4:

Ishita calls raman: haan raman hogaya ap ajao ...

Raman: yaar mein kaam mein phansa hoon tum khud ghar chali jao... okay I m in meeting talk to you later bye... Says in one go and cuts the call..

Ishita: raman bhi na...

In house

Raman: sari tayari hogayi wo yahan 20 min tak ajaye gi ...

Ruhi: yes papa...

After 20 min

Ishita enters suddenly all family member shouts: happy birthday to you...

Ishita was feeling on cloud nine to see all her family ... ruhi comes and hugs ishita and wishes happy birthday ishima...

Ishita: ru.. ap yahan??

Ruhi: haan ishima mein ne papa say baat ki aur papa ne ye sab preparation ki ap happy hona...

Ishita kisses ruhi and says: yes I am so happy this is my best birthday...

One by one all family member wishes her birthday... raman comes and hugs her and wishes her birthday... ishita says thank you ... And smiles...

Adi: ishima mein ap kay liya guitar bajaon?

Ishita: ya go ahead..

Adi plays a beautiful tune and both ruhi and adi sings mere dil mein rehti bholi bhali meri maa

Ishita feels so much happy...

Then they cuts the cake and enjoys...

One by one all family member gives gifts to ishita... raman also gives two gifts... ishita opens all gifts and likes them... raman gifts ishita same gown which ishita had liked and a locket of heart shape in which there is a picture of raman, ishita, ruhi and adi...

Ishita s happiness has no boundaries... Ishita thinks: aj lagta hai murgan ne duniya ki sari khushiyaan meri jhooli mein daal di hain...

Raman thinks: ishita tumahin khush dekh kar bohat acha lag raha hai ... Yeh to kuch bhi nahe muje yaqeen hai dekhna agay humari zindagi mein aur kitni saaari khushiyaan humara intezaar kar rahi hain

All family enjoys fullest and next day they fly back to dehli where more happiness are waiting for them

Precap: LEAP OF HAPPINESS

I am very busy nowadays... just got short time to write this I will update next Tuesday... I know it is short hope you will like it...

Waiting for your responses

Edited by sparkingsoul - 10 years ago
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Yipee I am first lovely update
Love Ishra romantic breakfast and surprise birthday party
Continue soon
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Lovely update dear Thanks for pm

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