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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
nice onevread three parts too

love raman expose shabu too I love it thx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
here go part 4...

Scene 1

Mihika: girls and boys ki alag team. Rules ye hai kay dono team apni marzi say aik dosre to word batain gain aur phir dosri team to usi word say gana gana hoga okay... Phely bhalla uncle ap gao... apka word hai "jaan"

Mr. bhalla sings ay meri zohra jabeen tujhe maloom nahe tu abhi tak hai haseen aur mein jawan... tuj pe qurbaan meri jaan meri jaan... while winks at toshiji... Toshi ji blushes... Chalo gao "raat" say..

Toshi ji sings... raat akeli hai bojh gaye diye akar mere pass kanoon mein mere... jo bhi chahe kaheye ... jo bhi kaheye...

All family member laughs...

Others also sings and enjoys...

Mihika: jeeju ab ap gao "saath" say...

Raman sings...

Tera Saath hai toa, muje kya kami hai

Andhero se bhi, Mil rahi roshni hai.

Kuch bhi nahi hai toa, koi gam nahi hai

Hai ek bebasi, band gai chandani hai.

Mere sath tum Muskura ke Dekho

Udasi ka badal, hata k to dekho

Kabhi hai yae Aasu, Kabhi yae hasi hai

Mere Humsafar, Bas yahi zindagi ha

Tera saath hai to muje kya kaami hai... Looks at ishita... Ishita smiles... raman too smiles and sign its your turn...

Mihika: wow jeeju... So romantic...

Raman: wo to mein hoon... ab tumhari akka ki baari ... ishita "wada" hai tumhara word

Ishita thinking...

Raman: time running fast madrasan...

Count down starts... 10...9...8...7...4

Ishita start sings...

Waada hai waada chaahenge tumko
Jeevan se jyada hai waada waada

Kore kore sapne mere
Baraso se the kitane adhure
Dheere dheere rang sajaa ke
Tune kar diye unko pure
Waada hai waada chaahenge tumko
Jeevan se jyada hai waada waada
Kore kore sapne mere
Baraso se the kitane adhuure

Ishita looking at raman romantically...

Taaro ko ghar mein laayenge hum
Aashaa ke deep jalaayenge hum
Aayi hain bahaarein aayi hain
Khushiyon ke nazaare laye hain
Kore kore sapne mere

Raman also starts singing...

Baraso se the kitane adhure
Dheere dheere rang sajaa ke

Tuune kar diye unko pure

Bohat ishita and raman sings in union... All family smiles seeing couple lost in each other...

Waada hai waada chaahenge tumko
Jeevan se jyada hai waada waada
Kore kore sapne mere
Baraso se the kitane adhure

...

Mihika broke the silence... and say : chalo game finished... Sab rest karty hai subha jaldi uth kar akka aur jeeju ko see off bhi to karna hai... this statement break the eye lock ...

All family members go to their respective rooms...

Scene 2

Ishita standing near window in her room remembering all the events of the past days... Her rude behavior... Raman comes toward her and hugs her from behind...

Raman: kiya soch rahi ho madrasan????

Ishita: agar sach mein apko sach na pata chalta to aj hum saath na hote raman... I really sorry... Ap sach kehty ho mein bohat bewakoof hoon... And start crying...

Raman: shhh kuch nahe hua na... jab tak mein saath hoon tumhare kuch galat nahi hoga... Tension kiyon leti ho... acha hua na jo hua kam say kam is waja say mein tumhare saath honeymoon pay to ja sakta hoon ... and removes her hair from her back and start kissing on her neck...then back...

Ishita: raman... Shiver ran through her spine...

Raman turns ishita towards himself... Kisses on her forehead... Then nose... Cheeks... his eyes fixes on her tempting lips... He slowly start closing the distance... and their first kiss happens... both part away for breath...

Ishita hugs him tightly...

Raman sees and says: bohat raat horahi hai so jao kal jaldi uthna hai...

Both sleep peacefully in each other embrace...

Scene 3

Morning in bhalla house...

Toshi ji: ishita puttar sab rakh liya hai na?

Ishita: jee mummy jee

Toshi ji : cheeti kar puttar...

Raman: kiya hogaya hai maa... Tandh rakho...

Ishita after getting ready comes... raman smiles...

Toshi ji: kisi ki nazar na lag jaye dono ko... chalo jao ab...

Adi: bye ishima bye papa

Ishita: adi...

Adi: ap tension mat lo ishima yahan hain sab mera dhayan rakhne kay liye...

All family members say bye...

As raman and ishita was about to go toshi ji stops them...

Toshi ji: oye ruk... Chalo dono apne mobile do muje...

Ishita: kiya hua mummy je

Toshi ji: tum dono mobile nahe lay kar jao gay... Warna ishita har waqat ghar phone kar kay adi ki khariat pochti rahe gi aur raman office ki batain... bus chalo lao do...

Raman: per maa office ka kuch important bhi ho sakta hai na?

Mihir: bhai ap fikar mat karo mein hoon na...

Toshi ji: mein ne kuch nahi suna lao do mobile...

Raman and ishita gives their mobile... And leaves...

Precap: Raman runs behind ishita... both runs... ishita looses her balance ... raman in nick of time grabs her by her waist... both lost in each others eyes...
Edited by sparkingsoul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Awesome update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Sweet lovely update
very cute !!

Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Lovely update..
Singing competition is gud..
At last ishra got privacy..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
here go

Part 5

Scene 1

Raman and ishita enter their Chandigarh house by 12.00 pm... after settling ishita goes in kitchen to make some lunch and says

Ishita : raman kiya khao gay ap lunch mein???

Raman: bataon kiya khaonga???

Ishita: jab pocha hai to batao na...

Raman comes in kitchen and start getting close to ishita...

Ishita : kiya kar rahe ho?

Raman: apni bhook mita raha hoon...

Ishita: raman...

Raman: kiya bolo gi bache ajain gay? Koi dekh lay ga... per yahan to mery aur tumhare ilawa koi nahe hai?? Kahan bhago gi??

Ishita : raman wo cockroach ...

Raman jumps... ishita runs and laughs...

Raman: acha to muje bewaqoof banaya abhi dekhta hoon kahan bhaag kar jati ho?...

Raman runs behind ishita... both runs... ishita looses her balance ... raman in nick of time grabs her by her waist... both lost in each others eyes...

Raman also looses his balance and both falls on sofa... raman on top of ishita... Raman starts touching her face by his finger... Ishita closes her eyes... Raman closing the distance their lips are inch a part...

Landline rings... which break their eye lock...

Raman receive phone...

Raman: hello maa ... Haan hum pohanch gaye...

Toshi ji: sun tujhe pata hai na wahan mata ka mandir hai tu aj aram karne kay baad ishita kay saath darshan kay liya chale jana theek hai puttar...

Raman: haan maa ap ishita say baat kar lo

Ishita : haan mummy jee

Toshi ji sun tu aj raman kay saath mata kay mandir jaye gi wahan tu... describes ishita how to perform puja...

Ishita: theek hai jab hum puja kar lain gay to apko phone kar kay bata dain gay...

Toshi ji: o nai puttar tu phone nahe kar sakti ye phone sirf incoming de sakta hai...

Ishita becomes sad as she thinks now she cannot talk to adi and family when ever she want...

Toshi ji: udaas kiyon hoti hai teen din hi to hain... ab mein rakhti hoon enjoy kar puttar...

Scene 2

After lunch raman and ishita preparing for going mandir... Raman dress up in kurta pajama and ishita dresses in churidaar shalwaar suit...

Raman enters the room: ary kitna time lagaogi yaar...

Ishita was struggling to tie the dori of her kurti... Raman comes and ask: kiya mein madad kar doon?

Ishita: nahe mein karloon gi...

Raman: haan jab tak karogi na tb tak ye din kiya honeymoon kay teeno din guzar jain gay aur humain aise hi ghar jana parega jaise hum aye thy...

Ishita : kuch bhi...

Raman: choro... and starts to tie dori but as much slow he can... and touches her back... Ishtia was enjoying raman touch and closes her eyes... raman through mirror see the effect of his touch on ishita and smiles...

after tying dori raman hugs her and says agar yohin blush karti raho gi to kaise mandir jain gay... ishita open her eyes and says

ishita: chalain...

raman: bus aik kami hai

ishita ; kiya?

Raman puts sindoor on her forehead and says ye thi kami...

Both leaves for mandir and performs puja...

Scene 3:

After returning to home... Raman start to watch tv and ishita goes to her room and screams...

Raman runs to rooms and ask: kiya hua chilla kiyon rahi ho?

Ishita: dekho na mein apna suit case band karna bhool gayi thi to chuhoon ne mery saare kapre barbaad kar diye...

Raman laughs... hahahahha

Ishita : ap hans rahe ho?

Raman controlling his laughter and says: tu kiya karoon tum pagal ho koi apna suit case khula chorta hai kiya????

Ishita: ab mein kiya karoon... Mere pass yahan aur kapre nahe hai mein ne change karna tha...

Raman continuously laughing

Ishita: kitne insensitive ho ap?

Raman: arey yaar jungle mein to hum aye nahe hain kay tumhare liye naye kapre khareed na sakain... Chalo shopping pay chalty hain tum apne liye new dresses bhi layna ... khush ab...

Ishita smiles...

Precap: ishra on shopping... Ishita feels jealous as raman meet with his close college friend...


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hope you like it😊

Edited by sparkingsoul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Awesome dear.. really nice..
Update jaldi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update dear
Thanks for pm
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
nice update
precap sounds interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
superb update
ishra cute nok jhok
n love it was sooo cute
continue soon
wating early

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