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here go part 9 sorry for late update ...

Part 9

Scene 1

A happy morning in bhalla house. Ishita standing near the window of her room and thinking : aj mein bohat khush hoon... pechly 6 mahenoon mein yahan bohat kuch badal gaya hai... romi sarika ki shadi hogayi hai aur ghar mein naye member ka izafa bhi hogaya hai romi ka beta "karan", simi bhi apni zindagi mein agye barh gayi hai wo khush hai job karti hai independent hogayi hai... mihika ki bhi abhisekh say shadi hogayi hai ... vandu akka ki beti "mansi"... sab khush hain... raman aur mein bhi bohat khush hain... sahi kehte hain raman abhi hum ne aur bhi khushiyaan dekhni hain...

Ishita lost in her thoughts when a voice came ... ishima...

Ishita: adi...

Adi runs and hugs her...

Adi: good morning ishima...

Ishita: good morning...

Adi: aj ka kiya plan hai aj papa aur ruhi ka birthday hai... Papa to Mumbai say sham tak ayengay na?

Ishita: haan aj hum surprise party rakhain gay... Ruhi romi chachu ka saath papa ko receive karne jaye gi jab papa aur ruhi ghar ayengay aur darrwaza khoolain gay to hum sab shout karain ga surpise HAPP BIRTHDAY... Nice??

Adi: very nice... Gift kiya dain gay hum???

Ishita: sochty hain... idea ruhi ko uski favorite doll ka set aur papa kay liye branded watch... theek hai?

Adi: haan theek hai accha mein chalta hoon preparation bhi to karni hai...

Ishita: hmmm jao... Per ruhi ko shak nahe hona chahiye... kuch dair tak bala jiju aakar ruhi ko apne ghar laye jain gay... go...

Adi leaves room...

Phone rings...

Ishita: hello...

Raman: hi madrasan... kaisi ho?

Ishita: hi theek hoon... Phone kiyon kiya? Koi kaam tha ab ye mat kehna meri socks nahe mil rahe romal nahe mil raha... Mein yahan nahe hoon jo muje pata hoga...

Raman: arey tum to antaryami niki mery kehne say pehle hi sab pata chal gaya??

Ishita: rooz ka mamool hai apka muj say baat karne kay bahane dhoondtey ho... chahe ghar per ho ya meeting kay liye out of city...

Raman: accha phir lecture mat shuru karo aj special hai wish kar jaldi say raat bhi mein wait karta raha...

Ishita: kiya special hai???

Raman: tumhain yaad nahe???

Ishita: nahe...

Raman: ay mata rani kis bhulakar say shadi karwa di????? And cuts the call...

Ishita laughs...

Scene 2

Ishita: jiju agaye ap...

Bala: ruhi kahan hai???

Ruhi: mein yahan hoon... Ready bhi hoon mien... chalo na jaldi mein ne bhi mansi ko milna hai... Chalo

Bala: haan chalo...

Romi : ruhi chui mien 6 bjy tujhe lane aonga papa ko laine jana hai yaad hai na?

Ruhi: haan chachu yaad hai...

Bala and ruhi left...

Sarika: chaplain bhabhi preparation start karte hain...

Abhishek mihika mihir and rinky comes... And says: humare bina hi tayari karogay...

Ishita: acha hua tum sab agaye chalo bohat kaam hai jaldi karo...

Mihir: yes bhabhi...

All start to work... mihika and sarika helping ishita in making food... abhishek mihir and romi decorating the house...simi and adi wraping the gifts...

Mihika: ary wah akka jeeju kay liye Italian???

Ishita: haan bohat pasand hai na unhain... Aur ab to muje sahi banana bhi agaya...warna pehly...

Romi: kiya pehly bhabhi...

Ishita: rehne do...

Sarika: batain na bhabhi...

Ishita: mein ne aik baar try kiya tha aur office mein lunch lay kar gayi thi itna horrible bana tha... yuck... Lekin raman ne phr bhi mery liye kha liya tha...

Rinky: how sweet...

Mihika: mery jeeju hain hi romantic... Abhishek sekhoo kuch tumhain to haar waqt bas remand aur criminal ki hi pari rehti hai...

Abhishek: ary mihika...

All laughs...

Elders sees and smiles and thanks god for giving happiness and prays for lasting happiness

Scene 3:

Ruhi playing with mansi... bala and vandita goes to near icecream parlor... mansi starts crying...

Shravu: ruhi tu ne meri behan ko rula diya??

Ruhi: nahe wo khud ro rahi hai...

Shravu: tu bad girl hai isley meri behan ro rahi hai ab mein tujhe mansi say kehlne nahe doonga...

Ruhi: meri bhi to behan hai aur mein bad girl nahe hoon ishima kehti hai mien good girl hoon...

Shravu: nahe tu nahe kehly gi...

Tear welled in her eyes...

Shravu: tu kab sa god sa pray kar rahi hai kay wo tujhe behan ya bhai dain per nahe diya na... amma kehti hai kay god good people ki sunta hai...

Bala and vandu listens and shouts: shravu...

Vandu: kiya keh rahe ho tum say sorry...

Bala: say sorry...

Ruhi: its okay peri amma ... shravu dekhana god meri pray zaroor sune gay...

Shravu: sorry ruhi... Chal dono mil kar pray karty hain...

Precap: raman and ruhi birthday party...

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nice update
ruman ka b'day ek saath wow
poor ru

lovely last part I was sad but it ok n love how all arrange ruram surprise

Awesome update
wow RuMan birthday ek.saath
loved it
Thanks For pm

PART 10

Scene 1

Romi and ruhi waiting for raman at airport.. raman comes , ruhi hugs him and says: papa I miss you so much..

Raman sensing sadness of ruhi ask romi: romi tu ghar ja mein aur ruhi thori dair tak ayengay..

Romi: jee bhai..

Raman takes ruhi to near park..

Raman: kiya hua ru beta ap bohat sad lag rahe ho?

Ruhi: nahe papa I am so happy ap wapis jo agaye ho...

Raman: ruhi jhoot bolna bad hai na... chalo batao muje...

Ruhi starts crying...

Ruhi: sab mera birthday bhool gaye subha say kisi ne muje wish ne kiya...

Raman: oho ruhi ishima apko surprise dena chahty hoonge... Muje bhi kisi ne wish nahe kiya...

Ruhi: sachi??

Raman: muchi...

Ruhi smiles but again turns sad...

Raman: ab kiya hua mere bete ko???

Raman: beta kiya hua??

Ruhi: papa mein bad girl hoon?

Raman: nahe ap to good girl ho papa ki...

Ruhi: papa sharavan kehta hai kay god meri wish isley nahe sunte kiyon kay mein bad girl hoon...

Raman: tingu to aise hi bolta hai ... Ap good girl ho God ne apki itni sari wishes poori ki hain...

Ruhi: kaise???

Raman: dekho ap ki wish thi kay papa apse baat karain... dekho papa apse kitna pyar kartey hain... god ne wish poori ki na??

Ruhi: haan...

Raman: apki wish thi kay god apko aik acchi si mama dain... God ne apki life mein ishima ko bejh diya... Hana?

Ruhi: haan...

Raman: apki wish thi kaya di bhaiyaa apky saath rahain dekho wo apkay saath rehty hai... wish poori hui na?

Ruhi cleans her tears and says: haan papa...

Raman: to ap bad girl kaise hue??? Konsi wish hai jo apki poori nahe hui???

Ruhi: papa muje bhi chota bhai ya behan chahiye... Per god wish poori kar hi nahe rahe???

Raman gets teary...

Raman: apko pata hai god kay pass kitna kaam hota hai poori world ki wishes wo sunte hai ... Abhi wo busy hoonge isiley nahe suni wish.. jab free hoon ge to apki wish wo sun lainga...

Ruhi: sacch papa?? smiles

Raman: haan... Ab ghar chaplain dekhain ishima ne humare liye kiya surprise rakha hai...

Ruhi : chalain...

Scene 2:

Raman and ruhi enters the house.. lights were off...

Raman: arey ye light ko kiya hogaya???

Lights cames... all family member shouts... HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...

All family member greets... ishita comes and wishes ruhi and hugs her...

Ishita comes towards raman and wishes : HAPPY BIRTHDAY RAMAN... Surprise kaisa laga??

Raman: bus heart attack ate ate reh gaya...

Ishita hits his chest...

Raman: wesy kitna boring wish kiya yaar ... koi pati ko aise wish karta hai... yaad hai mein ne kaise wish kiya tha tumhain???

Ishita reminisces her birthday and raman kiss... Smiles...

Ishita: kiya raman... ap bhi na... kuch bhi bole jate hain...

Raman: tumhara naam ishita raman bhalla nahe balky MISS KUCH BHI BHALLA hona chahiye... kabhi to naye dialogue bola karo... chaho to apna dialogue writer de doon tumhain...

Ishita smiles...

Mihir: bhai bhabhi apka romance khatam ho to cake katain... Subha say preparation kay chakkar mein bohat bhook lagi hai...

Raman: kaisi baatein karta... Romance khatam ho???? Bohat bhook lagi hai na aa tujhe aik thappar khilaon...

Ishita: chalain...

Scene 3

Raman and ruhi about to cut the cake...

Mihika: ruhi pata hai cake katne say pehly agar koi bhi wish mango aur candles ko bujhane kay liye phook maro aur ye saari candles bujh jain to wo wish zaroor poori hoti...

Ruhi: sachi... chitti???

Rinky: haan ruhi...

Romi: chal wish mang...

Adi: papa ap bhi mango na wish...

Raman wishes mata rani ruhi ki wish poori kar do aj to kisi tarhan samjha diya... mein usey sad nahe dekh sakta...

Ruhi wishes god please please mein good girl rahoon gi ishima aur papa ki saari batain manongi aik baby dedo na...

Both blows the candles...

Adi: dekho saari candles bujh gain matlab papa aur ruhi ki wish poori hogi...

Ruhi and raman smiles...

After cake cutting, all present their gifts ... family enjoys...

PRECAP: shagun tries to hit ishita by car... Raman saves ishita in nick of time... shagun run aways... Ishita fall unconscious

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Yippee I am the first to comment very cute update shagun is such a chudail hope everything will be fine update soon