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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Mrs. Kuch Bhi Bhalla??? 🤣
Yes Raman you should give her ur dialogue writer, she really needs it.. 😛
Ishita at least ek kiss toh karti Raman ko,He's expecting this from u yaar 🤣
Awww!!! Chotu was sad, but papa made her happy...
Both Ruhi & Raman's wish gonna comes true soon...
WTH.. Shagun tries to kill Ishita but hero is there to save her...
I loved this story.. Waiting for next & thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Next time post long part please...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Beautiful update
Really nice. .
Precap is exciting.
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Mrs kuch bhi bhalla 😉 Lol
nice update
Ruhi ki wish jaldi puri hogi

continue soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Yeh shravu be na...ruhi is a good girl,thats the reason god fulfill her wish.
I love raman and ruhi suprise birthday party.:-)

Ishu is so cool to answer raman..same dialogue KUCH BHI..

Its hilarious and happy moment for family..

yeh shaggy ka evil plan nahi work karega..
raman save ishu..i think ishu is pregnent ?

Thanks for pm:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Part 10:-
Simply beautiful...
Precap is scaring...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Beautiful update yaar
Precap seems exciting and plz ruhi ki wish puri karo yaar

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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Nice update,
Enjoyed the birthday party especially Kuch Bhi Bhalla and Natunki Ravan Kumar asking for a Kiss instead of a wish.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Tera saath hai jo

PART 11

Scene 1

Ishita standing near window raman comes and hugs her...

Raman: kiya soch rahi ho?

Ishita: raman muje kabhi kabhi dar lagta hai kahin ye khushiyaan humse roth kar na chali jain...

Raman: phr wohi baat... Kitni baar kahoon yaar abhi to humne bohat saari khushiyaan dekhni hain...

Ishita: jesy??

Raman: simi ki dosri shadi karni hai, mihir rinky aur mihika aur abhisekh kay bachoon say khelna hai..

Ishita laughs...

Raman: hans kiyon rahi ho... suno to...

Ishita: hmm

Raman: aik saath zindagi guzarni hai... Romance karna hai... and kisses her earlobe...

Ishita: raman...

Raman: agay to suno... apne 4 bachoon ki shadiyaan karni hain aur budhy hone tak meethi meethi larai karni hai...

Ishita: 4 bachy???

Raman: haan 4 bachcy... 1 larka aur baqi 3 larkiyaan naam bataon? Adi, ruhi, ishaani, rashi...

Ishita says: kiya bole ja rahy ho???

Raman: sahi keh raha hoon... Doctor ne kaha hai na kay chances hain... aur muje mata rani per poora yaqeen hai kay wo tumhain iss khushi say mehroom nahe rakhain gi...

Ishita shyly smiles...

Raman: had hai ... abhi tak tumne muje wish hi nahe kiya...

Ishita: kiya tha raman bahar...

Raman: nahe wesy nahe aise...

Raman turns ishita towards himself... And eyes towards her lips...

Ishita: raman... Blushes...

Raman: jab tum yon mushkurati hona to muj say bilkul control nahe hota...

Raman took her lips for sensational kiss...

Both pour their feeling in the kiss...

Scene 2

Morning hustle bustle was on swing in bhalla house...

Ishita was running here and there ...

Ruhi: ishima meri poni bana do?

Ishita: aik minute ruhi...

Adi: ishima mera science project kahan hai?

Ishita: wo beta ap kay side table pey hai...

Toshi ji: ishita puttar zara idhar aa mein ne teri maa kay liye first time pysumm banaya hai zara check to kar...

Ishita: jee mummy jee

Mr. bhalla: puttar mera chashma kahan hai zara dekh lay...

Ishita: papa jee apki shirt pay latka hua hai...

Mr. bhalla smiles...

Raman shouts: kahan ho yaar meri blue shirt nahe mil rahi??

Ishita: ye lo ruhi ho gayi tumhari poni... mummy jee mein..

Toshi ji: koi nahe puttar to raman kay pass ja warna wo ghar cheekh cheekh kar sar pay utha lay ga...

Ishita comes in room...

Raman: kahan hai meri shirt???

Ishita: ap bhi na raman... mein pehly hi nikal kar gayi thi ye dekhain samne pari hai...

Ishita suddenly feels sicks but ignores...

Raman: kiya hua? Tabiyat theek hai?

Ishita: nahe bus ajeeb lag raha hai...

Raman: kitni dafa kaha hai araam kiya karo nahe tum ne to perfect bahu bana hai... betho yahan..

Raman makes ishita sits on couch... and comes with a glass of water..

Raman: ye lo pani piyo..

Ishita: acha agar mein ye bhaag door na karoon na to ap hi hoge jo ghar cheekh cheekh kar sar pay utha lo gay...

Raman: suno muje late ho raha hai... agar zyada tabiyaat kharab lagy to clinic mat jana araam kar laina... aik din clinic nahe jao gi to koi tofaan nahe ajaye ga... bharaat hai sirf tum hi dentist nahe aur aur bhi hain... okay bye... take care...

Raman kisses on her forehead and leaves...

Scene 3

Raman calls at home sarika picks the call...

Sarika: hello

Raman: haan ishita hai ghar per?

Sarika: nahe bhabhi to clinic gaye hui hain...

Raman thinks: kaha bhi tha kay aj mat jao clinic par madam ne kuch suna hi nahi hota...

Sarika: kiya hua bhai koi baat hai?

Raman: nahe aise hai ... Bye...

In office

Raman thinks chal beta ishita kay clinic chal... raman grabs his coat, phone and key and leaves for ishita clinic...

At clinic

Ishita was continuously feeling sick and thinks raman ne kaha bhi tha kay aj araam kar loon aur mein agayi clinic agar raman ko pata chala to bohat gussa honge unkay ghar ane say pehly hi ghar chali jati hoon aur rashte mein doctor say mil laity hoon subha say tabiyaat kharaab lag rahi hai...

She was about to leaves for home but a little girl came in severe pain... so ishita goes to attend her...

After getting free, ishita get into the car but it does not start... thinks: lagta hai car kharaab hogayi hai auto say jana hoga...

Ishita waiting for auto... a car stops at some distance from ishita ... in car it was shagun... she feel extreme hatred towards ishita and thinks: tumne muje mere bachoon say alag kiya dekho ab mein kiya karti hoon mein tumhain iss duniya say hi bhej doongi ...and starts the car with full speed toward ishita...

Ishita starts feeling dizzy therefor she does not hear the sound of car... car was about to hit her but ramn saves her in nick of time... shagun run aways seeing raman... and ishita falls unconscious in raman arms...

Raman takes her to near hospital... raman was waiting anxiously...

Doctor comes...

Raman; kiya hua doctor wo theek hai na?

Doctor: yes mr. bhalla ghabrane ki koi baat nahe ... apki patni bilkul theek hai... infact there is good news...

Raman: matlab doctor?

Doctor: I mean to say mr bhalla apki wife pregnant hain... unhain hosh agaya hai ap unhain ghar lay kar ja sakty hain... mein ne apki yesterday doctor rani say appointment fix kardi hai wo best gynecologist hain...

Raman feeling on cloud nice hearing the good news...

Done.. guys hope you will like it...

I am thinking to wind up this ss in two to three update..

Waiting for your comments...

Edited by sparkingsoul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Nice update
ishu pregnent,her dream come true..
raman want 4 bachas great yaar..

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