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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: hana_y
wow gaya love it so art han laila majnu mihir was attract with ishu nice one n how ishu stop raman was to good raman remind some obe falling too i hope she is ishu sis right

hey i did not get pm for this yaar so rry fir late comment

With us as writers u should hope against hope darling 😉

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abha

@..abha..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Superb Gaya...But why chotuu chotuu update...I am loving jealous Raman and lovestruck mihir and lovely freinds Ishgun...I loved it when Shagun is positive... 😆...End kya tha?

Waiting for Asha for next part...Curious and excited...Asha give lambu sa part not chotu plzzz...Continue soon...Why I am not getting pms?

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: --abha--
Superb Gaya...But why chotuu chotuu update...I am loving jealous Raman and lovestruck mihir and lovely freinds Ishgun...I loved it when Shagun is positive... 😆...End kya tha?

Waiting for Asha for next part...Curious and excited...Asha give lambu sa part not chotu plzzz...Continue soon...Why I am not getting pms?

We r so sry di hum dono. Battle mai itna kho gaye ki we forgot about pm 😆 par next one se pakka 😉

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Help all u amazing people I am hear to eat ur head up. With an other twist in this tail 😉

Enjoy reading

Plz do leave ur comments and likes

We r sry for not sending pms we will do it from now pakka 😉

It is not proof read kindly avoid the mistakes 😳

Part -6

It starts from where it stops Raman screams as he falls on the floor don't leave my hand

And becoms unconscious mihir rushes to him

Mihir : Raman Raman ru u ok Raman plz utho plz Raman akhe kholo

( Raman get u open ur eyes )

And ishita and shagun stand there behind mihir shagun goes to get water where as ishu has tears in her eyes

Ishu (st) : kyu Raman. Kyu kiya thum ne ayse kyu mai ne thum ko sache dil se payar kiya aur thum ne muje mere payar ka yeh silha diya kyu kyu kiya yeh

( y Raman y did u do this my love for u was true and pure and u did this to me y y u do this )

At the same time shagun comes with water and notices ishu she quickly hads over the water and rushes to ishu and places a hand on her shoulder

Ishu quickly composes herself and gives a fake smile to shagun

Mean while Raman regains his senses and looks hear and there

Ishita : shagun thu tho Bol rahi thi ki u punjabis are strong and can do any thing but yaha tho nazara Kuch aur hi hai

( shagun u were telling that u punjabis are strong and can do anything but the scene hear is quite different )

Shagun : ( playing along ) yar there r some exeptions u know

Raman : enough u both u think u can talk any thing and I will keep quite abb tho yeh drama ho kar rahega ( angrily )

Ishu and shagun (st) : bingo !!!!!

Ishu : drama tho thab hoga jab thum dance kar pavoge par yaha ek dost dialogue Nahi Bol pa raha hai aur dusara never mind

( the drama will happen when u will dance but hear one friend Cant tell the dialogue and the other never mind )

Shagun : I think we should leave it is waste of time yar

Ishu : ya right

and they were above to leave when Raman spoke

Raman : miss ishita kya thum ko dance karna atha hai

( do u know how to dance )

Ishu : koi Shaq

( any dout )

Raman : then prove it

Ishu smiled and signaled shagun to switch on the music and in sign language told her to msg miss to come to the hall

The music started and ishu walked up to the stage it was a romantic song fro Laila Majnu play

( note : hear is the link to the song plz see it imagine ishu to be Laila and Raman as Majnu )

http://youtu.be/d9p32sk1L-g

As the song ended ishu and Raman had a intense eye lock Raman could see pain disappointment anger and love in her eyes

Raman : love was it really love or was he dreaming ( st)

And this tease was broken by claps miss was standing there staring at them In aww they quickly composed themselves and moved away

Miss : perfect I guess we found our Majnu

Mihir : but mam

Miss : no ifs and buts mihir he is our Majnu they both together can set the stage on fire they r too good so it is desired Raman is Majnu our hero and mihir is our villen ie Laila's husband

As every body shook their head in agreement and walked away it was only ishu and shagun in the hall

Shagun : what were u doing ???? ( anger clearly visible in her eyes )

Ishu : what ??? ( acting innocent )

Shagun : u did this to divert his mind right u cry seeing his pain u can't see him in that state do u still love him ishita

Ishu : ( shouts ) no !!!! Never I don't

Shagun : whome r u trying to convince ishita me or ur self ???? ( shouting with a equally high pitch )

Ishu : I don't want to talk about it

And she leaves from there leaving a fuming shagun behind

Shagun picks up her phone and immediately diles a number

Shagun : plan worked but

Other person : but what ?... Speak up u fool

Shagun : just calm down and listen to me I think she still loves Raman

Other person : no way I can't let this happen and what were u doing there u remember for what work u went their right ???

Shagun : I tried but what can I do ???

Other person : just shut up ur of no use I have to do it myself and u dare double cross me shagun u know the consequences

Shagun : (scared ) plz plz I won't Do any thing of that sort after all I love Raman and although he dosent remember about ishita he still loves her in some corner of his heart see calm down we can work it out together first u come hear then we will decide what to do next

And shagun hung up the phone

Shagun :(st) ishita I will never forgive u for this Raman is mine only mine and I will get him for sure u wait and watch

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So that is all for now people next is gaya3 with her new twist

Asha 😉

Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Res
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Here goes another twist 😉
I liked it yaar 👏
And now...
We're really gonna set it on fire 😳
I've a lot of plans in my mind... 😃
See you tomorrow with my twist tablet 😆

Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb
Res
_________
Here goes another twist 😉
I liked it yaar 👏
And now...
We're really gonna set it on fire 😳
I've a lot of plans in my mind... 😃
See you tomorrow with my twist tablet 😆

By the way u know na I was planing to give some thing but gave some thing else 😆

No prob but my dear brilliant queen ( so called ) 😉 now u continue ur mixed version of laila Majnu 😉 have fun

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

By the way u know na I was planing to give some thing but gave some thing else😆
No prob but my dear brilliant queen ( so called )😉now u continue ur mixed version of laila Majnu😉have fun

I was expecting that shock 🤔
But you gave me a shock without giving any 😲
Well..fusion drama...let me think 🤣
I'll handle that 😆

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

I was expecting that shock 🤔
But you gave me a shock without giving any 😲
Well..fusion drama...let me think 🤣
I'll handle that 😆

Heee Jaise ko taisa 😆 abb break Lena hai tho compensation tho bantha hai na 😉

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Balasri

@Sri1091

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Omg sweet Si Shagun ko tumne Phir de villian banaya yaar nw I am eager for d next twist u both are simple superb in giving d twists and setting d stage on fire dears

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Sri1091
Omg sweet Si Shagun ko tumne Phir de villian banaya yaar nw I am eager for d next twist u both are simple superb in giving d twists and setting d stage on fire dears

😃😆😆 What should I tell 😉 gaya3 has a inborn talent and I stole some from her 😉