NEW TS___MY DREAM GIRL part 16 up on Page 59 by ASHA - Page 11

Originally posted by: usaonly

Ishu and Shagun are friend oh wow unbelievable.😆 Now Mihi fall for Ishu😲 so Shashu are planning to trap Raman and Mihir will be fun for Gaya to show us now. Thanks for the update dear. Have a great weekend.🤗

Originally posted by: hana_y

nice lovely asha

so ishgun are they friend n what laila majnu pkay wow

i love ishra talk too

I am feeling bad for Raman... He is a bad boy okay. Par dill hai Ki maanta nahi

Originally posted by: sukanksha

I am feeling bad for Raman... He is a bad boy okay. Par dill hai Ki maanta nahi

Hi Kutties 😊

Kutty update...So..sorryyy... 😳

Not proofread

PART-5


"I pass by these walls, the walls of Layla
And I kiss this wall and that wall
It's not Love of the walls that has enraptured my heart
But of the One who dwells within them"


Mihir repeated the last verse written by Majnun. The soul of the verse wasn't there. Ishita asked him to try again by touching the side of the paper and stood closer to him. He felt like millions of butterflies dancing in his stomach. Her loose strands patted his arms tickling him. As if in a trance he said romantically;


"Every breeze that blows
brings your scent to me;
Every bird that sings
calls out your name to me;
Every dream that appears
brings your face to me;
Every glance at your face
has left its trace with me.
I am yours, I am yours,
whether near or far;
Your grief is mine, all mine,
wherever you are. "


"This is not the context Mihir...you should cry kissing my grave...! Matlab...Laila's grave!"


Mihir: "Oh sorry...I was just thinking about the poem...Art is really superb"


Raman who was looking at them with a look which he doesn't know what it is, walked to them and said in a no nonsense tone, "Superb my foot...Tum toh sach mein Majnun bangaya yaar...! I'm going!"

(You really became Majnun/MAD)


Shagun: "But why RKB? Ap ko Ward ka scenes abhi bhi nahin pata..."

(You still don't know Ward's scenes)


Raman: "You know what...I really don't know what these shit is all about! Yeh Ward kaun hai...?"

(Who's this Ward?)


Ishita: Coming to them, "My Suitor...I mean...Laila's suitor!"


Raman: Angrily, "Uska naam Raman Kumar Bhalla rakho...toh main act karunga..! Else replace me"

(I'll act only if you give him my name)


Shagun: Trying to reason, "We can't change it...it's a legend!"


Raman: Waving his point finger at her as if warning her, "Aur tum...yahan is arts ki act pe kya acting maarne vali ho? Koi aur kaam nahin tujhe?"

(What are you going to act in this act of art? You don't have any other job?)


Shagun: Showing attitude, "I love arts and Ishita is my first friend in this college. She requested me...So I'm here. Do you need any other explanation"


Raman: "No thank you. But I can't tolerate this cra..! Find someone else..! Oye Mihir ke bache...nachon gudiyon ke saath...(Under his breath) Arts...goddamn!"

(Mihir, dance with these girls)


When he was about to walk out from the stage Ishita called him from behind, "RK...you're the one who suits the character...! Ward...meaning Rose...Man who is like a Rose...!"


He turned to her and looked at her. He walked backwards to the edge of the stage when she kept on describing the character. It was then when she pursed up her lips and looked at him expectantly that he realised his position. Before he could do anything he fell from there with a thud on the ground floor.


"Don't leave my hand...!"


He heard his on cry resonating in his ears and inside the building when he was about to fall backwards. He felt he is fallng slowly with a terrible ache in his heart and a lump in his throat. He saw a girl falling the same way from the edge of a hill from his hand. He cried out loud, "Don't leave my hand...!"


TO BE CONTINUED BY ASHA


Gaya3

This is awesome yaar..

Ok fine I am hell confuse what was that 😆

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Ok fine I am hell confuse what was that😆

I think I need to read Laila Majnu story😉

Galti sey Laila Majnu boldiya I should have written Romeo Juliet😆

Kam se kam basic story ka tho idea hotha😕

And yeh dialogues where from u got them now😆

Mai ne tho aj tak Laila Majnu ka play dhekna tha. Vo bhi half only because of Rona dhona😆

Abb mai kya karu😉one thing I understand is I am going to have a long day 2 Moro😆Google uncle plz helP me😭

He was the one who helped me as well 🤣
GOOGLE UNCLE 😆
I too never read it nor do I know the story.
I've seen Big B's poster on LM from my sis's lappy 😆
I thought of writing it because I wasn't prepared for a twist...
Now LM continue...
By you 😆

Dat last line?? Is dat ishita's sister ?? Is dat d reason for ishita's revenge?? I knw u people don't knw what will happen next by my anxiety made me to comment like this sorry

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

He was the one who helped me as well 🤣
GOOGLE UNCLE 😆
I too never read it nor do I know the story.
I've seen Big B's poster on LM from my sis's lappy 😆
I thought of writing it because I wasn't prepared for a twist...
Now LM continue...
By you 😆