NEW TS___MY DREAM GIRL part 16 up on Page 59 by ASHA

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Hi Kutties... 😃

After so many discussions me and Asha (12Singmeenu) postponed the open thread for better end 😊

Now...
We're having a very good battle via PMs regarding twists...

So why not an open battle? 😈

Here goes the new TS by me and Asha đŸ€—

It is completely a competition between us 😆
You can have fun at our cost

Don't care what happens next...(We do always fight *Silly Us*)

We'll try to give regular updates

There is no interaction between us about the TS
So we will be unaware of the other one's plans...😉

PS. A TS can be of Two shots...Three shots...Ten shots...Twenty shots...it's up to you readers 😆


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Kutties... 😊

The first part...

Not proofread
So please ignore typos

There is a character/soul talks to RKB.
You can think it as me or you...no name for him/her.
A neutral figure 😉



Chapter-1

THE STRANGE DREAM



"Kya ajeebsa sapna dha...!"

(What a strange dream!)


He sat up on the bed clutching his head in his hands. The nerdy and perfectionist in Raman Kumar Bhalla never let him sleep more than NEEDED. He always wakes up on sharp 4 O'clock. But today is an exception. It is half past six! What made him sleep this long?

Well...coming to that...we can ask him.


"Oye Raman...itna kyun soya aaj? Bukar hai?"

(Raman why did you sleep so long today? Fever?)


"Ek pari in baby pink towel...!"

(One angel in baby pink towel)


"Lekin pari toh white frock pehanti phirti hai nah?"

(But angel wears white frock right?)


"Yeh toh darti ki pari hai nah...Voh bhi modern!"

(It's from earth and modern!)


RAMAN'S POV


The most peaceful sleep and the most beautiful dream in my life...!


It's censored you see. I won't tell you completely as it is my private moments. I know it is just a dream. Although I can't believe it is. It was that real!


*SIGH*


A slim tall girl came out of my bathroom when I turned to that direction in my sleep and parted my eyelids feeling the fresh fragrance. The beautiful feet of hers...the silver jewellry adorned around her anklet...upwards to her...


*SKIP*

*SKIP*

*SKIP*

*SKIP*


Her hands clutched a pink towel around her chest which perfectly pictured her semi-nakedness and perfectly hide what I actually wanted to take a sneak peek. Her moistened face was partially covered by her long wet hair which didn't mind hiding her slender shoulders.


The nose stud which she adorned glew in the light making her face twinkle as well.


I pushed down the duvet and looked at her. She walked away into the mirror like a mist...after turning back to me and giving a breath taking smile.

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"You took two and a half hours to see this?"


"It was in slow motion...maybe that's why..."


"Kaisi dikhti dhi voh...?"

(How was she looks like?)


"One sec"


He ran to his study and took out a pen and paper. He took more than fifteen minutes to dart his eyes away from the paper and sighed dreamily. It was a sketch of a girl till her shoulder. Her hair covered almost all of her body parts which he drew. But anyone can see how enticing she looks.


"No wonder he saw the dream in slow motion!"


"Kahin aisi ladki hoga kya?"

(Will there be a girl like this?)

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"Mein hun nah...Ishita Iyer! Meri jaise koyi aur nahin ho sakta. I'm one and only Ishita Iyer."

(I'm here...Ishita Iyer! No one is there like me!)


She muttered under her breath while checking herself out in front of the mirror.


"Tum jaisi toh main bhi hun...toh zyada udo mat"

(Don't get high...I'm also is like you)


"No way...dekhne main ek jaise koyi bhi ho sakta hai...lekin...bahut kuch aur hai Miss Nishita Iyer!"

(Anyone can look alike. But there are lot of other things Miss Nishita Iyer!)




TO BE CONTINUED...


NO PRECAP

Next part by ASHA




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Gaya3
Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Im the first to read:-D:-D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres

nice one gaya sorry for late comment .

both are twins right or not


cont it thx
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Di its pretty confusing... They r twins kya.. Iyer sisters..
Continue soon...
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Originally posted by: Ishra_Sona

Di its pretty confusing... They r twins kya.. Iyer sisters..

Continue soon...


Confusion toh hona chahiye...
Else what fun no...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow This Is Very Different!
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Originally posted by: Divancraze

Wow This Is Very Different!


Yeah it is 😉
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Hello I still figure it out that Raman talk to whom. And now have to think Ishu talk to whom I though she talk to her image in the mirror and she call her Nishita. Am I right...wrong...right...wronggood start and you know you are the master of your writing will wait for Asha to update. Thanks for the Pm dear.

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