GOODBYE - A RAMAN OS - Page 5

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Thank you so much for the PM, first off.👍🏼

Next- what a beautiful, poignant piece of work this is.

I really love it- it is well written, sympathetic and most of all realistic. I completely agree with you- they had some happy times and he will mourn her loss and the loss of that woman in such a situation. Because that's what we all do, when a loss like this happens we mourn them for the best we saw in them and try to make less of the worst.

I completely understand why Ishu had to be missing here and I appreciate you for writing as positively as possible about Raman Shagun .

Great job!👏

I honestly tried to fit in Ishita in this scenario .. wrote a couple of lines but then turned against it majorly because I felt the soul of this piece was Shagun and Raman and their relationship and Ishita in this case will become the outsider ... so decided against it eventually ..

Thank you for commenting 😊.

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Awww B...it was so poignant and brilliantly written!

I actually assumed it to be Ishita at the beginning because of the situations, u see but then somewhere as I read, i felt it was Shagun. and I am happy that it was her and not Ishita because parting away from Ishita and then her remarrying was someone else isnt something I would be able to connect at this moment but then yeah EK show and mega serial concepts might work out such illogical things as well

Adi-Ruhi bond was simple and very much real. true that blood is thicker than water and we turn to our dear ones when at grief. this sort of scares me for the show as well. I just hope Ruhi doesnt turn against her Ishima. I wouldnt be able to accept it at all.

Anyways, this was superbly written! kudos for the 40 minute feat...👏

TV 🤗
So, you officially become the first person who wrote that you figured out it was Shagun ... 😛😆
Chalo good.

Ruhi turning against Ishima .. well it will be RIP YHM for me that day .. coz that was the first day first episode with no Ishra, No Shagun, No Ashok ... noone else ... so it is the essence of the story .. megaserial or anything ... I do not think Ekthi Maiya will do that ... but

Oops .. I digressed ...

I know am proud of writing this in 40 minutes ...😛 LOL ... humble ... what is that ... 😆😆

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Res 😳

Pleej to edit fasstt ... ok fine you are exempted from my hounding till you are back to the khalifa land

Originally posted by: rutu83

reading your note, i thought it ishita. but as soon as i started reading the os itself, for some reason i knew it was shagun. i was surprised at loving ashok :S
wonderful os

Hahaha ... call me an optimistic ... but I always wanted Shagun Ashok and wanted them to settle ... 😊
Thanks for your comment Rutu 😊

Originally posted by: Rianshi

nice..!!

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: -Anku-

RESERVED

Take your time Anku 😊

Originally posted by: -Ishita-

This was something very different and heart touching.

when ppl seperate from each other there always stays one string which attached them. Hatred is one kind of feeling,a strong one.

The relation went pale at one time but it still gave memories that they would cherish lifetime. Here the relation was of Hubby-wifey plus of parents.

I loved the last line.Read it thrice already.

For it is in Giving and forgiving. I came across a quote which i love the most. "Life becomes easier when to learn to aceept an apology you never got" Raman did that.

Great writing. Would love to read more of your work!

-Ishita

Beautiful comment Ishita! Is that your real name?

Loved your quote .. .saving it ... do you mind if I use it somewhere if I need it in any work of mine?

For more of my works, you can always find them in my index in my signature.

Thank you for commenting 😊

Originally posted by: arunabhi

Beautifully written ! They have been divorced for 16 years already still there was something left between them apart from their kids are those memories. Be it love or hate they keep moving along with you. The portion where he spoke in her ears that he frees her of all the hatred. Really emotional. Great one 👏
Thank you for the Pm 😳

Thank you Arunabhi. I guess that Raman realized that he had to forgive her for keeping a grudge will never do any good to both the sides. She was making her final journey and it was best she did in peace.

Originally posted by: rev4eva

You have touched an angle that I never anticipated. I loved it and even I feel Raman would definitely mourn for Shagun at least for a brief moment.

Thank you. I agree. Raman or in my view, even Shagun will mourn the death of the other, even if for a moment. The relationships are like that.

Originally posted by: whitelily

superb os

Thank you Lily 😊