MY DREAM TRACK FF.UNDEAD(part 23added)28/01/2015

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys!
I guess few of you can recogonize me.
My name is Vikas.
I have written many SS and OS in this forum.combining finished and unfinished total 20.
I have always wrote on ISHRA and always been a strict supporter of Raman Kumar Bhalla.
Of all the SS and OS I have written I have never changed the starts of stories.
It has always been continuation of tracks of YHM on my own way.

But for the first time I am trying to do something new and out of my style.
I am first time attempting to change the start of story and write on my favorite couple ISHRA but strangeness is here flashback will also be Ishra and present also.

Charecter sketch will be in few minutes .

But I have to mention this for sure now.

NOT PROOFREAD.
Here all the logics and science I am using is of my own creativity and they may never be possible in any real world.But don't take it too heavy it is only single part of story that makes it unique.
Here Raman Kumar Bhalla would be undead or person who wont die.(obviously he has death but there is a reason that make him undead)


I am planning to use COMIC SANS MS for this ff and font size 3 with blue colour and bold font.
I guess this is first time I am giving prologue.
For silent readers,I don't knowhow many people read my stories and follow it.
But this time please make sure you hit like button if youread it.It will help me know how many people are reading my stories.You can give your opinion on stories.
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Here I am planning to make the list of PM's for this ff.There are many who wont read in my buddy list so I decided to make it seperate .
You can tell me either you want this pm or not .Same way you can remove your name from list




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RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA :
  • A Rich and strong buisness man.
  • Father of Ruhi Raman Kumar Bhalla.
  • Husband of late Ishita Raman Bhalla
  • Cool headed in every situation.
  • Have no human emotions in him except love and care for his daughter .neither fear and anger.
  • He can do anything for his daughter.
Raman Kumar Bhalla was born in a wealthy family and once in an flight crash he was landed in unknown area in a severe condition to his heart.He was treated for it by planting artificial heart but which proved more fatal making him human bomb.His blood pressure should be always in control and should not exceed human anger level which can make his artificial heart to explode.
He thus habitted to control his emotions and behave in same way even in worst conditions.
He always have a smile on his face as he promised his dead wife for her death wish that he should always keep smile on his face on what ever situation.That smile is unreal but some one is comming to make it real.
But don't let that smile cheat you.He is as evil as possible with that smile makes him unpredictable and more dangerous.He is mean in his ways and can go to any extent to get what he want.For him sole purpose of living is his daughter Ruhi and he loves her to core and more than anyone.She is his acchilies heal.Fightting death for 3 years for his daughter Ruhi.No one know's when he will die and is a living bomb for himself.



RUHI RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA

  • Daughter of Raman and Ishita Bhalla.
  • Known to be xerox copy of her father in everyaspect and shows no emotions freely.
  • For her her father is everything and reason of happiness.
Ruhi was daughter of Raman and late Ishita Bhalla.She loves her father and wants him to be happy.As her mother died at age three she remember ver less about her mother but was told about her by her father.

ISHITA RAMAN BHALLA.(late)
  • Wife of Raman Kumar Bhalla.
  • died to save her husband and took promise that he always keeps his smile.
  • born in middle class family and was married to Raman by force but she adapted him and made him his perfect partner for herself.
  • She loves him to her life and sacrificed her life for same.
She is actually a look alike of Ishita Vishwanath Iyer.(reason unknown to me also ).
She even though born in middle class family married to Raman on unexpected circumastances unexpected for both.Then Raman being unaware of responsibilities and relation.She made him her life and did evrything she could to keep him happy.Her selfsless ness and love for Raman is unmatchable.

ISHITA VISHWANATH IYER
  • Look alike of Ishita Raman Bhalla
  • Fiancee of Subramaniyam Iyer.
  • Dentist by profession
Living in Mayur Vihar appartments.Ishita was engaged to Subbu.She is simple middle class girl and loves simple life with family and kids .But her life takes a turn with meeting Ruhi and Raman.


SUBBU
Not interested much in this man.He is fiancee of beatuful Ishita Iyer.Very ambitious in nature and want's best for him and have very less value for relations.

SHAGUN
She is charater who wants Raman Bhalla as her husband.She was about to be engaged to Raman except for his marriage with Ishita.ow after these many years she again tried to get back Raman.
She is interested in Raman's property.She is again gonna face trouble from Ishita Iyer.

MIHIR
Raman's PA and very good friend have been with him since schooling and was very loyal to Raman.

MIHIKA
Ishita's sister and an emloyee in Bhalla enterprise under Mihir.

ASHOK KHANNA

Thinks he is rival of Raman but never prooved worth.He tries to create problems for Raman.H eis emotional player and plays with others emotions but faces same problem with Raman as he wont show his emotions.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept vikas double role ... I'll b waiting
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

interesting concept vikas double role ... I'll b waiting

but one Ishita is dead.
Same character everything but.
she wont be same for Raman so new memories.
Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sooo interesting.. waiting for the update... look alike... wow... cont n update soon..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Different concept Vikas...prologue look promising...
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So...new concept
really interesting one vikas
loved promo and cahracter sketch
waiting for story to begin
obvsly...i dont need to ask for pms

Ishita iyyer same as ishita raman kumar bhalla
and raman having heart which could explode any moment
now that seems something really different
different from your other stories
will look forward to itt

P.s. had read it in morning only
blame it on a long power cut...some repairing going on...no wifi...no internet...so rply is late
srry

Edited by ankita_sidana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow dr different concept.Nice one dr.
After I read ishita RB is dead,i thought i don't want pm.
Bt after I read ishita VI, I change my decision.Now I WANT PM of this story.
BTW is this story about these 2 ishra couples? Or only ishita RB?
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Originally posted by: RMGT

Wow dr different concept.Nice one dr.
After I read ishita RB is dead,i thought i don't want pm.
Bt after I read ishita VI, I change my decision.Now I WANT PM of this story.
BTW is this story about these 2 ishra couples? Or only ishita RB?

There is only one Raman.
there are two Ishita's
one is dead and other is alive.
Only Ishra would be couple but ISHITA changes.
same story repeats again .

I can't explain you have to read and understand

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